专题55 书面表达提纲类-高考全攻略之备战2018年高考英语考点一遍过

专题55 书面表达提纲类-高考全攻略之备战2018年高考英语考点一遍过

考点55 书面表达提纲类 高考频度：★★★★★‎ ‎ 【考纲解读】‎ 众所周知，考试大纲是高考命题的规范性文件和标准，是考试评价、复习备考的依据，是推进考试内容改革的切入点。2017年高考英语大纲变化不大，书面表达试题的考查内容、写作文体、分值稳定。‎ ‎《考试大纲》对高考英语书面表达的要求是：根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100~150词的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、人物、事件等，情景的形式有提纲、图画、图表等。要求考生根据提示进行写作。考生应能：(1)清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达意思；(2)有效运用所学语言知识。‎ 书面表达主要考查了学生对语言的综合运用能力。近几年全国卷书面表达都是书信体或邮件式的文章，话题都为学生所熟知，难度系数并不大，学生都有可写的东西。‎ ‎【真题分析】‎ 近三年高考课标卷书面表达情况一览表：‎ 试卷 类型 年份 命题 形式 体裁 话题 卷I ‎2014‎ 文字+图表 应用文+书信 暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。‎ ‎2015‎ 提纲式 应用文+书信 校英文报＂外国文化＂栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。‎ ‎2016‎ 开放式 应用文+书信 暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。‎ ‎2017‎ 提纲式 应用文+电子邮件 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。‎ 卷II ‎2014‎ 提纲式 说明文 英语报社向中学生征文，主题是＂十年后的我＂。‎ ‎2015‎ 提纲式 应用文+邮件 计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往。‎ ‎2016‎ 提纲式 应用文+书信 校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。‎ ‎2017‎ 提纲式 应用文+电子邮件 想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。‎ 卷III ‎2016‎ 提纲式 说明文 与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件。‎ ‎2017‎ 提纲式 应用文+电子邮件 你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入 通过以上分析不难看出，在命题指向和规律上，全国卷书面表达有以下几个明显的特点： ‎ ‎1. 写作形式：仍为半控制性、半开放式写作，以提纲方式呈现材料，词数100左右； ‎ ‎2. 写作体裁：命题仍然是多年来沿用的书信或电子邮件，交际性、应用性强； ‎ ‎3. 写作话题：贴近现实和学生生活实际，学生比较熟悉，以第一人称写作为主，话题场景性和真实性突出，体现中外交流和＂正能量＂； ‎ ‎4. 写作手法：介绍性说明占主体(说明时间、地点、原因、过程等)，辅以交际性应用(解决＂现实＂生活中的实际问题)。 ‎ 具体说来：‎ 提纲作文是近几年高考英语书面表达的热点题型。命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、电子邮件、报道、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达综合性越来越强。提纲作文的特点为：‎ ‎1. 要点明确，范围具体 提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以短文提示、要点提示和表格提示三种形式呈现，要求考生据此进行写作，这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定，写作内容贴近学生的生活实际。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及，一个也不能遗漏。这类作文主要考查的内容有：说明主题、分析原因或解释做法。作文题目中一般会提供：标题、提纲、起始句。标题限定短文的基本发展方向，提纲规定短文的基本框架，起始句则提供短文的起点。考生应紧扣主题，并根据提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落。‎ ‎2. 思维空间灵活、开放 为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维和运用能力。‎ 提纲类写作是近年高考英语书面表达的热点题型，命题人通常以提纲作文的形式考查书信、报道、通知、日记、发言稿、对某人或某物的介绍、欢迎词等。 ‎ ‎【试题特征】 ‎ ‎1. 短文提示类 ‎ 用汉语给出一段短文提示，要求根据提示写一篇短文，所考查的形式灵活多样，如人物介绍、地点介绍、申请、道歉、邀请等。‎ ‎2. 要点提示类 ‎ 这是比较常见的一种方式，此类题目用汉语提纲列举几个要点，提出写作要求。写作时要首先根据要点确定文章的中心思想，然后围绕中心思想和要点展开合理和适当的联想。 ‎ ‎3. 表格提示类 ‎ 试题采用表格的形式给出要点，写作时首先要将表格中的要点扩展成一个个完整的句子，然后根据文章的中心话题和要求，把这些要点连句成段，连段成篇。 ‎ ‎【写作步骤】 ‎ ‎1. 细读提示，认真审题 ‎ 其环节包括：‎ 审体裁：提纲作文的体裁一般有书信、电子邮件、报道、 通知、日记等； ‎ 定人称：一般为第一人称或第三人称；‎ 定时态：一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。 ‎ ‎2. 紧扣主题，组织要点 ‎ 虽然提纲式作文的要点似乎已经定好了，但考生仍要把内容要点逐个完整地列出来。 ‎ ‎3. 选词造句，初步成文 ‎ 在体裁明确、信息全面、要点清晰的基础上，根据要点和重点词汇的句法功能、句子的语法规则，按照提示或说明中所提供的事实和情节发展的顺序遣词造句，然后将零散的句子组成主谓一致、时态呼应、脉络分明、合乎逻辑、内容完整的短文。‎ ‎【注意事项】‎ ‎1. 整理信息 ‎ 审读所给信息，弄清所要表达的内容，然后对所给信息进行整理，必要的时候可以对要点进行适当调整，以使文章行文连贯。切忌直接由提纲进行逐字逐句翻译。 ‎ ‎2. 完善信息 ‎ 提纲式书面表达一般都只给出只言片语的提示，而不是完整的表达。此时我们就必须在大脑中将各信息点补充完整，适时使用一些短语和句型以及各种从句。 ‎ ‎3. 适当发挥 ‎ 对于自己发挥的部分，虽然参考范文并不要求一样，但要紧扣主题、合情合理，切忌信马由缰，离题万里。‎ 提纲作文的解题思路 一、深挖题干，明确要求 提纲作文最基本的特征就是内容信息明确和写作要求具体。只有充分利用已给的信息，才有可能写出合格的作文。