专题63 书面表达申请信-高考全攻略之备战2018年高考英语考点一遍过

专题63 书面表达申请信-高考全攻略之备战2018年高考英语考点一遍过

考点63 书面表达申请信 高考频度：★★★★★‎ ‎【写作方法】 ‎ ‎1. 首段：‎ a. 自我介绍；‎ b. 申请原因；‎ c. 说明写信目的。‎ ‎2.主体：‎ a. 详述有关背景资料：资历、教育经历、工作经历、兴趣爱好；‎ b. 询问有关学校、课程等具体内容。‎ ‎3.尾段：‎ a. 强调上述材料的重要性；‎ b. 希望尽快得到答复；‎ c. 要求手册及申请表；‎ d. 表示感谢。‎ ‎【写作流程图】‎ 说明写信目的 介绍自我(包括：学历、工作简历、在学校或工作单位的表现)‎ 说明申请该职位或学校的原因 恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复 第一部分：说明写信的目的 套语：‎ ‎(1) 兹申请刊登在……上的……工作。‎ ‎ I am writing to apply for the post of … advertised in …‎ ‎(2) 见……上刊登的贵公司广告，我谨申请应聘贵公司的……职务。‎ ‎ In reply to your advertisement in …, I beg to apply for the post of … in your company.‎ ‎(3) 看到贵公司在报上招聘……的广告，我马上感到这正是我这段时间所要寻找的工作，并且我能胜任。‎ ‎ Immediately I saw your advertisement in the paper for …I felt it was just the kind of post for which I have the qualifications and for which I have been looking for some time.‎ ‎(4) 我想申请入贵校学习。‎ ‎ I would like to apply for admission to your college.‎ ‎(5) 我想在贵校……系继续深造。‎ ‎ I would like to further my studies in …Department of your university.‎ 第二部分：介绍详情 套语：‎ ‎(1) 我的专业是……，我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。‎ ‎ My major is…, and I understand your university has a good program in this field.‎ ‎(2) ……年，我出生于……，毕业于……大学……专业。毕业后一直在……工作，因此积累了该领域丰富的经验。‎ ‎ Born in …in…, I graduated from…University majoring in …I have been working in …since my graduation, and I have therefore attained rich experience in this field.‎ ‎(3) 毕业后，我先担任……，随后担任……，现任职于……‎ Upon graduation, I first worked as … The following job was …and currently I am working for/in …‎ ‎(4) 我现在就读于北京第二外国语学院英语专业，即将毕业。‎ ‎ I am now studying at Beijing Second Foreign Language Institute and will soon be graduated as an English major.‎ 第三部分：说明申请该职位或学校的原因 套语：‎ ‎(1) 贵公司目前做的这种工作特别使我感兴趣。‎ ‎ The kind of work in which your company is engaged particularly interests me.‎ ‎(2) 我认为我具备了报上刊登的贵公司……一职所要求的必要条件和经验。‎ ‎ I feel I have the necessary qualifications and experience needed for the position ‎ of …advertised in the newspaper.‎ ‎(3) 受我所学课程的影响，我对饭店、酒店管理产生了浓厚的兴趣。‎ ‎ Under the influence of the courses I have taken, I have developed a special interest in Restaurant and Hotel Management.‎ 第四部分：恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复 套语：‎ ‎(1) 如能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。‎ ‎ Your early response will be much appreciated.‎ ‎(2) 希望贵校能给我寄来空白申请表。‎ ‎ I hope you will kindly send me an application form.‎ ‎(3) 如能收到所需的申请表和有关入学的指南我将十分感激。‎ ‎ I would greatly appreciate receiving copies of the required application forms and any instructions you may be so kind as to give me regarding my possible admission.‎ ‎(4) 希望同意面试，届时我可以更详细地说明我的技能。‎ ‎ I hope I may be granted an interview, when I can explain my qualifications more fully.‎ ‎(5) 我将乐意在您方便时接受面试，届时我将进一步介绍自己。‎ ‎ I should be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience, when I could give you further details concerning myself.‎ ‎【写作佳句】‎ ‎【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明信息来源，并提出申请。‎ ‎1. I’m Li Hua, from Class One, Senior Two.‎ 我是李华，来自高二一班。‎ ‎2. I have read in the newspaper that a secretary is wanted in your company.‎ 我在报纸上看到你们公司在招聘一名秘书。‎ ‎3. I read the announcement of the Experience Life that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.‎ 我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息，我对此很感兴趣。‎ ‎4. I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for an English tutor（家庭教师/助教）in the newspaper.‎ 我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。‎ ‎5. I am writing to apply for the summer camp in your school.‎ 我写信是想申请加入你们学校的夏令营。‎ ‎6. I am writing to tell you that I’m suitable for the job you are advertising.‎ 我写信是想告诉你，我适合做你们在广告上刊登的这份工作。‎ ‎7. I am writing to inquire about the possibility of the job.‎ 我写信是询问（我得到）这份工作的可能性。‎ ‎8. I am writing to join the program.‎ 我写信是想加入这个项目。‎ ‎9. I would like to apply for it during the summer vacation.‎ 我想要暑假申请它。‎ ‎【篇中句】突出自己特点，具体说明胜任理由。‎ ‎1. I think I’m qualified for the position. ‎ 我认为对于这个职位我是有资格的。‎ ‎2. In the first place, I have strong written and spoken communication skills.