【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达道歉信写作指导例析（3页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达道歉信写作指导例析（3页word版）

2019 届二轮复习书面表达道歉信写作指导例析 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友 Bob 约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给 他写封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示歉意； 2．说明原因； 3．另约时间。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [题目要求] [四步写作] 一、定人称、定时态，审题快而不偏 人称以第一人称为主，主要时态用现在时。 二、列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 1．约好一起去书店 去书店 go_to_the_bookstore 2．表示歉意 向某人表达真诚的歉意 express_one’s_heartfelt_apology_to_sb. 3．不能去的原因是要代表学校参加英语辩论大赛 参加英语辩论大赛 take_part_in_the_English_debate_competition 4．另约时间 对……方便 be_convenient_for 三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 1．我们计划这个星期六去书店。 We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday. 2．正因为如此，我写信是想表达我真诚的道歉。 Because of this, I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology to you. 3．我被选出来代表我们学校参加英语辩论比赛，你知道这对我来说是非常 重要的。 I ’ m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which, you know is of great importance to me. 4．如果我们这个星期天去书店你方便吗？ Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookshop this Sunday? 四、衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用 unfortunately, however 等衔接词串句成文 Dear Bob， How are you doing? We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday. Unfortunately, I can’t make it. Because of this, I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology to you. How I wish I could go with you! However, I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which, you know is of great importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having a chance like this to improve my spoken English. Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookshop this Sunday? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua [写改两用] 这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有 10 处错误，请改正。 Dear Bob， I’m indeed very sorry that I can’t go to the bookstore with you this weekend as planning. Just now, my cousin, which went to Australia for further study last year, informs me he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport. You know, I haven’t seen each other since he leaves. As a result, I have no choose but to say sorry to you. Please accepting my sincere apology from bottom of my heart. How about going to the bookshop on this Sunday? Will you be available then? I’m looking forward to hearing of you. Yours， Li Hua 答案：第一句：planning→planned 第二句：which→who; informs→informed 第三句：I→we; leaves→left 第四句：choose→choice 第五句：accepting→accept; from 后加 the 第六句：去掉 on 第八句：of→from