中考英语作文写作指导及范文

中考英语作文写作指导及范文

‎2019年英语中考话题作文 话题一：Personal Background ‎【写作指导】‎ ‎(一)审题。 本篇作文体裁为记叙文，要求用英文介绍自己的好朋友，使用一般现在时态。‎ ‎(二)列举写作要点。‎ ‎1．文章的主题句； 2．叙述人物的详细信息； 3．自己对这个朋友的评价。‎ ‎(三)列举重点短语和句型。be from，help sb.with sth.，like doing sth.，be interested in ‎【范文】‎ My Good Friend ‎ I have a good friend.Her name is Susan.She is from America.She is fourteen years old.She is tall.She has big blue eyes and long golden hair.She is lovely and helpful.She often helps us with our English.We all like her very much.She likes sports.Her favorite sports are swimming and running.She has many hobbies，such as reading books and listening to music.She likes China and Chinese people.She is very interested in Chinese history and culture.She wants to know more about China.‎ ‎【写作指导】‎ 人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时。‎ 写作思路：先写自我介绍和写信的目的；再写自荐的理由；最后写将来的打算。‎ One possible version: ‎ ‎ Dear Mr. Liu, I'm a boy from Class 1, Grade 9.And my name is Wang Lin. I'd love to be the host of our school's English Corner. I think I'm capable of doing this job because of the following reasons. ‎ ‎ First, I'm healthy and energetic. Second, I once spent a year in America and my oral English is excellent. Third, I'm willing to help others and communicate with others. And last, it can have a better effect on my future life. If I'm lucky to get the chance, I will work hard to make our English Corner interesting and popular. ‎ ‎ Yours，‎ ‎ Wang Lin ‎ 话题二：Families，friends and people around ‎【审题指导】‎ 细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：‎ ‎1．①文章要求我们介绍一个身残志坚的澳大利亚小伙子尼克·胡哲的故事，因此这是一篇人物传记类的文章；②你从他的励志故事中学习到了什么，应根据自己的切身感悟写出受到的启发。‎ ‎2．介绍其过去的一些事情时应该使用一般过去时；介绍尼克·胡哲时用第三人称，介绍自己的感受时用第一人称。3．词数：100词左右。‎ ‎【范文】‎ Nick Vujicic is a world famous speaker. His experiences inspire a lot of people in the world. He was born on December 4th，1982 in Australia. Unluckily，he was born without arms or legs，but he learnt to swim，get dressed，use a computer and so on. At 21，Nick graduated from university. Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams. He has spoken to more than 3，000，000 people so far. He has ever visited China five times. In 2008，he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake.‎ ‎ From his story，I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life.‎ 话题三：Personal environment (周围环境)‎ ‎ 假设你是李华。你的朋友Tom打算来重庆游玩，来之前想让你先给他写封信介绍一下重庆。请你根据下列提示给他写一封信。‎ ‎1．地理位置：中国西南部 ‎2．占地面积：八万多平方公里 ‎3．人口：三千多万 ‎4．著名景点：洪崖洞、一棵树和长江三峡（the Three Gorges）等。‎ ‎5．重庆是现代化大都市。。。。。‎ 注意：1，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。  2，词数100左右 Dear Tom,‎ I’m delighted to hear that you are going to visit Chongqing.__________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Dear Tom,‎ I’m delighted to hear that you are going to visit Chongqing.Chongqing, where the Yangtze River and Jialing River meet, is situated in the southwest of China. Covering an area of over 80,000 square kilometers, it has a population of more than thirty million. Besides, there are many world famous places of interest, such as Hongyadong and YiKeShu in Nanshan called the Internet -famous sights for the wonderful night views ,as well as the Three Gorges, which attract millions of tourists from all over the world. What’s more, Chongqing’s noodles and hot-pot are very delicious, attracting thousands of people to taste them. ‎ Nowadays,Chongqing, which is developing with high speed, is the biggest international city in China in terms of area and population. People here are very kind, warm and friendly to every visitor from any corner of the world. I believe you will enjoy your visit in Chongqing.