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【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题如何写记叙文的拓展句(4页word版)
2019届二轮复习书面表达专题 如何写记叙文的拓展句 [写作指导] 文章的一个段落通常包括主题句和拓展句两部分(有的还有结尾句)。其中,主题句一般位于段首,提出段落主题、确定段落发展方向及展开模式,而拓展句则用以阐述、论证、支持主题句的要点,使段落更加丰满。 一般来说,围绕主题句展开的拓展句的模式有以下几种: 一、解释原因 例如:在大城市工作有什么好处。 Working in a big city is of course an exciting thing, which means better opportunities and more conveniences.It's easier to find a wellpaid job or a better platform to improve oneself. 二、列举支撑点 例如:我们如何做才能节省能源。 If we want to save energy then we need to change the way we behave.On the one hand, we need to buy appliances that are more energy efficient and limit the amount of time we use them.On the other hand, to reduce the effect the greenhouse gases have on our atmosphere, we should plant more trees. 三、举例 例如:成长环境对学生的影响。 Since students are brought up in different environments, they will have different habits and characters, which will cause many conflicts in daily life.In such cases, these youngsters will often act impulsively, quarreling or even fighting with their classmates because of some trivial things.They may curse each other with hatred words or ask their friends to isolate these students.What's worse, they may find some excuses to hurt, beat or even bully those who have conflicts with them. 四、比较和对比 例如:是不是越快越好? Is it the faster the better? Many people believe that the faster the better, because they can save time in this way.However, others including me hold the opinion that, in many situations, the result is far less than being satisfactory and quite often goes to the opposites.Haste makes waste. 五、细化主题句 例如:你所喜欢的体育项目对你的影响。 As far as I'm concerned, I'm fond of jogging which is very essential in my life.On one hand, it's not a rough sport and convenient to do every day, from which I relax myself a lot and refresh my mind.On the other hand, it strengthens my suppleness, endurance and perseverance to deal with the difficulties in my study. 六、引出经历 例如:讲述你(或你朋友)因为太多干扰而受到影响的经历。 This reminds me of what happened when I entered high school as a Senior One student.I was so excited to find that there were various student organizations and afterclass activities for us students.It seemed that many groups were suitable for me.During this term, I was attracted whenever there was a notice from a student group and I was eager to find out more about it.As a result, I didn't spend enough time on my studies, nor could I settle down to my homework every day.Consequently, I failed in an important exam. 七、说明结果 例如:你对国家“禁止商场免费提供塑料袋”的看法。 It is necessary for the government to forbid shops from offering free plastic bags. With this ban, shopping customers would gradually form a habit of bringing environmentallyfriendly bags with them so that the consumption of plastic bags would be greatly reduced. [演练提能] 根据所给主题句写出相应的拓展句 1.How to Get Happiness如何获得快乐 There_is_no_doubt_that_happiness_is_the_most_precious_thing_in_the_world._Without_it,_life_will_be_empty_and_meaningless._If_you_wish_to_know_how_to_get_happiness,_you_must_pay_attention_to_the_following_two_points._ First,_health_is_the_key_to_happiness._Health_is_the_best_wealth_(that)_a_man_can_possess._Money_can_do_many_things,_but_it_cannot_buy_happiness._Therefore,_only_a__man_has_good_health__can_he__enjoy_the_pleasures_of_human_life._ Second,_happiness_consists_in_contentment._A_man_who_is_always_dissatisfied_with_his_present_condition_can_never_experience_happiness. 2.Treasure Time珍惜时光 An_English_proverb_says_that_time_is_money._I_consider_it__wrong._Why?