‎ 首先，我有很好的写作和交流技巧。‎ ‎3. What’s more, I am well acquainted with the western culture.（be acquainted with 熟悉）‎ 而且，我非常熟悉西方文化。‎ ‎4. Last but not the least, I have good personality, and I am independent in life.‎ 最后但也是很重要的一点是，我有很好的性格，并且在生活中很独立。‎ ‎5. I think it’s of great use to me. For one thing, I can gain some experience for my future job; for another, I can make more friends.‎ 我认为它对我是有好处的。一则，我能够为未来的工作获得经验；二则，我可以交到更多的朋友。‎ ‎6. I am sure I can do my best in the job.‎ 我保证在工作中会尽最大努力。‎ ‎7. That’s why I am applying for the position.‎ 那就是我申请这个职位的原因。‎ ‎8. I hope I can join you. ‎ 我希望我能够加入你们。‎ ‎【篇尾句】请求给予机会，期望尽快回复。‎ ‎1. I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity.‎ 如果你能给我这个机会，我会非常感激。‎ ‎2. I hope you can offer me the opportunity.‎ 我希望你能提供给我这个机会。‎ ‎3. I hope I can be accepted as a member of your summer camp.‎ 我希望我能够成为你们夏令营的一员。‎ ‎4. If you need to know more about me, please contact me at 189....‎ 如果你需要了解我更多，请给我打电话189....‎ ‎5. I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ 期待你的早日恢复。‎ ‎6. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.‎ 期待早日收到你的来信。‎ ‎【写作模板】‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I’m _________(简单自我介绍). When I was reading the advertisement, _________(表达看到相关广告后的感受). I think it’s a good opportunity for me to _____________(应聘的原因). Therefore I recommend myself to without hesitation.‎ I ___________(陈述本人的性格优势). For one thing, I can ___________(陈述本人特长一). For another thing, I can ___________(陈述本人特长二).‎ ‎ Please contact me at ___________(你的联系方式一：电话号码). Or e-mail me at ___________(你的联系方式二：电子邮箱地址).‎ I am looking forward to your early reply .‎ Yours Sincerely, ‎ Li Hua 假定你是李华，从互联网 (the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。‎ ‎ 内容主要包括：‎ ‎ 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)；‎ ‎ 2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；‎ ‎3.希望获准。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。‎ ‎**************************************************************************‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Regards,‎ Li Hua ‎【思路点拨】‎ 随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题；第二段自我介绍；参加意图；第三段表达愿望：希望获准。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。‎ ‎【范文赏析】‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it. I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.‎ Looking forward to your reply!‎ Regards, ‎ Li Hua Bookcrossing. Com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：‎ ‎1· 表明写信目的 ‎2· 选择一种分享方式 ‎3· 简述作出该选择的理由 ‎4· 希望了解更多信息 注意：‎ ‎（1）词数不少于80；‎ ‎（2）在答题卡上做答 ‎（3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ ‎ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours Li Hua ‎【思路点拨】‎ 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。‎ ‎【范文赏析】 ‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.‎ You’ve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.‎ If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，不拖拉，使用短语：apply for申请；Looking forward to盼望着；Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.这句话运用learning做伴随状语，reason后面跟着一个同位语从句；not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.这个句子not only but also连接两个句子，第一个句子需要用部分倒装。‎ Writing 1‎ 假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：‎ ‎1·对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生及社会的益处等)；‎ ‎2·个人优势(如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等)；‎ ‎3·你的计划(如怎样进行辅导等)。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数不少于100；‎ ‎2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。‎ 参考词汇：晨曦希望小学Chenxi Hope School Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.　　 ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours Sincerely,‎ Li Hua Writing 2‎ 假设你是新华中学的高三毕业生李华，刚刚参加完高考，最近听说美籍华人李响将出资帮助贫困大学生。请你根据以下要点提示写一封贫困资助申请信。‎ ‎1.个人情况介绍；‎ ‎2.申请资助原因(家庭困难等情况)；‎ ‎3.资助款的使用及今后打算。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数);‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Mr. Li Xiang,‎ I’m glad to hear that you will help those who lack money in going to college. I’m writing to apply for it.