2020-2021学年高三英语书面表达模板《推荐信》

2020-2021学年高三英语书面表达模板《推荐信》

2020-2021 学年高三英语书面表达模板《推荐信》 从推荐者的情况来分析，推荐信可以分为＂自荐信＂和＂推荐信＂两种。其结构为： 1.自我介绍及所推荐人、物； 2.推荐理由； 3.期待对方回复，并表示感谢。 模板① Dear ______ , ①It affords me much pleasure to recommend ______(要推荐的人)to you.②During his/her graduate years he/she was my ______ . ③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______. (介绍与此人的关系) ④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding. ⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents in ______ . ⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality. ⑦He/She has developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him/her is always pleasant. ⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.(介绍此人的能力) ⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart. ⑩Should you favor him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university？I am sure that his/her future work will prove worthy of your trust. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 模板② Dear______, I take the pleasure in recommending to you __________(被推荐的人或物). I hope you will be interested in _______（him/her）. There are several reasons why I think ______ is a good choice. Firstly, _______(理由一). Secondly, ________（理由二）. Last but not least, ________（理由三）. In a word, _______（总结）. I would be most grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation. 1. 词汇 能力：have a gift for, be skilled in, be experienced in, be an expert in, speak fluent English, creative, a boy with great ability, efficient, intelligent, etc. 经历：graduate from, be a graduate from, major in, gain/win/get the first grade scholarship, get good grades, an all-around student with excellent grades in, excellent grades in all subjects, be given the title of, gain/win the first prize/place, win a gold/silver/copper medal, etc. 性格：outgoing, easy to get along with, enthusiastic, enthusiasm is part of his character, etc. 2. 经典句型 (1) He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects. He has been given the title of the ＂excellent student＂. (2) As a boy with great potential, he is good at solving difficult problems. (3) Li Ming, a graduate from Peking University, majors in computer software design. (4) He has enjoyed the reputation/title of the Excellent Graduate. 3. 写作套路 开头： (1) I am writing to recommend to you… (2) I would like to recommend to you… (3) It is a great honor for me to recommend to you… (4) I take the pleasure in recommending to you… 结尾： (1) If he can join your company, he will give full play to his talent. And your company will also be greatly benefited. So I strongly recommend… to you. (2) In a word, he would be a good choice. I would be grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation. (3) I hope you can give him a chance. I believe he will make a great contribution to your company. (4) I hope that you would take my recommendation into consideration/account. （2018·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文 化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括： (1) 表示欢迎； (2) 推荐他上哪所大学； (3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。 注意：(1). 词数不少于 50； (2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim 对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特 色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化 的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。 【满分范文】 Dear Jim, I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment. I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. Yours, Li Hua （2014·浙江卷）学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图 书馆最需要购置科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆 王老师写一封 100—120 词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：信的开头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。 Dear Mr. Wang, ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely Li Yue 【答案】 Dear Mr. Wang, Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. Yours sincerely, Li Yue 【试题分析】根据提示你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封 100—120 词的信，可知这里应该是考生比较熟悉的 书信格式。 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。先写这个内容来引出你要提出的建议。在 写推荐的两类书时，要写出为什么要推荐这些书。 （2009·重庆卷)国外某网站将举办新一轮网上讨论活动,正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中 学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括： 1·自我简介； 2·写信目的； 3·话题：我们应该感恩(thankful)； 4·推荐的理由； 5·预祝活动成功。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.邮件格式已为你给出； 3.