江苏高考二轮专题限时集训书面表达Ⅱ

江苏高考二轮专题限时集训书面表达Ⅱ

专题限时集训二十六　书面表达(Ⅱ)‎ ‎(对应学生用书第167页)‎ A ‎【导学号：25874083】‎ ‎(2017·南通、泰州高三一模)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ It's a question every social media user faces after taking a great photo：Should I post this? Or is it going to come back to worry me? The questions get doubly complex when they involve children.A parent on average will post almost 1，000 photos of a child online before the child turns five，according to a recent survey.Are parents putting kids at risk by oversharing on social media?‎ Here are the selections of the views.‎ Lauren Apfel(US)‎ The big reason to share is to build a community.I live，for example，thousands of miles from my family.In this atmosphere of modern parenthood，we all struggle to make it through the day，and the Internet has become a source of support.In the early years of mothering twins，one of the things that brought me the most happiness was posting pictures of them on Facebook.Sharing those photos and engaging with an online community was a lifeline.‎ Dracarys(China)‎ I don't post pictures of my kids online because I don't like it when friends of mine post photos of me online.It feels way too public and an exhibitionist to me.So I treat my kids the way I want to be treated.That is probably what the parents who are comfortable with online photos think，too，when they decide to put the photos out there.‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；‎ ‎2．用约120个单词阐述你对家长在社交网络上分享孩子照片的看法，并用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ ‎1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3．不必写标题。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文1】‎ While it is common for a parent to post children's photos nowadays，people take different attitudes toward it.Some think it's beneficial while others are anxious about it.‎ In my opinion，posting children's photos online is beneficial for people and makes a child better known.As a result，he is likely to have more chances to be successful in the future.It will also be easier for parents to communicate with other friends，for they have more to share with each other.Besides，it's a way to strengthen an online social circle and connect with people we don't know before.‎ Although there may be some disadvantages that come with posting children's photos，it's not necessary to be too cautious about it.We should have confidence in our society because we won't throw away the apple because of the core.‎ ‎【参考范文2】‎ While it's common for a parent to post children's photos nowadays，people take different attitudes toward it.Some think it's beneficial while others are anxious about it.‎ In my opinion，it is not always the smartest or safest thing to do so.What ‎ parents view as delightful photos may be interpreted differently by others and give a false image of what the child is really like.Besides，there is a growing crime called “digital kidnapping” in which individuals or companies steal children's images and use them in advertisements or other commercial activities.Apart from the obvious dangers of identity theft，it can result in them being reshared and altered by other online users without permission，which may end up damaging their school status or future career prospects.‎ In short，although sharing children's photos online does have advantages，parents should be cautious about it. ‎ B ‎ (2017·苏州高三一模)请阅读下面图文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ When 11yearold Trevor begins 7th grade，his social studies teacher Eugene gives the class an assignment to design and put into action a plan that will change the world for the better.Trevor thinks hard and comes up with a plan.Trevor's plan is a charitable program based on the networking of good deeds.Trevor does a favor for three people，asking each of them to pay the favor forward by doing favors for three other people，and so on，along a branching tree of good deeds.His first good deed is to let a homeless man named Jerry live in his garage，and Jerry pays the favor forward by doing car repairs for Trevor's mother. Trevor then selects Eugene as his next target and tricks Eugene and Arlene，Trevor's mother，divorced and single now，into a romantic dinner date.After her date with Eugene，Arlene paid Jerry's favor forward by forgiving her own mother，Grace，for her mistakes in raising Arlene，and Grace，who is homeless，helps a gang member and the gang member then saves a girl's life in a hospital，and the girl's father gives the reporter his new car...‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎1．用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；‎ ‎2．用约120个单词发表你的观点，同时提供理由或论据，内容包括：‎ ‎(1)你如何看待Trevor的计划？‎ ‎(2)如果你来完成Trevor的老师布置的这项任务，你的计划是什么？‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ ‎1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3．不必写标题。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ That's a touching story about an 11yearold boy who designed and carried out the “Pay it Forward” program and tried to make a difference to change the world for the better.‎ Trevor's idea is brilliant.It's like an invisible bond which connects everyone together and enables kindness to widely spread in every corner of the world.He not only puts his genius idea into action by doing a favor for three people，but also appeals to the recipients of favor to pay the favor forward.‎ In my view，to change the world for the better，first and foremost，we should change ourselves for the better.So I will make a checklist of the bad habits I need to get rid of and the things I want to learn，which can motivate me to do some small changes every day.I will also appeal to my classmates to follow me by posting our checklists online and push each other to be a better self.‎ C ‎【导学号：25874084】‎ ‎(2017·苏锡常镇高三二模)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ Taking babies on their flights can be incredibly discouraging for parents.They're often faced with the passengers who may get annoyed.Stares，sighs，complaints and shakes of the head are just a few things that keep parents from looking their fellow passengers in the eye.Therefore，some parents try to make it easier for their fellow passengers by handing out goodie bags as a beforehand apology—usually filled with some candy and a set of ear plugs.