高中英语外研版必修2测试：Unit3 Section Ⅳ　Writing

高中英语外研版必修2测试：Unit3 Section Ⅳ　Writing

www.ks5u.com Section Ⅳ　Writing——如何介绍一位音乐家 普通表达——常用词汇　普通句式　让学生写作思路“活”起来 写作任务 你校英文报新开设的Popular Musicians栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇介绍著名音乐家弗里德里克·肖邦(Frédéric Francois Chopin)的短文。‎ 生卒年份 ‎1810～1949‎ 生平简介 ‎★6岁学习音乐，7岁作曲，8岁公开演出，20岁已是颇有名气的作曲家。‎ ‎★21岁移居巴黎，以作曲和教学为生。‎ 成就及评价 一生创作了约二百部作品，被誉为“钢琴诗人”。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 写作指导 一、审题定调 本写作要求介绍著名音乐家弗里德里克·肖邦，属于记叙文的写作范畴。其关键之处在于突出其主要经历和成就，介绍其生平事迹时一般用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主。‎ 二、谋篇布局 此类文章一般采用“总—分—总”模式，对肖邦的主要经历和成就进行介绍，使读者对其有一个较为清晰和全面的了解。‎ 针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲：‎ 第一部分：总体介绍(包括其身份及生卒年份等)；‎ 第二部分：介绍肖邦的主要经历；‎ 第三部分：总结全文(说明肖邦的成就以及人们对他的评价)。‎ 三、组织语言 第一部分：总体介绍(包括其身份及生卒年份等)。‎ ‎1．He was_born_on/in (出生于) and died on/in.‎ ‎2．Chopin, one_of_the_greatest_musicians (最伟大的音乐家之一) in the world, lived from 1810 to 1849.‎ 第二部分：介绍肖邦的主要经历。‎ ‎3．肖邦6岁学习音乐，7岁作曲，8岁开始公开演出。‎ Chopin_learned_music_when_he_was_six._He_started_composing_music_at_seven,_and_he_began_giving_public_concerts_at_eight.‎ ‎4．20岁时，肖邦已经成为非常有名的作曲家。‎ By_the_time_he_was_20,_Chopin_had_become_a_well_known_composer.‎ ‎5．Chopin moved to Paris at 21 and earned_a_living (谋生) there as a composer and teacher.‎ 第三部分：总结全文(说明肖邦的成就以及人们对他的评价)。‎ ‎6．肖邦在他一生中，创作了约200部音乐作品，被誉为“钢琴诗人”。‎ In_his_life,_Chopin_composed_about_200_pieces_of_music,_and_has_been_called_“the_poet_of_the_piano”．‎ 四、连句成篇 Frédéric Francois Chopin, a great composer, was born in 1810 and died in 1849.‎ Chopin learned music when he was six. He started composing music at seven, and he began giving public concerts at eight. By the time he was 20, Chopin had become a wellknown composer. Chopin moved to Paris at 21 and earned a living there as a composer and teacher.‎ In his life, Chopin composed about 200 pieces of music, and has been called “the poet of the piano”．‎ 我的写作体会：　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ 高级表达——精彩词汇　句式升级　让学生满分作文“易”起来 任务呈现 假如你是Lily，学校文学社请你根据下列提示用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍当代歌星刘欢，以便发表在某个对国外发行的英文杂志上。‎ ‎1．刘欢，中国流行歌王之一，主要作品有《我心中的太阳》(The Sun in My Heart)、《弯弯的月亮》(A Crescent Moon)等。‎ ‎2．除流行歌曲外，刘欢还擅长多种风格的演唱，如摇滚和民乐等。他还为多部电影电视剧插曲作词、作曲。‎ ‎3．刘欢对公众事务很感兴趣， 多次应邀为大型体育盛会创作并演唱主题歌，在2008年北京奥运会上演唱主题歌《我和你》(You and Me)。‎ ‎4．他除了对音乐有研究之外，对旅游、文学和美术等均有研究。‎ 写作步骤 一、统筹安排 体裁 记叙文 时态 一般过去时和一般现在时 主题 名人介绍 人称 第三人称 结构 第一部分，引入：介绍主要成就及特长 第二部分，阐述：介绍主要作品 第三部分，结尾：总体评价 二、词语储备——想周全核心词汇 ‎　　　　 　　‎ ‎1．inspire/motivate/encourage/drive 激励 ‎2．enthusiasm/warmth 热情 ‎3．be_famous_for/be_well_known_for 因……而闻名 ‎4．different_styles/a_variety_of_styles 多种风格的 ‎5．rang_from..._to... 范围从……到……‎ ‎6．as_well_as/not_only..._but_also 也，不仅……而且 ‎7．show_interest_in 在……方面显示兴趣 ‎8．public_affairs 公众事务 ‎9．draw_people's_heart_close 把人们的心拉近 三、备用句型罗列——巧用重点句式、语法 完成句子 ‎1．刘欢是中国流行歌王之一，因优美的歌曲《我心中的太阳》、《弯弯的月亮》等而闻名。(and连接两个并列分句)‎ Liu_Huan_is_a_prince_of_pop_singers_in_China_and_he_is_famous_for_his_beautiful_songs_such_as_The_Sun_in_My_Heart_and_A_Crescent_Moon.‎ ‎2．他擅长多种风格的演唱，范围从摇滚到民乐等。(现在分词短语作状语)‎ He_is_good_at_singing_songs_of_different_styles,_ranging_from_rock_to_folk_songs.‎ ‎3．他不只是一位歌手，还是一位词作者和作曲者。(主系表结构)‎ He_is_a_singer_as_well_as_a_songwriter_and_composer.‎ ‎4．他还为多部电影电视剧插曲作词、作曲并演唱。(主谓结构)‎ He_wrote,_composed_and_sang_for_many_TV_plays_and_movies_as_well.‎ ‎5．刘欢对公众事务很感兴趣。(主谓宾结构)‎ Liu_Huan_shows_great_interest_in_public_affairs.‎ ‎6．他多次应邀为大型体育盛会创作并演唱主题歌。(被动语态)‎ He_has_been_invited_to_write_and_sing_songs_for_many_international_sports_meetings.‎ ‎7．他在2008年北京奥运会上演唱主题歌《我和你》。