2011高考英语一轮复习 题型突破 书面表达4

2011高考英语一轮复习 题型突破 书面表达4

书面表达突破(四)‎ ‎——调查报告 原题再现 ‎　　最近我校对高一学生入学一个多月来的学习生活适应情况做了一个调查,情况如下。请你用英语表达下表的调查内容,并提出个人观点。‎ ‎60%左右的学生认为 ‎40%左右的学生认为 我的观点 ‎1.高中学习很有压力；‎ ‎2.科目难度大,课后作业多；‎ ‎3.没有时间参加锻炼等活动。‎ ‎1.适应并喜欢高中生活；‎ ‎2.课程更有趣,活动更丰富,受益匪浅。‎ ‎……‎ 要求：1.词数150左右；2.文章开头已给出,但不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：course 课程；benefit 对……有益；stressful有压力的 写作模板 学生习作 ‎　　Recently,a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has adapted to the life in senior high school.‎ As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About持有第一种观点的人数. The reasons are as follows. Firstly,第一种原因. Besides,第二种原因．‎ ‎ On the contrary, others say他们的观点. They say that持有这种观点的原因．‎ ‎ As far as I’m concerned, we should自己的想法. Only in this way美好前景预测．‎ ‎ ‎ ‎　　Recently,a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has adapted to the life in senior high school. ‎ As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 60% of the students hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, the subjects they are learning now are obviously more difficult. Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities.‎ ‎ On the contrary, others say they have adapted to the new life and have begun to enjoy it. They say that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful, which surely benefit them a lot.‎ ‎ As far as I’m concerned, we should balance our study and other activities and do everything efficiently. Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better.‎ 名师点评 ‎　　本文同样以三段论的形式进行写作的,文中用了简单句、并列句、同位语从句、定语从句、倒装句,句式丰富多样,结构复杂,恰当运用了较多高级句式,足显作者写作功底深厚；段与段之间巧妙运用了衔接语on the contrary,as far as I’m concerned 使过渡自然,整篇文章浑然一体；另外,文章中还运用了一些较高级词汇,如far from relaxing,balance等。所以该篇文章应属于一篇档次较高的优秀作文。‎ 仿写训练 今年寒假期间你就返乡农民工问题进行了一次社会调查。调查中发现因受国际金融危机的影响,农民工原来打工的工厂倒闭,致使25%的农民工失业。针对农民工的就业问题,政府采取了一系列的措施,如举办各种劳动力招聘会,鼓励返乡农民工自己创业,为年轻农民工提供免费技能培训等。请根据你的调查写一份调查报告,并谈谈你的看法。‎ 注意：1.词数150左右；‎ ‎2.文章的开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：economic slowdown经济危机；job fair招聘会 During the winter vacation,I conducted a survey about the returned offfarm workers.75% of the surveyed offfarm workers said they would return to the original work as scheduled,but____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ During the winter vacation,I conducted a survey about the returned offfarm workers.75% of the surveyed offfarm workers said they would return to the original work as scheduled,but 25% of them lost their jobs because their factories had been closed down owing to the global economic slowdown.But they were not alone struggling to survive the economic crisis.During my investigation,I found that the local government had done what they could to help the offfarm workers to be employed.All kinds of job fairs were held to help them to find jobs in the hometown.Some farmers were encouraged to engage in the agricultural development.Some were helped to set up their own business with the loan provided by the state.Young people were offered a chance to be trained free and learn a practical skill.I think the state has attached great importance to the life of the farmers,but we still face a lot of challenges and much remains to be done.However,with the government’s help and offfarm workers’ hard working I believe they can survive the global economic slowdown and live a better life.‎ 补偿练习1——阅读理解 Workers may feel comfortable handing in a sick note for flu or physical illness,but nearly half of workers reported not being happy to disclose a mental health condition at work,especially among manual (体力的) and skilled professions.‎ The survey of 1,000 workers by national charity the Shaw Trust found that 18.3% would not reveal a condition even to their HR department and only 17.9% would disclose details of an illness to a colleague.Of the respondents 34.5% said the reason they would not disclose a mental health condition was that they felt worried or ashamed they would be treated differently.This figure rose to 43.3% among 16 to 24yearolds.Besides,one in ten workers thought that disclosing a condition would reduce their chances of promotion.