2014年名校模拟试题分类汇编英语 专题21 短文改错

2014年名校模拟试题分类汇编英语 专题21 短文改错

2014 年名校模拟试题分类汇编英语 专题 21 短文改错 （2014 届辽宁五校协作体摸底试题）短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜钱（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Nowadays Grade 3 students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. To reduce it, the followed suggestions may help, first of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, don't put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, find a way to relax you occasionally, for example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Eventually, make friend with others, for example, your classmates, your teachers, your parents. They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”. 解析： 1.考查副词的用法。此处修饰动词 faced 需要用副词 generally。 2.考查分词的用法。此处 following suggestions 意为：下面的建议。这里 following 意为：下 面的，未来的。 3.考查主谓一致。此处 what 作主语，谓语动词用单数形式。 4.考查定语从句的关系词。此处先行词 goal 在定语从句中作主语，故用 that 或 which。 5.考查固定短语的说法。此处 in a word 意为：总之。 6.考查代词的用法。此处 relax yourself 意为：使自己放松。 7.考查固定短语的用法。去游泳为：go swimming，和下面的 go walking 相对应。 8.考查名词的单复数的用法。和其他人交朋友，当然不是一个人，故用复数。 9.考查并列连词的用法。几个并列的成分，最后一个前用并列连词。 10.考查固定短语的表达。此处 in trouble 意为：处于困境中。前面不用 the。 答案： 1. general---generally; 2. followed --- following; 3. lead ---leads 4. what---that/which; 5. another ---other ; 6. you---yourself; 7. swim---swimming; 8. friend---friends; 9.∧your parents---or/and; 10. the --﹨; （2014 届四川省成都市高三摸底试题）短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1．5 分，满分 15 分） 下文中共有 10 处语言错误，每行中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删 除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（√），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 The American Civil War came to end in the year 1 86 5, which the Northerners beat the Southerner. However, even today, many Southerners had not forgotten their defeat. Once some American tourists were visiting to the battle field of the Civil War with Stella, a woman guide from the South. She kept tell stories about how the Southern soldiers had survived powerfully forces of the Northerner Finally, a tourist, who were from the North, stopped Stella and said, “And surely, the Northerners must have won at least one victory.” “Not as long as I'm the guide.” he answered. 解析： 1.The American Civil War came to end in the year 1 86 5，本句中 to 用作介词，后面接名词作 宾语。End 表示任何一个结果，泛指，故前面加不定冠词。End 词首音素是元音，不定冠词 用 an。短语 come to an end 结束。 2.which the Northerners beat the Southerner．前文先行词 in the year 1 86 5，为下文从句逻辑时 间状语，故引导词用 when 或者 which 前加介词 in。 3.which the Northerners beat the Southerner．联系前文 which the Northerners 可知此处的是南 方人。结合语境可知 Southerner 应用复数形式，故在后面加 s。 4.此处 visit 是及物动词，故其后直接接名词作宾语，to 是多余的。 5.However，even today，many Southerners had not forgotten their defeat．联系本句时间状语 even today，可知本句描述的是一直持续到现在的动作，故用现在完成时态。had 改为 have。 6.She kept tell stories about…，短语 keep doing sth.继续做某事，一直做某事。动名词做宾语 表示抽象的反复发生的动作。故将 tell 改为 telling，讲述。 7.the Southern soldiers had survived powerfully forces of the Northamber Finally，本句中 powerful 用作定语修饰名词 forces，强大的军队。故将 powerfully 改为 powerful。强大的。 8.a tourist, who were from the North，本句中主语 who 表示单数含义，故谓语动词用 is 的过去 时态 was，将 were 改为 was。 9.“And surely，the Northerners must have won at least one victory.”联系前文，可知此处表示 转折关系，and 表示顺接关系，故将 and 改为 but，但是。 10.“Not as long as I'm the guide．” he answered．联系前文 She kept tell stories 描述，可知此 处指的是这个女导游。故将 he 改为 she。 答案： 1.end 加 an 2.which 改为 when 或者 which 前加介词 in 3.Southerner 应用复数形式，在后面加 s 4.去掉 visiting 后的 to 5.had 改为 have 6.tell 改为 telling 7.powerfully 改为 powerful 8.were 改为 was 9.and 改为 but 10.he 改为 she （2014 届浙江温州十校第一次联考）短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a Patience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day I waited for a bus to come at a stop. 30 minute had passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience. 解析： 1. Patience is of a great importance in our daily life.。