2018-2019学年安徽省安庆市第一中学高二上学期期中考试英语试题 解析版

2018-2019学年安徽省安庆市第一中学高二上学期期中考试英语试题 解析版

绝密★启用前 安徽省安庆市第一中学2018-2019学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题 评卷人 得分 一、阅读理解 Planning a visit to the UK? Here we help with ways to cut your costs.‎ AVOID BIG EVENTS Big sporting events, concerts and exhibitions can increase the cost of accommodation and make it harder to find a room. A standard double room at the Thistle Brighton on the final Friday of the Brighton Comedy Festival (19 Oct.) cost £169.15 at Booking.com. A week later, the same room cost £118.15.‎ If you can be flexible and want to know dates to avoid—or you’re looking for a big event to pass your time—check out sites such as Whatsonwhen.com, which allow you to search for events in the UK by city, date and category.‎ STAY AWAY FROM THE STATION If traveling to your destination by train, you may want to find a good base close to the station, but you could end up paying more for the sake of convenience at the start of your holiday.‎ Don’t be too choosy about the part of town you stay in. Booking two months in advance, the cheapest room at Travelodge’s Central Euston hotel in London for Saturday 22 September was £95.95. A room just a tube journey away at its Covent Garden hotel was £75.75. And at Farringdon, a double room cost just £62.95.‎ GET ON A BIKE London’s ‘Boris bikes’ have attracted the most attention, but other cities also have similar programmes that let you rent a bicycle and explore at your own pace, saving you on public transport or car parking costs.‎ Among the smaller cities with their own programmes are Newcastle (casual members pay around £1.50 for two hours) and Cardiff (free for up to 30 minutes, or £5 per day).‎ ‎1．The Brighton Comedy Festival is mentioned mainly to show big events may __________.‎ A．help travelers pass time B．attract lots of travelers to the UK C．allow travelers to make flexible plans D．cause travelers to pay more for accommodation ‎2．“Farringdon” in Paragraph 5 is most probably __________.‎ A．a hotel away from the train station B．the tube line to Covent Garden C．an ideal holiday destination D．the name of a travel agency ‎3．The main purpose of the passage is __________.‎ A．to tell visitors how to book in advance B．to supply visitors with hotel information C．to show visitors the importance of self-help D．to offer visitors some money-saving tips ‎【答案】‎ ‎1． D ‎ ‎2． A ‎ ‎3． C ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 本篇是一篇说明文。主要给读者讲解了去英国节约开支的途径。‎ ‎1．D推理判断题。难度:中等。题干关键词为：The Brighton Comedy Feasival,定位第二段。根据句子: The Brighton Comedy Feasival cost £169.15….A week later, the same room cost £118.15,可以得知，主要是为了说明在有大事期间游客付费呀更高一些。干扰项排除：C选项提及flexible ,但是指如果游客时间灵活的话，根据具体情况而定。而本提及布莱顿的喜剧节的目的则能从上面的解析中可以看出。故选D。‎ ‎2．A推理判断题。难度:中等。题干已经明确告知第五段，所以，直接在第五段找答案。文中提及:at Farringdon, a double room cost just £62.95；再看前两个句子，只因为距离车站的距离不同，价格相差很大，从£75.75到£95.95，可知两个信息：Farringdon首先是旅馆；其次是相对来说离车站较远。故选A。‎ ‎3．C推理判断题。难度：较易。回到文章开头，Here we help ways to cut your costs不难看出答案。故选C。‎ ‎【难句学习】‎ ‎1. If traveling to your destination by train, you may want to find a good base close to the station, but you coule end up paying moer for the sake of convinience of your holiday.‎ 翻译：如果乘火车去你的目的地，你可能会找一家离车站很近的旅馆，但这样你可能会因为图假期的方便而最终多花很多钱。‎ 分析：If traveling…,这是一个省略的状语从句。end up doing,以。。。而告终，最终。。。