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【英语】2020届高三英语二轮专题复习学案:写作中的高级表达妙记3如何筛选靓丽词汇Word版含答案
妙记3 如何筛选靓丽词汇 书面表达在英语高考中,担负着区分考生、选拔人才的功能。对于学优生来说,作文拿到四档分数仅是一个“平庸分”,很有可能与名校失之交臂,但五档分数又是把大多数考生挡在门外的一道槛。其实,四档与五档的差别是微小的,仅仅是一些细节的美化而已(参见下表对比展示)。在平时的训练中,考生应注重抓一些细节,杜绝一些瑕疵,就可以实现由“完成”到“完美”的蜕变、由“四档”到“五档”的晋升。因为本书针对学优生而编写,所以其编写定位起点高(重点讲如何打造亮点),目标高(直指五档作文)。让学优生吃好吃饱、省时高效是本书的编写定位。 [四档作文与五档作文评定对比表] 第四档(16~20分) 第五档(21~25分) 考 纲 表 述 完成了试题规定的任务。 —虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有。 —应用的语法结构和词汇能。 —语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或。 —应用语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。 了预期的写作目的。 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 —覆盖要点。 —应用了的语法结构和词汇。 —语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或;具备较强的语言运用能力。 —使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。 了预期的写作目的。 名师解读 1.如何理解“覆盖所有内容要点” 评分标准中对考生所要求的“覆盖所有内容要点”,就是要求考生在写作时要认真审题,确保要点“全而不漏”,要点全面是书面表达得高分的必要条件。 2.如何理解“应用了较多的语法结构” “较多的语法结构”就是指句式结构的多样性。感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句型、定语从句、非谓语动词短语等语法结构的正确使用,可以使文章的语言充满层次感,从而较好地反映出作者的语言运用能力。 3.如何理解“应用了较多的词汇” 这里所说的“应用了较多的词汇”,是指词汇使用的多样性,如词性的多样性、高级词汇的使用、同义词与反义词的使用、短语的使用等。 4.如何理解“具备较强的语言运用能力” 评分标准中对考生所要求的语言得体,就是要求考生在表达时应根据说话的对象、时间、地点、场合等选择使用恰当的英语语言,尤其是不同体裁和题材的文章对用语方面有着不同的要求。 5.如何理解“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分” 一篇优秀的书面表达应该能做到段与段、句与句之间以一种明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排,在文章与结构上层次分明、条理清楚、连贯流畅。 阅卷时,一篇高考作文往往在1分钟内就被判定生死,大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。在词汇方面:如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇,能迅速激起阅卷老师的兴奋点,赢得阅卷老师的好感,这是作文得高分的必备点。 熟记四组靓点词汇让表达更鲜更靓本部分英汉对照,主要是便于背诵。使用时先把右列的词汇、例句等反复读熟,然后把右列遮住,看着左边的汉语提示来翻译背诵。 第一组 名词及名词短语 1. [例句] 现在你们有一个好机会,可以大大增进对彼此的了解。 Now you have an opportunity to develop a greater understanding of each other. 2. [例句] 有4个基本的选项,简述如下。 There are four basic alternatives; they are described briefly below. 3. [例句] 所有学校都设有音乐和舞蹈课。 All the schools have music and dancing classes as parts of the curriculum. 4. [例句] 他们称他们预期这次会议会对国家的未来产生显著影响。 They say they expect the meeting to have a marked impact on the future of the country. 5. [例句] 如果气候变化继续下去,我们将自食其果。 If climate changes continue, we will suffer the consequences. 6. [例句] 这种方法的缺点之一是必须把单词预先存储在系统中。 One drawback of this approach is that the words must be registered in the system beforehand. 7. [例句] 我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。 We will be exploring different approaches to gathering information. 8. [例句] 在这类职业中,只有20%的岗位是由女性担任的。 Only 20 percent of jobs in the professions are held by women. 9. [例句] 家庭中的每个成员都会互相帮助,特别是照顾好年轻人和老年人。 Members of a family help one another, with particular care for the very young and the elderly. 10. [例句] 激发这些年轻人的不是对成就的渴望,而是对失败的担心。 These youngsters are motivated not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure. 第二组 动词及动词短语 1. [例句] 他喜欢踢足球,这是他最喜欢的运动。 对……痴迷 [例句] 我对那里发生的事情都非常感兴趣。 He is fond of playing football, which is his favourite. be crazy about I'm crazy about everything that goes on there. 2. [例句] 就我而言,我坚定地认为游客的数量应得到限制,理由如下。 As for me, I'm firmly convinced that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons. 3. [例句] ①许多人开始意识到锻炼的重要性。 ②我深知这是一份艰难的工作。 ①Many people are becoming aware of the importance of exercising. ②I am well aware that this is a tough job. 4. [例句] 请告诉我那边的情况。 Please keep me informed of what's going on there. 5. [例句] 几天前我在你的店铺买了一部手机。 I purchased a cellphone at your store the other day. 6. [例句] 更糟的是,暴力电子游戏可能导致进攻性行为,这比暴力电影更有害。 