importance 为抽象名词，前面不可用冠词， 所以 a 去掉。 2. 30 minute had passed,。minute 是可数名词， 前面又有 30，所以应用复数形式。minute 改 为 minutes。 3. 30 minute had passed, and no bus came.。等了 30 分钟，但是没有汽车来。应该是转折关系。 and 改为 but。 4. I decided to walk with foot.。固定短语 on foot，所以 with 改为 on。 5. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.。固定句型 no sooner…than，所以 when 改为 than。 6. I thought if I waited for one more minute。waited 动作应发生在动词 thought 之前，所以应 该用过去完成时，waited 前面加 had。 7. I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes.“再 30 分钟，又 30 分钟”应该是 another 30 minutes，所以 other 改为 another。 8. Only then do I realize my problem. 事情发生在过去，所以 do 改为 did。 9. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in.修饰动词应该用副词，所以 possible 改为 possibly。 10. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience. be close to 短语中 to 是介词所以 lose 改为 losing。 答案： 1. great 前的 of 去掉 2. minute→minutes 3. and→but 4. with→on 5. when→than 6. waited 前加 had 7. other→another 8. do→did 9. possible→possibly 10. lose→losing （2013 届河南省六市高三第二次联考）短文改错（共 10 小题，每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其 进行修改。便条中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 It’s reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others. In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter. 解析： 1.根据后面的 each year 可知，用一般现在时，故改为 die。 2.此处 attention 是名词，修饰名词用形容词，故改为 wide。 3. Many rules 作主语，用被动语态的形式，所以加 been。 4. the ones 和 traffic crashes 是同位语，不用介词 for，故去掉 for。 5. take…seriously 意为：对……严肃对待。所以将 make 改为 take。 6.此处 we 和 use 之间是主动关系，故用现在分词。 7.代词错误，此处意为保护我们自己，所以改为反身代词 ourselves。 8. that 不能引导非限制性定语从句，所以改为 which。 9.考查固定短语。In a word 意为：总之。 10.动名词短语作主语用单数，所以用 is。 答案： 1. died----die 2. widely----wide 3. have 后加 been 4.去掉 for 5. make---take 6. used----using 7. us---ourselves 8. that---which 9. the----a 10. are-----is （2013 届黑龙江大庆市高三第二次模拟）短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 请对下面的短文进行修改。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅 涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing. What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier. 解析： 1. Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life.(上文用的是“is”，所以下文仍用 “is”=my life is also full of sunshine) 2. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends.( 我跟朋友去书店是过去发生的事 情，要用一般过去时) 3. There was a lot of new books. (主语是“books”为复数。所以要将 was 改成 were) 4. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. (what 用于无范围的 指代，而 which 用于有一定范围内的指代。) 5. At 10:00, we went to cinema.( 去看电影“go to the cinema”为习惯表达) 6. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. (上下文没有转折关系，而是承递关系) 7. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, (“see”的逻辑主语就是句子的 主语“”，它们之间是主动关系，不是被动关系。) 8. everyone was deeply moving.( 现在分词作表语说明主语所具有的性质或特征，而过去分词 表语说明主语所具有的心理感受，这儿是指人的心理感受“被感动了”) 9. Some of my friends even burst into tear.( “burst into tears 突然大哭起来”是固定搭配) 10. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing. (修饰 worth 的副词习惯要用 well，而 不能用 very)What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier. 答案： 1. does→is 2. go→went 3. was→were 4. what→which 5.在 cinema 前加 the 6. but →and 7.去掉 been 8. moving→moved 9. tear→tears 10. very→well （2014 届陕西汉中洋县实验中学高三第一次月考）短文改错（共 10 小题，每小题 1.5 分， 满分 15 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不记分。 My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers. 解析： 1.考查短语。当有 last 或 next 这样的时间短语前不用加介词，故去掉 on。 2.考查非谓语动词或定语从句。因为已经有谓语动词 were，所以 stand 与 visitors 之间是主 动关系，故用 standing。或在 stood 前加 who，who 引导的是定语从句，先行词是 visitor。 3.考查动词。这里 and 连接的是两个并列的动词，and 前的动词是 waited 前后动词的时态应 该一致，故用过去式 bought。 4.考查连词。这里是连词 so...that 如此以致于。so 后跟形容词或副词。 5.考查形容词。frightened 人感到害怕；frightening 令人害怕的，这里修饰动物，指的是令人 害怕的动物。 6.考查副词。Unfortunate 是形容词“幸运的”；Unfortunately 是副词，用副词来修饰整个句 子。 7.考查短语。这里是短语 have a hard time doing 做某事有困难。 8.考查代词。这里用代词代替 parents 故用 them。 9.考查副词。Alone 独自地；根据 without any companions 没有人的陪伴表示的人的感情色彩 的 lonely“寂寞”。 