首先我们要从与内容相关的信息中提炼出具体要写的要点，这基本上决定了文章的主题和所要采用的体裁。题干中所给的其他要求则从规范方面对写作提出了要求。找出了要点、明确了要求，那么写作也就有了方向。‎ 二、分析要点，构建框架 从性质、重要性及关联度这几点出发，对提炼出的要点进行排序和重新整合，并在结合主题的情况下安排文章的大致脉络，也就是确定文章的段落，使要点在排列的次序上符合逻辑和人们的认知规律。要点的性质、重要性及关联度决定了哪些要点要放在一个段落中去呈现。对于英文写作，鉴于词数的限制，段落并不会太多，通常在一段和三段之间变化。对于三个段落的书面表达，首段通常为引入段；第二段一般为中心段落，需要呈现的要点基本上都集中在第二个段落；而第三段一般为结论段或总结段。‎ 三、要点齐全，量力表达 ‎1. 若要文章有一个基本的、稳定的得分，首先要做到的就是题干所要求的要点要齐全，并且要保证表达上没有明显的低级错误。这两点是最基本的要求。100多词的提纲作文，把要点用英语词汇和句式表达出来就能基本达到这个要求，所以并没有什么可怕的。‎ ‎2. 想要在分数上有所突破，就不能只是在要点齐全上做文章，还需要在原有要点的基础上进行题干要求之外但又在情理之中的发挥，也就是说增加一些细节信息；其次，还需要在表达上有所提升，也就是说采用一些比较高级的词汇和结构，比如特殊句型、非谓语结构等。当然，这些需要建立在考生对自己的表达能力比较有信心的基础上，跳过格式，注重风格。‎ ‎3. 英语书面表达常常和应用文结合起来，特别是书信和电子邮件。对于这些格式上有要求的文体而言，我们也不必过于担心，因为基本格式通常都已经给出来了。考生所需要做的仍然是把文章所要求的内容要点用正确且比较地道的英语呈现出来。‎ ‎4.‎ ‎ 内容/主题不同，所采用的文体一般也不同。而不同的文体都有着属于该文体的语言风格，比如，议论文的语言通常比较有说服力，说明文的语言比较讲究科学性和准确性。当然，语言风格属于较高层次的要求。但如果能很好地把握文章的语言风格，它自然会成为文章的一个亮点。否则，还是考虑比较稳妥的方式为好。‎ 应用文常用句型及习惯表达 ‎1. 书信开头 I was delighted/glad to receive your letter. 很高兴收到你的来信。 ‎ I have received your letter of June the 29th. 我收到了你于6月29日的来信。‎ How’s it going? 最近怎么样？ ‎ You asked me about(problem, question...), now let me give you some advice. 你在来信中询问我……，现在让我给你一些建议。 ‎ It has been a long time since we met. 我们很久没见面了。 ‎ How time flies! It’s three months since I saw you last time. 时间过得真快！我们有三个月没见面了。 ‎ I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. 我写信是为了感谢你对我在美国期间的帮助。 ‎ ‎2. 结尾 ‎ I am looking forward to receiving your letter. 我期待你的来信。 ‎ I am looking forward to your early reply. 我期待您早日回复。‎ Please write to me as soon as possible. 请尽快回信。 ‎ Good luck./ Wish you the best. 祝你好运！ ‎ With best wishes. 致以我诚挚的祝福。 ‎ Wish you sucess. 祝你成功。 ‎ Wish you a pleasant journey. 祝你旅途愉快。 ‎ Please remember me to your family. 请代我向你的家人问好。 ‎ I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier. 请尽快回信，我将不胜感激。 ‎ ‎【常用句式】‎ 一、书信类应用文常用句式 ‎ ‎1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking… 很高兴收到你的来信，询问……‎ ‎2. I am glad to hear that you will enter college and with my great pleasure I’ll give you some suggestions on…我很高兴得知你将进入大学，并且很荣幸能就……方面给你提一些建议。 ‎ ‎3. With regard to(matter, problem…) you mentioned in your letter, my suggestion is… 关于你 在信中提到的问题，我建议……‎ ‎4. Concerning your request, I would like to offer my advice on... 对于你的请求，我想就……提出我的建议。 ‎ ‎5. I have learned from the newspaper that your company wanted… I am very interested in this position. 从报纸上得知，贵公司需要一名……我对此职位很感兴趣。‎ ‎6. I’m writing to get some help about... 我给你写信是为了寻求……的帮助。 ‎ ‎7. I am writing to complain about... 我写信想抱怨…… ‎ ‎8. I hope you... 我希望你…… ‎ ‎9. (I’m)Looking forward to hearing from you. (我)期盼收到你的来信。 ‎ 二、观点对比类常用句式 ‎ ‎1. Some people believe... 一些人认为…… ‎ ‎2. From my point view/ I think... 依我看/我认为……‎ ‎3. They hold the view that… for…他们因……坚持他们的观点。‎ ‎4. The reason is…/why…is that………的原因是……‎ ‎5. As far as I’m concerned, I firmly support… 而言，我坚决支持……观点。‎ ‎6. No one can deny the fact that…没有人能够否定这一事实……‎ 三、地点介绍类常用句式 ‎ ‎1. Located in West China, the newly-built city… 这一个新建城市……，它坐落在中国西部。 ‎ ‎2. ...is a lively city with a long history, where you can see ancient and modern cultures together. ……是一个拥有悠久历史的充满活力的大都市，在那里古代文明和现代文化交织在一起。 ‎ ‎3. It’s a popular tourist attraction. There are many... 这是一个很受欢迎的旅游胜地，那儿有许多……‎ ‎4. It is the earliest/ largest...ever found in China. 人这是迄今为止在中国发现的最早的/最大的……‎ 题组一（2017年高考真题）‎ Writing 1(2017·新课标全国卷I)‎ ‎ 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：‎ ‎（1）时间和地点；‎ ‎（2）内容：学习唐诗；‎ ‎（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Writing 2(2017·新课标全国卷II)‎ 假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1.展览时间、地点；‎ ‎2.展览内容。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Writing 3(2017·新课标全国卷III)‎ 假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：‎ ‎1.球队活动；‎ ‎2.报名方式及截止日期。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Writing 4(2017·天津卷)‎ 假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。‎ ‎ （1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；‎ ‎（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；‎ ‎（3）希望她有机会重访天津。‎ 注意：‎ ‎ （1）词数不少于100；‎ ‎（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games Dear Mrs. Green,‎ I’m glad to hear from you. ___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Jin 题组二（2016年高考真题）‎ Writing 1(2016·新课标全国卷II)‎ 假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：‎ ‎ 1．主题：环境保护；‎ ‎ 2．展览时间；‎ ‎ 3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshowgmschool.com.‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1．词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Writing 2(2016·新课标全国卷 III)‎ 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括:‎ ‎1.表示歉意；‎ ‎2.说明原因；‎ ‎3.另约时间。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Writing 3(2016·天津卷)‎ 假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。‎ ‎(1)回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)；‎ ‎(2)谈谈收获或感想；‎ ‎(3)表达祝愿与期望。‎ 注意：‎ ‎(1)词数不少于100；‎ ‎(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear friends,‎ ‎ How time flies!____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Thank you.‎ Writing 4(2016·四川卷)‎ 某中学生英文报正举办＂The Season I Like Best＂的征文活动，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容应包括：‎ ‎ 1. 你最喜欢的季节；‎ ‎ 2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如：气候、景色、活动、感受……)。‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2. 题目已为你写好；‎ ‎ 3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；‎ ‎ 4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ 题组三（2017年名校模拟题）‎ Writing1(2017届安徽省皖南八校高三联考))‎ 假如你是学生会主席李华，为了让外国人了解中国传统文化，学生会将举行＂唐诗吟诵大赛＂(Tang Poetry Recitation Contest)，特邀请学校国际部学生参加。请你根据提示写一则通知。‎ 主要内容包括：‎ ‎1. 大赛目的和意义；‎ ‎2. 主办方：校学生会。时间：2017年4月30日。地点：校报告厅(Assembly Hall)；‎ ‎3. 范围：《唐诗三百首》 (Three Hundred Tang Poems)。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。‎ Notice Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture?‎ ‎                                                                 ___________________________________________________________                                            ‎ ‎                     ___________________________________________________________                                                                 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Student Union Writing 2(2017届广河北省沧州市第一中学高三月考 )‎ 学校将为高三学生举办一场英语沙龙。假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿，呼吁高三学生调节好学习和生活，保持良好的心态。‎ 内容要点：‎ ‎1. 描述周围同学现状：熬夜多，运动少，学习效率不高。‎ ‎2. 提出至少两条建议。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。‎ Good morning, everyone! ‎ It’s my honor to be here to make a short speech.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ That’s all. Thank you for listening!‎ Writing 3(2017届海南省海南中学高三模考)‎ 假如你是李华，你校学生会即将举行一次主题为＂我爱中国古典诗词＂的读书活动。你将代表全体学生，在启动仪式上发言。请你根据以下提示，用英文写一篇发言稿。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 说明活动的目的；‎ ‎2. 从中国古典诗词的特点的角度，陈述热爱它的理由；‎ ‎3. 对学习中国古典诗词的认识。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数：100左右；‎ ‎2. 开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：押韵 rhyme Good morning, everyone!‎ Welcome to our Reading Activity.‎ ‎                                                               ___________________________________________________________                                                                  ___________________________________________________________   ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ That’s all. Thank you.‎ Writing 4(2017届安徽省马鞍山二中、安师大附中高三阶段测试)‎ 在成长的过程中，我们总是对未来要从事的职业充满憧憬，你班将以＂My dream career＂为题举办演讲比赛。请你根据以下要求，写一篇英语演讲稿，要点如下：‎ ‎1. 你的理想职业；‎ ‎2. 你选择该职业的理由；‎ ‎3. 实现的途径。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 开头已给出，但不计入总词数；‎ ‎3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。‎ My dream career Good morning, everyone,‎ ‎                                                               ___________________________________________________________‎ ‎                                                                 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ Thank you for listening.‎ 题组一 ‎ ‎ Writing 1‎ Dear Leslie，‎ I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems. ‎ Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.‎ Best wishes.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua Writing 2‎ Dear Henry，‎ I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—papercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it. ‎ It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like. ‎ You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of papercuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting. ‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Regards, ‎ Li Hua 活动时间、地点；第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。‎ Writing 3‎ Dear Eric,‎ I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. It is known that we can benefit a lot from playing table tennis. It can prevent us from getting shortsighted and it can keep us physically healthy. As to the activities, we plan to invite experienced players to giving training to us every Friday afternoon. At the same time, we will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5:00pm after school. ‎ If you are interested, sign up on our school website before August 10.‎ I’m looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【试题分析】该篇书面表达是书信类文体，要求考生按照所给提示进行写作，可增加细节以使行文连贯。在写作本文时考生需注意以下几点：1. 确定文章的结构：书信的开头、正文和结尾。2. 确定文章的要点：写信的目的；表示感谢。3. 确定文章的布局。4. 确定文章的时态，在本文中根据要求判断应该用一般现在时和一般将来时。5. 正确使用较高级词汇和多种句式，如定语从句，状语从句，主语从句等。6. 准确使用一些恰当的连接成分以使语意更连贯。‎ Writing 4‎ Dear Mrs Green,‎ I'm so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. I'm very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well. ‎ I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin. ‎ I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again. ‎ Yours，‎ Li Jin 词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。‎ 题组二 ‎ ‎ Writing 1‎ Dear Peter,‎ Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshowgm.school.com.‎ Hope to hear from you soon.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】本文要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshowgmschool.com。在写作时，注意书信的格式以及过渡用语的正确使用；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，恰当使用一些复合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性。‎ Writing 2‎ Dear Bob,‎ I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.‎ Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Writing 3‎ ‎【构思框架】‎ ‎1. 细心审题，梳理要点 ‎ 本篇书面表达给出了写作要点，要求考生根据写作要点写一篇发言稿。由于写作要点很短，如果只对写作要点进行逐字翻译就会导致词数不够、内容不连贯等问题，因此我们需要细心审题，梳理要点信息。从题干内容可知，本文要求写一篇欢送词，欢送的对象是一批来自英国的高中生，主要围绕＂交流活动＂展开。欢送词还需要表达对对方的祝愿。‎ ‎2. 整合要点，构建框架 ‎ 根据要点提示，可以写成三段式的文章：(1)第一段对＂交流活动＂作简短的总结；(2)第二段为中心段，详细介绍通过这次活动，同学们的收获及自己的感想；(3)最后一段表达对对方的祝愿与自己的期望。注意人称以第一人称为主，时态主要采用现在完成时和一般现在时。‎ ‎3. 合理布局，完善细节 ‎ 文章开头部分语言应简洁，开门见山，直接点名主题，即＂交流活动＂的收获；第二部分对活动中具体的收获进行举例说明，如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面，需要考生结合自己的经验和感悟进行发挥；最后对即将要分别的客人表示祝福。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear friends, ‎ ‎ How time flies! Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program, which we all have benefited from.‎ ‎ During these two weeks, we have studied and lived together, which gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship. Doing sports as a team has enabled us to know each other better. Your art skills are excellent and admirable, which leaves me a deep impression. I think all our classmates have learned a lot from our communication and the various activities.‎ ‎ Now, on behalf of my schoolmates, I wish you a safe return. I also hope that there will be more events of this kind in the future.‎ ‎ Thank you.‎ Writing 4‎ ‎【试题分析】‎ 以＂我最喜欢的季节＂为题写一篇文章，属于提纲作文中的＂介绍事物＂类型。学生看似没写过、练过，但实则又有话可说。真正的难点在于对要点的分配和结构的把握：全文需要从陈述最喜欢的季节和给出理由两大方面进行构建，同时还要求在文章开头和结尾适当增加内容。 ‎ 审题时考生需要注意三点：1. 既然是为征文活动写的短文，那么最好增加标题(题干已给出)，注意和书信类的应用文有所区别。2. 如前所述，内容主体虽然只涉及两个大方面，但陈述两条理由的时候需要有层次地展开：既可以从客观事实和主观感受两方面来写，也可以从季节本身的自然属性和发生在季节中的人文活动入手，这是该作文要求中比较灵活的部分。3. 需要增加文章开头和结尾部分，以保证语篇的完整性和逻辑的通畅性，这是该作文要求中比较开放的部分。这三点，是难点，也是失分点。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ The Season I Like Best ‎ Each of us knows that there are four seasons a year. Different people like different seasons; my favourite season is spring. I love to smell the fragrance of flowers, see the new green trees and hear the singing of small birds. There are many busy butterflies and bees over the flowers. Sometimes it rains, but usually rains quietly. The rain moistens the trees and the flowers. And I can play outside, too! Whether we like riding bikes, jogging or going on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter. Of course, there are many other reasons to explain why I’m so excited about spring. Thank you, spring!‎ 题组三 ‎ Writing 1‎ Notice Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture? Here comes your opportunity: the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest. I’d like to share with you some details. As scheduled, the contest is to be held on April 30th, 2017. You are supposed to get prepared before the contest.  