专题27 短文改错（Ⅱ）-2019年高考英语二轮复习提分秘籍（解析版）

专题27 短文改错（Ⅱ）-2019年高考英语二轮复习提分秘籍（解析版）

A It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom，the volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates，two of which arrived later. I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say“Goodbye” to my father，but he had to leave to home. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently. Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I into my new high school. After in the classroom， volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates，two of arrived later.I got to know my new immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say“Goodbye” to my father，/ he had to leave home. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after and live independently.Not until then I know my senior high school life had begun.【解析】‎ 第三处：the→a。考查冠词。volunteer是可数名词，且第一次在文中出现，故用不定冠词修饰。‎ 第四处：which→whom。考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，应用whom引导非限定性定语从句，在从句中作介词of的宾语，修饰先行词five roommates。‎ 第五处：roommate→roommates。考查名词复数。由上文的“I had five roommates”可知，室友不止一个，故用复数形式。‎ 第六处：删除but或将but改为yet。考查连词。在英语中，although和but不能同时出现在一个句子中，故删除but。也可将but改为yet。补充：此处也可将Although删掉，但是语意上没有修改but好。‎ 第七处：leave后的to改为for。考查介词。leave for意为“前往”，为固定词组，符合语境。‎ 第八处：me→myself。考查代词。与句子主语I呼应，应用反身代词，意为“照顾好自己”。‎ 第九处：then后加did。考查倒装句。not until置于句首时，常采用部分倒装，即把助动词放在主语之前。由时间状语then和下文的时态可知，此处用一般过去时，故用did。‎ 第十处：real→really。考查副词。修饰动词应用副词，故将real改为really。 ‎ B ‎ My father is the man I respect most. Strict as he may be，however he never fails to show her care and consideration. Once I broke a neighbor window. Seeing nobody around，I ran away immediately. When Dad came home，he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what has happened. I could only tell him a truth. Instead of scold，he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor. I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health and he also teaches me what to be a good citizen. How luckily I am to have such a good father!‎ ‎【答案】　‎ My father is the man I respect most. Strict as he may be， he never fails to show care and consideration. Once I broke a window.Seeing nobody around，I ran away immediately. When Dad came home，he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what happened. I could only tell him truth. Instead of ，he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor.I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health he also teaches me to be a good citizen. How I am to have such a good father!‎ ‎【解析】　‎ 第三处：neighbor→neighbor's。考查名词所有格形式。此处用名词所有格形式作定语，修饰名词window。‎ 第四处：has→had。考查动词时态。与asked呼应可知，此处应用过去完成时，表示过去的过去。‎ 第五处：a→the。考查冠词。tell the truth为固定词组搭配，符合语境，故用定冠词the。‎ 第六处：scold→scolding。考查动名词。介词后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语，故用动名词scolding作介词of的宾语。‎ 第七处：our前加to。考查介词。apologize to sb.意为“向某人道歉”，为固定词组搭配，故用介词to。‎ 第八处：and→but。考查连词，not only...but also...意为“不但……而且……”，为固定结构，故用连词but。‎ 第九处：what→how。考查疑问词。与teaches呼应可知，此处表示方式，故用how。‎ 第十处：luckily→lucky。考查形容词。与I am呼应可知，此处应用形容词lucky作表语。‎ C ‎ Boys and girls，‎ May I have your fully attention, please? I have announcement to make. To welcome our friends in the United States，the Student Union was going to hold a party on Saturday evening，February 20.As never，the party will be held in the lecture hall of the Main Building. They will begin at 7 pm. There will be music，dancing，singing or exchange of gifts. Will everyone please to bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to pack it up，sign your name and writing a few words of good wishes. Don't miss the party，where I believe we will have a lot of funs. Everyone is welcome.‎ That's all. Thank you.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ Boys and girls，‎ May I have your attention, please? I have announcement to make.To welcome our friends the United States，the Student Union going to hold a party on Saturday evening，February 20.As ，the party will be held in the lecture hall of the Main Building. will begin at 7 pm.There will be music，dancing，singing exchange of gifts.Will everyone please bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to pack it up，sign your name and a few words of good wishes.Don't miss the party，where I believe we will have a lot of .Everyone is welcome.‎ That's all.Thank you.‎ ‎【解析】　‎ 第四处：was→is。考查时态。这里说的是从现在看将要发生的事情，不能用过去将来时，应用一般将来时。‎ 第五处：never→ever。考查行文逻辑。此处表示“像之前一样，像往常一样”，故用ever。‎ 第六处：They→It。考查代词。此处指代前面的the party，故用It。‎ 第七处：or→and。考查连词。根据句意以及下文提到的让大家准备礼品可知，此处表示并列关系而非选择关系，故用and。‎ 第八处：删除bring前的to。考查情态动词。情态动词后应用动词原形，故to多余。‎ 第九处：writing→write。考查固定搭配。此处应用动词原形write与pack，sign并列。‎ 第十处：funs→fun。考查名词。fun为不可数名词，没有复数形式。‎ D I like travelling and my dream of visit Beijing，the capital city of our country，come true during the National Day holidays this year. In October 1st，I went to Tian' an men Square with my parents，there we watched the flagraising ceremony. As I watched flag rising slowly，I sang the national anthem，feeling extremely exciting. Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction，like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall，I felt very proudly. I thought of the old saying that“One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.” Although I was tired，but I really had a good time.‎ ‎【答案】　‎ I like travelling and my dream of Beijing，the capital city of our country， true during the National Day holidays this year. October 1st，I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents， we watched the flagraising ceremony. As I watched flag rising slowly，I sang the national anthem，feeling extremely .Then we went to some other famous tourist ，like the Great Wall.Standing on the Great Wall，I felt very .I thought of the old saying that“One who to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.”Although I was tired，/ I really had a good time.‎ ‎【解析】　‎ 第四处：there→where。考查定语从句。根据语境可知，此处应用where引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词Tian'anmen Square。‎ 第五处：flag前面加上the。考查定冠词。根据语境可知，这里的flag表特指，故用定冠词。‎ 第六处：exciting→excited。考查形容词。该句主语为I，修饰人，应用形容词excited，表示“激动的，兴奋的”。‎ 第七处：attraction→attractions。考查名词的数。attraction作“吸引人的事物”讲时，为可数名词，根据该句中的some可知，此处指多个旅游景点，故用复数形式。‎ 第八处：proudly→proud。考查形容词。该句中的感官动词felt用作系动词，后接形容词。‎ 第九处：fail→fails。考查动词的时态和主谓一致。该句陈述的是一般情况，故用一般现在时；该句主语为One，为第三人称单数，故用fails。‎ 第十处：删除but或but改为yet。although不能和but连用，能和yet连用。补充：此处也可删除Although，但是语意上没有修改but好。‎