导致……结果 [例句] 紧张和疲劳常导致失眠。 What's worse, violent video games can lead to aggressive behaviours, which is more harmful than violent movies. result in Stress and tiredness often result in sleeplessness. 7. [例句] 所有的游客被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。 All the visitors were requested not to throw litter about in the park. 8. [例句] 我主张我们人人都应该尽力帮助那些需要帮助的人。 指出 [例句] 许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。 I argue that every one of us (should) try our best to help those in need. point out Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness. 9. [例句] 或许我们能想到这个问题的更好的解决办法。 Maybe we can come up with a better solution to the problem. 10. [例句] 我真诚地感激您所做的一切。 因为某事向你表达我的感激之情 [例句] 对您的好意我谨表示我的谢意。 感激(某人)做…… [例句] ①我非常感谢你花这么多时间帮助我。 ②我衷心感谢你为我和我家人所做的一切。 I am truly grateful to you for what you have done. express my gratitude to you for ... I'd like to express my gratitude for your kindness. appreciate (one's) doing/that/sth. ①I appreciate your giving me so much of your time. ②I really appreciate what you've done for my family and me. 11. [例句] 希望全班同学参加讨论。 参与,热衷于 [例句] 你应当参与各种各样的活动。 Everyone in the class is expected to participate in the discussion. get involved in (an activity) You should get involved in various activities. 12. [例句] 将有20名学生参加英语演讲比赛。 There will be twenty students to compete in the English speech contest. 13. [例句] 我们将竭尽全力以赶上发达的工业国家。 We'll spare no effort to catch up with the developed industrial countries. 14. [例句] 他把业余时间都用在读书上。 He devotes all his spare time to reading. 15. [例句] 我们应该做出努力来彻底解决这个问题。 We should make an attempt to thoroughly solve this problem. 16. [例句] 我决心要不惜一切代价来实现自己的目标。 下定决心做某事 [例句] 听了他的报告后,我想了很多,反思了以前我所做的事情。我已经下定决心从以下几个方面来提高自己。 I'm determined to achieve my goal at any cost. make up one's mind to do sth. Having heard his report, I thought a lot and reflected on what I did before. I have made up my mind to improve myself in the following ways. 17. [例句] ①他们用水只能依靠这条河。 ②相信我会全心全意地帮助你。 ①They have to rely on the river for their water. ②You can count on me to help you heart and soul. 18. [例句] 我在生人面前总是不知要说什么。 I am always at a loss what to say in front of strangers. 19. [例句] 就我所知,他们每一个人都想成为一名模范学生。 So far as I know, every one of them intends to be a model student. 第三组 形容词及形容词性短语 1. [例句] 体育运动有益于增强我们的体质。 有益的;值得做的 [例句] 众所周知,学好英语是有好处的。 Sports are beneficial to building our bodies. rewarding As is known to us all, learning English well is very rewarding. 2. [例句] 他是一位杰出的科学家,对我国做出了巨大贡献。 [例句] 你的发音很完美,这令人羡慕。 极好的 [例句] “你要来么?”他激动地说:“那太好了!简直难以置信!” He is an outstanding scientist, who has made a great contribution to our country. Your pronunciation is perfect, which is admirable. fantastic “You're coming?” he said excitedly. “That's fantastic! That's incredible!” 3. [例句] 他是一个普通的学生,但是做了许多好事。 He is an average student, but he did many good deeds. 4. [例句] 每年成千上万的游客都会涌入这个景区来欣赏这里美丽的风景。 Hundreds of thousands of tourists pour into this scenic spot to admire the amazing scenery every year. 5. [例句] 听到这个好消息后我非常兴奋。 I was thrilled when I heard the good news. 6. [例句] 我的同桌是一个动人的、文雅的女孩。 My deskmate is a charming and elegant girl 7. [例句] 我的薪水不够维持一家的生活。 My salary is not adequate to support our family. 8. [例句] 改变这种情形需要每个人付出很大的努力。 Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. 9. [例句] 她是一个勤奋的老师,她工作非常勤奋。 She is a diligent teacher and she is diligent in her work. 10. [例句] 老师的鼓励对他/她的学生具有重要意义。 对……至关重要,关键的 [例句] 学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。 Encouragement from a teacher is really of great significance/importance to his/her students. be critical/vital to Learning English well is critical/vital to your future employment. 11. [例句] 这本书对你会有很大用处。 This book will be of great use to you. 12. [例句] 所获得的经验对我们有很大价值。 The experience gained will be of great value to us. 13. [例句] 这项工程对每个人都大有好处。 This project is of great benefit to everyone. 14. [例句] 你的建议对我很有帮助。 Your suggestions are of great help to me. 15. [例句] 他来自一个偏远的村庄。 He is from a distant/remote village. 16. [例句] 这是一个要求极严的、具有挑战性的工作。 It's a demanding and challenging job. 17. [例句] 越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。 许多 [例句] 许多学生反对这个主意。 很多,非常多 [例句] 这个图书馆有相当多英语书。 An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation. many a Many a student is against the idea. a good many There are a good many English books in the library. 18. [例句] 自然保护区里有许多不同种类的珍稀动植物。 范围广的,种类多的 [例句] 你有很大的选择余地。 There are a wide variety of rare animals and plants in the nature reserve. a wide range of There is a wide range of choices open to you. 19. [例句] 学习了一天,我都累坏了。 筋疲力尽的;疲惫不堪的 [例句] 夜里没有休息好,课堂上我感到筋疲力尽。 I was worn out after a day of studying. exhausted Not sleeping well, I always feel exhausted in class. 20. [例句] 她精力充沛,聪明活泼。 She is energetic, intelligent and lively. 第四组 副词、连词及其他 1. [例句] 我的手机非常有用。 特别地 [例句] ①约翰似乎特别喜欢她。 ②苏珊和约翰对于获得这个奖项感到兴奋不已。 My mobile phone is extremely useful. especially/particularly ①John seems to be particularly fond of her. ②Susan and John were especially thrilled with this award. 2. [例句] 如果有什么我能为你做的,我将非常乐意帮忙。 If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help. 3. [例句] 我们偶尔去田野里散步。 偶尔,有时候 [例句] 他偶尔来我们房中闲谈。 We go for walks in the fields occasionally. once in a while He comes to our room for a chat every once in a while. 4. [例句] 不用说它对我们的健康是有好处的。 It goes without saying that it will do us a lot of good. 5. [例句] 面积大概有一百平方千米。 The area is approximately 100 square kilometers. 6.也 [例句] 我喜欢踢足球,也喜欢游泳。 I like playing football and I enjoy swimming as well. 7. [例句] ①我们的人口在增长,因此我们需要更多的食物。 ②他很忙,因此他不能来。 ①We have a growing population and therefore we need more food. ②He was busy; therefore he could not come. (therefore前要用分号) 8. [例句] 抓住这个机会,否则你会后悔的。 Seize the chance, otherwise/or else you'll regret it. 9. [例句] ①第三,你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。 ②假如不下雨我就去。 ①Thirdly, you say that there is a discount provided/providing (that) I pay in advance. ②I shall go providing/provided (that) it doesn't rain. 10. [例句] 这次比赛不仅职业运动员可以参加,而且业余运动员也可以参加。 The tournament is open to amateurs as well as professionals. 11. [例句] 作为中学生,我们在学校应该衣着整洁。 As high school students, we are supposed to be neatly dressed when at school. 12. [例句] 大多数被采访者宁愿待在家里看电视也不愿去看电影。 The majority of the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema. 13. [例句] 因为吸烟的缘故,我父亲经常咳嗽。 所以;因此(副词) [例句] 雨很大,所以路被淹没了。 As a consequence of smoking, my father coughs frequently. consequently The rain was heavy, and consequently the road was flooded. 14. [例句] 他全神贯注地想心事,以至于和一个行人撞了个满怀。 忙于(做)某事 [例句] ①我每天都忙于日常的工作。 ②他忙于照料三个小孩。 He was so absorbed in thought that he ran against a passerby. be occupied with sth./in doing sth. ①I am fully occupied with my daily work. ②He's fully occupied in looking after the three little children. 15. [例句] 我想把几天前说到的那位绅士介绍给你们。 I would like to introduce to you the gentleman whom I spoke of the other day. 16. [例句] 走了10英里之后,我们都累了。 After covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.查看更多