‎ I hope to meet you soon.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。同时也属于提纲类作文，向你的朋友Tom 写封信介绍一下重庆。要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述时可以以要点时为顺序，也可以适当加工要点，但运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。象范文里面的where the Yangtze River and Jialing Rivermeet, is situated in the southwest of China. 和Coveringan area of over 80,000 square kilometers, it has a population of more thanthirty million.都不失为好句子。‎ 考点：考查提纲类短文写作。‎ 点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。‎ 实战演练。‎ 如今，中国掀起了广场舞(public square dancing)热潮。对于这种现象，人们褒贬不一。请你根据下列提示写一篇短文，谈谈广场舞的利与弊，并提出解决措施。‎ 要求：1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；尽量运用本讲的重点句子。‎ ‎2．词数：80－100词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：遭受suffer from；音量volume ‎【写作指导】‎ 人称：第一人称，第三人称；时态：一般现在时。‎ 写作思路：先开篇点题写出广场舞；再写出其优点和缺点；最后写出解决措施。‎ One possible version: ‎ Nowadays，public square dancing is becoming more and more popular. Most of the public squares are crowded with dancers，especially in the morning and evening. We all agree that public square dancing is a good way to keep healthy，especially for the old. Besides，it is money？saving.‎ However,each coin has two sides. But it also causes noise pollution. Many people suffer from the noise caused by the loud music. They can't work，study or sleep well. They feel very angry and some even argue with the dancers. ‎ As far as I’m concerned，the dancers should turn down the volume while dancing. In addition，our government should build more public places for them，such as squares and parks. Then people can have fun dancing without disturbing other people.‎ 话题四：School and school life (学校和学校生活)‎ 典例分析。‎ 三年的初中生活即将结束，你马上就要进入高中学习，请以My Life in the Senior High School 为题，根据下表所提供的信息和参考词汇，用英语写一篇小短文，畅想自己未来的高中生活。‎ 要求：1.短文必须陈述你的高中校园、老师、同学、学习和课外活动五个方面的内容，每个方面用2－3句话表述；‎ ‎2．词数：80词左右；‎ ‎3．中文不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息。‎ 参考词汇：宁静的peaceful；知识渊博的knowledgeable；宽敞明亮wide and bright; 关爱care for; 自主学习learn by oneself; 积极参加take an active part in; 小组学习group work; 课外活动outofclass activities ‎【范文】‎ My Life in the Senior High School ‎ My junior high school will be over. And I'm going to my senior high school in September. I think my senior high school life will be colorful and meaningful.‎ ‎ The campus of my senior high school will be peaceful and beautiful. The classroom will be wide and bright. It must be a good place to study. The teachers will be knowledgeable. They will be strict with the students but they care for them，too.I will get along well with my classmates. I will learn by myself and take an active part in group work. And I will try my best to make big progress. I will take part in all kinds of out-of-class activities and keep fit. What a wonderful senior high school life! I can't wait!‎ ‎【写作指导】‎ 人称：第一人称和第三人称；时态：一般现在时。‎ 写作思路：先开篇点题——同学们相互送礼物；再具体写出每个人的观点；最后写出作者个人观点及做法。‎ Recently I have found that some classmates are giving graduation gifts to each other. Are we supposed to do this? My friends and I have different views about it.‎ ‎ Helen thinks it‘s necessary to give gifts to friends because friends are important to us and they can remember us forever if we do so. Zhu Jie thinks differently. He says it’s unnecessary to do this because it‘ll not only waste our parents’ money，but also get in the way of our schoolwork. ‎ As for me，I suggest we give a few gifts to our friends，but the gifts can‘t be too expensive. At the same time，we should try to help and care about our friends. Remember：a true friendship requires understanding and care. ‎ 话题五：Rules and customs(规则与风俗习惯)‎ 典例分析。