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2020-2021学年高三英语书面表达模板《邀请信》
2020-2021 学年高三英语书面表达模板《邀请信》 模板① Dear________, ________(开门见山地点、活动),It would be pleasant to have you here(表达邀请愿望). Will you give me the pleasure of your company(正式发出邀请)? During the party/conference, we will have a lots of activities you will be interested in (开始介绍活动内容). First, __________(介绍举行的活动一). Second, _________(介绍举行的活动二). I know/believe you be very interested in _________(引出受邀请人参加的理由). First/For one thing________(希望受邀人参加的理由一), Second/For another__________(希望受邀人参加的理由二)。 The party/conference would not be complete without you(总结受邀人参加的必要性). The party/conference will begin at ________(提出活动的地点). It is possible for us to meet at ________(提 出具体约定时间). We do hope you can come ________(再次发出邀请). Yours Li Hua 模板② Dear________, There will be a________(内容) at/in________(地点) on________(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at________________(具体时间). This will be followed by a________(进一步的安排). At ________________(时间), we will have ________________________(另一个安排). I really hope you can make it. RSVP before_________________________(通知你的最后期限). Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【写作注意事项】 a. 盛情邀请参加聚会、共度假期或游览某地等; b. 建立密切联系,加强感情交流; c. 拓展相关内容,激发他人兴趣。 【写作方法】 ① 首段:开门见山说明写作目的。 ② 主体: a. 具体交代邀请原因; b. 邀请内容:活动性质、时间、地点、日期; c. 有关要求和希望。 ③ 尾段: a. 再次盛情邀请; b. 希望尽快答复。 【写作流程图】 发出邀请 说明事由 说明活动的时间、地点、对象等 表达期待和感谢 邀请函写作必备词汇词组: 1. 邀请 invite/ invitation 2. 做演讲 make/deliver a speech 3. 评委 judge 4. 感激 appreciate (vi. )/ be grateful 5. 荣幸 honor (v./n.) 6. 欢迎 welcome (v./n./adj.) 7. 接受邀请 accept sb’s invitation 8.代表学校 on behalf of our school 9. 我想邀请你做... I’d like to invite you to... 10. 举办活动的目的是... The purpose of the activity is to 11. 活动的细节有... Here are some details about the activity... 12.如果……我将感到荣幸 It’s my honor if... 13.欢迎你参加 You are welcome to... 【篇首句】介绍自己,简要说明活动,并邀请对方。 1. I’m Wang Ming from YuWen School,the president of the Student Union. 我是来自育文学校的王明,学生会主席。 2. An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6. 我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在 8 月 6 号举行。学科&网 3. There will be a party in my garden on Sunday. 周日,在我的花园里会举行一场聚会。 4. I’d like to invite you to judge it. 我想邀请你做它的裁判。 5. I’m writing to invite you to... 我写信是邀请你…… 6. I wonder if you can come to... 我想知道你是否能来…… 7. We sincerely hope you can attend it. 我们真诚希望你能够参加。 8. It’s my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to... 我很荣幸的邀请你…… 9. It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come at 6:00 pm? 很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以,这周六,在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一个欢送会。下午六点你能来 吗? 【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容,并说明受邀人参加理由。 1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. 它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. 我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。 3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together. 下午,我们会一起…… 4. Remember to take water and lunch with you. 记得带上水和午餐。 5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club. 顺便说一下,你可以乘坐你家公寓前的 322 路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. 我知道你的母语是英语,还是一个英语老师。我,代表我们学校,真诚的邀请你来比赛现场。 7. Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. 既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。 8. I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。 【篇尾句】期待对方接受邀请,并期待对方尽快回复。 1. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience. 那期间你有空吗?请方便时尽快给我打电话 1234567。 2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation? 请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗? 3. We will feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来,我们会非常荣幸。 4. We are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着你的到来。 5. I am longing to see you soon.我期待着尽早见到你。 (2019.新课标Ш)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友 Allen 参加,内容包 括: 1.时间; 2.活动安排; 3.欢迎他表演节目。