【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题读写任务型作文综述（6页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题读写任务型作文综述（6页word版）

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达专题 读写任务型作文综述 在写作时，常运用“三段式”或“四段式”作文法，首段总结概括文章信息，中段详写论证(有时可用两段进行论述)，末段进行总结，升华主题。下面结合2015年江苏高考书面表达真题，对这种写作方法进行赏析。‎ ‎(2015·江苏高考)请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎1．用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；‎ ‎2．结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；‎ ‎3．根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ ‎1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3．不必写标题。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎[满分范文]‎ The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our ‎ everyday life, but may also threaten people's lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.‎ Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the largescale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What's worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.‎ In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don't secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.‎ ‎[行文架构]‎ ‎1．总结信息 主题句：交通问题很难解决。‎ 扩展句：从结果(not only affects ... but may also threaten ...)上进行补充说明。‎ ‎2．分析原因 主题句：道路设施有待提升；汽车数量增加；一些人不遵守交通规则。‎ 扩展句：我们之前做的工作不够好(用让步状语从句)；具体讲哪些人不遵守交通规则。‎ ‎3．个人启示 主题句：社会规范的重要性；个人做法。‎ 扩展句：从反面说明遵守交通规则的重要性(用虚拟语气，这也是写作的常用手段)。‎ ‎[写作步骤]‎ 读写任务型作文从审题到成文可采用以下七个步骤：‎ 第一步：仔细审题，明确题目要求 通过审题明确文章主题、写作文体、写作内容、主要时态和主体人称等问题。其中主体人称，就是要确定以第几人称进行写作，需要同学们特别注意。‎ 第二步：阅读短文，抓住内容要点 记叙文的内容要点：时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)、经过(how)，这是记叙文的六要素。‎ 议论文的内容要点：论点、论据和论证。其关键是找出主题句或结论句即论点。若文中有一分为二的观点，则两种观点都要概括，不要漏掉其中一方的观点。‎ 第三步：概括大意，转述作者观点 记叙文——用自己的语言将记叙文的六要素串联起来。但有时也不一定面面俱到，只需回答下列问题即可：谁做了什么事(who did what)？结果怎样(what was the result)？文章揭示了什么道理(不一定有)?‎ 议论文——用自己的语言将论点、论据和论证表达出来。‎ 第四步：顺承过渡，引出自己观点 写完摘要后，用过渡句再引出自己的观点(赞成或反对)或引出类似的故事。‎ 第五步：详写例证，论证自己观点 记叙文——编写与阅读文章主题相同但情节不同的故事(亲身经历或虚构)。‎ 议论文——在提出自己的观点后，用具体的事例来论证自己的观点。‎ 第六步：得出结论，注意前后呼应 举完事例论证之后，要进一步概括归纳自己的观点，升华主题，并注意首尾照应。‎ 第七步：修饰润色，使其锦上添花 一查人称是否符合要求；二查语法方面的问题，包括用词、时态等方面；三查逻辑关系，看前后观点是否一致；四查是否使用了一些较为高级的词汇和句型，如非谓语动词结构、with复合结构、定语从句、倒装句型、恰当的连接词、短语动词等。‎ ‎[典题示例]‎ ‎(2017·江苏高考)请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(boxoffice income)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ Saturday Afternoon. In a Shopping Centre.‎ Li Jiang：Hi, Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?‎ Su Hua：Whatever. We've got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the West ... Each sounds great!‎ Li Jiang：Yeah! And some movie stars are fantastic.‎ Su Hua：And the hightech！...‎ Li Jiang：Perfect! Let's get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.‎ Su Hua：No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.‎ One Day in 2016. At Home.‎ ‎　Son：Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?‎ Mother：Why bother? We can stay at home and watch films online. It's convenient with our new and faster network.‎ ‎　Son：But it feels good in a cinema.‎ Mother：And the price ... We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.‎ ‎　Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year.‎ Mother：But still we cannot get the money's worth. Some films are just boring ...‎ ‎[写作内容]‎ ‎1．用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；‎ ‎2．我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；‎ ‎3．谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。‎ ‎[写作要求]‎ ‎1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3．不必写标题。‎ ‎[评分标准]‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ 第一步：仔细审题，明确题目要求 ‎1．确定文体：本文要求“分析我国电影票房收入变化的原因，并谈谈你对票房收入走向的看法”，应为议论文。‎ ‎2．确定主体时态：本文为议论文，主体时态应为一般现在时。‎ 第二步：阅读图示和对话内容，抓住要点 根据写作内容和写作要求可以列出以下三个要点：‎ ‎1．写出文章的摘要。‎ ‎2．电影票房收入变化的原因及你的观点。‎ ‎3．你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。‎ 第三步：概括大意，转述作者观点 本文为分析社会现象类的议论文，写作时要首先提炼出文章的主题。根据摘要写出过渡性用语，引出自己的观点。‎ 第四步：详写例证，分析2012－2015年票房收入增加的原因 The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the boxoffice income.‎ The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase.‎ 第五步：分析2016年电影票房收入增长放缓的原因 China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers ‎ began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.‎ 第六步：谈自己对电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由 China's economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies.‎ 第七步：修饰润色，使其锦上添花 The boxoffice income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016. The reasons behind this are various.‎ On the one hand, the fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the boxoffice income. On the other hand, the application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.‎ China's economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its boxoffice income will probably enjoy a slight increase.‎