【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达推荐信写作指导例析（3页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达推荐信写作指导例析（3页word版）

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达推荐信写作指导例析 假设你是李华，计划今年暑假去美国旅游两周，请给你的美国朋友David写一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：‎ ‎1．提出你对旅游地点的要求并请David推荐地点；‎ ‎2．你对住宿和交通的要求；‎ ‎3．请他代为预订宾馆并对他表示感谢。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear David，‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ Best regards! ‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎[四步写作]‎ 一、定人称、定时态，审题快而不偏 人称以第一人称为主，主要时态用一般现在时 二、列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 ‎1．简短的寒暄和导入 ‎①暑假 the_summer_holiday ‎②临近 draw_near ‎2．提出你对旅游景点的要求 ‎①出国旅行 travel_abroad ‎②美丽的风景 scenic_beauty ‎③自然美 the_beauty_of_nature ‎3．请David推荐地点 推荐 recommend ‎4．你对住宿和交通的要求 ‎①住在宾馆 live_in_the_hotel ‎②周围的交通 the_traffic_around ‎③租车 rent_a_car ‎5．请David代为预订宾馆并对他表示感谢 ‎①预订宾馆 book_a_hotel ‎②多谢 thanks_a_lot 三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 ‎1．一想到假期里要去美国旅游我感到很兴奋。‎ I feel very excited at the thought that I am going to visit America in the holiday.‎ ‎2．对我来说，这是第一次独自出国旅行，所以我需要你的帮助。‎ It’s the first time for me to travel abroad on my own, so I need your help.‎ ‎3．我想游览一些有美景的地区，如高山、峡谷、河流和森林，在那里我可以享受大自然的美。‎ I’d like to visit some areas of scenic beauty, such as mountains, valleys, rivers and forests, where I could enjoy the beauty of nature.‎ ‎4．我更喜欢住在宾馆，我希望周围的交通不太拥挤，因为我要租一辆车开始我的旅行。‎ I prefer to live in the hotel and I hope the traffic around isn’t too heavy because I’m going to rent a car to start my travel.‎ ‎5．请帮我预订一个宾馆。‎ Please help me book a hotel.‎ 四、衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文 Dear David，‎ The summer holiday is drawing near. I feel very excited at the thought that I am going to visit America in the holiday. It’s the first time for me to travel abroad on my own, so I need your help. I’d like to visit some areas of scenic beauty, such as mountains, valleys, rivers and forests, where I could enjoy the beauty of nature. Please recommend several places to me. Besides, I prefer to live in the hotel and I hope the traffic around isn’t too heavy because I’m going to rent a car to start my travel. Please help me book a hotel. Thanks a lot.‎ I’m expecting to hear from you, and I’m looking forward to meeting you.‎ Best regards!‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[写改两用]‎ 这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。‎ Dear David，‎ The summer holiday is around the corner and my dream of travelling to America is to come true, which makes me to feel excited. Which you know, this is my first visit to your country, so I have a request you (should) do me a favour. I would visit some places of great interests, which can stand by the characteristic of your country. Would you please recommend my some scenic spots?‎ As for accommodation, I’d like to live in a peace place, around which the traffic should not be too heavy, for I would rent an mountain bike for convenience. Please help me book so a hotel in advance. Much thanks!‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Best regards!‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 答案：第一句：去掉feel前的to 第二句：Which→As; request后加that 第三句：interests→interest; by→for 第四句：my→me 第五句：peace→peaceful; an→a 第六句：so→such 第七句：Much→Many