‎ 人们常说：“没有规矩，不成方圆”，合理的校规对于学生的健康成长至关重要。请你根据以下所给内容要点，以“Our school rules”为题写一篇英文短文，谈谈你们的校规。‎ ‎ 内容要点：1.你们学校有哪些校规； 2.谈谈你对这些校规的看法；‎ ‎ 3.请说说你的好建议； 4.……‎ ‎ 要求：1.文中必须包括所给提示中1－3项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；‎ ‎ 2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息； 3.不少于80词。‎ ‎【审题指导】‎ 细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：‎ ‎1．这是一篇命题作文，内容主要包括：学校的校规；对这些校规的看法；提出好的建议。‎ ‎2．可展开思路，适当发挥，使文章连贯通顺，写作时不要只简单翻译提示要点。‎ ‎3．本文要求写出校规，提出看法和建议，写作时主要用第一人称，通常用一般现在时。‎ ‎4．词数应不少于80词，且不得出现真实姓名、校名及其他真实信息。‎ ‎【范文】‎ Our School Rules ‎ There are many rules in our school.From Monday to Friday，we have to get to school before 7：00 in the morning.We must wear school uniforms，and I think it is good for us because uniforms can make us look smart.We must listen to our teachers carefully in class and finish our homework after school.We are not allowed to use mobile phones in class.I think the rules are very strict but useful，and we should follow them.‎ ‎ We have so much homework that we have little free time to do what we love to do.In my opinion，we should have more free time to take part in all kinds of activities and improve our abilities.‎ 实战演练。‎ 许多学校严格禁止学生携带手机到学校，但仍有部分学生违反规定。你认为学生应该带手机上学吗？请写一篇80－100词左右的短文阐述自己的观点。‎ ‎【写作指导】‎ 人称：第一人称和第三人称；时态：一般现在时。‎ 写作思路：先写出学校的规章制度，反对携带手机上学及部分同学反对此制度；再写出手机的利与弊；最后写出作者自己的观点。‎ One possible version: ‎ In many schools，students aren't allowed to bring mobile phones to school.But some students are still against this rule. ‎ Mobile phones really make our lives convenient.With mobile phones，students can get information they want wherever they go.And students can ask for help whenever they are in trouble. On the other hand，mobile phones may make students pay less attention to their studies.For example，they may play games or send text messages in class instead of listening to the teachers. ‎ As far as I’m concerned，mobile phones are important，but it's not good for students to go to school with them.‎ 话题六：Daily routines(日常活动)‎ 实战演练。‎ ‎ 当前，学生的学校生活多姿多彩，业余爱好也丰富多样。下图是我们对某所中学300名学生业余爱好的调查结果。请根据以下要求，用英语写一篇短文。‎ 内容要点：1.调查结果；‎ ‎2．你自己的爱好、选择的原因及带来的益处。‎ 要求：1.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名；‎ 词数80－100词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎【写作指导】‎ ‎(一)审题。‎ 本文是一项对于学生业余爱好的调查报告，要求考生根据图示和提示信息写出调查报告的结果。并且要写出自己的爱好，以及所选爱好的好处。时态以一般现在时为主。‎ ‎(二)列举写作要点。‎ ‎1．描述某中学300名学生业余爱好的调查结果。‎ ‎2．个人选择的业余爱好，选择的原因及该爱好对本人的益处。‎ ‎(三)列举重点短语和句型。‎ 重点短语：in one's free time，spend...doing...，on weekends，such as，as for...，make sb. relaxed，prefer doing sth.‎ 重点句型：Here is the result of the survey about...‎ One possible version:‎ Many students have hobbies. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do in their free time.‎ Nearly half the students like music, and a quarter of them usually spend their time playing sports, twenty percent enjoy reading books. A few students like collecting things they like, such as stamps, coins, and so on. Few students have other hobbies. ‎ As for me, I prefer listening to music. Because it can give me pleasure when I'm unhappy and make me relaxed after hard study. Sometimes I listen to English songs. I can learn English words or phrases from them. It really improves my English a lot. ‎ 话题七：Life and experiences(生活和经历)‎ 典例分析。‎ 假设你是Mike，后天是父亲节，请你根据下面所给的信息，写一封回忆去年夏天与父亲一起爬山的难忘经历，作为一份送给父亲的特殊礼物。