for the sake of 为了----。‎ ‎2 …but other cities also have similar programmes that let you rent a bicycle and explore at you own pace，saving you pubilc transport or car parking costs.‎ ‎【翻译】---但其他城市同样也有类似的计划会让你租自行车按照自己的节奏来探索旅行，这样能节约公交费用或者是停车费。that…引导定语从句，修饰先行词programmes; saving……用分词短语在这里作状语，可以改为定语从句：which saves ……‎ During the cold winter months of 2013, Shyam Bihari Prasad, an old retired man, moved to Vasant Kunj in New Delhi to live with his daughter. This elderly gentleman would visit the Hanuman temple near his home every morning, where he would often see several children standing outside, begging the people for food．‎ ‎"These children have working parents who lock their homes when they go to work. They have to leave their children outside to look after themselves. Classes in the local government school start only at 10：00AM, so these children beg for food outside the temple before going to school", says Prasad．‎ One morning, Prasad bought biscuits from the shop near the temple gate for a few of them. When talking with them, Prasad learnt more about their school and the different classes the children attended. He also asked them some basic questions and realized they had no grasp of simple concepts in science and math, nor any knowledge of spelling and writing in English and Hindi. He asked them if they would like to study. After receiving a positive response, he promised to meet them on the pavement outside the temple the next day at 8:00AM. Ever since that cold winter morning in November 2013, these street children have had classes on the pavement outside the temple．‎ Several local residents take a keen interest in the classes as well, offering help when they have time. Madam Manju comes in to teach the children English, Brother Singh helps them with math, and Mandam Kirtika gives lessons in both science and math. There are others who donate books and some who buy snacks for the children．‎ Despite the noisy vehicles and passers-by, the children here are focused and eager to read and write. They didn't know how to sit or talk properly at first. Now they have changed and helped each other with their studies. Shyam Brihari Prasad has turned the lives of many of these children around. They are doing well in their school exams and are spending happy and fruitful ‎ mornings instead of begging on the street．‎ ‎4．Why did the children wander around the Hanuman temple？‎ A．They were too young to go to school and had to kill time there．‎ B．The Hanuman temple was a good place for them to play and study．‎ C．Their parents lock their homes before their classes start．‎ D．They could get more food and money from people visiting the Hanuman temple．‎ ‎5．What did Shyam Bihari Prasad do after discovering the children's situation？‎ A．He taught them on the pavement outside the temple．‎ B．He offered free biscuits to them at the temple gate every day．‎ C．He helped them with their homework after school．‎ D．He talked to their parents about their studies．‎ ‎6．What does the author want to tell us in the fourth paragraph？‎ A．What subjects the street school offers．‎ B．How the local people help the street children．‎ C．When classes start at the street school．‎ D．What the street children's school life is like．‎ ‎7．Thanks to Shyam Bihari Prasad, the street children____________.‎ A．