邮件中不能出现本人真实信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文赏读】 Dear Sir, I’m a Chinese student named Li Hua from Xinhua High School, a loyal netizen of your website. I’m writing to you to say something about the topic of the discussion, which will start recently. I think ＂ Being thankful＂ is a topic. As we all know, there are so many people we should say ＂thanks＂ to, such as our parents, teachers, friends and so on. Our parents always work hard to do what they can to bring us up, our teachers help us not only in our studies but also in our daily life and friends or some other people may lend their helpful hands to us whenever possible. Everyone should be thankful! So I suggest the topic should be put forward for netizens to discuss. I hope this meaningful activity will be a great success! Yours, Li Hua （2017·高考仿真卷）假如你是李华，是新华中学的一名学生。你想在寒假找一份工作锻炼自己。请 根据下面的招聘信息写一封申请信，推荐自己。 Five English Tutors(家教) Wanted Work during the winter vacation At the SOS children’s village Help Children with learning difficulty If interested, send your letter of application(申请) to sosvillage@163.com before December 30, 2016 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文赏析】 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua High School. I know from the advertisement that five volunteers are wanted at the SOS children’s village during the winter holidays. I am writing to recommend myself. To begin with, I am doing well in my lessons, especially in English, and got the first prize in an English speech contest last year. More importantly, I am willing to help others, so I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. By helping children with their lessons, I can gain some teaching experience and learn how to communicate with others. My dream is to become a teacher in the future, so this is really a good chance for me to put my talent into good use. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and give me a chance. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua Writing 1 假如你是李华，星光中学的一名高一学生，得知某英文报社要评选“The Most Qualified Teacher”（最美 教师”，你想推荐你学校的刘英老师。请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下： 1. 介绍被推荐人（刘英老师）的基本信息（如外貌、性格等）； 2. 说明推荐理由。 注意：1. 词数 70 词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使得行文连贯； Dear Editor, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本文是推荐信。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所 有信息，明确两点即：介绍被推荐人（刘英老师）的基本信息（如外貌、性格等）；说明推荐理由。写作的 要要齐全，但不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使得上下行文流畅。语气应该比较恳 切，有说服力。难点是向英文报社推荐说明刘英老师的理由，这一点最好有具体放入例子做支撑，否则内 容不够丰满。写这部分内容时候，学生可以采取简单句和复合句的方法。 【范文】Dear Editor, I’m a senior high school student in Xing Guang Middle School and I happen to hear that you are hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Teacher. It is my great honor to introduce you one of my favorite English teachers, Liu Ying. First of all ,Miss Liu, who is young, good-looking as well as enthusiastic, always makes her class lively and interesting. Secondly, she is not only strict but also patient in her teaching. What’s more, she is always willing to help us with our problems. Last but not least, she is so easygoing that we are friends after school. Therefore, I here strongly recommend her to you with all my heart and I look forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本文要点完整，结构紧凑，符合 的要求。句中运用了多种结构和句式。文中运用了大量的 短语如 happen to do…， one’s great honor to do…， not only … but also…，be strict in…， as well as, be willing to …， help sb. with sth.; recommend sb. to sth.;及同时，句式非常灵活，如并列复合句和宾语从句： I’m a senior high school student in Xing Guang Middle School and I happen to hear that you are hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Teacher. 常用句式如：It is +形容词 + to do … 定语从句：Miss Liu, who is young, good-looking as well as enthusiastic; 由 not only … but also…引导的并列句；she is not only strict but also patient in her teaching. 由 so…that …引导的状语从句：she is so easygoing that we are friends after school.这些 句式的运用提高了文章档次。 Writing2 假如你是李明，你们学校最近正在举行“最美学生”评选活动。你希望推荐的同学李华参评“最美学 生”。请按要求给组委会写一封英语推荐信，信中应包含以下内容： 1. 你认为“最美学生”应具有的品质；2.叙述发生在李华身上的一件具体事例；2.你推荐李华的理由。 注意：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使得行文连贯；2. 词数 100 左右；3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【写作指导】 分析要求可知，你校最近正在举行“最美学生”评选活动。你希望推荐你的同学李华参评“最美学生”。 请按要求给组委会写一封推荐信，信中应包含以下内容：1. 你认为“最美学生”应具有的品质；2.叙述发 生在李华身上的一件具体事例；3. 你推荐李华的理由。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称。词 数 100 左右，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。 