‎ 要求：1.信中应包含所有提供的信息并展开合理的想象；2.信中不能出现真实的姓名；‎ ‎3．词数：不少于100词。‎ ‎【审题指导】‎ 细读所给的文字提示，结合图画，提取信息：‎ ‎1．①这是一篇看图作文，主要描写与父亲一起爬山的难忘经历，所以本文是一篇记叙文。内容主要记述父亲在爬山过程中对自己的帮助和鼓励；②要求中提到信中应包含所提供的信息，并展开合理的想象，因此文章必须结合信息，组织语言，使事件完整通顺。‎ ‎2．本文描述去年夏天与父亲一起爬山的难忘经历，写作时用第一人称，描写父亲用第三人称。‎ ‎3．回忆事件通常用一般过去时，抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时。‎ ‎4．词数应不少于100词，不得使用真实姓名及校名。‎ ‎【范文】‎ Dear Daddy，‎ It's a gift for Father's Day when you are reading it.‎ I still remember the day last summer when we went climbing together.We started early in the morning.But，unluckily，it began to rain on the half way.I got wet all through，feeling cold and tired.So I couldn't help complaining and wanted to give up.‎ However，you encouraged me not to give up and put your coat on me softly.You told me，“We won't see the fantastic scenery unless we reach the top.” You really cheered me up.We got to the top at last and enjoyed the beauty of the nature that I had never seen.‎ Now，I want to say: I love you，Daddy.You raise me up!‎ Happy Father's Day!‎ ‎ Yours，‎ ‎ Mike 实战演练。‎ 在学习和生活中你一定帮助过他人，假如你参加的英语俱乐部准备举行以“我助人，我快乐”为主题的作文比赛，请你根据以下图标提示，用英语写一篇不少于100词的短文，分享你助人为乐的故事。‎ c ‎【写作指导】‎ 人称：第一人称；时态：一般过去时。‎ 写作思路：开篇点题——先写从帮助别人获得益处；再详细地描述帮助别人的过程及结果；最后首尾呼应，写出自己的感受。‎ One possible version: ‎ ‎ Helping Others is Helping Ourselves As the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand”. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble. I still remember I helped one of my classmates with Chinese when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Mike, one of my classmates, was not good at Chinese while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his Chinese improved with my help. At the same time, I found my Chinese improved too. Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.‎ 话题八：Culture and recreation(文化娱乐)‎ 典例分析。本周五的英语角活动将要举行讲故事比赛。假设你选择的是如下话题，请根据以下提示(可适当发挥)写一篇60－80词的故事演讲稿。‎ ‎1．故事概况：泰坦尼克号是100多年前世界上最大、也是最豪华的轮船之一。1912年4月从英国开往美国，在途中因撞上冰山沉没。由于没有足够的救生艇，事故导致1500多人丧生，只有约700人获救，获救的大部分是妇女和儿童。‎ ‎2．感言：珍惜生命，关爱他人……‎ 参考词汇：从……到……from...to...；冰山iceberg；下沉go down；救生艇lifeboat；珍惜cherish ‎【写作指导】‎ ‎(一)审题。‎ 本篇作文考查的体裁为应用文，要求根据泰坦尼克号沉船事件，写一篇演讲稿。‎ ‎(二)列举写作要点。‎ ‎1．介绍时间、地点、人物。‎ ‎2．介绍故事经过。‎ ‎3．故事感言。‎ ‎(三)列举重点短语和句型。‎ the largest and finest，start，ago，from England to America，way，hit an iceberg and went down，more than，care for others，break，be saved，most of，cherish ‎【范文】‎ Good morning，teachers and fellow students. Today I would like to tell you a story about Titanic.‎ When I hear the song My Heart Will Go On，I always think of the great ship “Titanic”．It was the largest and finest of all the ships about one hundred years ago. It was on April 10th，1912，when the Titanic started from England to America. It was carrying more than 2，200 people. Unluckily，it hit an iceberg and went down on the way to New York. At last，more than 1，500 people lost their lives，because there were not enough lifeboats. Many gentlemen gave up their lives in order to save women and children. They were heroes. From the story，we must remember: cherish life and care for others.‎ That's all. Thanks for your listening and attention.‎ 实战演练。‎ 你喜欢看选秀节目吗？近年来，选秀类节目层出不穷，像The Voice of China，China's Got Talent等。对此，人们众说纷纭。请就这一话题，根据内容提示，以Different ideas on talent shows 为题写一篇短文。‎ 一些人认为，观看这些节目非常轻松愉快。它们不但丰富了人们的生活，而且让很多人有了实现梦想的机会。在这些节目中，还能发现一些优秀的表演者。但并不是所有的人都喜欢这类节目。他们认为许多学生花太多时间观看这些节目，不利于他们的学习。有些学生甚至为了参加这类节目而放弃学业。‎ 我们应该以正确的方式来看待选秀类节目。请你也表明自己的观点，并说明理由。‎ 要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；‎ ‎2．