(主谓宾结构)‎ In_2008,_he_sang_the_Beijing_Olympic_Theme_You_and_Me.‎ ‎8．《我和你》激发了人们对运动的热情，也拉近了全世界人民的心。(and连接两个并列谓语)‎ You_and_Me_inspires_people's_enthusiasm_to_sports_and_draws_world_people's_heart_close.‎ ‎9．他对旅游、文学和美术等其他事情均有研究。(主系表结构)‎ He_is_also_interested_in_many_other_things,_such_as_tourism,_literature_and_fine_art.‎ 句式升级 ‎10．用名词短语作同位语改写句1‎ Liu_Huan,_a_prince_of_pop_singers_in_China,_is_famous_for_his_beautiful_songs_such_as_The_Sun_in_My_Heart_and_A_Crescent_Moon.‎ ‎11．用Not only... but also...改写句3‎ Not_only_is_he_a_singer_but_also_a_songwriter_and_composer.‎ ‎12．用which引导的定语从句连接句7和句8‎ In_2008,_he_sang_the_Beijing_Olympic_Theme_You_and_Me,_which_inspires_people's_enthusiasm_to_sports_and_draws_world_people's_heart_close.‎ 四、扩充要点，连词成句 ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 高级范文：‎ Liu Huan, a prince of pop singers in China, is famous for his beautiful songs such as The Sun in My Heart and A Crescent Moon. Apart from pop songs, he is good at singing songs of different styles, ranging from rock to folk songs. Not only is he a singer but also a songwriter and composer.‎ Liu Huan wrote, composed and sang for many TV plays and movies. He shows great interest in public affairs. And he has been invited to write and sing songs for many international sports ‎ meetings. In 2008, he sang the Beijing Olympic Theme You and Me, which inspires people's enthusiasm to sports and draws world people's heart close.‎ Liu Huan is a man of many abilities who is also interested in many other things, such as tourism, literature and fine art.‎ 我的写作体会：　‎ ‎　‎ ‎　‎ 写作训练 一、你校学生会准备办一期主题为Great Musicians的英语墙报。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍中国著名音乐家冼星海。内容主要包括：‎ 主要经历及贡献 ‎★1905年出生于澳门一个贫苦家庭。‎ ‎★1928年在上海国立音乐专科学校(Shanghai National Music Conservatory)学习小提琴和钢琴；‎ ‎★1931年，考入了巴黎音乐学院(the Paris Conservatory)。留法期间，创作了许多优秀作品；‎ ‎★1935年回国后，在中日战争(the SinoJapanese War)期间写了许多鼓励人们战斗的歌曲，如著名的《黄河大合唱》(Yellow River Cantata)；‎ ‎★1945年，在莫斯科(Moscow)因病去世。‎ 评价 因对中国音乐的贡献获得了“人民音乐家(People's Composer)”的称号。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考范文：‎ Xian Xinghai, a great Chinese composer, was born into a poor family in Macao in 1905.‎ When he was young, he showed great musical talent. In 1928 Xian entered Shanghai National Music Conservatory to study violin and piano. In 1931 he was admitted to the Paris Conservatory. During this period he composed many excellent works. Xian returned to China in 1935. During the SinoJapanese War he wrote works to encourage Chinese people to fight, including the famous song Yellow River Cantata. Unfortunately, he died from an illness in Moscow in 1945.‎ Xian Xinghai's contributions to Chinese music won him the title “People's Composer”．‎ 二、请根据下列表格提示，介绍音乐人周杰伦的个人事迹。‎ 姓名 周杰伦 英文名 Jay Chou 出生 ‎1979.1.18‎ 籍贯 中国台湾 个人简介 ‎(1)杰出的歌手、出色的演员，现在也是导演 ‎(2)14岁父母离异，性格孤僻，但对音乐表现出惊人的天赋 ‎(3)专长R & B和rap，有“亚洲流行天王”之称 ‎(4)创造出多变的演唱表演风格，他的歌曲受到全世界华人的喜爱 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考范文：‎ Zhou Jielun Zhou Jielun, whose English name is Jay Chou, was born on January 18, 1979, in Taiwan. When he was 14, his parents split up. Because of this, he changed a lot and became silent. On the other hand, he had a great talent for music and was crazy about music, especially R & B and rap. The talented boy is honored as “Asian Pop Star”. He created and developed many different kinds of ‎ singing and acting styles. His songs are very popular with Chinese people all over the world.‎ Zhou Jielun is famous at home and abroad. He is a successful singer, excellent actor and even director at present.‎