【英语】2019届二轮复习短文改错10篇训练之十二（9页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习短文改错10篇训练之十二（9页word版）

‎2019届二轮复习短文改错10篇训练之十二 ‎[一]‎ Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.‎ 参考答案：‎ 小题1:all 改成both小题2:method.改成methods 小题3:listen改成listening小题4:miss改成misses 小题5:But 改成So小题6:the改成a小题7:attentive改成 attentively 小题8:said 改成says小题9:Because后面加of小题10:去掉is ‎【解析】‎ 文章介绍李明和王莹的不同的学习方法和不同的学习效果。 ‎ 小题1:主语是Li Ming and Wang Ying两个人用both ‎ 小题2:他们有不同的学习方法。 Method是可数名词，different后面接名词复数：methods ‎ 小题3:李明上课经常睡觉而不是听老师教课。Instead of后面接listening ‎ 小题4:结果，他错过了很多老师讲的重点。主语是he，谓语是第三人称单数： misses ‎ 小题5:前面说李明上课经常不听，所以要熬夜。是因果关系： But 改成So ‎ 小题6:王莹有个不同的学习方法。A different way of learning，泛指“一种不同的学习方法”：the改成a ‎ 小题7:attentive是形容词，一般修饰名词，修饰动词listen应该用副词 attentively ‎ 小题8:她上课努力听懂老师说的内容，用一般现在时：said 改成says ‎ 小题9: Because是连词，后面接从句，because of后面接名词，代词或动名词 ‎ 小题10:句型：make it possible to do sth it做形式宾语，不定式是真正的宾语，is是多余的.‎ ‎[二]‎ I can well remember an incident that happened on a rain Sunday afternoon. I was waiting for the green lights that a girl of about ten was knocked down by a pass car. The car then drives off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid, but I joined in without any hesitation. Luckily she was not bad injured and we sent her to the near hospital. ‎ I am proud of what I did for the girl. As member of the society, I am aware of that being responsible is what it takes to make a better community.‎ 参考答案：‎ I can well remember an incident that happened on a rain Sunday afternoon. I was waiting for ‎ rainy the green lights that a girl of about ten was knocked down by a pass car. The car then drives off ‎ ‎ when passing drove ‎ quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid, but I joined in without any ‎ ‎ her and hesitation. Luckily she was not bad injured and we sent her to the near hospital. ‎ ‎ badly nearest (nearby)‎ I am proud of what I did for the girl. As member of the society, I am aware of that being ‎ ‎ a ‎ responsible is what it takes to make a better society. ‎ ‎[三]‎ Dear John，‎ I am sorry to know that you feel unhappy in a new class. One of the reasons is that you have just left your home and arrived in a new country that everything is unfamiliar to you. You haven't had enough time to get used to all the surrounded things and you feel a little anxiously about the life ahead of you. I believe you will get over these difficulty. To start with, spending some time learning about Chinese culture. Besides this you can also try your best to learn Chinese so when you can be easily understood by our classmates. I hope you can adaptable to your new life at no time.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 参考答案：‎ Dear John，‎ I am sorry to know that you feel unhappy in a new class. One of the reasons is that ‎ the you have just left your home and arrived in a new country everything is unfamiliar to you. You haven't had enough time to get used to all the things and you feel a little about the life ahead of you. I believe you will get over these . To start with, some time learning about Chinese culture. Besides this you can also try your best to learn Chinese so you can be easily understood by classmates. I hope you can adaptable to your new life at no time.‎ ‎ in Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[四]‎ Dear Brown，‎ Last summer I take a parttime job in the International Camp for children. I have been told one more worker will needed this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place！We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents，that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day，so they will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it，reply to me soon.‎ 参考答案：‎ Dear Brown，‎ Last summer I a parttime job in the International Camp for children. I have been told one more worker will (加be ) needed this year and I think you are fit it. How about us？The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is a beautiful place！We can hear birds singing all around. Everybody sleeps in tents， is very exciting. We usually work only five ‎ hours a day，so they （we） will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have in it，reply to me soon.‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎[五]‎ As the saying go, chances favor the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.‎ I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practised playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.‎ From this, I am firmly convincing that, no matter when chances arrive, we were able to seize them as long as we get well prepared.‎ 参考答案：‎ As the saying go, chances favor the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience. goes experiences ‎ I was not chosen as∧member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to a give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness ‎ ‎ playing and and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practised playing volleyball on every ‎ ‎ that day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected ‎ ‎ fully ‎ and became an important player on our school team. ‎ From this, I am firmly convincing that, no matter when chances arrive, we were able to seize them convinced are as long as we get well prepared. ‎ ‎[六]‎ When I intended to tell my four-year-old niece Lisa the story Snow White write by the Grimm Brothers, my elder sister stopped me immediate and gave me another storybook. When I asked if she has told Lisa the story, she shook her head and said, “I don’t think girl today should listen to this story.” I was confusing. Later, my sister explained how. In this story, Snow White does nothing to rescue herself. Instead of, she depends on others’ help. My sister doesn’t want her daughter to learn just to turn to others help. She wants her to learn to be brave and independence. That’s why my sister doesn’t want to tell herself such stories as Snow White.