behave better at school B．enjoy helping strangers C．hate reading books in the morning D．can get full marks in exams ‎【答案】‎ ‎4． C ‎ ‎5． A ‎ ‎6． B ‎ ‎7． A ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲了Shyam Bihari Prasad发现孩子们在Hanuman寺院附近徘徊乞讨。他了解了孩子们的情况后，在寺庙外面的人行道上教他们学习。很多当地人也加入其中。多亏了Shyam Bihari Prasad，这些街边孩子在学校表现得更好了。‎ ‎4．细节理解题。答案定位在第二段"These children have working parents who lock their homes when they go to work. They have to leave their children outside to look after themselves.‎ ‎ Classes in the local government school start only at 10：00AM, so these children beg for food outside the temple before going to school", says Prasad．可知孩子们在Hanuman寺院附近徘徊是因为他们在开始上课之前，他们的父母要上班，把家门锁住了，故选C。‎ ‎5．细节理解题。答案定位在倒数第三段After receiving a positive response, he promised to meet them on the pavement outside the temple the next day at 8:00AM. Ever since that cold winter morning in November 2013, these street children have had classes on the pavement outside the temple．可知Shyam Bihari Prasad在发现孩子们的情况后，他在寺庙外面的人行道上教他们学习，故选A。‎ ‎6．段落大意题。第四段Several local residents take a keen interest in the classes as well, offering help when they have time.是全文的主题句，可知第四段主要讲了当地人怎么帮助街边儿童，故选B。‎ ‎7．推理判断题。答案定位在最后一段Shyam Brihari Prasad has turned the lives of many of these children around. They are doing well in their school exams and are spending happy and fruitful mornings instead of begging on the street．可推知多亏了Shyam Bihari Prasad，这些街边孩子在学校表现得更好了，故选A。‎ Everybody knows that different nationalities have their own special behavior when they go on holiday. But how differently would different nationalities behave? Psychologists created some tests to show the best and worst sides of tourists from four countries.‎ The Germans were the only group to send back a bottle of wine tasting of vinegar, the British did not mind when people jumped the queue, and the Japanese were so shocked when an actor began showering with nothing on that they turned their backs on him. The most upsetting thing for the Americans was finding someone had burned their flag.‎ There were also surprising reactions to a “drunk” coach driver. The British were the least accepting and refused to get on the bus. The Japanese weren’t worried until their group leader noticed that the driver still had a bottle of alcohol. The Germans were by far the most understanding and did not want to complain in case the driver lost his job.‎ When the tourists had a free afternoon the British played football in the pouring rain, the Germans went walking, the Japanese hired a coach to go sight-seeing, and the Americans played pool (桌球).‎ In one situation an actor started smoking on a non-smoking bus. The British politely asked him to smoke outside, the Japanese were far more concerned with maintaining harmony and said nothing, the Germans had a vote and asked him to put it out, while the Americans were the least ‎ bothered, and actually started smoking themselves.‎ All four nationalities were equally accepting when they were served deliberately poor food. When an actor pretended to steal beer from the bar, the British and Americans were no better than each other and started to join in, the Germans refused to take part, while the Japanese were so horrified that they told the bar staff.‎ ‎8．Psychologists filmed tourists for the purpose of__________.