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文一】 Dear Allen, How’s everything going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the Music Festival, which will be held in the Art Center of our school . With the aim of enriching our campus life, the Music Festival will start from July 5 to July 7, lasting 3 days. In order to make us know more about Chinese traditional music, the performances will focus on some classical Chinese musical forms, such as folk songs, Beijing operas as well as playing some traditional instruments. As you can imagine, what great fun there will be. Would you like to come and enjoy the excitement with me? Please do some practice and get ready to play your favorite music at the festival. Looking forward to your early reply . Yours, Li Hua 【范文二】 I am writing to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school We can take part in the music festival in the school hall next Friday afternoon. In the music festival,we invite some famous singers and pianist to perform,who will also give some lessons to the students. In addition,some students can have a chance to cooperate with this musicians. As a music fan,you are bound to participate in the festival. If possible,you are we I come to perform in the festival,which will be a great experience. Hopefully,you can take part in it and don't miss the chance. 【解析】 这篇书面表达要求考生写邮件,告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。 【详解】 一审。审好文体,对格式;审好人称,不错位;审好时态,定主体。 二定。确定内容,不跑题。先说目的,再介绍,抓住时间、安排等细节,最后欢迎不要忘。 三列。根据提纲,列要点。 如:a music festival,in the school hall,The opening ceremony 等。 四连。要点串联,文流畅。合理使用关联词,过渡句,文章流畅很关键。 五美。连词成句,美成文。表达地道,要点齐全;行文流畅,过渡自然;书写工整,字体美观;美文润色, 必得高分。 (2018·天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友 Chris 就读于天津某国 际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于 7 月底在天津举行的世 界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。 (1)比赛的时间、地点; (2)邀请他的原因; (3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。 注意:(1)词数不少于 100; (2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; (3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇: 世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Jin 【思路点拨】 本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点:一、动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解 要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。内容要点包括:1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请;2. 介绍比赛的 时间、地点等安排;3. 说明邀请他的原因,包括 Chris 曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖;4. 告诉他训练计划将 发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态,对于本文来说,以一般将来时为主,上下文 意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章 显得更有档次。 【满分范文】 Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools. With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Jin (2017·新课标卷 II)假定你是李华,想邀请外教 Henry 一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。 请给他写封邮件,内容包括: 1.展览时间、地点; 2.展览内容。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】 题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实,任务要求符合学生能力水平, 自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸 paper•cutting)的内容,能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的同时,注 重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果,运用中国元素讲中国故事,增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活,学 生有话可说。考生成文时应注意:1. 结构采用三段成文:第一段自我介绍并引出话题;第二段具体交代活 动时间、地点;第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态:以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称:第 一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。 【范文赏析】 Dear Henry, I’m Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you’re interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms — paper•cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it. It’ll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9:00 am to 7:00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2:00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like. You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper•cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper•cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting. Looking forward to your early reply. Regards, Li Hua (2017·新课标卷 III)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友 Eric 写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括: 1.球队活动; 2.报名方式及截止日期。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Eric, I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. It is known that we can benefit a lot from playing table tennis. It can prevent us from getting shortsighted and it can keep us physically healthy. As to the activities, we plan to invite experienced players to giving training to us every Friday afternoon. At the same time, we will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5:00pm after school. If you are interested, sign up on our school website before August 10. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua (2016·新课标全国卷 II)假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影 展。请给你的英国朋友 Peter 写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括: 1.主题:环境保护; 2.展览时间; 3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com. 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】 本文要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友 Peter 写信,建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影 展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点:1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展,主 题为环境保护;2.展览时间 6 月 15 日,持续三周;3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣,也恰好有环保方面的图片, 希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。在写作时,注意书信的格式以及 过渡用语的正确使用;同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语,尤其注意不要出现中国式英语,恰当使用一些复 合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性。学@科网 【范文赏析】 Dear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua Writing1(2020 届河北省衡水某中学第一次模拟) 假定你是李华,你校将在寒假举办国际中学生冬令营,主题为"感受中国传统节日文化魅力"。请你根据 以下提示,给你校英国交换生 Jack 写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加冬令营。内容包括: 1.活动时间、地点; 2.活动内容:传统节日文化讲座,品尝中国传统美食。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】 这是一篇应用文,话题为邀请英国交换生 Jack 参加主题为"感受中国传统节日文化魅力"的国际中学生 冬令营。写邮件时应做到如下三点: 1.确定主体人称和时态:以第一人称和一般将来时为主。 2.运用"三段式"结构:首段点题,次段详细陈述具体细节和内容(扩展题目所给的两条提示),末段表达真诚 的愿望和邀请。 【范文】 Dear Jack, A winter camp will be held in our school for exchange students to experience the culture of traditional Chinese holidays. It is a golden chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture, so I’m writing to invite you to participate. The camp will begin in our school on February 6, lasting five days. A series of lectures on traditional culture will be given by famous experts who are from all walks of life. Students of various cultures can have a face-to-face talk with each other on the topic of Chinese culture. Besides, you will have the opportunity to taste various and delicious traditional Chinese dishes. Come and experience the real Chinese culture yourself! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【范文亮点】 范文审题准确,要点齐全,条理清晰,句式优美,是不可多得的佳作。本文的写作特色有: 1.文章首段开门见山,直接点题,次段对所给要点进行了合理的丰富,尾段所运用的祈使句更显邀请的诚意。 2.句式复杂多变。本文既有大量的简单句,又有并列句(如 so 连接的并列句)和复合句(如含有 who 引导的定 语从句的复合句),还有非谓语结构(如 to experience the culture of traditional Chinese holidays 作目的状语)等。 3.高级词汇和短语运用游刃有余。a golden chance, invite you to participate,A series of lectures,all walks of life,have a face-to-face talk 等短语的使用为本文增色不少。 3.写作时要注意把零散的要点用相对复杂的句式表达出来,提升语言表达力,并合理运用高级词汇和复杂结 构提升书面表达档次从而赢得高分。 Writing 2 假如你是新光中学学生会主席李华,你们校织了英语剧比赛。学校委托你邀请附近大学外教 King 先生来做 评委。请你写一封 100 字左右地邀请函。 内容需包含以下几点: 1. 举行英语剧的目的; 2. 比赛的时间,地点等; 3. 邀请外教当评委; 4. 联系人:李华(手机…) ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】 本题要求写一封邀请信。邀请 King 先生来做评委,要介绍英语剧比赛的目的、及举行时间地点等。介 绍情况合乎逻辑,最后用合适的语言提出邀请。 审题构思:邀请信,第一人称,一般现在时; 第一段:举行英语剧其目的和时间:于 3 月 15 日下午三点举行,为了提高大家的英语水平,让更多人 对英语感兴趣。比赛的时间; 第二段:邀请 King 当评委,介绍具体情况。 第三段:告知联系方式并希望能接受邀请。 【范文】 Dear Mr. King, I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Xinguang High School. Our school is close to your university. In order to make more students interested in English learning and culture, we organize an English drama competition, which will be held on March 15th. I am writing to invite you to be a judge at our English drama competition. It will start at 3:00 pm and last about two hours. Students from ten classes have got well prepared for this competition. We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. If you need to know any more about this competition, please contact me at 15813012345. It would be highly appreciated if you could come. I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 范文主题突出,结构严谨,逻辑性强,行文连贯。 突出主题句式: In order to make more students interested in English learning and culture, we organize an English drama competition, which will be held on March 15th.一句复合句介绍了英语剧的目的和举行时间。 I am writing to invite you to…邀请 King 先生; We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.希望接受邀请。 该范文还适当增加细节使得文章更加充实。 