短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；‎ ‎3．词数80词左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：表演者performer；对……有害be bad for；放弃give up；使……多姿多彩make...colorful；以一种正确的方式in a right way ‎【写作指导】‎ 人称：第一人称和第三人称；时态：一般现在时态。‎ 写作思路：开篇点题——先写人们对各类选秀节目有不同的观点；再接着写这些选秀节目的优点；再写出这些节目的缺点；最后作者发表自己的观点。 ‎ Different ideas on talent shows Do you like watching talent shows? More and more talent shows have been on TV recently，such as .The Voice of China, China's Got Talent and so on. Different people have different ideas. Some think it's fun to watch them. They make people's life more colorful, and provide chances for many people to achieve their dreams. Some talented performers are found in these shows. However, not everybody enjoys them. Some students spend too much time watching the programs, which is bad for their study. Some students even give up their study to take part in them. ‎ In my opinion, these programs are wonderful. I like them very much. We should regard them in a right way.‎ 话题九：Feelings and interpersonal communication(情感与人际交往)‎ 典例分析。‎ 你的英国朋友Steve未经允许在他爸爸的电脑上玩游戏导致电脑中毒，Steve心里害怕，不敢向爸爸说，因此写信向你求助。请你以Diana的名义根据内容提示给Steve写一封回信。‎ 内容要点：‎ 1. 指出Steve的两点错误；‎ 2. ‎2．最好立即向爸爸说出实情；‎ 3． 建议Steve帮爸爸做些事，以弥补过错；‎ 4． 词数80词左右，不得出现真实的姓名、校名。‎ ‎【审题指导】本文是书信，写作时用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。‎ ‎【范文】‎ Dear Steve，‎ Thanks for thinking of me at this time. I think you have made two mistakes. One is that you shouldn't play computer games on your father's computer without his permission. The other is that you are afraid to tell him the truth.‎ I think since you have made mistakes，you must come up with ways to correct them. First of all，you had better tell him the truth immediately. Maybe he will be angry with you. Then you can do something to make him happy. For example，you can volunteer to do some housework. Do some sports with him. Tell him you will not make the same mistake next time.‎ Oh，and next time，play basketball with your dad!‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours，‎ Diana 话题十：Plans and arrangements，Festivals，holidays and celebrations(计划安排与节假日活动)‎ 典例分析。‎ 假设你是思湘，你的美国笔友Amy来信想了解中国的传统节日端午节。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇80词左右的回信给她。‎ 要求：1.回信要包括图表中给出的所有内容，可适当发挥；‎ ‎ 2.信中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。‎ ‎ 参考词汇：端午节the Dragon Boat Festival; 为了纪念in memory of ‎【写作指导】‎ 本篇写作主要是给美国笔友Amy回一封信，讲述中国的传统节日——端午节的一些情况。要求考生根据图表的提示把端午节的由来及庆祝活动和食品写清楚。文章主体用一般现在时。在叙述时要注意语言表达准确，可以考虑运用过渡句或者连接词，以使文章层次分明，语意连贯。同时保证词数符合要求，单词拼写正确。‎ ‎【范文】‎ Dear Amy，‎ I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the traditional Chinese festival—The Dragon Boat Festival. I'm happy to share what I know about it with you.‎ The festival has a history of more than 2，000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day，people watch exciting dragon boat races and make delicious zongzi，a kind of special food with sticky rice，meat etc. wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Qu Yuan，a great poet in history.‎ In a word，we all love the festival because it's a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours，‎ Si Xiang 实战演练。‎ 中考结束，你将度过一个漫长的假期。假设你是Li Ming，你的美国笔友 Mike来信想知道你的假期计划，请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一封回信，告诉他你的假期安排。‎ 内容要点：‎ ‎1.帮助父母做家务；2．每天锻炼身体；3．大量阅读；4．旅游放松。‎ 要求：1.词数80-100词；‎ ‎2．文章必须包括所有的要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥；‎ ‎3．文中不要出现真实的校名和姓名；‎ ‎4．信的开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。