2020-2021学年高三英语书面表达模板《感谢信》

2020-2021学年高三英语书面表达模板《感谢信》

2020-2021 学年高三英语书面表达模板《感谢信》 题型特点 感谢信是对收信人表示感谢的一种信件。感谢信在日常生活中的使用非常频繁，在收到别人的邀请时、受 到别人的表扬时、得到别人的帮助时，通常都应该表示感谢。 模板① Dear ________(收信人)， I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for ________(感谢的原因 1).I would also like to thank you for your ________(感谢的原因 2). During ________，I ________(具体描述接受帮助的经历).If it had not been for your assistance in ________(对方给予的具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been ________(没有对方帮助的后果). Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Best wishes! Yours lovely， ________(写信人) 开头： 表明写作意图，明确地对收信人提供的帮助或赠送的礼物等表示谢意。 主体： 详述接受帮助的具体事例，说明该帮助所起的作用；或表达对所收礼物等的喜爱、日后如何使用及收藏等。 结尾： 再次表达诚挚的谢意，并表达祝愿。 模板② Dear ________(对象), I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for_______________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果). Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板③ Dear ______, How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的 后果). During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因) Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢) Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿) Yours sincerely _______ 感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长，只 需写明感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。 感谢信一般分为三个部分： 第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因； 第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助； 第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。 感谢信的写作指导 1.有序组织要点 首先，应当友善地对对方的生活表示关心；其次，应明确陈述写信的目的,即致谢；然后，应肯定对方的 帮助恰当好处；最后，应对对方给予的帮助再次表示感谢并表示良好的祝愿。 2.灵活把握时态 感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变。通常，在提到对方曾经所给予的帮助时，应用过去时态；在提到对方 的帮助所产生的实际效果时，可以使用现在完成时态；在涉及到现状时，应用一般现在时；在表达祝愿或 希望时，使用一般将来时态。 3.运用规范的语言 感谢信有其自身的特色语言，在行文的每一个环节也有一些常用句型。另外表示从对方的帮助中获益时， 可以从多种句型表达，要让句式灵活多样，这样更能增强表达效果。 4.表达感激之情 感谢信的主要目的在于向对方致谢，因此语言要诚挚，友善；在信的开头和结尾部分一般会使用 Thank you very much for your kindness and deep concern 或 Thanks again and wish you all the best 之类的语言表达感 激之情。 第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因： 常用句式 I am writing this letter to thank you for … I am writing to express my sincere thanks for... I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt(adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for… With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express… I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for … I am obliged(adj.感激的) to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...… I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very much for... 第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助： 常用句式 It was nice/kind/thoughtful (adj. 考虑周到的) of you to.. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 热情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit… It was your kind help that … (强调句型) If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)(虚拟语气) =But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done… 第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望： 常用句式 Thanks again for your generous help. I appreciate it more than I can say. My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description. I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget. Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me. 典例 01 2019 高考浙江卷 第四部分 写作(共两节，满分 40 分) 第一节 应用文写作(满分 15 分) 66. 假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友 Alex 即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 回顾 Alex 对你的帮助； 3. 临别祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________. 【写作指导】 1. 审题立意 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。 2. 谋篇布局 书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾 Alex 对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝 愿。 3. 关键词和句子 根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容 易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。 【范文赏析】 Dear Alex, Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help. Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 1.获悉……，我急切写信表达我对您的帮助的由衷感激。 Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help. 2.没有语言能足以表达我的感激。 No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. 3.再次感谢并希望您归途愉快。 Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home. 典例 02 假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际，请你给任教期满已回国的外教 Peter 写一封感谢信。要点如下： 1.老师在学习和生活上对你的帮助； 2.表达感激之情及祝愿。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】 本题要求写一封感谢信,回忆过去外教 Peter 对自己的帮助时，可用一般过去时，表达感激之情及祝愿时 应用一般现在时。这个命题涉及中华传统文化所推崇的感恩这一优秀品质，又涉及西方文化中的感恩节， 内容贴近考生日常生活，易于考生动笔。 【范文赏析】 Dear Peter, Thanksgiving is drawing near! I am writing to express my thanks to you. Without your help, I would not have achieved much in learning English last year. Moreover, you offered so much encouragement while I was in low spirits. Thanks to your help, I became more confident and spent more time reading English books. The efforts have paid off and now English is my favorite subject. Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me. Wish you all the best. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 短文主题明确,重点突出,关联词语运用得恰到好处。难能可贵的是,短文使用了较多的复杂结构和高级表 达方式，使短文增彩不少。 亮点词汇：express one’s thanks to sb., achieve, in low spirits, spend time doing sth., pay off 等； 高级句式：时间状语从句(while I was in low spirits)；宾语从句(what you have done for me)等。 Writting1 假定你是李华，你于 2019 年 1 月 5 日搭乘了某航空公司航班（the flight BA736），回家后发现遗失了一个 行李箱。现在用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。 信件要点包括：1）陈述写信原因； 2）简要描述该行李； 3）说明该行李的重要性； 4）期待回复并表示感谢。 注意：1）词数 100 左右； 2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3）开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给某航空公司写一封信，请他们帮助寻找遗失的一个行李箱。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。内容包括：一、陈述写信原因；二、简要描述该行李；三、说明该 行李的重要性；四、期待回复并表示感谢。考生注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时 选择高级的词汇和语法项目，让文章更有文采。审题时注意时态的选择，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难 点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语来增加文章色彩。 【范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua. I took the flight BA 736 on January 5 2019. But when I got home, I found that my suitcase was missing. I'm writing to you to request you to help me get it back. My suitcase is a small blue one. There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it. The suitcase is really important to me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card , passport and so on. Besides, it is what my father sent to me on my birthday . Thank for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earlier reply . Yours truly, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 在书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加丰满，同时运用了许多高级词 汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：when I got home, I found that my suitcase was missing . 运用了时间状语从句；The suitcase is really important to me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card , passport and so on. 运用了原因状语从句；it is what my father sent to me on my birthday . 运用了表语从句。 Writing 2 假如你是李华，在你校学习的美国交换生 David 和你成为了好朋友，并且在他的帮助下你的英语学习取得 了很大的进步。在他结束学习回国之后，请用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容应包括： 1）. 表达思念； 2）. 感谢帮助； 3）. 希望保持联系。 注意事项：1. 不得透露真实姓名和学校；2. 词数：100 左右；3. 开头和结尾已写出，不计入词数。 Dear David, How time flies! It's been a total week since you left our school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，内容以李华的身份 David 在你校结束学习回国之后，给在美国的朋友 David 写一封感谢信。写作时注意以下几点：一、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是 主要内容。二、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析，构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词 语按照一定逻辑关系来写。三、根据表达的内容确定句子的时态语态，就本文而言应该用一般现代时为主。 四、注意书信格式。 【范文】 Dear David, How time flies! It's been a total week since you left our school. Thank you so much for your help. How I wish you could stay here a little longer! On writing this letter precious memory rushing into my mind. I still remember when you first came into our classroom smiling and showed us you want for street plans which as well as your native accent attracted us all. What leaves me the deepest impression is the way you helped me memorize English words. You always repeated the word for many times before I could learn them all by heart. Would you help I have made much progress in my English, which finally ranks the top 10 in my class. Thank you so much again . I really hope we can stay in touch forever. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本文层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯，同时使用了多种句式结构。如感叹句，How I wish you could stay here a little longer! 定语从句 I still remember when you first came into our classroom smiling and showed us you want for street plans which as well as your native accent attracted us all. 主语从句 What leaves me the deepest impression is the way you helped me memorize English words.等。 Writing 3 假定你是李华，刚结束在英国为期一个月的学习。学习期间，你和房东 Mr. Smith 结下了深厚的友谊。请用 英语给 Mr. Smith 发一封邮件，内容要点如下： 1）对 Mr. Smith 表示感谢； 2）希望保持联系； 3）邀请他来中国游玩。 注意：1）词数 100 左右； 2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3）开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Smith, How time flies! I've been back home. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给史密斯发一封邮件，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。 内容包括：一、对史密斯先生表示感谢；二、希望保持联系；三、邀请他来中国玩。写作时要点要全面， 层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词 汇和高级句型，使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。 