My favourite food

My favourite food

My favourite food Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like them a lot. I like ice creams. I like to chewing gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What’s your favourite food?‎ ‎【要领点评】‎ My favourite food是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。‎