高中英语人教版必修2测试：Unit1 Section Ⅳ　Writing

高中英语人教版必修2测试：Unit1 Section Ⅳ　Writing

www.ks5u.com Section Ⅳ　Writing 如何写正反对比类议论文 普通表达——常用词汇　普通句式　让学生写作思路“活”起来 任务呈现 最近，你班举行了一次题为“Whether students can make foreign friends online？”的英语辩论赛。请根据所给提示写一篇短文，介绍此次辩论情况并发表自己的看法，然后发表在你校英语论坛上。‎ 赞同(63%)‎ 反对(37%)‎ 你的观点 ‎1.提高英语水平；‎ ‎2．开阔视野。‎ ‎1.浪费时间，影响学习；‎ ‎2．可能被误导或欺骗。‎ ‎？‎ 注意：词数100左右。‎ 写作指导 一、审题定调 本写作任务要求写一篇短文介绍同学们对网上结交外国朋友的不同观点，同时表明自己的看法，属于正反对比类议论文。时态常用一般现在时。‎ 二、谋篇布局 本写作任务可分为四部分：‎ 第一部分：引入辩论话题：‎ 第二部分：列举正方观点并说明理由；‎ 第三部分：列举反方观点并说明理由；‎ 第四部分：表明自己的观点。‎ 三、组织语言 第一部分：引入辩论话题。‎ ‎1．..._has_a_discussion/debate_about/on_whether..._not.‎ ‎……就……是否……进行了一场讨论/辩论。‎ ‎2．We_had_a_brief_debate_about/on...‎ 我们就……进行了简短的辩论。‎ ‎3．Different_students_hold_different_opinions/views.‎ 不同的学生持有不同的观点。‎ ‎4．Opinions_are_mainly_divided_into_two_groups.‎ 意见主要分为两组。‎ 第二部分：列举正方观点并说明理由。‎ ‎5．..._believe/think_that... ……相信/认为……‎ ‎6．..._agree_with_the_idea_of... ……同意观点……‎ ‎7．... students hold_the_opinion_that..._ 持有观点 ‎8．... percent of the students think_it_necessary_to..._‎ 认为……是有必要的 第三部分：列举反方观点并说明理由。‎ ‎9．... hold_a_different_view持有一个不同的观点 ‎10．... of them hold/have_the_opposite_opinion持有相反的观点 ‎11．Other_students_don't_agree_with_them.其他同学不同意他们的观点。‎ ‎12．On_the_other_hand (另一方面)，... of the students think... ‎ 第四部分：表明自己的观点。‎ ‎13．In_my_opinion/view，... 在我看来 ‎14．As_for_me (对于我来说), I am for the...‎ ‎15．In_conclusion... 总之 ‎16．In_a_word... 总之 四、连句成篇 Recently_our_class_has_had_a_debate_about_whether_students_can_make_foreign_friends_online_or_not._Different_students_hold_different_opinions.‎ ‎63%_of_the_students_agree_with_the_idea_of_making_foreign_friends_online._They_think_chatting_with_foreign_friends_can_help_them_improve_their_English._Besides,_it's_a_good_way_to_expand_their_knowledge.‎ But_37%_of_the_students_hold_a_different_view._They_think_making_friends_online_wastes_a_lot_of_time,_and_it_may_have_a_bad_effect_on_their_learning._What's_more,_some_students_may_be_hurt_by_bad_people.‎ In_my_view,_a_better_way_is_to_make_friends_at_school_and_share_our_feelings_with_the_good_friends_we_have_around_us.‎ 我的写作体会：________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 高级表达——精彩词汇　句式升级　让学生满分作文“易”起来 任务呈现 出于城市规划的需要，你市正在就是否应将市区一座古庙搬迁到郊外旅游景区进行民意调查。为此你班进行了一场辩论，结果如下：‎ 比例(%)‎ 观点 理由 ‎20‎ 同意 有利于城市美化；促进郊区旅游业发展 ‎80‎ 反对 花费太高；一定程度上失去原有意义 假定你的外教Mr. Smith对这个话题很感兴趣，请你根据该调查结果，给Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 写作步骤 一、统筹安排 Outline of the text：‎ Paragraph 1：Stating the topic of the debate Paragraph 2：Showing the result of the debate Paragraph 3：Expressing your own opinion 二、词语储备 A：debate, cultural, relic, increase, tourism, suburban, opinion, original, view, factor, consider B：1.hold_a_debate　　　　　　　　　举行辩论 ‎2．hold_two_different_points_of_view 持有两种不同观点 ‎3．cultural_relics 文化遗产 ‎4．paly_an_important_role_in... 在……中起重要作用 ‎5．encourage_the_suburban_tourism 促进郊区旅游业 ‎6．in_one's_opinion/view 在某人看来 ‎7．in_a_way 在某种程度上 ‎8．be_worth_doing... ……值得做 三、备用句型罗列 ‎1．这座古庙是一处文化遗产，它将对促进郊区旅游业起重要作用。‎ ‎→The temple, as a cultural relic, will play an important role in encouraging the suburban tourism.(使用非限制性定语从句)‎ ‎→The temple, which_is_a_cultural_relic,_will play an important role in encouraging the suburban tourism.‎ ‎2．在他们看来，搬迁那座庙花费很高。‎ ‎→In their opinion, it will cost a lot of money to move the temple. (改为被动结构)‎ ‎→In their opinion, a lot of money will_be_spent on moving the temple.