【范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, It is a great idea to hold “the most beautiful student” activity. As far as I’m concerned, the student who is recommended as “the most beautiful student” should set a good example to all the students with such virtue as selflessness, bravery, honest and so on. My classmate Li Hua is such a person. Last Sunday, Li Hua, together with other students, went to the park for a picnic. All of a sudden, there came a loud cry, “Help! Help!” It was a little girl who fell into the pond in the park. Realizing what had happened, Li Hua jumped into the pond without hesitation. Finally, the little girl was saved. Therefore, I strongly recommend Li Hua as “the most beautiful student”. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【亮点点击】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：状语从句：As far as I’m concerned, the student who is recommended as “the most beautiful student” should set a good example to all the students with such virtue as selflessness, bravery, honest and so on. ；who 引导的定语从句：the student who is recommended as “the most beautiful student”；it 引导的强调句 It was a little girl who fell into the pond in the park.；recommend… as…: I strongly recommend Li Hua as “the most beautiful student”. Writing3 假如你是四川省双流中学高三（4）班的班长李华，你班上的同学张明将要留学去澳大利亚的学校学习。 请你根据以下要点提示用英文写一封推荐信。 要点提示： 1. 你的身份；2. 你对张明的印象，如在学习期间的学习情况、表现等；3.说明张明适合去该校留学学 习。 2. 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使得行文连贯；2.词数不少于 100；3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，不 计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely Li Hua 【写作指导】 本文属于提纲类作文，要求写一封推荐信。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时态来写。要 点：1. 你的身份；2. 你对张明的印象，如在学习期间的学习情况、表现等；3.说明张明适合去该校留学 学习。这篇文章对考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要 注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时候注意运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合 逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注 意高级词汇和高级句型，使得文章显得有档次。 【范文】 Dear Sir/ Madam, 1 am honored to recommend Zhang Ming to you, as he wants to apply to your school. As the monitor in our class, I am quite familiar with Zhang Ming. We have been classmates for more than two years. He has given me a good impression. Firstly, not only is he intelligent, but also he is hard-working. He does well in most subjects and is one of the best students in our school. Our teachers all like him and encourage us to follow his examples. Secondly, having talents in other things, such as singing and debating, he has helped to organize several class activities. Besides, he is also caring and lively. He is always ready to help classmates, and he spreads happiness wherever he goes. I know he will meet your school’s requirements. If he is admitted into your school I am sure he will perform even better in your school. 【亮点点击】 本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文，这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少， 如 be familiar with 对……熟悉 I am quite familiar with Zhang Ming.; do well in 在……方面干得好 He does well in most subjects and is one of the best students in our school.；还使用了倒装 not only is he intelligent, but also he is hard-working.和宾语从句 I know he will meet your school’s requirements 等多种句式结构，增加了文章的 可读性。 Writing4 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Anne 要来江西玩，请你写信向她推荐一处旅游景点。 要点如下： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 推荐一处景点； 3. 说明推荐理由。 1．词数 100 左右； 2．不要逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； Dear Aanne, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份向英国朋友 Anne 推荐一处旅游景点。写作要点已经给出，属 于提纲类作文，内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2. 推荐一处景点；3.说明推荐的理由，提示中的内容比较泛泛，需 要适当补充。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能 力，需要紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时候注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻 辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，使文章显得更有档次。 【范文】 Dear Anne, I’m delighted to learn you are traveling to my hometown, which is a great chance for you to experience it. I’d like to recommend a place of interest — Tengwang Pavillion to you. I hope you’ll be interested in it. Nanchang the capital city of Jiangxi,has a large of tourist attractions,among which Tengwang Pavillion stands out. Built more than a thousand years ago. It is historic cultural heritage and also a symbol of the city. By visiting it, not only can you admire tis incredible architectural design, but also learn the history and culture of China. As it stands right beside Ganjiang River,you can also appreciate the picturesque surroundings and have a bird’s-eye view of the river. I hope my suggestions will be helpful. May you have unforgettable experience in Jiangxi. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高 级词汇和固定短语，提高文章档次，体现了对英语熟练驾驭能力。例如：I’m delighted to learn you are traveling to my hometown, which is a great chance for you to experience it. 运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从 句和非限定性定语从句；I hope you’ll be interested in it.运用了宾语从句；Nanchang the capital city of Jiangxi,has a large of tourist attractions,among which Tengwang Pavillion stands out. 运用了非限定性定语从 句；By visiting it, not only can you admire tis incredible architectural design, but also learn the history and culture of China.运用了倒装句；As it stands right beside Ganjiang River,you can also appreciate the picturesque surroundings and have a bird’s-eye view of the river.运用了原因状语从句；I hope my suggestions will be helpful. 运用了宾语从句。 Writing5 假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友 Geroge 要来北京，其间他想参加中国传统文化方面的 课程，来信希望你能推荐一个课程，请你给他回信，内容包括： 1） 你推荐的课程 2） 该课程的内容 3） 你推荐的理由 注意：词数 100 左右。 Dear Geroge, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给英国彭毅 Geroge 写一封信，Geroge 要回北京，其间他想参 加中国传统文化方面的课程，来信希望你能推荐一个课程。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲作文，内容包括： 1） 你推荐的课程 2） 该课程的内容 3） 你推荐的理由 考生要认真审题确定需要使用的时态和人称，同时注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱 节问题，切记一定要给出自己的理由。写作时尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇 和高级句型为文章润色。内容要点比较齐全，注意使用合适的顺序，添加适当的过渡词和连接词。 【范文】 Dear Geroge, I am delighted to hear that you want to take a course about Chinese traditional culture. I am writing to recommended one on Beijing Opera. This course,”Intrduction to Beijing Opera”, which will be held in Beijng next month for two weeks, contains two sections. A lecture on the history of Beijing Opera will introduce its time-honored development, including the detailed process of how it spread. What takes the cours to a new height is a theater trips. Stepping into Mei Lanfang Theatre, you will get a taste of the performance techniques by appreciating how the voice and motions are perfectly combined on the stage. I heartily recommend this course to you based in the following reasons. I know you love drama so much, so you will be able to more easily understand Sheng, Dan,Jing Mo,Chou,the five main characters of Beijing Opera. It is also an interactive course, in which you will have a chance to communicate with opera a performers face to face. I hope my introduction is helpful.Please let me know if you have further questions. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，同时运用了高级词汇和固定短语，提高文 章档次，体现了对英语的熟练驾驭能力。例如：I am delighted to hear that you want to take a course about Chinese traditional culture.运用了不定式作原因状语和宾语从句；This course,”Intrduction to Beijing Opera”, which will be held in Beijng next month for two weeks, contains two sections.运用了非限制性定语从句；What takes the cours to a new height is a theater trips.运用了主语从句；I know you love drama so much, so you will be able to more easily understand Sheng, Dan,Jing Mo,Chou,the five main characters of Beijing Opera.运用了宾 语从句；It is also an interactive course, in which you will have a chance to communicate with opera a performers face to face.运用了非限制性定语从句。同时运用了 take a course; introduction to Beijing Opera; on the stage; have a chance to communicate with, face to face 等短语的运用，增加了文章的可读性。 Writing6 假定你是学生会李华， 你班班长陈丽将要去“醴陵全城旅游协会”（All-for-one Tourism Association in Liling）应聘当志愿者（volunteer）的暑期工作，她想请你给她写一封推荐信，向“醴陵全城旅游协会”推 荐她，介绍她的一些个人信息。要点如下： 1） 陈丽的个性特点及专长。 2） 陈丽平时在校的表现（她的学业表现和获奖情况等）。 注意：1）词数 100 左右。2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3）开头和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Chairman, I am Li Hua, Chen Li’s classmate and also chairman of the Students’ Union… ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以学生会主席李华的身份写一封信。写作背景：你班班长陈丽将要去“醴 陵全城旅游协会”（All-for-one Tourism Association in Liling）应聘当志愿者（volunteer）的暑期工作，她想 请你给她写一封推荐信，向“醴陵全城旅游协会”推荐她，介绍她的一些个人信息。要点已经给出，属于 提纲类作文。内容如下： 1） 陈丽的个性特点及专长。 2） 陈丽平时在校的表现（她的学业表现和获奖情况等）。 考生写作要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同 时也要注意使用高级英语 词汇和高级句型，使得文章显得更有档次，特别注意选择句式时要富有变化。 