亮点词汇:have got well prepared for,be highly appreciated, look forward to... 高级句式:虚拟语气句式 It would be highly appreciated if you could come. I’m looking forward to your reply. Writing3 假如你是李华,你班的美国交换生 Tom 结束了在你校一年的学习,即将回国。你和同学打算于 12 月 30 日 下午在班上为他开一个欢送会(farewell party),特写信邀请他参加。要点包括: 1)感谢 Tom 的帮助; 2)欢送会的时间和地点; 3)对 Tom 的美好祝愿。 注意:1)词数 100 左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How time flies! It's one year since you came to study Chinese in our school.…… ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, 【写作指导】 本文是提纲类作文,要点已经给出。要把所提示的要点写全,语句通顺,上下文语义连贯,逻辑清楚。写 作时可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。同时要注意准确运用时态、语态;注意连接词的使用,适当合理运 用高级词汇和高级句子。 【范文】 Li Hua Dear Tom, How time flies! It’s one year since you came to study Chinese in our school. We’re all grateful for what you have done for us. In the past year, you have helped us a lot, without which we couldn’t have made great progress in English. In addition, during this year, we have learned lots of cultures about your country that cannot be found in the book. Before you leave, many classmates and I intend to hold a farewell party for you, hoping that you can remember the wonderful time we spent together. By the way, the party will be held in our classroom on the afternoon of December 30. May you have a pleasant journey home and welcome to China again. And we are looking forward to your coming. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本文是一篇书信,格式正确,采用三段式,语言简练,内容齐全,同时在句中使用高级句子。We’re all grateful for what you have done for us.介词后面用 what 引导的宾语从句;In the past year, you have helped us a lot, without which we couldn’t have made great progress in English.介词后面用 which 引导的定语从句;Before you leave, many classmates and I intend to hold a farewell party for you, hoping that you can remember the wonderful time we spent together.含有时间状语从句的复合句,主句部分用现在分词作伴随状语,并包含宾语从句和定 语从句;May you have a pleasant journey home and welcome to China again.这句特殊倒装句运用 Writing4 假定你是李华,你校将举办新年贺卡(New Year greeting cards)设计大赛。请你给留学 生朋友 Peter 写一封 邮件,邀请他参加本次比赛。 包括以下要点: 1)活动要求:手工制作,应包含图画和文字。 2)作品评奖:由学校美术老师担任评委,选出 30 件优秀作品。 3)作品提交截止时间—12 月 20 日前。 注意:1)词数 100 左右: 2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份给留学生朋友 Peter 写一封邮件,邀请他参加你校将举办新年 贺卡(New Year greeting cards)设计大赛。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)活动要求: 手工制作,应包含图画和文字。2)作品评奖:由学校美术老师担任评委,选出 30 件优秀作品。3)作品提 交截止时间—12 月 20 日前。写作时注意运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问 题。尽量用自己熟悉的句式,同时也要注意使用高举词汇和高级句型使得文章显得更有档次。 【范文】 Dear Peter, As New Year Day is approaching, our school is planning to hold a competition for designing New Year greeting cards. I think you may be interested in the activity so I am writing to offer you more information about it. It is required that all the works be made by hand, and it is better to include both drawing and greeting words on your card. The art teacher from our school will act as judges for the competition. They are responsible for picking out 30 excellent pieces from all the works. Since you are so good at drawing, chances are that you win the award in the event and can communicate with other competitors. And do remember that the deadline is December the 20th. All the best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语 句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:As New Year Day is approaching, our school is planning to hold a competition for designing New Year greeting cards.运用了时间状语从句;I think you may be interested in the activity so I am writing to offer you more information about it.运用了宾语从句和因果并 列句;It is required that all the works be made by hand, and it is better to include both drawing and greeting words on your card.运用了主语从句、虚拟语气和并列句;Since you are so good at drawing, chances are that you win the award in the event and can communicate with other competitors.运用了原因状语从句和表语从句;And do remember that the deadline is December the 20th. 运用了祈使句和宾语从句。 Writing 5 假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教 Susan 参加,要点包括: 1)时间:周五晚 8 点至 9 点; 2)地点:学生俱乐部 3)内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等; 4)要求:备小礼物。 注意:1)词数 100 左右,开头语已为你写好; 2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。