2018届二轮复习短文改错解题详细探索课件（49张）

2018届二轮复习短文改错解题详细探索课件（49张）

2018 届二轮复习 Cutting Corners In Proof Reading 短文改错解题点击 Today’s advice( 今日忠告） Actively pursue the good in all the particulars of your daily life. 积极追求日常生活中所有细节中好的东西。 Everyday English ( 每日英语） Error is the neighbor of the truth, so it has deceived us. 错误是真理的邻居，因此它欺骗了我们。 Pop Quiz （突击小检测） Find out the errors in the following sentences and then correct them. 1. Make your actions to match your good intentions. 2. The worst excuse is “ I did it because everyone did .” 3. Everyone has unhappy experience throughout life. 4. Talk about your own mistakes before criticize those of the other person. 5. Your eyes are the windows of her soul. 6. One who cannot tolerate small ills can never accomplish great thing. 7. The pencil always lasts long than the eraser. 8. Busy people does not have the time to feel old. 短文改错主要考查 1. 识别错误并准确校正错误的能力； 2. 综合运用英语知识的能力； 3. 准确理解语篇、掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力。 改错处的设置 试题采用 118 的方式，即：多了一词，少了一词，八处错误。 短文改错的考点分布如下 1 词法错误 动词：主要考查主谓一致、时态、语态、非谓语动词、情态动词、系动词等。 冠词：主要考查定冠词、不定冠词和零冠词。 介词：主要考查介词的习惯搭配（比如与名词搭配、与动词搭配。尤其是与形容词的搭配等。 名词：主要考查其可数性或单复的使用。 形容词：主要考查比较等级、搭配、修饰、用法区别等。 副词： 主要考查副词修饰其他词的正确性，有时也考查搭配与行文逻辑方面的问题等。 代词：主要考查前后指代的一致性以及某些习惯用法等。 并列连词：主要考查行文逻辑。 各类从句引导词：主要考查各类从句的引导词的正确使用。 2. 句法错误 从句法上考查简单句、复合句的否定、疑问、倒装、省略等。 3. 行文逻辑错误 考查人物的性别、时间先后、肯定及否定、因果、并列与转折、递进关系等。 改错 10 字要诀 完整 一致 多少 词法 逻辑 完整 一个句子不可没有主语和谓语，缺少其中任何一个句子便不完整。 判断一个句子的正误，首先就要看该句是否缺主语或多了主语以及有没有谓语或多一个谓语动词。 1. Every kind of Chinese food is worth trying, because each has a delicious food and good for health. （ 09 重庆卷） （ good 前加 is, be good for “对。。。有好处”， 缺谓语。） 2. People fight with fire usually end up with ashes. ( 在 People 后加 who 。定语从句中缺主语。） 3. All of the students, boys and girls, they go in for sports. ( 多了主语，应去掉 they 。） 4. He wrote to her, said, “ I’ll love you forever.” （ 多了谓语，应去掉 said 或将 said 改为 saying 。） 一致 主要是指： 谓语动词与主语的人称和数一致；代词的一致；谓语动词在时态、语态及语气方面的一致。 5. To ignore the facts do not change the facts. (do 改为 does 。动词不定式短语作主语。） 6. Stop thinking about things that worries you. （ worries 改为 worry 。先行词 things 是复数，定语从句的谓语与先行词一致。） 7. Where to go and when to set off has not been announced. （ has 改为 have 。 谓语动词与主语的数不一致。） 7. When and where to build a new factory have not decided. （ have 改为 is 。除了语态错误之外还要注意谓语动词与主语的数一致。） 8. Every means have been tried to settle the problem. （ have 改为 has 。 Means 方法，单复同形，在此是单数，错在谓语动词与主语不一致了。） 9. The teacher, as well as a number of students, were asked to attend the party. （ were 改为 was 。主语是 The teacher 。） 10. Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. （ 2012 全国卷 II ） （ we 改为 they 。指代不一致。） 主要是指： 多或少了主语、谓语； 多了不定式小品词 to; 多或少了冠词、介词、副词等。 多少 Letting children to grow and raising them are two different things. （ 去掉 to 。） 11. 12.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.(2015 全国新课标 I 卷） （ 在 countryside 前加 the 。） 13. He entered into the classroom, book in hand. ( 去掉 into 。） 14. Honest labor needs no a master. （ 去掉 a 。） 词法 主要指： 容易混淆的词：（如动词、介词等。） 词性：（句中所充当的成分； -ly 结尾的形容词和无 -ly 结尾的形容词。） 名词：可数名词和不可数名词；名词的单复数；名词所有格。 代词： 人称代词的主格和宾格；形容词性的物主代词和名词性的物主代词；反身代词。 关系代词、副词的误用。 先行词。 比较结构方面。 固定搭配。 15. There are five enemies of peace: greed, ambition, envy, anger and proud. （ proud 改为 pride 。） 16. A good feeling gets well when it is shared. （ well 改为 better 。） 17.Make important decision when you are in a good mood. （ decision 改为 decisions 。） 18. The best classroom in the world is at the foot of an elderly person. （ foot 改为 feet 。） 19. Be willing to resist anything which takes you off your chosen path. （ which 改为 that 。） 20. Spend your energy create the life you desire. （ create 改为 creating 。） 21. Since we expect more from friends, it costs us longer to forgive them. （ costs 改为 takes 。 ） 22. It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. （ 2015 四川卷） （ many 改为 much 。 指的是花费很多钱。） 23.From then on, we’ve kept touch with each other through e-mails. （ 2010 全国 II 卷） (touch 前加 in 。 keep in touch with 是固定短语，表“与。。。保持联系”。） 24. That is which other teachers say. （ 2013 辽宁卷） ( which 改为 what 。 What 在表语从句中作 say 的宾语。） 逻辑 考查人物的性别、时间先后、肯定及否定、因果、并列与转折、递进关系等。 25.I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. （ 2015 四川卷） ( so 改为 but 。“我不想再去，但我怕失去他们的友谊。”两个分句有转折关系。） 26. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it. （ 2015 浙江卷） （ If 改为 Although/ Though 。“尽管我在那教室学习的时候还只是一个小孩，但我永远不会忘记它。表达让步。） 27. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. （ 2013 四川卷） （ so 改为 or 。前后分句有明显的转折关系，故换成表转折的“否则”。） 28. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. （ 2014 浙江卷） (but 改为 and 。那个乘客是因为找不到票了而感到沮丧，顺接，没有转折的含义。 Summing up （小结） 短文改错有妙计 完整一致看仔细 词法侧重冠名动 形副互换要留意 分词出现多琢磨 主动被动加语气 全文一处多一词 一处少词关介词 时态人称要统一 连词用法重逻辑 Practice Show errors in 2015 NMET and identify the kinds of them. When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.