‎ ‎3．此外，一旦那座庙被搬迁到其他地方，一定程度上它就失去原来的意义了。‎ ‎→In addition, once the temple is moved to another place, it will lose its original meaning in a way.(改为同义句)‎ ‎→In addition, once moved_to_another_place,_the temple will lose its original meaning in a way.‎ ‎4．在我看来，考虑到众多因素，这座庙不值得迁移。‎ ‎→In my view, considering many factors, the temple is not worth moving. (改为with复合结构)‎ ‎→In my view, with_many_factors_considered,_the temple is not worth moving.‎ ‎5．最近有关市内一座古庙是否应该搬迁的辩论在我们班举行。(汉译英)‎ Recently_a_debate_on_whether_an_old_temple_should_be_moved_was_held_in_our_class.‎ 四、扩充要点，连词成句 Dear_Mr._Smith，‎ Recently_a_debate_on_whether_an_old_temple_should_be_moved_was_held_in_our_class._The_result_shows_that_my_classmates_hold_two_different_points_of_view.‎ ‎20_percent_of_them_think_that_the_temple_should_be_moved._For_one_thing,_moving_the_temple_can_help_to_beautify_our_city._For_another,_the_temple,_as_a_cultural_relic,_will_play_an_important_role_in_encouraging_the_suburban_tourism._However,_the_rest_of_my_classmates_don't_think_so._In_their_opinion,_it_will_cost_a_lot_of_money_to_move_the_temple._In_addition,_once_moved_to_another_place,_the_temple_will_lose_its_original_meaning_in_a_way.‎ In_my_view,_with_many_factors_considered,_the_temple_is_not_worth_moving.‎ Yours，‎ Li_Hua 我的写作体会：_____________________________________________‎ 写作训练 一、假定你是李华，你所在的英语俱乐部就寒假期间去西安还是三亚旅游进行了一次问卷调查，结果显示60%的会员选择西安，40%的会员选择三亚。请你给你的英国好友Henry写一封电子邮件，说明调查结果和原因，并表明你的观点。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version：‎ Dear Henry，‎ Recently a survey on whether Xi'an or Sanya is a better tourist destination in the winter vacation was carried out in our club.‎ The result shows that 60 percent of the members prefer to go to Xi'an. In their opinion, Xi'an is an old city with lots of cultural relics. By visiting Xi'an, they will get more knowledge about Chinese culture and history. However, the rest are fond of Sanya. For one thing, the climate there is warm and comfortable. For another, they can enjoy the beautiful scenery by the sea, which can help them reduce their stress.‎ As far as I'm concerned, I would like to go to Xi'an for my deep interest in history.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 二、最近，你班同学就“Is it better to employ selfstudy or teamwork study？”进行了讨论，大家观点不一。请根据表格提示写一篇短文，介绍此次讨论情况并发表自己的看法，然后发表在你校英语论坛上。‎ 独立学习更好(55%)‎ 合作学习更好(45%)‎ 你的观点 ‎1.免于被他人干扰；‎ ‎2．有助于培养独立思考的能力；‎ ‎3．更容易获得成就感。‎ ‎1.有助于营造浓厚的学习气氛；‎ ‎2．有助于培养互助合作的精神。‎ ‎？‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version：‎ A lively discussion was held in our class about whether it is better to employ selfstudy or teamwork study. There are different opinions among students concerning this topic.‎ ‎55% of them are in favour of selfstudy, because they believe that it can avoid interruptions from others. Besides, it can develop their ability to think independently and they will have a greater sense of achievement if they are successful.‎ However, 45% of them think that teamwork study can help create a more enjoyable learning atmosphere and develop the spirit of cooperation.‎ As far as I'm concerned, both of them have their advantages and disadvantages, so individuals should choose the learning style that they find most suitable.‎