2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十三：如何使写好道歉信

2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十三：如何使写好道歉信

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十三：如何使写好道歉信 ‎ [题型技法]‎ 道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失并发觉的情况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构如下：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[典例悟法]‎ ‎(2016•全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1．表示歉意；‎ ‎2．说明原因；‎ ‎3．另约时间。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 满分范文 Dear Bob，‎ I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.‎ Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books. If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8：30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 范文赏析 ‎(1)文章开篇表明写作意图，表达歉意。随后说明道歉的原因并解释不能赴约的原因。“再次相约”部分，情节适当发挥，情真意切。‎ ‎(2)范文中使用了convenient, available等高级词汇，并运用了较多的语法结构，如宾语从句that I cannot go to the bookstore ...和that I have to attend ...; so that ...引导的目的状语从句； If it's convenient for you ...为if引导的条件状语从句； If not ...状语从句的省略等。这展示了作者对复杂句式较强的运用能力，增加了文章得分的亮点。‎ ‎[增分佳句]‎ ‎1．道歉信开头常用语 ‎①I am writing this letter to apologize to you for ...‎ 我写这封信是因……向你道歉。‎ ‎②I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to/my failing ...‎ 因为没能……我向你表达最真诚的歉意/悔意。‎ ‎③I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.为此事可能给你带来的任何不便，我深表歉意。‎ ‎④I must make a sincere and humble apology to you for ...‎ 我必须为……真诚地向你道歉。‎ ‎⑤I regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to ...‎ 我遗憾地告知你我不能……‎ ‎2．道歉信结尾常用语 ‎①Please allow me to say sorry again.‎ 请允许我再次道歉。‎ ‎②Will you please accept my apology?‎ 请你接受我的道歉，好吗？‎ ‎③Please accept my sincere apology for ...once more.‎ 请再次为……接受我真诚的道歉。‎ ‎④I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.‎ 我衷心希望你能宽容地接受我的道歉。‎ ‎⑤Once again, I'm sorry for my inconvenience caused.‎ 对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。‎ ‎[热点押题]‎ 假定你是李华，你从朋友Mike处借的一本书不慎遗失。现在，请用英文给他写一封道歉信，请求原谅。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．开头与结束语已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Mike，‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 参考范文：‎ Dear Mike，‎ I'm sorry to tell you that I've lost your book that I borrowed from you.Now I'm expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.‎ Actually, I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday.But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home.I tried to get it back but failed.How angry and guilty I felt! This morning, I went to buy another book in some bookstores but it was very expensive.However, I promise that I'll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month.‎ Please forgive me and accept my sincere apology.Best wishes!‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua