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高考英语二轮复习专题3应用文写作类型8演讲稿讲练
只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力,才能尝到成功的滋味。 1 类型 8| 演讲稿 英语演讲稿实际上是属于一种特殊的说明文或议论文,其基本组成部分是: 1.开始时对听众的称呼语。 最常用的是 ladies and gentlemen,也可根据不同情况, 选用 fellow students,distinguished guests,Mr.chairman,honorable judges(评委) 等等。 2.提出论题。由于演讲的时间限制,必须开门见山,提出论题。 3.论证。对提出的论题,不可主观地妄下结论,而要进行客观的论证。这是演讲中最 需要下功夫的部分。关键是要把道理讲清楚。 4.结论。结论要简明扼要,以给听众留下深刻印象。 5.结尾。结尾要简洁,不要拉拉扯扯,说个没完。最普通的结尾就是:Thank you very much for your attention.。 你校将举办“我为自己感到自豪”的演讲比赛,请用英语写一篇演讲稿,包括以下内容: 1.简单介绍自己的性格; 2.记述一件或几件自己引以为豪的事例; 3.自我认识。 注意:词数 80 左右。 [习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文 Good morning,ladies and gentlemen! I am an easygoing and optimistic girl.I'm not a top student ① and I'm happy and full ② with confidence.Now I'll tell you why. As a child,I ③ show an interest in painting.With my parents' support and encouragement,I have been practicing drawing with joy and ④ my painting makes progress every day.Now I am a designer for blackboard and wall newspapers of our class. I usually send nice postcards made by myself ⑤for my friends and relatives.They are glad to accept my gifts, ⑥ I am proud of them. I'm sure everyone is special and unique in the world.Let's 1.避免词汇搭配错误 ②处 with 改为 of ⑤处 for 改为 to 2.杜绝语法错误 ①处 and 改为 but ③处 show 改为 showed ⑥处需要加并列连词 and 3.规避中式英语 ④处为中式英语,应改 为 I make progress in my painting 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力,才能尝到成功的滋味。 2 be proud of ourselves! Thank you. [自我提升]——向极优作文迈进 Good morning,ladies and gentlemen! Here,① (在你前面站着的是一个随和、乐观的小女 孩).I'm not a top student but I'm happy and full of confidence.Now I'll tell you why. As a child,I showed a ② interest in painting.With my parents' support and encouragement,I have been practicing drawing with joy and make progress every day.Now I am a designer for blackboard and wall newspapers of our class.③ ,I usually send nice postcards made by myself to my friends and relatives. They are glad to accept my gifts,④ I am proud. I'm sure everyone is special and unique in the world.Let's be proud of ourselves! Thank you. 1.高级词汇 在③处加过渡词 Besides 2.高级句型 用倒装句式补全句①:in front of you stands a girl,easygoing and optimistic 在④处添加“介词+关系 代词”以构成定语从句 of which 3.强烈的修辞意识 ②处在 interest 前面加表 示程度的修饰词 great A (2016·浙江省名校协作体联考) Couchsurfing.com,中文含义为“沙发客”,是一个旨在帮助旅行者与当地人建立联系 的国际性非营利网站。通俗地说,当你旅行时你可以住在当地会员家;当有会员来你的城市 时你可以接待他们住你家。 假设你是李华,你想成为该网站的会员,请用英文写一份申请,内容应包括: 1.写信目的; 2.你的条件(住宿情况等); 3.希望获准。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.书信格式及开头已给出(不计入总词数),可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:nonprofit 非营利性的 couch surfers 沙发客 Dear Sir/Madam, 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力,才能尝到成功的滋味。 3 I'm Li Hua,a student from China.I have learned that Couchsurfing is a non profit international network Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本篇应用文写作要求写一封申请信,属于半开放性写作。首先说明写信目的,由于开头 已给出“沙发客”的简介,因此续写时,先要把题干内容表达出来,即通过该组织,不同地 方的会员可相互提供住宿,顺理成章地说明写信目的;然后陈述你的条件,该要点为开放性 内容,要详细介绍自己的住宿情况和意愿,比如可提供三室,渴望和有共同兴趣的人交朋友, 分享旅途趣事和多元文化等;最后表达自己的愿望和感谢。 全文主体时态是一般现在时,也可根据行文需要灵活变化。另外,注意恰当使用高级词 汇和句式,如定语从句、非谓语动词等。语言要简洁委婉,符合申请信的需要。 参考词汇:apply for 申请;be eager to do sth.渴望做某事;look forward to sth. 盼望某事 【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I'm Li Hua,a student from China.I have learned that Couchsurfing is a nonprofit international network through which members in different places can offer accommodation to each other.Greatly interested,I'm writing to apply for its membership. With three bedrooms available,my twostorey house can admit several “couch surfers”.Besides,I'm eager to befriend tourists of the same interests,enjoy their wonderful travelling stories and get immersed in diverse cultures. Thanks for reading my letter and I'm looking forward to your approval. Yours, Li Hua B (2016·绍兴市柯桥中学质检) 假定你是李越,你的美国朋友 Peter 想来中国旅行,他写信向你了解他到北京后乘坐何 种交通工具旅行比较适宜。请你给他写封回信,建议他乘坐高铁。 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力,才能尝到成功的滋味。 4 建议理由:1.便捷,准点; 2.舒适,安全; 3.购票方便,价格适宜。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右。开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:中国高铁 CRH (China Railway Highspeed) 自助售票机 selfservice ticket machine Dear Peter, I'm expecting you to come to China. 【写作指导】 本篇应用文写作是一封书信,为提纲类作文,要求学生根据所给内容给美国朋友 Peter 写一封回信,建议他来中国旅游时乘坐高铁,并向其介绍高铁的优点。这类作文要点明确、 范围具体、贴近生活,易于学生动笔。题目中的文字说明对写作范围做了较为明确的限定, 因此一定要抓住文章的要点,不能遗漏。 写作时,要使用准确、丰富的词汇,还要注意使用地道而富于变化的句型,使文章的结 构错落有致。 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I'm expecting you to come to China. When you arrive in Beijing,you'd better take the CRH train,which has been well developed and become popular in China nowadays.It has lots of different lines,so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to.The CRH trains are spacious,comfortable and run at the top speed of 350 km per hour. They are seldom delayed and guarantee the safety of travellers.It's easy to get tickets through many channels,such as by telephone,through the Internet,or on the selfservice ticket machine.Besides,prices of tickets are reasonable.It offers firstclass services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey. 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力,才能尝到成功的滋味。 5 Yours, Li Yue 【导学号:85602004】 C 假如你是 Sam,大学英语系一年级的学生。你叔叔因为生意关系,需要个临时翻译,你 想试一下。因此,周三不能上口语课。你只好给外教 Ms.Riddle 写个请假条,向她解释原因 并请求准假。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Ms.Riddle, Earnestly yours, Sam 【写作指导】 本文要求写个请假条,属于一篇应用文。写作时,根据所给的材料,内容要点应包含: 说明请假的原因并请求准假。写作时,应使用第一人称,以一般现在时为主。同时恰当地使 用连接词和过渡词以及复杂句式,这样可以使行文更加流畅,提高作文的逻辑性和得分档次。 【参考范文】 Dear Ms.Riddle, I'd like to know if I could ask for a casual leave from your Oral English class this Wednesday. Yesterday evening I got a call from my uncle,who is running a small firm.He needs an interpreter for one day but cannot find the most reliable person,so he wants me to have a try.I regard this as a golden opportunity to put what I have learned into practice,but I need your permission of absence. If you think I may go and help him,I'm confident that I'll do a good job and both of us will be grateful. Earnestly yours, Sam 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力,才能尝到成功的滋味。 6 D (2016·绍兴市鲁迅中学质检) 假定你是李华,你在本市作交流生的英国朋友 Chris 很热爱中国文化,特别是戏曲文化。 2016 年 5 月 10 日下午 2:00 在绍兴大剧院将上演新编的越剧《红楼梦》。请根据下面信息, 给他写一封电子邮件,邀请他一起观看演出。 1.提出邀请并简述原因; 2.提出观剧后的活动建议(如游览东湖等)。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:绍兴大剧院 Shaoxing Grand Theater 越剧 Yue Opera 红楼梦 The Dream of Red Mansion Dear Chris, I have some good news for you! Looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本篇应用文写作是一封电子邮件,主要是邀请热爱中国文化的英国朋友 Chris 来绍兴大 剧院观看新编的越剧《红楼梦》,并提出观剧后的活动建议。书信的开头和结尾已给出,因 此学生可以直接进入主题,展开写作。需注意所写的第一句话要与所给开头衔接自然,在陈 述原因和提出建议部分可以适当发挥。写作时,人称应以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时 为主。此外,文中需要穿插使用一些过渡性词汇或短语,以使全文上下连贯,行文紧凑。 【参考范文】 Dear Chris, I have some good news for you!A new Yue Opera,The Dream of Red Mansion,will be put on in Shaoxing Grand Theatre at 2:00 p.m.on May 10th,2016.I know you take a fancy to Chinese culture,the local operas in particular.I hope this opportunity will not only make you happy,but also satisfy your interest in Chinese operas. After the show,I strongly recommend that we take a brief tour around the East 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力,才能尝到成功的滋味。 7 Lake,where you will be rewarded with a wonderful state of mind.I do hope you can come and join me. Looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【导学号:85602005】查看更多