‎ ‎【写作指导】‎ 人称：第一人称；时态：一般将来时。‎ 写作思路：先对朋友的来信表示感谢；再写自己的假期计划(在写作过程中要利用 at first，...，then，...，and next，...finally)；最后询问朋友的假期计划及对他到中国来玩表示欢迎。‎ Dear Mike,‎ I'm very glad to receive your letter. Now，I'll tell you my vacation plan.‎ At first, I am going to help my parents to do the housework, such as doing the dishes, cleaning the floor, making the bed and so on. Then, I'll exercise every day, such as running, playing basketball and swimming to keep healthy. And next, I'll do lots of reading to improve my culture and art appreciation. Finally, I'll go travelling with my parents to relax myself and broaden my eyes. Maybe we'll go to the beach in Hainan or Tailand, lying in the sand with the sunlight. ‎ What about your vacation plan? Welcome to China! ‎ Looking forward to seeing you in Chongqing Yours, ‎ Li Ming 书面表达。‎ ‎　　　近年来我国的发展世人瞩目，中国传统文化越来越受到各国朋友广泛的关注，请根据提示，以“The Spring Festival”为题写一篇短文，向外国朋友介绍我国的春节。‎ 春节 中国农历年(the lunar year)的第一天；‎ 春节前 一个月前开始准备(prepare)食物，打扫卫生装饰(decorate)房子 除夕(On ChineseNew Year'sEve)‎ 家人团圆(get together)，吃年夜饭(big dinner)守夜(stay up till midnight)放烟花鞭炮(play fireworks and crackers)；‎ 大年初一(the first day)‎ 穿新衣(put on new clothes)，向父母拜年(greet parents)，收压岁钱(get lucky money)。‎ 要求：1.字迹工整，规范； 　2.80词左右；‎ ‎ 　3.根据所给内容要点及参考词汇，可适当发挥。‎ In China，the Spring Festival is the first day of the lunar year, which is the most important traditional festival. People usually start preparing for the festival one month before it comes.They prepare delicious food，and clean and decorate their homes.On Chinese New Year's Eve，the family all get together for a big dinner and watch the spring Gala happily till midnight，waiting for the new year coming and then playing fireworks and crackers for good luck.On the first day of the lunar New Year，children put on their new clothes and greet their parents.They are very happy to get lucky money from them.‎ 话题十一：Travel and transport(旅游与交通)‎ 典例分析。 你的美国朋友Tom非常喜欢中国文化，去年暑假你和他一起从桂林出发去北京旅游了几天，你们参观了一些著名景点，还品尝了一些有名的小吃……请把你们的旅游经历写成一篇短文。‎ 要求：1.文章词数在80－100词之间，要点齐全，可以适当发挥；‎ ‎ 2.文章中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息。‎ ‎【审题指导】‎ ‎ 本题要求写一篇记叙文。记叙自己和汤姆一起旅游的经历。‎ ‎1．本文描述的旅游经历，写作时主要用第一人称，写汤姆时用第三人称。‎ ‎2．记叙的是过去的事情，主要用一般过去时。3．要点要齐全，可适当发挥。‎ ‎4．词数在80－100词之间，不得出现真实姓名、校名。‎ 北京之旅 ‎ 要点提示 素材串联 开头：简要介绍旅行的人物、时间、地点等 去年暑假，我和我的美国朋友汤姆坐飞机去北京了(by plane)。‎ 正文：旅游的过程 ‎ 1．第一天，我们去了故宫和天安门广场；‎ ‎2．第二天，我们去了长城，并拍了很多照片，这是个很棒的经历(take photos; lots of; fantastic)；‎ ‎3．我们还吃了北京烤鸭，我觉得这是世界上最美味的食物(most delicious; in the world)；‎ ‎4．我们还看了京剧，同时还去老舍茶馆喝茶；‎ ‎5．最后，我们购物完后坐飞机回了桂林 ‎(do some shopping; fly back to)。 ‎ 结尾：简单说明 自己和汤姆的感受 总结说明此次旅行虽然时间短，但是很精彩(wonderful)。‎ ‎【范文】‎ A Trip to Beijing My American friend Tom and I went to Beijing by plane last summer.On the first day，we visited the Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square.The next day，we climbed the Great Wall.We took lots of photos.Although we felt tired，it was a fantastic experience.The third day we relaxed.Then we had the Beijing roast duck for lunch.I think it is the most delicious food in the world! Tom is interested in Chinese culture，so we drank tea and saw Beijing Opera in Lao She Teahouse in the evening.Finally，we did some shopping and flew back to Guilin.The trip to Beijing was short，but it was wonderful. Tom said that he would never forget it.‎ 话题十二：Food and drink，health，safety and first aid(饮食、健康、安全与救护)‎ 现在，有的同学不吃早饭就去上学。请针对这种现象写一篇短文。‎ 内容要点：1.学生不吃早饭的原因；‎ ‎2．不吃早饭对学生的影响(至少两个方面)；‎ ‎3．你认为应该如何合理安排早餐。‎ 要求：1.词数：80－100词； 2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。