(满分 30 分) Hi, Susan, We’ re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份邀请外教 Susan 参加同学为小明举办生日聚会,写作要点已经 给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1) 时间:周五晚 8 点到 9 点; 2)地点:学生俱乐部; 3)内容:生 日歌、蛋糕、游戏等;4)要求:准备小礼物。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系, 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使得文章显得更有档次。特别注意 在选择句式时要赋予变化。 【范文】 Hi Susan, We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday party. As scheduled, all the classmates in our class will gather at the Student’s Club at 8 p.m. this Friday evening to celebrate Xiaoming’s birthday. We would feel much honored if you could come and enjoy it, which is to finish at 9, lasting an hour. As the party starts, we will light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” for him. Then the birthday cake will be presented and cut for all of us to enjoy, following which we'll sing songs and play some small games. What’s more as a surprise, we’ll all prepare some secret birthday gifts for him, and it’ll be great to see how surprised he will be seeing the gifts. As it’s a surprise party, he will know nothing about it beforehand, and we do hope that you could manage to attend it. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本书面表达要点齐全,上下连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级 词汇和固定短语,提高文章档次,体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如:We would feel much honored if you could come and enjoy it, which is to finish at 9, lasting an hour.运用了条件状语从句和非限定性定语从句;As the party starts, we will light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” for him.运用了时间状语从句;Then the birthday cake will be presented and cut for all of us to enjoy, following which we'll sing songs and play some small games.运用了非限制性定语从句;As it’s a surprise party, he will know nothing about it beforehand, and we do hope that you could manage to attend it.运用了原因状语从句和宾语从句。 Writing 6 假定你是李华,在获悉 Perfect English 英文报社将举行国际中学生"中华传统文化"(Chinese traditional culture)征文比赛活动后,你想写信请你的美国朋友 Peter 参加.信的内容包括: 1)主题:中华传统文化知识; 2)活动时间:2017 年 7 月 1 日-31 日; 3)投稿邮箱: CTCcompetition@perfectenglish.com. 注意:1)词数 100 左右; 2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯. Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以以 Li Hua 的身份写信给美国朋友 Peter 写信,邀请他参加 Perfect English 英文报社举办的国际中学生“中华传统文化”征文比赛,:写作要点文章给出,内容包括:1) 主题:中华传统文化知识;2)活动时间: 2019 年 7 月 1 日-31 日;3)投稿邮箱:CTCcompetition@perfecteng Lish.com 考生要求有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给注意点都需要 包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题,尽量 使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型是文章显得更有档次。 【范文】 Dear Peter, The newspaper Perfect English is going to hold an International High School Student Competition, whose theme is Chinese traditional culture. It will last from July 1st to July 31st. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you are always interested in Chinese traditional culture, especially some festivals, like the Spring Festival and the Mid-autumn Festival. This is surely a good chance for you to deepen your understanding of them. If you want to join, you can send your article to CTC competition@perfectenglish.o don’t hesitate to contact me if you have any question. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式,让橘子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级词 汇和固定短语,提高文章的档次,体现了对英语的熟练驾驭能力。例如:The newspaper Perfect English is going to hold an International High School Student Competition, whose theme is Chinese traditional culture.运用了非限 制性定语从句;Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.运用了限制性定语从句;I know you are always interested in Chinese traditional culture, especially some festivals, like the Spring Festival and the Mid-autumn Festival. 运 用 了 宾 语 从 句 ; If you want to join, you can send your article to CTC competition@perfectenglish.o don’t hesitate to contact me if you have any question.运用了条件状语从句。 Writing 7 假定你是李华,高二(1)班的班长,你班打算在诗歌节期间邀请你校英语外教布莱克先生为同学们做 一次有关英语诗歌的讲座,请根据以下要点给他写一封邀请信: 1)自我介绍,提出邀请; 2)诗歌节时间(1 月 15 日—16 日); 3)建议诗歌讲座的内容; 4)表达感谢并期待回复。 注意:1)词数 100 左右; 2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以高二(1)班的班长李华的身份给校英语外教布莱克先生写一封邀请信, 为同学们做一次有关英语诗歌的讲座。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)自我介绍,提 出邀请;2)诗歌节时间(1 月 15 日—16 日);3)建议诗歌讲座的内容;4)表达感谢并期待回复。考生写 作时注意运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用 高级词汇和高级句型使得文章显得有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富于变化。 