‎ Going with the bag is a note like this：‎ Hi stranger!‎ My name is Andaqi.I will be 4 months on January 15th and this is my first flight.‎ I'll try to be on my best behavior，but I'd like to apologize in advance if I lose my cool，get scared or my ears hurt.I'm also at the beginning stages of teething so I don't always feel good.I know I'm just a baby but I want you to enjoy this flight as well.‎ My mom，Niqelle，packed you this goodie bag with a few treats.‎ There are also ear plugs in case my first public serenade isn't as enjoyable to you as it is to my mom.‎ Have a great flight and thanks for understanding!‎ Andaqi & Niqelle This immediately went viral online.Some think it's a nice gesture and they're just trying to be nice—a good instinct in these tense times.However，others think differently as babies should not need to apologize for being babies.‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎1．用约30个词概括上述短文的主要内容；‎ ‎2．用约120个词就上述话题发表你的看法，内容包括以下要点：‎ ‎(1)你是否赞成这种行为；‎ ‎(2)用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ ‎1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3．不必写标题。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ ‎(Approval)‎ To apologize for their babies' possible annoying noises，some mothers hand out goodie bags and notes in the name of babies to passengers around.This soon becomes a buzz topic.‎ Such an initiative and behavior，from my perspective，should be encouraged.To begin with，it's polite to make an apology to those suffering from noise babies make even though sometimes we can't avoid it.In addition，this nice gesture may ease tensions crying babies create and get understanding from people around.Most importantly，it's an absolute adorable way to remind people to be patient with babies in a very sweet way.After all，in public places，everyone is responsible for the maintenance of a peaceful environment so as to leave people around in a better state of mind.‎ All in all，such a thoughtful and simple act of kindness can convey genuine feeling and I'll give the mother a thumbsup.‎ ‎(Against)‎ To apologize for their babies' possible annoying noises，some mothers hand out goodie bags and notes in the name of babies to passengers around.This soon becomes a buzz topic.‎ I don't think it necessary.In the first place，as young parents，you should not be scared of other people's ill looks because of your kids making noises，for kids will be kids.What's more，I am grown up enough not to be pacified with a goodie bag.Probably the best goodie bag for parents would be a kind word of ‎ encouragement.Last but not least，these goodie bags send the message that you should feel bad for having babies who act like babies，which has rubbed many parents the wrong way from the start.‎ To sum up，you don't need to bend over backwards to please others and you don't owe strangers candy for sitting next to your babies.‎ D ‎(2017·南京高三三模)请阅读下面材料，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ Bikesharing has taken off in China far faster than in any other market.The market has become flooded with new companies in recent months.The bikesharing companies operate in a similar way.They use apps that allow users, after paying a deposit, to unlock the wheels with their smartphones.After the journey, users can leave bikes anywhere in public and pay a little money for the use.The service is very popular as it provides an effective solution to “ the last kilometer” problem.‎ The promoting of the bikesharing service is also raising questions about profitability，widespread bike vandalism(破坏)and theft，and growing government regulation.A Hong Kong man who was arrested for throwing several shared bikes into rivers said he had no regret destroying them because “the GPS devices in the bikes give away users' personal information，such as their locations.”‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎1．用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；‎ ‎2．用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：‎ ‎(1)支持或反对共享单车的推广；‎ ‎(2)用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ ‎1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3．不必写标题。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文1】‎ The passage conveys to us the bikesharing boom across the country，with more companies springing up in the market.The service not only brings great convenience to people，but causes some problems as well.‎ From my standpoint，the bikesharing system has become an essential part of public transportation in cities and should be actively promoted.Firstly，with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around，the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically，which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams.Furthermore，this service also benefits individuals in various ways.For example，it provides locals and tourists with a convenient，cheap and healthy means of transport.Those who would otherwise use their own bicycles don't need to be concerned about such problems as theft，storage and maintenance.‎ In a word，bikesharing is an innovative service，which relieves urban traffic pressure and brings citizens enormous benefits.And more shared bikes should be launched into the market.‎ ‎【参考范文2】‎ The passage conveys to us the bikesharing boom across the country，with ‎ more companies springing up in the market.The service not only brings great convenience to people，but causes some problems as well.‎ In my opinion，bikesharing should not be promoted at present for the following reasons.In order to attract more subscribers，the bikesharing companies are flooding walkways and other public spaces with hundreds of bikes in the hope of promoting their services，which brings great inconvenience to pedestrians.Furthermore，for lack of relevant regulations，some uncivilized people deliberately damage shared bikes，for example，by throwing them into rivers or piling them up randomly.A fairly high deposit fee has also been criticized in a country familiar with accessing inexpensive public services.‎ In conclusion，bikesharing systems shouldn't be promoted before regulations and policies are put in place.The government，companies and users should all play their role in making bikesharing sustainable and enjoyable.‎