Above all, it’s recommended that you should read Three Hundred Tang Poems, and learn to appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese culture. Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible. If you want to attend, please come to the school Assembly Hall. Don’t miss the chance of being a winner, and some appealing prize is eagerly waiting for you.‎ Don’t hesitate to take part! I’m sure you will benefit a lot and your Chinese will gain much progress.‎ Student Union Writing 2‎ Good morning, everyone! ‎ It’s my honor to be here to make a short speech. Recently I here found that some of our classmates can’t study efficiently. Some can’t help falling asleep in class because they often study too late into the night. Others seldom have sports, which surely does harm to their health.‎ As we know, enough sleep is of great importance for us Senior 3 students. We can concern our mind in class with sufficient sleep, so we should try to make wise use of our time, striking a balance between work and leisure. Besides, doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot, such as keeping fit, reducing stress and so on. Let’s spare some time to do all kinds of sports. And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well.‎ That’s all. Thank you for listening!‎ Writing 3‎ Good morning, everyone!‎ Welcome to our Reading Activity. It is a great honor for me to be here to say something about our activity, the topic of which is ＂I Love Chinese Classical Poetry＂.‎ The activity is aimed at motivating us students to learn Chinese actively as well as passing on Chinese traditional culture.‎ Why I love it is that it has a certain rhyme and is written in simple language, making it easy to learn and recite. Besides, it usually conveys true emotions towards family, friends or the country, which can make us acquire various emotional experiences. In my opinion, reading classical poems can improve our writing skills. As we know, it is a treasure of Chinese culture. Only after we learn more Chinese classical poems will it deepen our understanding of our culture.‎ I hope the activity will be a great success and everyone can learn much from it.‎ That’s all. Thank you.‎ Writing 4‎ My dream career Good morning, everyone,‎ I feel honored to deliver a speech here sharing my dream with you. I hope to be a teacher in the future. The main reason is that I get a lot of positive energy from my English teacher, who promotes lifelong learning attitude. As a teacher, I’ll be motivated to keep updating what I have learned through lifelong learning so as to keep pace with young students, because they are always energetic and have new ideas. Besides, education plays an increasing important role in the development of society. Therefore, more qualified teachers are in great demand. What’s more, I’m out-going and enjoy communicating with others, which is definitely helpful in the teaching career.‎ To realize my dream, I will work hard to enter a good normal university to equip myself with relevant knowledge such as psychology, education theory and teaching skills. I believe I will be a good teacher through efforts.‎ Thank you for listening.‎ ‎ ‎