【范文】 Dear Mr. Smith, How time flies! I've been back home. How I missed the days we spent together . It was your help and kindness that made my study and life in the UK is special and enjoyable. Thanks to your help , I got used to the life there quickly. I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me . Besides, I'm really grateful for your patience when you are talking with me. It was wonderful time for me to improve my spoken English. I hope we can stay in touch with each other. In addition, it would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to my country in the near future. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级 词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：It was your help and kindness that made my study and life in the UK is special and enjoyable. 运用了强调句式；I'm really grateful for your patience when you are talking with me .运用了时间状语从句。 Writing 4 假如你是李华，你收到了美国朋友彼得寄来的最新英语小说，请给他回信，要点如下： 1. 收到小说，表示感谢； 2. 回赠礼物以及意义； 3.邀请他方便时来中国。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【写作指导】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。 第 1 步：根据提示可知本篇为一封书信：假如你是李华，你收到了美国朋友彼得寄来的最新英语小说， 请给他回信，要点如下： 1. 收到小说，表示感谢；2. 回赠礼物以及意义；3.邀请他方便时来中国。 第 2 步: 根据写作要求确定关键词组，比如: Such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time (我 期待了很久的可爱礼物)；Paper cuts or a unique form of Chinese culture.( 剪纸是中国文化的一种独特形式)； in person（亲自）等。 第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整 洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【范文】 Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive the novel. Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time. This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life. I know you are interested in Chinese culture and therefore I choose some paper cards for you. Paper cards are a unique form of Chinese culture, which are often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere. I hope they will bring happiness and luck to your family as they always do in China. Best wishes. I hope you will come to China one day and experience the rich culture in person. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数恰当，另外全文没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的英 语驾驭能力。 Writing 5 假定你是李华，已经在今年的全国中学生英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖。在准备的参赛的过程中，曾得到过 美国外教 Mr. Smith 的帮助。请你给 Mr. Smith 写信，要点包括： 1）完成比赛，已经获奖。 2）感谢他的帮助。 3）欢迎他再次来中国做客。 注意： 1）词数 100 左右 2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3）开头语和结束语已为你写出。 Dear Mr. Smith, I'm Li Hua, your former student in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给给美国外教史密斯写一封感谢信，写作背景:你在今年 的全国中学生英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖，在准备参赛的过程中曾得到美国外教史密斯先生的帮助。写作 要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。本题的要求很明确，共有三点：即完成比赛；已经获奖；感谢外教的帮 助，以及欢迎外教来中国做客。文章可以增加其他细节写文章更加自然流畅。考生写作时应合理分配字数， 段落清楚，详略得当，语意明晰，并恰当运用连接词。 【范文】 Dear Mr. Smith, I'm Li Hua, your former student in China. I'm writing to express my thanks to you for helping me improve my spoken English. I have already finished my speech in the National English speech contest for middle school students. Thanks to your help, I have won the first prize in it and got so much unforgettable experience. I’m really grateful to you for your help without which it would have been much more difficult for me. I still remember the days when you taught me English. My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work. If there is a chance, welcome to China. I'm looking forward to your coming . Best regards . Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语 句间的连接成分，是整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm writing to express my thanks to you for helping me improve my spoken English. 运用了不定式作目的状语；I’m really grateful to you for your help without which it would have been much more difficult for me. 运用了非限制性定语从句；I still remember the days when you taught me English. 运用了限制性定语从句；If there is a chance, welcome to China. 运用了条件 状语从句和祈使句。 写作应用 (2020·丽水模拟)假如你是李华，上周在美国参加了友好学校组织的“中国学生文化交流周”活动，并住在 Kelly 家里。请你给在美国期间认识的新朋友 Kelly 写封感谢信，内容包括： 1.交流活动中的收获； 2.难忘在 Kelly 家的美好时光； 3.感谢她送你的礼物。 注意：1.词数 80 左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：文化交流周 Cultural Exchange Week [参考范文] Dear Kelly， I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for the warm help during my stay in your country. During the Cultural Exchange Week，I visited the city museum and some places of interest，which made me have a better understanding of the English society，culture and history.What’s more，I was lucky enough to stay at your home and I’ll never forget the days we spent together.Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift.I will treasure and make full use of it. Thanks again for your kind help. Yours， Li Hua