‎ A．proving how many different sides tourists had B．finding all four nationalities are equally accepting C．seeing how tourists from different countries did differently D．preparing for a film about tourists from different countries.‎ ‎9．According to the passage, which of the following descriptions is true?‎ A．The Japanese were indifferent when seeing a naked actor.‎ B．The British can't put up with the poor.‎ C．The American behaved best when seeing someone stealing beer.‎ D．The Germans were most considerate towards the drunk driver.‎ ‎10．We could infer from the passage that the American tourists feel distressed when_______.‎ A．it becomes stormy B．beer is not available at a hotel C．smoking is not allowed D．their country is insulted ‎11．Who seems to be more likely to join in when someone is involved in lawless behavior?‎ A．The Americans and British. B．The Germans and Japanese.‎ C．The British and Germans. D．The Japanese and Americans.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎8． C ‎ ‎9． D ‎ ‎10． D ‎ ‎11． A ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 这是一篇说明文。文章主要讲了为了观察来自不同国家的游客表现有何不同，心理学家拍摄了各个国家的游客。‎ ‎8．细节理解题。答案定位在第一段But how differently would different nationalities behave?‎ ‎ Psychologists created some tests to show the best and worst sides of tourists from four countries.可知心理学家拍摄游客是为了观察来自不同国家的游客表现有何不同，故选C。‎ ‎9．细节理解题。答案定位在第四段The Germans were by far the most understanding and did not want to complain in case the driver lost his job.可知德国人对那个醉酒的司机最体贴，故选D。‎ ‎10．细节理解题。答案定位在第二段The most upsetting thing for the Americans was finding someone had burned their flag.可知当他们的国家受到侮辱时，美国游客感到苦恼，故选D。‎ ‎11．推理判断题。答案定位在最后一段When an actor pretended to steal beer from the bar, the British and Americans were no better than each other and started to join in, the Germans refused to take part, while the Japanese were so horrified that they told the bar staff.可推知当某人有违法行为时，美国人和英国人似乎更有可能参与，故选A。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 细节理解题的解题思路：‎ 细节理解题就是我们常见的wh-题，它们大多是根据文章中的具体信息如事实、例证、原因、过程、论述等进行提问的。抓住文段中的事实和细节是做好该题型的关键，也是做好其它类型问题的基础。该题型几乎都可以在文章中直接找到与答案有关的信息，或是其变体。在一篇短文里大部分篇幅都属于这类围绕主体展开的细节。做这类题一般采用寻读法，即先读题，然后带着问题快速阅读短文，找出与问题和选项有关的词语或句子，再对相关部分进行分析对比，找出答案。例如小题1，答案定位在第一段But how differently would different nationalities behave? Psychologists created some tests to show the best and worst sides of tourists from four countries.可知心理学家拍摄游客是为了观察来自不同国家的游客表现有何不同，故选C。‎ 评卷人 得分 二、完形填空 I used to be a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I have really changed. I have started to think about other people _______ I think about myself. I am happy that I am becoming a _______person:‎ I think my _______started when I was at Palomar College. At first, I just wanted to get my _______, and be left alone. I thought I was smarter everyone else, so I hardly ever _______to anyone in my classes. By the end of my first semester, I was really, _______. It seemed as if ‎ everyone but me had made friends and was having fun. So tried a(n) _______. I started asking people around me how they were doing, and if they were having trouble I _______to help. That was really a big _______for me. By the end of the year, I had several new friends, and two of _______are still my best friends today.‎ A bigger cause of my new _______, however, came when I took a part-time job at a Vista Nursing Home. One old lady there who had Alzheimer s disease became my _______. Every time I came into her room, she was so _______because she thought I was her daughter. Her real daughter never _______her, so I took her place. She let me _______. That making others feel good make me feel good, too. When she died, I was _______, but I was very grateful to her.‎ I think I am a much _______, person today than I used to be, and I hope I will not _______these experiences. They have _______e to care about other people more than about myself. _______who I am today, and I could not say that a few years ago.‎ ‎12．A．since B．before C．or D．unless ‎13．A．famous B．simple C．different D．skilled ‎14．A．education B．career C．tour D．change ‎15．A．balance B．homework C．degree D．interest ‎16．A．talked B．wrote C．lied D．reported ‎17．A．careful B．lonely C．curious D．guilty ‎18．A．argument B．game C．experiment D．defence ‎19．A．dared B．offered C．hesitated D．happened ‎20．A．dream B．problem C．duty D．step ‎21．A．us B．which C．them D．whom ‎22．A．attitude B．hobby C．hope D．luck ‎23．A．friend B．partner C．guide D．guest ‎24．A．polite B．happy C．strange D．confident ‎25．A．bothered B．answered C．visited D．trusted ‎26．A．explain B．guess C．declare D．see ‎27．A．homeless B．heart broken C．bad-tempered D．hopeless ‎28．A．quieter B．busier C．better D．richer ‎29．A．forget B．face C．improve D．analyze ‎30．A．forced B．preferred C．ordered D．taught ‎31．A．miss B．like C．wonder D．expect ‎【答案】‎ ‎12． B ‎ ‎13． C ‎ ‎14． D ‎ ‎15． C ‎ ‎16． A ‎ ‎17． B ‎ ‎18． C ‎ ‎19． B ‎ ‎20． D ‎ ‎21． C ‎ ‎22． A ‎ ‎23． A ‎ ‎24． B ‎ ‎25． C ‎ ‎26． D ‎ ‎27． B ‎ ‎28． C ‎ ‎29． A ‎ ‎30． D ‎ ‎31． B ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 试题分析：‎ ‎12．B 考查连词辨析。A. since自从；B. before在……之前；C. or或者；D. unless除非。before在……之前，表示的含义是在考虑自己之前先考虑别人，对应前边的改变自我为中心。故选B。‎ ‎13．C 考查形容词辨析。A. famous著名的；B. simple简单的；C. different不同的；D. skilled有技巧的。句意：做出改变，变成了不同于以前的人。故选C。‎ ‎14．D 考查名词辨析。A. education教育；B. career事业；C. tour旅行；D. change变化。我想我是在帕洛玛学院的时候开始改变的。改变这个单词贯穿全文。故选D。‎ ‎15．C 考查名词辨析。A. balance平衡；B. homework家庭作业；C. degree级别；D. interest兴趣。因为对应前文中的在大学里，只想取得学位。故选C。‎ ‎16．A 考查动词辨析。A. talked谈论；B. wrote写；C. lied说谎；D. reported报道。talk to sb.和某人谈话，因为前文说是自己认为比别人聪明，因此几乎不和别人说话。故选A。‎ ‎17．B 考查形容词辨析。A. careful细心的；B. lonely孤独的；curious好奇的；guilty犯罪的。孤独的，没有朋友，正好对应下文的It seemed as if everyone but me had made friends and was having fun.故选B。‎ ‎18．C 考查名词辨析。A. argument争论；B. game运动；C. experiment实验；D. defense防御。词义实验的含义，引申为一种突破，一种改变，对应下文开始做的事情。故选C。‎ ‎19．B 考查动词辨析。A. dared敢；B. offered提供；C. hesitated犹豫；D. happened发生。offer to do sth表示主动提出做某件事情，更能体现出想改变的决心。故选B。‎ ‎20．D 考查名词辨析。A. dream梦想；B. problem问题；C. duty责任；D. step台阶、步骤。表示一种进步。紧接着，对应下文的具体的进步之处。故选D。‎ ‎21．C 考查代词辨析。A. us我们；B. which哪个；C. them他们；D. whom谁，who的宾格。注意and这个连词的作用，引文是并列句，因此注意语法的作用，使用them。故选C。‎ ‎22．A 考查名词辨析。A. attitude态度；B. hobby爱好；C. hope希望；D. luck幸运。由首句可知，作者之前是个self-centered person，通过一次经历发生了变化并对比自己的今昔，所以可得出是attitude（态度）的变化。故选A。‎ ‎23．A 考查名词词义辨析。A. friend朋友；B. partner伙伴；C. guide向导；D. guest客人。通过文章的became.可推测出old lady是作者的friend（朋友）。故选A。‎ ‎24．B 考查形容词词义辨析。A. polite礼貌；B. happy快乐；C. strange奇怪；D. confident自信。通过空格后面because she thought I was her daughter可推测出old lady是非常高兴的。故选B。‎ ‎25．C 考查动词词义辨析。A. bothered打扰；B. answered回答；C. visited参观；D. trusted信任。通过文中信息得知old lady是一个病人，所以可推测出是来看望(visit)自己。故选C。‎ ‎26．D 考查动词词义辨析。A. see看，观察；B. explain解释；C. declare宣称；D. guess猜测。