‎ Tim Cooper,managing director of the Shaw Trust,said,“The Office of National Statistics estimates that one in six people may suffer from a mental ill health condition at one time.Despite this,our research shows people are still unwilling to disclose such a condition,particularly in the ‎ current economic climate in which workers are concerned about showing any sign of weakness.We know,however,from our work people with mental health conditions are perfectly capable of managing a job and their conditions with the right support from their employers and therefore feel it is important that such misunderstanding is laid to rest.”‎ To solve the problem,businesses need to create an environment in which people not only feel confident enough to discuss a mental health condition with a line manager or members of the HR team but can also receive the support they need to continue making a valuable contribution.Additionally,to help businesses achieve this,the Shaw Trust has created a website offering advice and information.‎ ‎1．What’s the main topic discussed in the passage?‎ A．Workers tend to keep silent on mental health conditions.‎ B．A large number of people suffer from mental health problems.‎ C．Workers pay more attention to physical health than mental health.‎ D．Workers disclose their mental health conditions in different ways.‎ 答案　A 解析　综合概括题。这篇文章讨论的问题是员工们对自己的精神健康状况保持沉默。‎ ‎2．Workers aren’t willing to disclose their mental health conditions mainly because________.‎ A．they think it’s their entire privacy B．they will be dismissed if doing so C．they are afraid it will influence their work D．they will have no opportunity to get promoted 答案　C 解析　细节理解题。从第二段的内容可得出他们不愿透露自己健康状况的主要原因是C 项。‎ ‎3．The underlined phrase “laid to rest” in the third paragraph roughly means________.‎ A．strengthened B．understood C．neglected D．removed 答案　D 解析　词义猜测题。根据上文misunderstanding,可知lay to rest是消除误解的意思,所 以是remove(去除)。其他三个词都不符合。‎ ‎4．We can learn from what Tim Cooper said that________.‎ A．people disclosing mental health conditions can do work perfectly B．employers’ support contributes to workers’ performances C．the current economy is developing well D．workers should ask doctors for professional advice 答案　B 解析　推理判断题。从Tim Cooper的说话内容可以推断出选B项。‎ 补偿练习2——书面表达 ‎(2009·南通二次调研)‎ ‎90后的学生,思想特殊、行为方式和价值观令人担忧。请你根据下表中所提供信息以“Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”为主题写一篇英语演讲稿,以消除人们的忧虑。‎ ‎90后的境遇 面临更多的升学和就业烦恼,所处环境竞争更加激烈。‎ 人们的忧虑 ‎1.注重自我,轻视合作……‎ ‎2.缺乏毅力,容易气馁……‎ ‎3.盲目追求,渴望成名……‎ 我们的长处 敢于挑战……‎ Good afternoon,everyone!‎ The topic of my speech today is“Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”．‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Thank you for your listening!‎ 参考范文 Good afternoon,everyone!‎ The topic of my speech today is“Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”．‎ Living in an environment full of fiercer competition,we,a generation born in the 90s,are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.Under these circumstances,‎ we are developing our special manners and values,which has raised people’s concern.‎ They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others,which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do.Besides,they consider us as lacking in determination,and this is what it takes to do any job well.Without it,we may easily give up in time of difficulty.They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly,which will in turn ruin our values and future.‎ However,we,a generation born in the 90s,have our own advantages despite some weaknesses.Firstly,we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks,which helps realize our dreams.In addition,we are quickminded and creative.We can do our work more efficiently.Yet,we still need to learn more from those experienced.Please do trust us!‎ Thank you for your listening！‎