‎ 参考答案：‎ When I intended to tell my four-year-old niece Lisa the story Snow White  by the Grimm Brothers, my elder sister stopped me  and gave me another storybook. When I asked if she  told Lisa the story, she shook her head and said, “ I don’t think  today should listen to this story.” I was . Later, my sister explained . In this story, Snow White does nothing to rescue herself. Instead of, she depends on others’ help. My sister doesn’t want her daughter to ‎ learn just to turn to others help. She wants her to learn to be brave and . That’s why my sister doesn’t want to tell such stories as Snow White.‎ ‎[七]‎ Yesterday, our class won a basketball match against Class 3, but it isn’t easy.‎ ‎ A match started at 4:00 pm. At first, we confident that we would win because we had two strong player from the school team while they had none. But we were so relaxing that they soon got many points than us.‎ ‎ We became anxiously. Many times, our players rushed near the basket but didn’t pass the ball enough. Each time, we were stopped after we could shoot. Then we began to have teamwork. We passed to the ball a lot until finally we got more points and won.‎ ‎ Teamwork are key to success.‎ 参考答案：‎ Yesterday, our class won a basketball match against Class 8, but it   easy.  match started at 4:00 pm. At first, we  confident that we would win because we had two strong   from the school team while they and none. But we were so   that they soon got   pointes than us.‎ We became  . Many times, our players rushed near the basket but didn’t pass the ball enough. Each time, we were stopped   we could shoot. Then we began to have teamwork. We passed to the ball a lot until finally we got more points and won.‎ Teamwork   key to success.‎ ‎[八]‎ I had an amused experience last year. After I have left a small village in the south of France, I drove on to next town. On the way, a young man waved to me. I stopped but he asked me for a lift. As soon as he had got into the car, I said good morning to him with French and he replied in the same language. Apart from a few word, I do not know any French at all. None of us spoke during the journey. I had nearly reached the town, when the young man sudden said, very slowly, “Are you speak English?” As I was learnt soon, he was English himself!‎ 参考答案：‎ I had an amusing experience last year. After I had left a small village in the south of France, I drove on to （加the） next town. On the way, a young man waved to me. I stopped and he asked me for a lift. As soon as he had got into the car, I said good morning to him in French and he replied in the same language. Apart from a few words, I do not know any French at all. Neither of us spoke during the journey. I had nearly reached the town, when the young man suddenly said, very slowly, “Do you speak English?”As I （去掉was） learnt soon, he was English himself！‎ ‎[九]‎ Dear peter,‎ I’m writing to tell you something about e-hongbao, that is very popular in China.‎ E-hongbao is actual a kind of lucky money from and to relatives and friends during festivals or in special occasions. For many young people, grabbing e-hongbao on our mobile phones is a fairly exciting activity. Unlike the tradition of elders give lucky money to children, over half of the people sending e-hongbao is in their 20s. It’s just for fun but giving best wishes, while the sum of money matters a little. In a word, e-hongbao is bringing new color to the old tradition.‎ Now I’m concerned about the safe of online payment, and rules and regulations need to improved to guarantee its operation.‎ Best wishes.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 参考答案：‎ Dear peter,‎ ‎ I’m writing to tell you something about e-hongbao, that is very popular in China.‎ ‎ which E-hongbao is actual a kind of lucky money from and to relatives and friends during ‎ ‎ actually festivals or in special occasions. For many young people, grabbing e-hongbao on our ‎ ‎ on their mobile phones is a fairly exciting activity. Unlike the tradition of elders give lucky ‎ ‎ giving money to children, over half of the people sending e-hongbao is in their 20s. It’s just ‎ ‎ are for fun but giving best wishes, while the sum of money matters a little. In a word, ‎ ‎ or ‎ e-hongbao is bringing new color to the old tradition.‎ Now I’m concerned about the safe of online payment, and rules and regulations ‎ ‎ Safety need to∧ improved to guarantee its operation.‎ ‎ be Best wishes.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎[十]‎ Dear Laura,‎ Thanks for letting us staying at your seaside house. Now you might heard from your neighbors about which happened on Saturday evening. When I was out a walk, my younger son, Tom, play the football before your house. He made so much noise that he neighbors got quite angrily. Even worse, Tome broke one of the window of Mr. Wilson’s house. Tom and I apologized to all the neighbors for the unhappy happenings, but promised to have the broken window repair soon. Tom said that we ‎ would not do such silly things any more. I am glad that your neighbors had forgiven us. They are really nice people.‎ 参考答案：‎ Dear Laura,‎ ‎ Thanks for letting us staying at your seaside house. Now you might heard from your ‎ ‎ stay neighbors about which happened on Saturday evening. When I was outa walk, my younger son, ‎ ‎ what for Tom, play the football before your house. He made so much noise that he neighbors got quite ‎ ‎ ‎ angrily. Even worse, Tome broke one of the window of Mr. Wilson’s house. Tom and I apologized ‎ angry windows to all the neighbors for the unhappy happenings, but promised to have the broken window repair ‎ ‎ and repaired[]‎ soon. Tom said that we would not do such silly things any more. I am glad that your neighbors had ‎ ‎ he have forgiven us. They are really nice people.‎