这位老妇女让我猜测，她让其他人感到好些，也让我感到好多了。故选D。‎ ‎27．由句意可知，当她去世的时候，“我”非常伤心（heartbroken）。homeless ‎ 意为“无家可归的”，bad-tempered 意为“坏脾气的”，hopeless 意为“没有希望的”，均不符合语境。故正确答案为B。‎ ‎28．结合上文可知，“我”以前是一个过于以自我为中心的人，现在“我”懂得了关心别人，因此比起以前，“我”觉得自己变得更好（better）了。quiet 意为“安静的”，busy 意为“繁忙的”，rich 意为“富裕的”，均不符合文意。故正确答案为C。‎ ‎29．A 考查动词词义辨析。A. forget忘记；B. face面对；C. improve改进；D. analyze分析。作者通过这次的experience发生了好的变化，可推测作者想记住这次经历，所以选will not forget,其他均不符合语境。故选A。‎ ‎30．D 考查动词词义辨析。A. forced强迫；B. preferred更喜欢；C. ordered命令；D. taught教。作者通过这次经历使自己变得更好，所以可推测这次经历“教会”了自己什么。故选D。‎ ‎31．B 考查动词词义辨析。A. miss想念、错过；B. like喜欢；C. wonder想知道；D. expect期待。通过文章可推测出与之前比较作者更“喜欢”现在的自己，故选B。‎ 考点：人生感悟类阅读 第II卷（非选择题)‎ 请点击修改第II卷的文字说明 评卷人 得分 三、语法填空 阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。‎ Welcome back to the hot topic of studying abroad! Last time, we talked about the general “software” needed to have a 32． （success）studying experience overseas, 33． refers to the ability to understand western culture, and problem solving skills when 34．(face) critical situations, etc.‎ Now, I will dig deeper into the concept of “software”. Everyone is talking about culture shock nowadays, but you may wonder what it actually 35． (mean). Simply put: culture shock is the difficulty people may experience when being exposed and adjusting to a 36． (remarkable) different new culture. Usually, people often go 37． four distinct phases: the honeymoon phase, the negotiation phase, the adjustment phase and the mastery phase. Culture shock can happen immediately upon your 38． (arrive) in the country.‎ For international students, perhaps the most direct impact of culture shock is the variety of accents, especially in multicultural countries 39． the US, Canada or Australia. There are two main reasons: Firstly, these countries have highly diversified groups of residents from different cultural 40． (background). Secondly, there are many international students from all around the world every year studying in these countries, so you shouldn’t be surprised 41． (find) all kinds of unfamiliar accents around the university campus.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎32． successful ‎ ‎33． which ‎ ‎34． facing ‎ ‎35． means ‎ ‎36． remarkably ‎ ‎37． through ‎ ‎38． arrival / arriving ‎ ‎39． like ‎ ‎40． backgrounds ‎ ‎41． to find ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎32．successful 表示“一次成功的学习经历”。形容词修饰名词，故填successful。‎ ‎33．which 此处考查定语从句。experience是先行词，非限制性定语从句缺少主语，缺少引导词，故填which。‎ ‎34．facing 句意：当面对批评境况的时候。此处表示主动关系，可知用现在分词作状语，故填facing。‎ ‎35．means 句意：你可能想知道事实上它意味着什么。根据上下文联系可知此处应该用一般现在时态，特别注意主语是单数第三人称，故填means。‎ ‎36．remarkably different是形容词，副词修饰形容词，故填remarkably。‎ ‎37．through 固定搭配：go through经历，度过。故填through。‎ ‎38．arrival/arriving your是形容词性物主代词，可知后面用名词或动名词，故填arrival/arriving。‎ ‎39．like 表示“像美国、加拿大或澳大利亚”，此处应该填介词like，表示“像……”。‎ ‎40．backgrounds 表示“不同的文化背景”。background是可数名词，此处名词用复数形式，故填backgrounds。‎ ‎41．to find 固定形式：be surprised to do sth.感到吃惊地去做某事。故填to find。‎ ‎【知识归纳】‎ succeed（动词） in doing sth. /be successful（形容词）） in doing sth./ have success（名词） in doing sth.成功做某事；a success一个成功的人，一件成功的事； successfully（副词）。‎ 考点：考查语法填空 评卷人 得分 四、短文改错 ‎42．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ There is many interesting idioms in China. Now let me to explain one of them, Ye Gong Hao Long. In ancient times there was the man called Ye Gong. He told everyone that he loved dragons very much．