高中英语外研版必修2测试：Unit1 Section Ⅳ　Writing

高中英语外研版必修2测试：Unit1 Section Ⅳ　Writing

www.ks5u.com Section Ⅳ　Writing——如何写倡议书 普通表达——常用词汇　普通句式　让学生写作思路“活”起来 写作任务 针对你校学生中普遍存在的不吃早餐、爱吃零食、偏食以及饮食过量等不良现象，请你代表英语俱乐部给全校学生用英语写一份倡议书，号召大家养成健康的饮食习惯。内容包括：‎ ‎1．不良饮食习惯及其后果；‎ ‎2．何为健康的饮食习惯；‎ ‎3．发出倡议。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右(标题、称呼及落款已给出，但不计入总词数)；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ You are what you eat Dear fellow students，‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ The English Club 写作指导 一、审题定调 本写作要求写一份倡议书。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。其中，正文一般包括：写倡议书的背景和目的；倡议的具体内容和要求。结尾一般表明倡议者的决心和希望，或提出某种建议。‎ 倡议书的时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一或第二人称为主。‎ 二、谋篇布局 因为该倡议书的标题、称呼以及落款已给出，所以我们只需要写出正文和结尾部分即可。‎ 正文：1.引入话题；‎ ‎2．说明不良饮食习惯及其后果；‎ ‎3．表明何为健康的饮食习惯。‎ 结尾：发出倡议。‎ 三、组织语言 正文1：引入话题 ‎1．Everyone knows that our food choices affect_our_health (影响我们的健康)．‎ ‎2．我们应当养成健康的饮食习惯。‎ We_should_develop_healthy_eating_habits.‎ 正文2：说明不良饮食习惯及其后果。‎ ‎3．坏的饮食习惯在我们学生当中很普遍。‎ Bad_eating_habits_are_still_very_common_among_us_students.‎ ‎4．Some of us often go_to_school_without_breakfast (不吃早饭去上学); some (一些) like to have snacks; others (另外一些) just choose the food they like to eat; and still others eat or drink too much.‎ ‎5．所有这些坏的习惯肯定对我们的健康有害。‎ All_these_bad_habits_will_surely_do_harm_to_our_health.‎ 正文3：表明何为健康的饮食习惯。‎ ‎6．为了保持健康，我们应当健康饮食，例如适量的鱼、肉、蔬菜，水果，米饭或者面包。‎ To_keep_fit,_we_should_have_healthy_diets,_such_as_proper_amounts_of_fish,_meat,_vegetables,_fruit_and_rice_or_bread.‎ ‎7．我们最好按时吃饭，饭量适当。‎ We'd_better_have_meals_on_time_and_eat_proper_amounts_of_food.‎ 结尾：发出倡议。‎ ‎8．从现在开始我们要养成好的饮食习惯。‎ Let's_start_now_and_develop_good_eating_habits.‎ 四、连句成篇 You are what you eat Dear fellow students，‎ Everyone knows that our food choices affect our health. Therefore, we should develop healthy eating habits.‎ However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; others just choose the food they like to eat; and still others eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.‎ To keep fit, we should have healthy diets, such as proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit and rice or bread. Besides, we'd better have meals on time and eat proper amounts of food.‎ Let's start now and develop good eating habits.‎ The English Club 我的写作体会：　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ 高级表达——精彩词汇　句式升级　让学生满分作文“易”起来 任务呈现 假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。‎ 部分同学的不良饮食习惯 ‎1. 不吃早餐；2.爱吃零食；3. 偏食；4. 饮食过量 良好的饮食习惯 ‎1.选择不同的健康食品，如水果，蔬菜等 ‎2. 规律饮食 个人的看法 ‎1.良好饮食习惯的重要性 ‎2．如何做 写作步骤 一、统筹安排 体裁 说明文 时态 一般现在时 主题 健康饮食 人称 第一人称 结构 第一部分：引出话题 第二部分：不良饮食习惯 第三部分：良好的饮食习惯和个人观点 二、词语储备——对接模块词汇 ‎1．form 养成 ‎ ‎2．be_particular_about 对……挑剔 ‎ ‎3．do_harm_to 对……有害 ‎4．keep_healthy 保持健康 ‎5．diet 饮食 ‎6．build_up 增进，增强 ‎ 三、备用句型罗列——巧用模块句式、语法 完成句子 ‎1．我们应该食用各种各样的食物，像鱼、肉、蔬菜、水果和米饭、面条。‎ We should have different_kinds_of_foods like fish, meat, vegetables, fruits as well as rice, noodles.‎ ‎2．我们应该有规律地适当进食。‎ We should have the food regularly_and_properly.‎ ‎3．我认为保持健康的饮食很重要。‎ I think it is important to_keep_a_healthy_diet.‎ ‎4．这对强健体魄很有帮助。‎ This is beneficial to_build_up_a_strong_body.‎ 句式升级 ‎5．用not only... but also...合并1和2句 We_should_not_only_have_different_kinds_of_foods,_like_fish,_meat,_vegetables,_fruits_as_well_as_rice,_noodles,_but_also_have_the_food_regularly_and_properly.‎ ‎6．用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并3和4句 I_think_it_is_important_to_keep_a_healthy_diet,_which_is_beneficial_to_build_up_a_strong_body.‎ 四、扩充要点，连词成句 ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 高级范文：‎ Dear friends，‎ As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it's important for us to form healthy eating habits.‎ However, some students have formed a variety of bad eating habits, such as not having breakfast, eating snacks, being particular about food, eating and drinking too much and so on, which will surely do harm to their health.‎ To keep healthy, we should have healthy diets. We should not only have different kinds of foods, like fish, meat, vegetables, fruits as well as rice, noodles, but also have the food regularly and ‎ properly. Personally, I think it is important to keep a healthy diet, which is beneficial to build up a strong body.‎ 我的写作体会：　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ 写作训练 一、假定你是李华，请针对你校校园中存在的随意涂写(scribble)和乱丢垃圾(drop litter)的现象，用英语代表学生会写一封倡议书，号召大家保护环境。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右(标题、称号及落款已给出，但不计入总词数)；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Join hands to protect our environment Dear fellow students，‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Student Council 参考范文： ‎ Join hands to protect our environment Dear fellow students，‎ As we all know, when the environment is not healthy, it has a negative effect on us.‎ However, in our school, students can often be seen scribbling on walls or dropping litter wherever they want. It not only makes our school dirty and unpleasant, but also does harm to the image of our school.‎ Therefore, it's time for us to take measures to solve the problems. First, every one of us should develop good habits and behave ourselves better. Meanwhile, if we find someone damaging our environment, we should stop them without hesitation.‎ Only with the great efforts of both teachers and students will our school become a more enjoyable place to study in.‎ Let's take action now!‎ Student Council 二、假定你是李华，在世界无烟日(World No Tobacco Day)到来之际，你受学生会委托，为你校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则倡议书，内容包括：‎ ‎(1)陈述吸烟的危害；‎ ‎(2)倡议大家远离烟草。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文： ‎ Dear fellow students，‎ As we all know, smoking is harmful to our health. It is reported that millions of people die from smoking every year worldwide. Smoking can cause lung cancer and other breathingrelated diseases. It is also a major cause of heart disease. Smoking may also lead to many other problems, such as bad breath and stained teeth. Both smokers and nonsmokers are seriously affected by ‎ smoking. As students, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Let's value our lives and stay away from cigarettes!‎