‎ ‎【审题指导】细读文章所给提示，提取信息：‎ ‎1．①归纳学生不吃早饭的原因；②不吃早饭给学生造成的影响；③写一下自己认为合理的早餐安排。‎ ‎2．事实性的论述常用一般现在时。‎ ‎3．词数在80－100词之间。‎ 早餐对学生的重要性 要点提示 素材串联 开头：事实分析及其原因 很多学生不吃早饭，原因有很多，比如起床很晚来不及(without breakfast；get up late)。‎ 正文：不吃早饭对学生在 很多方面造成影响 上课会感到饿，无法集中精力学习，影响学习和健康(feel hungry；concentrate on)。‎ 结尾：写一下自己的认识 和合理的早餐安排 比如早起床有充足的时间吃饭，吃些营养食物(get up earlier；have noodles)。‎ ‎【范文】‎ Some of us go to school without having breakfast.We stay up late studying.We prefer sleeping a little longer to getting up early，so we don't have enough time for breakfast.‎ In the morning，we usually have four classes.It's a long time before lunch.If we don't eat breakfast，we may feel hungry in class and won't concentrate on study.What's worse，it's bad for our health.‎ From now on，we'd better get up a little earlier，and have some healthy food such as noodles for breakfast.It's better to have some fruit after breakfast.‎ 实战演练。‎ 俗话说“眼睛是心灵的窗户”，可现如今，眼睛健康的人却寥寥可数。请你根据下列图表提示以“How to Protect Your Eyesight”为题，用英语写一篇短文来谈谈如何保护视力。‎ 要求：1.根据图表提示先补充至少两种保护视力的方法，然后再进行写作；‎ ‎ 2.词数不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎【写作指导】‎ 人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时；‎ 写作思路：先开篇点题——怎样保护视力；再具体写保护视力的方法；最后补充两种方法即可。‎ How to Protect Your Eyesight As we all know，eyes are very important.So it is necessary for everyone to look after their eyesight.But do you know how to protect your eyesight?‎ ‎_______________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________ If you obey the rules above，I think you may be able to protect your eyesight.‎ ‎【范文】‎ How to Protect Your Eyesight ‎ ‎ As we all know, eyes are very important. So it is necessary for everyone to look after their eyesight.But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don't use your eyes for a long time. You'd better give them a rest after studying for an hour. Second, don't read in the sun or in a poor light. Don't read in bed, either. When you read you should keep the book about 30cm away from your eyes. ‎ ‎ Third, do eye exercises every day. Fourth, eat more fruit, vegetables and seafood. Fifth, get enough sleep. You should sleep at least 8 hours every night. Sixth, keep as far away from mobile phones, iPads and computers as possible. If you obey the rules above, I think you may be able to protect your eyesight.‎ 话题十三：Nature and environmental protection(自然与环境保护)‎ 当前我国政府倡导节约，抵制浪费。作为中学生我们应该如何做到节粮、节水、节电呢？请根据以下要求和提示写一篇题为“How to save”的短文。‎ 内容要点：1.节约用水、用电、用纸； 2.去超市自备购物袋；‎ ‎ 3.不要浪费食物、乱倒剩饭剩菜； 4.步行或骑自行车上学。‎ 要求：1.词数80词左右；‎ ‎ 2.文中不要出现作者本人的真实校名和姓名； 3.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。‎ 参考词汇：水龙头tap；剩余饭菜uneaten food；电electricity ‎【审题指导】‎ 细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：‎ ‎1.文章要求介绍作为中学生，我们应该如何做到节粮、节水、节电，可知体裁为说明文。‎ ‎2.本文是给大家提的建议，写作时用第一人称较好。建议使用情态动词must，need，have to，或者we'd better等。‎ ‎3.介绍日常的事情用一般现在时。‎ 要点提示 素材串联 开头：提出问题 如何节约。‎ 正文：‎ 具体节约的方法 ‎ 1.节约用水、用电、用纸；‎ ‎2.去超市自备购物袋(instead of)；‎ ‎3.不要浪费食物、乱倒剩饭剩菜；‎ ‎4.步行或骑自行车上学(on foot; ride a bike)。 ‎ 结尾：总结全文 总结说明无论做多小的努力，都会产生巨大的影响(make a big difference)。‎ ‎【范文】How to save Our government is aiming to build an “economized society”(节约型社会).It is our duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As students，we should do something to help.‎ First，we'd better save more water，paper and electricity.Next，we should take our own bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags from supermarkets.Then we don't waste food.We'd better eat up all the food when we have meals.And don't throw the uneaten food everywhere.Finally，we'd better go to school on foot or ride a bike instead of taking a car.