【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达技法指导五高级的词汇，复杂的句式（6页）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达技法指导五高级的词汇，复杂的句式（6页）

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达技法指导五高级的词汇，复杂的句式 ‎[技法综述]‎ 写作时，“高级词汇与复杂句式”如能运用贴切且自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处，也会为你的作文增添色彩。‎ ‎1. 使用高级词汇 ‎(1)标新立异 写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。但是需注意：既要避免使用俗词，又要避开生僻词汇。‎ We have too much homework to do at the weekend.‎ ‎→We have endless homework to do at the weekend.‎ In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult.‎ ‎→ In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.‎ He didn't listen to what I said in the class.‎ ‎→ He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.‎ ‎(2)短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。‎ Developing a good habit is also important.‎ ‎→ Developing a good habit is also of importance.‎ What's more, we can pour out the troubles we face, and release our pressure from different aspects.‎ ‎→What's more, we can pour out the troubles we are faced with, and release our pressure from different aspects.‎ As the number of English learners is increasing, it's not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. ‎ ‎→ As the number of English learners is on the rise, it's not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. ‎ ‎2. 使用复杂句式 ‎(1)复合句 复合句包括定语从句、名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句)和状语从句。‎ A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent ‎ sailor.(定语从句)‎ What impressed me most was that they had had professional training. (主语从句和表语从句)‎ I am wondering whether you can pick him up at the airport.(宾语从句)‎ I hold the opinion that we should go to help them overcome the present difficulty.(同位语从句)‎ As long as you keep on trying, you will surely succeed.(状语从句)‎ ‎(2)非谓语动词与with复合结构 非谓语动词包括不定式、动名词和分词(现在分词和过去分词)，特别是with复合结构的应用更是写作中的一大亮点。‎ Many questions have to be settled and much remains to be done in our educational work.‎ Touched by the teacher's words，we decided to work hard.‎ Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.‎ With the society developing rapidly, it's necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.‎ ‎(3)特殊句式及其他 It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English.(强调句型)‎ Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.(倒装句)‎ Although faced with many problems, they didn't lose heart.(省略句)‎ It is high time that both children and parents took action to make small changes.(虚拟语气)‎ What a good time we had with the peasants that day！(感叹句)‎ There is no need to worry about it as the government is now making every effort to provide more jobs.(there be句式)‎ ‎[阅卷现场]‎ ‎　　(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华，‎ 正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：‎ ‎1.时间和地点；‎ ‎2.内容：学习唐诗；‎ ‎3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 考生作文 Dear Leslie，‎ I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems. I'm writing to tell you the plan for the next class.‎ To start with, I want to stress that we are to start our next lesson in Classroom 8 of the Teaching building at 10 a．m. next Friday. Besides, in order to learn more about Chinese culture, it's very important to be aware of the content, Tang Poetry.‎ I don't doubt that you should know about the history of Tang Dynasty in advance. I think it will make the class go smoothly. ‎ I hope to receive your early reply. ‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 点评与优化 ‎[名师点评]‎ 本文的词数符合要求，但是由于缺少高级的表达而影响了文章的档次。‎ ‎1. 本文在高级词汇方面使用较少，例如glad可升级为delighted，tell可升级为inform ...of ...‎ want可升级为intend，should可升级为be supposed to等。‎ ‎2. 句式上也可以升级，例如第二段第一句可以用主语从句和表语从句来表达，第三段可以用一个含有定语从句的复合句来表达。‎ ‎3. 另外，非谓语动词以及there be句式的合理使用可以提升文章的档次。‎ ‎[尝试优化]‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 作文提升 Dear Leslie，‎ I am very delighted to know you have a taste for Tang poems. I'm writing to inform you of the plan for the next class.‎ To start with, what I intend to stress is that we are to start our next lesson in Classroom 8 of the Teaching building at 10 a．m. next Friday. What's more, in order to have a more knowledge of Chinese culture, it's of great importance to be aware of the content, Tang Poetry.‎ There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the history of Tang Dynasty in advance, which I think will make the class go smoothly.‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎ [随堂训练]‎ Ⅰ.请按要求完成词汇和句式的升级 ‎1．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.(用高级词汇替代黑体词)‎ ‎→The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more challenging courses.‎ ‎2．I met one of my classmates on my way to school yesterday.(用短语替代黑体词)‎ ‎→I came across one of my classmates on my way to school yesterday. ‎ ‎3．During holiday seasons, I will live in the countryside. There air is fresh and people are friendly.(用定语从句合并句子)‎ ‎→During holiday seasons, I will live in the countryside, where air is fresh and people are friendly.‎ ‎4．After most of the problems had been solved, I felt a great weight taken off my mind.(用with复合结构改写句子)‎ ‎→With most of the problems solved, I felt a great weight taken off my mind.‎ ‎5．Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us, which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.(用强调句型改写句子)‎ ‎→It's our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us, which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward. ‎ ‎6．The local government didn't realize the problem until the river was seriously polluted.(用倒装句改写句子)‎ ‎→Not until the river was seriously polluted did the local government realize the problem.‎ Ⅱ.书面表达(推荐信)‎ ‎(2017·郑州市第一次质量预测)假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David寒假期间想来你所在的城市学习汉语，让你帮他选择培训学校。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件，推荐一所理想的培训学校，并告知他学习时间、课程内容、食宿、交通及学费等情况。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear David，‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear David，‎ You're welcome to our city to learn Chinese during the winter vacation. I'm happy to recommend a nice training school to you.‎ The 21st Century Chinese Training School is wellknown for providing training for foreign learners of Chinese. It lies in downtown Zhengzhou, where many buses are available. It offers a series of training courses during the winter vacation either from January 10 to January 25 or from February 10 to February 25.You can learn standard Chinese and something about Chinese culture and local customs as well. The school provides free board and lodging, but the training fee is 5，000 yuan for a period. ‎ Is it suitable for you?‎ I'm looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