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua Writing 3‎ 假如你是李华，为了配合学校开展的"Green Action for the Earth"的活动，你校英语俱乐部张贴了一则海报招聘志愿者。请根据提示写一封申请信。内容包括:‎ ‎1.个人信息；‎ ‎2.应聘资格；‎ ‎3.希望被录用。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Writing 4‎ 假设你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor) 的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。 请写一封电子邮件申请参加。‎ 内容主要包括：‎ ‎1.自我介绍（包括中英文能力）；‎ ‎2.参加意图（帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化）；‎ ‎3.希望获准。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总次数。‎ Dear Sir or Madam, ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Hua Writing 1‎ Dear Sir or Madam, ‎ I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chenxi Hope School with their English. Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation. Meanwhile, I can learn how to get along with the students and benefit the whole school.‎ I’m kind, easy-going and always ready to help others. I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence. English is my favourite subject and I’ve won several prizes in English contests. So I think that I’m qualified for the position.‎ I plan to communicate with the students first to know what they need. Besides, I’ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories, singing songs, playing games and so on.‎ I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.‎ Yours Sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎ Writing 2‎ Dear Mr. Li Xiang,‎ ‎ I’m glad to hear that you will help those who lack money in going to college. I’m writing to apply for it.‎ My name is Li Hua, a senior three student of Xinhua Middle School. I have much financial difficulty in continuing my college education, but I’m eager to go on with my further study.‎ In my family my father is the only breadwinner while my mother was laid off two years ago. My grandmother has been suffering a lung illness for more than five years. My younger brother is now studying in a junior school. I took part-time jobs during the summer vacation, but what I have earned is far from enough for me to pay the required tuition fees. In order to continue my study, I have to apply for your help.‎ If my request is accepted, I will make good use of the money and put my heart into study and make myself a useful man to the society. I hope that you will consider my application.‎ Looking forward to your reply. ‎ Yours sincerely, ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【思路分析】作文要求写一封贫困资助申请信。第一步先作个人情况介绍；第二步讲述申请资助原因(家庭困难等情况)，可以着重介绍自己家庭收入微薄，负担很重的情况；最后说一说如果自己得到资助将如何使用资助款。本篇范文行文流畅，要点明确，语言地道，词句丰富。文章运用了多种句式：并列句，主语从句，条件状语从句，宾语从句。长短句交叉使用，增强了文章的层次感。内容言辞恳切，增强了可读性。‎ Writing 3‎ ‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I’m Li Hua, studying in Class 1, Grade 3. Seeing your appealing poster titled "Green Action for the Earth", I’m writing to apply for the position.‎ I’m fully convinced that I possess enough qualifications to be the required volunteer. First of all, I normally participate in a variety of beneficial activities to preserve our environment, which makes me more experienced than others. Besides, I succeeded in organizing ‎ a series of rewarding activities, including Saving Water, Green Travel and so on, equipping me with enough knowledge and experience to be a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. I’m available for an interview at any time.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Writing 4‎ Dear sir or Madam,‎ I’m Li Hua, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language. I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and I’d like to get this job.‎ For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it. Besides, I’ve been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English. I’m willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well.‎ I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours.‎ Looking forward to your reply!‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