10.考查非谓语动词。这里 cover“走”， 它与逻辑主语 I 之间是主动关系，故用现在分词 covering。 答案： 1. on last Sunday →去掉 on 2. stood→standing 或前加 who 3. buy→bought 4. too→so 5. frightedened→frightening 6. Unfortunate→Unfortunately 7. had∧hard →a 8. him→them 9. alone→lonely 10. covered→covering （2013 届浙江鲁迅中学适应性考试）短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 It is good to see that today more people have realized the importance exercising and are playing sports regular. But the problem is that there are not enough sports facilities to meet the public growing demand. I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends. Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one. It seems that all courts in the city were always full. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. But on rainy days or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge is expensive. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will encourage more people to participate in sports. 解析： 1. the importance∧exercising 锻炼的重要性，所以应加 of。 2. are playing sports regular。副词修饰动词。regular 改为 regularly。 3. meet the public growing demand 应该用名词所有格修饰 demand，公众增长的需要。public 改为 public’s。 4. I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends. Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field 根据上下文此处应为转折关系 Therefore 改为 However。 5. It seems that all courts in the city were always full 文章叙述现在事情所以应用一般现在时 态。 were 改为 are。 6. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors 此处没有连词，所以应是独立主格做状语， permitted 改为 permitting。 7. we can play in﹨outdoors. outdoors 是副词，前面不用介词，所以去掉介词 in。 8. we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, 此处指的是场地 courts，所以 应用修饰复数名词的 many 代替 much。 9. the charge is expensive。价格费用等词，不用 expensive 修饰，而用 high 或者 low。 10. so easier accesses will encourage more people to participate in sports. access“通道，接近的 权利，机会”不用复数形式，比如 have access to。 答案： 1. importance 后加 of 2. regularly→regular 3. public→public’s 4. Therefore→However 5. were→are 6. permitted→permitting 7. in 去掉 8. much→many 9. expensive→high 10. accesses→access （2013 届浙江桐乡市高三模拟）短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Last Monday morning, our English teacher told us to put our writing book on the desk so that he could check them. Honest speaking, I really wondered what would happen that if he found out I did not finish his homework. So I took out my Chinese writing book instead of my English book. When the teacher found this out, I pretended to be very surprising, “Oh , I’m very sorry, but I think that was my English book because they have a same cover. I can take my English writing book to school in the afternoon!” On listening this, the teacher said, “OK!” I narrowly escaped punished. Now I realize I was wrong. 解析： 1. Last Monday morning, our English teacher told us to put our writing book on the desk so that he could check them. (修饰语 our 告诉我们不只是一本 book，应该是许多 books) 2. Honest speaking, (修饰现在分词 speaking 应该用副词形式 Honestly) 3. I really wondered what would happen that if he found out(后面已经有 if 引导条件状语从句) 4. I did not finish his homework.(要与主语 I 指代一致，I 的物主代词应该为 my) 5. So I took out my Chinese writing book instead of my English book. When the teacher found this out, I pretended to be very surprising, (指人的心理感受要用过去分词) 6. “Oh , I’m very sorry, but I think that was my English book (原来以为是指“过去的事”，应该 用一般过去时) 7. because they have a same cover.(same 常常和 the 连用) 8. I can take my English writing book to school in the afternoon!” (是带来而不是带走) 9. On listening this, the teacher said,(listening 是不及物动词，后面不可以带宾语。同时这儿也 不是指“倾听”而是“听见，听到”) 10. “OK!” I narrowly escaped punished. Now I realize I was wrong.(escaped 后面要跟宾语，故应 该用名词或动名词的被动式，被惩罚) 答案： 1. books→books 2. honest→honestly 3.去掉 that 4. his→my 5. surprising→surprised 6. think →thought 7. a→the 8. take→bring 9. listening→hearing 10. punished→punishment 或在 punished 前加 being