_Because_we_all__know_that_we_can_earn_money_but_can_not_get_time_back._For_this_reason,_we_may_say_that_time__is_more_valuable_than_money._ Many_people_do_not_know_the_value_of_time._It__is_indeed_a_great_pity._We_must_bear__in_mind_that_wasting_time_is_equal_to_wasting_your_life. 3.On Honesty论诚信 There_is_an_English_proverb_that_goes_“Honesty_is_the_best_policy.”_It_shows_the_importance_of_honesty._ Firstly,_honesty_is_deeply_valued_by_people_from_all_over_the_world._People_everywhere_regard_honesty_as_a_virtue_and_hate_a_dishonest_person._Secondly,_honesty_is_the_basis_of_interactions_among_people._People_should_treat_each_other_sincerely_and_open_their_hearts_to_each_other._Only_in_this_way__can_we_build_a_harmonious_society._ 4.On Diligence论勤勉 There_is_a_saying_that_goes,“Achievement_is_founded_on_diligence_and_wasted_upon_laziness.” It_is_widely_accepted_that__diligence_will_bring_us_success,_wealth_and_good_luck._I_am_sure_that_a_hardworking_person_can_always_succeed_in_the_work_which_he_wants_to_do._This_is_unchangeable_truth._ Idleness_is_the_opposite_of_diligence._It_is_the_source_of_all_evil._An_idle_man_only_enjoys_playing_and_making_pleasures._Therefore,_he_is_bound_to_fail_and_he_can_never_experience_the_happiness_brought_about_by_success. 5.Knowledge is Power知识就是力量 As_a_popular_saying_goes,_“Knowledge_is_power.”__With_our_country_developing_fast,_knowledge_is_becoming_more_and_more_important. First_of_all,_with_knowledge__one_can_easily_find_jobs._We_are_entering_a_new_age_of_information,_and_knowledge_is_needed_by_a_lot_of_jobs._In_addition,_more_knowledge_is_also_needed_to_make_our_life_rich_and_fulfilled._Therefore,_we_must_try_hard_to_acquire_as_much_knowledge_as_we_can. 6.On Thrift论节俭 Thrift_is_a_virtue._In_my_opinion,_to_be_thrifty,_we_students_should_save_the_following_things. First_of_all,_we_must_save_time._To_save_one's_time_means_to_extend_one's_life._Then_we_can_devote_much_more_to_our_country_and_promote_the_development_of_the_society._Next,_we_must_save_money._We_should_know_the_money_that_our_parents_give_us_doesn't_come_easily._It_is_full_of_sweat_and_hard_labor_of_our_parents._In_addition,_we_should_save_natural_resources,_such_as_water,_electricity,_paper_and_so_on._Thus,_less_waste_and_pollution_will_be_produced_and_our_environment_can_be_beautiful_and_clean. In_short,_we_young_people_are_the_future_constructors_of_the_society._We_should_learn_to_be__thrifty_and_form_a_good_habit_of_thrift_in_our_daily_life._Only_if_everyone_realizes_the_importance_of_thrift__can_we_make_our_country_stronger_and_more_beautiful. 7.The Way to Success成功的方法 Strong will and diligence are two major factors of success. A man of strong will always sticks to what he does no matter how tough it might be. For example, Edison failed thousands of times to invent the electric lamps, but he stuck to his goal and succeeded at last. Besides, we should know that there's no shortcut to success. Diligence is the only route to success. Without diligence no one can achieve anything. I_believe_where_there_is_a_will_there_is_a_way_and_that_success_belongs_to_those_who_can_make_constant_efforts. 8.Living a Lowcarbon Life过低碳生活 As_students,_we_have_the_responsibility_to_live_a_lowcarbon_life_for_the_purpose_of_reducing_greenhouse_gases._ Firstly,_wash_your_clothes_by_hands_instead_of_using_washing_machines.Secondly,_don't_take_elevators_unless_it_is_necessary,_for_using_stairs_does_good_to_both_your_health_and_the_environment.Thirdly,_remember_to_bring_your_own_shopping_bags_when_you_go_to_the_supermarket_and_go_to_school_on_foot_or_by_bicycle.查看更多