【范文】 I am Li Hua from Class 1, Senior 2. I’m monitor of our class. We would like to invite you to give a lecture about English poetry at the Poetry Festival. To help students appreciate and write poems well, our school is going to hold the festival from Jan. 15th to Jan. 16th. We hope your lecture will cover the creation and appreciate of English poetry and some differences between Chinese poetry and English poetry. I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation. We are looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的 句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了高级 词汇和固定短语,提高文章档次,体现了对英语的熟练驾驭能力。例如: To help students appreciate and write poems well, our school is going to hold the festival from Jan. 15th to Jan. 16th.运用了不定式做目的状语;We hope your lecture will cover the creation and appreciate of English poetry and some differences between Chinese poetry and English poetry. 运用了宾语从句;I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.运用了 I would appreciate it…固定句式。 Writing 8 假定你是李华,学校英语俱乐部负责人。俱乐部计划举行经典英文电影赏析会( Classical English Film Night), 请你给美籍外教 Liz 写一封电子邮件邀请她参加。内容包括: 1)赏析会时间、地点; 2)活动内容介绍; 3)邀请 Liz 并请她推荐电影。 注意:1)词数 100 左右; 2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份写一封电子邮件,邀请美籍外教 Liz 参加英语俱乐部计划举行 的经典英文电影赏析会。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1.赏析时间、地点;2.活动内容 介绍;3. 邀请 Liz 并请她推荐电影。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运 用时态,上下文连贯,符合逻辑关系,也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使得文章显得更有档次。特别注 意在选择句式时要富于变化。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使得文章具有一定的连贯性。 【范文】 Dear Liz, I’m Li Hua, chairman of the English Club. To arouse students’ interest in learning English, we are going to hold a great activity-Class English Film Night. The activity will take place in the conference hall of our school library at 7:00 pm next Friday. The club members will watch a classical English film together, which is to be selected. Then, they are expected to share their feelings and opinions on it. On behalf of our club, I sincerely hope you can join us recommend a film that you think is suitable for our activity. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练的使用了语句间的连接成 分,使得整个文章结构紧凑,很好的完成了写作任务。例如:The club members will watch a classical English film together, which is to be selected.运用了定语从句;On behalf of our club, I sincerely hope you can join us recommend a film that you think is suitable for our activity.运用了宾语从句和定语从句。 Writing9 假如你是李华,刚从英国学习回来,你的好友 Peter 在你学习期间为你提供了许多帮助。请你给他写一封 e-mail,感谢他对你的帮助(如帮你找寄宿家庭,带你参加各种活动等),并邀请他来中国。 注意:词数 100 左右,可合理添加细节;开头已写好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:寄宿家庭 host family Dear Peter, I came back from England last week.___________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份给好友 Peter 写一封 e-mail, 感谢他对你的帮助(入帮你找寄 宿家庭,带你参加各种活动等),并邀请他来中国。写作背景:你刚从英国学习回来。Peter 在你学习期间 为你提供了许多帮助。本题对于考生的综合能力要求高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的 能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文连贯,符合逻 辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使得文章显得更有档次。 【范文】 Dear Peter, I came back from England last week. Reflecting on the days I spent studying there, I can’t forget your generous help during my stay. I’ m grateful that you offered me your help when I was wondering how to find a host family. You also encouraged me to take part in various activities, which enabled me to make new friends and relax myself. But for your help, it would have been hard for me to fit into the environment. By the way, are you interested in paying a visit to China this summer? I’m pleased to take you on a tour of our places of interest and I’m sure you’ll have fun here. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高 级词汇和固定表达,提高文章档次,体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如:I’ m grateful that you offered me your help when I was wondering how to find a host family.运用了名词性从句和时间状语从句;You also encouraged me to take part in various activities, which enabled me to make new friends and relax myself.运用了非 限制性定语从句;But for your help, it would have been hard for me to fit into the environment.运用了虚拟语气; I’m pleased to take you on a tour of our places of interest and I’m sure you’ll have fun here.运用了并列句。查看更多