In his house almost everything decorated with dragon designs, including the walls, two window and doors. When a real dragon heard about his story, it was deeply impressing and decided to visit Ye Gong. However, when the dragon stuck their head through one window,‎ Ye Gong was frightened and run away. Well, you see, this idiom is used to describe those people which appear to like something, and actually don't．‎ ‎【答案】第一处： is改成are 第二处：去掉to 第三处： the改成a 第四处： everything之后加was 第五处： window改成 windows 第六处： impressing改成impressed 第七处： their改成its 第八处： run改成ran 第九处： which改成who 第十处： and改成but ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 这是一篇故事。文章主要讲了叶公好龙的故事以及其寓意。‎ ‎【详解】‎ 第一处：考查主谓一致。句意：中国有许多有趣的成语。根据many interesting idioms可知是复数意义，be动词用复数，所以is改成are。‎ 第二处：考查词汇的用法。let之后接动词原形，所以去掉to。‎ 第三处：考查冠词。句意：古时候，有一个叫叶公的人。泛指“一个人”，man的首字母发音是辅音，用不定冠词a，所以the改成a。‎ 第四处：考查时态和语态。文章是一篇故事，用一般过去时，“每件事物”和“装饰”之间是被动关系，用被动语态，所以everything之后加was。‎ 第五处：考查名词单复数。被two修饰，用名词复数，所以window改成 windows。‎ 第六处：考查语态。句意：当一条真正的龙听说了他的故事，它深深地被感动了，并决定访问叶公。“它”和“感动”之间是被动关系，用被动语态，所以impressing改成 impressed。‎ 第七处：考查代词。文中表示“然而，当龙把它的头伸进一扇窗户时”，所以their改成its。‎ 第八处：考查时态。文章是一篇故事，用一般过去时，所以run改成ran。‎ 第九处：考查定语从句。这里含有一个定语从句，those people是先行词，关系词在从句中作主语，指人，所以which改成who。‎ 第十处：考查连词。句意：这个成语用来形容那些看起来喜欢某物，但实际上不喜欢某物的人。文中表示转折关系，所以and改成but。‎ 评卷人 得分 五、提纲类作文 ‎43．在你成长过程中一定有一些对你有帮助，对你很重要的人．假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文给校刊投稿．‎ 内容包括：‎ ‎1．对你很重要的人是谁 ‎2．对你很重要的原因 ‎3．你想如何回报他（她）。‎ 注意：词数不少于100（文章开头已给出，不计入字数）．‎ On the journey of my growth， there are many people who have cared about me and helped me when I'm in trouble.‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】On the journey of my growth， there are many people who have cared about me and helped me when I'm in trouble. Among them, the most important one is my grandma．‎ In my early years, my parents left home because of their work. Therefore, I lived with my grandma until eleven years old. Besides taking care of my life, she also taught me a lot of useful ‎ knowledge which will contribute to my success in life. She is a Chinese teacher. Owing to her help my writing skill is better than most students in my class．I really feel proud of my grandma.‎ It was my grandma who gave me a happy and rich childhood．As I am growing up, I feel so grateful to her that I will live up to her expectations. Besides，I will certainly set aside as much time as possible to keep her company so that she will not feel lonely． I wish my grandma would live a happy old﹣age life．(140 words)‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 这篇书面表达属于话题类写作。‎ ‎【详解】‎ 第1步：根据提示可知，在你成长过程中一定有一些对你有帮助，对你很重要的人．假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文给校刊投稿。人称为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。‎ 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：because of因为，take care of照顾，contribute to促成，Owing to由于，proud of为……而感到骄傲，grow up长大，grateful感谢的，live up to不辜负，set aside留出。‎ 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。‎ 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：Besides taking care of my life, she also taught me a lot of useful knowledge which will contribute to my success in life.定语从句的运用；It was my grandma who gave me a happy and rich childhood．强调句的运用。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。‎