‎ In a word，I think one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make，it does make a big difference.‎ 话题十四：Popular science and modern technology(科普知识与现代技术)‎ ‎ 如今边走路边玩手机的“低头族”随处可见。请你根据下列图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，谈谈使用手机的利弊及你的建议。‎ 要求：1.词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 2.必须包括上述图片信息，可适当发挥；‎ ‎3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；4.文中不得出现考生本人的姓名、校名等。‎ 参考词汇：看新闻read news；交通事故traffic accidents；影响学习affect study；对眼睛/脖子有害be bad for neck/eyes ‎ Nowadays，mobile phones are very popular.They are playing an important role in our life.___________________________‎ ‎【范文】‎ Nowadays，mobile phones are very popular. They are playing an important role in our life.We can use them to read news，send messages，make phone calls and read all kinds of books.Besides，we can use them to enjoy music，do some shopping and play games. In a word，‎ mobile phones have made our life more colorful.‎ However，they also bring us many problems.For example，if people use them while riding，they may have traffic accidents.If we spend a lot of time on the mobile phones，it may affect our study.What's worse，they're bad for our eyes and necks.‎ As far as I’m concerned，we shouldn't spend lots of time on them and we should use them properly.‎ 实战演练。‎ ‎ 最近，你们班举行了一场“初中生使用微信的利与弊”的主题班会，同学们各抒己见。班长针对同学们的不同意见，做了以下的记录。请你根据表格内容，以“The Opinions of Using WeChat”为题写一篇英语短文。‎ 利 弊 ‎1.提供交流的平台。‎ ‎1.过渡沉溺、影响学习。‎ ‎2.认识更多的朋友。‎ ‎2.交友不慎、上当受骗。‎ ‎3.学习更多的东西。 ‎ ‎3.长期玩耍、影响视力。‎ 要求：1.文章须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，不要直译；‎ ‎【写作指导】人称：第一人称和第三人称；时态：一般现在时。 ‎ 写作思路：先开篇点题写出文章的中心句；再分别写出微信的利与弊；最后发表自己的观点。‎ The Opinions of Using WeChat ‎ More and more middle school students use WeChat. Different students have different opinions about using it. ‎ Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform to communicate with their friends. Besides they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat.‎ However(On the other hand), some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it. And they may be tricked by strange net friends. Last but not least, it will also affect their vision to use WeChat for a long time. ‎ As far as I’m concerned, we should use WeChat properly by not using it more than two hours a day, and make sure that we don't use it when we are studying. In addition, we shouldn't add strangers or meet net friends casually.‎ 书面表达。‎ 阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实。阅读的好处很多，但是，目前许多中学生都不重视阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇80－100词的英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。内容提示见下表：‎ 不重视阅读的原因 ‎1.作业太多；作业太多；2．时间花在……‎ 阅读的好处 ‎1.开阔眼界开阔眼界，获得知识；2．学会如何思考；3．生活更加丰富多彩。‎ 你的建议 养成良好的读书习惯……‎ 参考词汇：开阔眼界 open up eyes；获得知识 get knowledge；丰富多彩的 colorful；习惯 habit At present only a few students do some reading after class.Here are several reasons.‎ ‎ Some students think they have too much homework and they are busy doing it every day.Others don't have a habit of reading.And they often spend their spare time on TV or the Internet.‎ ‎ However，reading has many advantages.By reading we can learn more about the world.Besides，it can help us think better.Also reading can make our life more colorful.‎ Here is my advice. First，teachers are supposed to give less homework to us so that we can have more time to read.Second，it's a good idea to start a reading club，so we can learn from each other.‎