2020届二轮复习书面表达写作指导之五：“看图写话”三种文体类型

2020届二轮复习书面表达写作指导之五：“看图写话”三种文体类型

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达写作指导之五：“看图写话”三种文体类型 一、“看图写话”记叙类 此类作文要求考生根据所给的一组图画，写出一篇故事完整、句子通顺、语意连贯、符合图意的短文。在命题形式上除了图画的提示外，一般还有中英文提示，有的开头已给出。着重考查考生的语言表达能力和想象力。‎ 此类作文往往使用过去时，按照时间顺序叙述。开头开门见山、直入主题。正文注意用词恰当和句子之间的衔接过渡，可适当使用and，then，however，thus等使文章层次分明、文理通顺、意思连贯。结尾应自然有力。‎ ‎ 经典语篇 (2015•北京)‎ 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中，向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程，并以“A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英语稿件。‎ 注意：词数不少于60。‎ 参考词汇：一个面团a piece of dough；面人dough figurine ‎ ‎ ‎ 佳作欣赏 ‎ ‎ Last Tuesday，our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to ‎ make dough figurines.‎ ‎ When the craftsman came into the classroom，we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box.First，he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.We stood around him and watched attentively.Then we started to have a try ourselves.The old man walked around and helped us patiently.Finally，we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.Looking at the figurines，we were all very excited.‎ ‎ We hope we can have more activities of this kind!‎ ‎ 即时训练 (2016•陕西西安高新一中模拟)‎ 某中学生英文报举办故事大赛，请根据下列五幅图画提供的信息，以“Zhang Ping’s Choice”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的故事，讲述张平的经历。‎ ‎“电脑……难学……‎ 英语……难记……‎ 科技……难懂……‎ 还是电视好看，纸牌好玩……”‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 参考范文 ‎ Zhang Ping’s Choice My neighbor，named Zhang Ping，is upset these days，because he ‎ hasn’t found a job yet since he graduated from school.While in school，he was advised to learn computer，but he was unwilling to learn it，saying it was difficult.He always slept in English classes as he thought it hard to remember English words.Also，he refused to study science and technology，because he considered it was too difficult to understand.He only enjoyed watching TV，playing cards，smoking and so on，which he found interesting and easy.He happily spent a lot of time in doing these.However，when he is seeking a position on the job market，he finds that only people with a good knowledge of computer，English and science technology are needed.He regrets the time he wasted.‎ 二、“看图写话”咨询类 此类作文考查考生的观察能力、分析能力和语言表达能力。作文难点是审题，切忌遗漏要点。注意主次分明，详略得当。文章要求思路清晰，表达自然。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。语言力求准确、简洁。注意主动句、被动句结合，长短句结合。所询问的内容可结合使用直接引语和宾语从句，尽量避免句式单一、枯燥乏味。‎ 写作模板 Dear ，‎ I am (自我介绍)．I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding (要询问的内容)．‎ First of all, what are (第一个问题)？Secondly，when will (第二个问题)？Thirdly，is (第三个问题)?‎ I would also like to inquire (将最重要的问题单独成段)．Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above¬mentioned aspects?‎ Thank you for your kindness，and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Ming ‎ 经典语篇 (2014•新课标全国Ⅰ)‎ 假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。‎ ‎ ‎ 注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：住宿accommodation Dear Sir/Madam，‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours faithfully，‎ Li Hua ‎ 佳作欣赏 ‎ Dear Sir/Madam，‎ I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad，and I’d like to know something more about your six¬week English course. First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week？Besides，I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?‎ I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours faithfully，‎ Li Hua ‎ 即时训练 ‎ 假如你的名字叫李丹，是湖北大学的学生。你在一份英文报纸上看到如下招聘广告。请用英语给David写一封100词左右的应聘信。要点提示：1.自我简介；2.欲谋其职；3.自身条件(爱好：擅厨)；4.询问情况(报酬等)。‎ Wanted Do you like children？Are you over 18？Do you like to cook？If so，please write to：Mr and Mrs David,5 Dongzhimen Street.‎ ‎ 参考范文 ‎ Dear Mr and Mrs David，‎ My name is Li Dan，a first¬year student of Hubei University.I’m twenty years old.Yesterday，I had the pleasure of seeing your advertisement in the newspaper.It really attracted me because I’m looking for an odd job during my university vacation.‎ I am glad to tell you that I like children very much.I have a younger brother.I always take care of him.I learned to cook from my mother.When Mum wasn’t in I had to cook.The whole family enjoys eating the dishes I make.‎ Could you please tell me whether you have a spare room for me to live in and how much I will get a wage?‎ I’m eager to hear from you.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Dan 三、“看图写话”漫画类 这种题型更能考查学生分析问题的能力，因此深受命题者的青睐。考生应注意认真审题，切忌审题偏颇影响得分。高考漫画作文主要有两种类型：1.讽刺型漫画，引发考生对不良社会现象的思考；2.哲理型漫画，通过形象或抽象的图画，讲述道理引发哲理性思考。此类作文首先要描述图画，然后分析图画所反映的问题或讲述的道理，最后联系实际发表自己的观点。‎ ‎1．读图 仔细观察画面，注意细节，尤其是夸张表现的地方。注意：文字说明部分往往是重要线索(clues)，切记要认真阅读！‎ ‎2．解意 ‎(1)辨明褒贬，找准角度 ‎(2)联系生活，明晰主旨 ‎3．谋篇(3 parts)‎ 描写画面(用现在时)：‎ ‎(1)The picture is talking about/shows...‎ ‎(2)The picture shows a common phenomenon...‎ ‎(3)The picture describes an interesting phenomenon...‎ ‎(4)In the picture，there is/are...‎ ‎(5)The picture above is about...‎ ‎(6)Let’s look at the picture above/first.‎ 分析漫画所反映的问题：‎ ‎(1)It seems very ridiculous that...However，this kind of story is performed everywhere.‎ ‎(2)The picture shows that...It is the exact reflection of...‎ ‎(3)The picture indicates that we...‎ ‎(4)Nowadays，it is a common phenomenon that...‎ ‎(5)This is a satirical(讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among...‎ 表达个人观点：‎ ‎(1)I think/believe that...‎ ‎(2)As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/From my point of view...‎ ‎(3)．..should...‎ ‎(4)It is better/advisable to...‎ ‎(5)I consider it necessary...‎ ‎ 经典语篇 (2015•福建) ‎ 请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。 ‎ ‎ ‎ 凿壁偷光 内容包括：‎ ‎1．描述画面；‎ ‎2．概述其含义；‎ ‎3．谈谈个人感想。 ‎ 注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2．可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：凿，钻bore In the picture， ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 佳作欣赏 ‎ In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.‎ This is a well¬known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy，being poor，couldn’t afford even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor’s house to read at night.The moral of the story is：spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.‎ Of course，things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that co¬unts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.‎ ‎ 即时训练 ‎ 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。‎ ‎ ‎ 你的作文应包括以下内容：‎ ‎1．简要描述两幅图的内容；‎ ‎2．概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；‎ ‎3．举例说明两幅图对你的启示。‎ 注意：1.可参照图片适当发挥；‎ ‎2．词数100左右。‎ 参考词汇：横幅banner；树桩stump ‎ 参考范文 ‎ Actions Speak Louder than Words People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1，a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps，but in vain，while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.‎ The message conveyed here is clear：“Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it？The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate action should be taken，like stopping cutting down trees，to better the environment.‎ Actions are important in other fields，too. Instead of shouting empty slogans，it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules，stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.‎