【范文】 Dear Chairman, I am Li Hua, Chen Li’s classmate and also chairman of the Students’ Union in our school. I would like to recommended Chen Li to be a volunteer in your All-for-one Tourism Association in Liling. In my eyes, Chen Li is a friendly and outgoing girl. She often takes an active part in dealing with people and enrich her life. Besides, as the monitor in our class,Chen Li has gained rich experience in dealing with people and different situation. What’s more, in terms of academic performance, she is a straight student. More importantly,she is native in your association. Therefore, I strongly recommend her to you as I think she is the right person for this position. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成 分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：She often takes an active part in dealing with people and enrich her life.运用了不定式作目的状语；Chen Li has gained rich experience in dealing with people and different situation. 运用了动名词作介词宾语；Therefore, I strongly recommend her to you as I think she is the right person for this position.运用了原因状语从句；同时 Besides, What’s more , More importantly 等过渡词的 使用，使得文章更加连贯。 Writing7 假定你是李华， 你的英国朋友 Emily 来信说非常喜欢中国的民族舞，并打算最近来中国学习民族舞， 想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。请根据一下要点给他写一封信，推荐一位老师。 1） 介绍你所推荐的老师； 2） 推荐盖老师的原因； 3） 祝愿她拜师成功。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； Dear Emily, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本体是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友 Emily 写一封信，推荐一位老师。写作背景：Emily 来信说她非常喜欢民族舞，并打算最近来中国学习民族舞，想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。写作要点已经 给出，属于提纲类作文。内容包括： 1） 介绍你所推荐的老师； 2） 推荐盖老师的原因； 3） 祝愿她拜师成功。 书信类作文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接 词连接全文，同时选择高级词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意时态的选择，描述要尽量选择简 洁的语言，难点在意选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表达。 【范文】 Dear Emily, Glad to hear that you are going to learn Chinese folk dance in China. I’m more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher Miss Chen to you. Miss Chen is the best dance teacher in our school. You know I love folk dance. I used to watch Miss Chen’s performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. And I have seen almost all of her performances in our school. Her peacock dance is wonderful. She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. Besides this. Miss Chen is patient and enthusiastic about teaching. I believe you will achieve a lot with her help. I sincerely with you good luck tp be Miss Chen’ s students. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，运用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练使用了语句间的立连接成 分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I used to watch Miss Chen’s performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. performances 运用了非限制性定语从句；She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. 运用了限制性定语从句；I believe you will achieve a lot with her help.运用了宾语从句。 Writing8 学校图书馆购置一批新书，现在向学生征求意见。加入你是李华， 请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封信， 推荐科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图示（literary books），并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：词数 100 左右，结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Wang, Knowing that our library is going to buy books. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ I’d appreciate in if you could take my recommendation into account. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给图书馆王老师写一封信，推荐科普类图书和文学类图书， 并分别说明推荐理由、写作背景；学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现在向学生征求意见。本题对于考生的 综合能力要求较高，要求考生有较强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出 的要点需要全包括，缺一不可，写作时要注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现 文章脱节问题，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和改机句型，是文章显得更 有档次。 【范文】 Dear Mr. Wang, Knowing that our library is going to buy books.，I’m writing to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discovers. In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That’s why I recommend another group of books, literary books. I think Classic works written by masters, present great thoughts through interesting stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I’d appreciate in if you could take my recommendation into account. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【亮点点击】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语句间的连接成分，使得这个文章 紧凑，很好地完成了写做任务。例如：Knowing that our library is going to buy books.，I’m writing to give some suggestions. 运用了现在分词作状语 。 What we need most are popular science books. 运用了主语从句； That’s why I recommend another group of books, literary books. 运用了表语从句；I think Classic works written by masters, present great thoughts through interesting stories and language. 运用了宾语从句。