专题10+书面表达（测）-2019年高考英语二轮复习讲练测

专题10+书面表达（测）-2019年高考英语二轮复习讲练测

班级 姓名 学号 分数 ‎ ‎（测试时间：45分钟）‎ ‎1. 【广东省中山一中、仲元中学等七校2019届高三第二次联考】假定你是李华，得知美国外教Peter最近经常头痛，西医疗效不佳。请你给他写一封电子邮件，推荐中医治疗，简介中医的优点（如副作用小、价格低等），愿意帮助，并期待他早日康复。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Peter,‎ I’m sorry to learn that …‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Peter, ‎ I’m sorry to learn that you have been suffering headaches, which prevent you from performing well in your work. Worse still, you haven’t got better after taking medicine. Therefore I’m writing to recommend Chinese medicine to you.‎ From my perspective, Chinese medicine is superior to western medicine in a sense. Producing fewer side effects is typical of Chinese medicine. If time permits, patients can recover completely. In addition, Chinese medicine is less expensive, so you don’t need to worry about your budget. I believe the treatment is a great choice for you.‎ Hope you will recover soon. If there is anything I can do for you, please don’t hesitate to let me know.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。‎ ‎【点睛】本文是一篇电子邮件，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I’m sorry to learn that you have been suffering headaches, which prevent you from performing well in your work.句中使用that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句；If time permits, patients can recover completely.句中if引导条件状语从句；另外，Worse still, Therefore，In addition,等的运用为文章增色添彩。 ‎ ‎6. 【山东省淄博实验中学、淄博五中2019届高三上学期第一次教学诊断】假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Jonah得知你即将到美国旅游。他来信询问你是否方便带点中国特产给他，请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信。‎ ‎1. 表示愿意；‎ ‎2. 介绍特产（茶叶、丝绸等）；‎ ‎3. 询问要求（种类、数量、预算等）。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头和结尾已为你写好， 但不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：特产local special products Dear Jonah,‎ I’m glad to know you are interested in Chinese local special products,‎ ‎ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Looking forward to meeting you in the USA.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Jonah,‎ I’m glad to know you are interested in Chinese local special products, and I’m pleased to help you buy some. Here are some tips.‎ Our tea will be a good choice, for it is good for health, but I wonder whether you like green tea or black tea. Besides, various silk clothes are also popular with foreigners. Bowls, plates and cups made of china are nice, too. Which do you prefer? If you like them, please tell me in detail. In addition, these items are of different prices. Would you like to tell me your budget on them as well as the amount you need? Please let me know what you would like to have and I will try my best to meet your requirements.‎ Looking forward to meeting you in the USA.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 本篇书面表达是提纲类作文。要求写一封回信。‎ 亮点说明 本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型1. Our tea will be a good choice, for it is good for health, but I wonder whether you like green tea or black tea. 本句由but连接的两个并列句，且后一句中又含有whether引导的宾语从句。2. Would you like to tell me your budget on them as well as the amount you need? 本句中的would like to do是写作常用经典句式。 3. Please let me know what you would like to have and I will try ‎ my best to meet your requirements.本句中有what引导的宾语从句和and连接的并列句。 经典短语：is good for对……有好处；be popular with 受……的欢迎；in detail 详细的；try one’s best to do尽某人所能做某事。这些句式和短语的恰当运用，不仅为文章增色，还展示了作者具有较高的语言运用能力和较高的写作水平 ‎【点睛】写作最基本的是语言基础，它是由词组句，由句成文，虽然写作历来是考生望而生畏的题，但掌握了一定方法，平时多加训练，把握好基本功，作文就不再是难题。写作要写好以下句型，就不失为一篇好文章：写好简单句（记住五种基本句型）；写好并列句（正确使用并列连词）；写好it句型（记住常用，常考的it的句型）；写好复合句（弄懂状语从句、定语从句和名词性从句）。平时练习写作时可以先从简到繁，先练习写句子，再成段，然后成文，平时写作基本上涵盖这几种句型就能完成一篇写作。本范文就很好的运用了这些句型，文中有whether和what引导的宾语从句 ，and连接的并列句。‎ ‎7. 【广东省2019届高三六校第一次联考】假定你是李华，你的朋友Tony刚刚升入高三，因为暑期短他没休息好，所以现在状态很差。面临高考压力，Tony不知所措。请你给他写一封信表示安慰，要点如下:‎ ‎(1)表示难过和理解 ‎(2)就如何调整状态提出建议 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Tony,‎ I am sorry to hear that you fail to adapt yourself to Senior 3 for lack of rest in the past short vacation. Moreover, burdened with pressure from College Entrance Exam, you feel totally at a loss. I can really relate to how you feel and would like to offer some suggestions.‎ To begin with, try to relax and find some positive distractions. It is not a good idea to constantly remind yourself of not having enough rest. Instead, keep yourself occupied physically and mentally so that you don’t have time to be downcast. What’s more, it is of great significance to work out a plan and set small targets. As the saying goes,‎ ‎ failing to plan is planning to fail. When you follow the plan strictly and make it a routine, you’ll achieve a sense of accomplishment day by day, which can guarantee your final success. Last but not least, a best friend and partner of the same grade really counts. It is advisable to turn to him or her and share your sufferings. I believe your friend will surely offer some helpful advice that can give you inspirations.‎ Hopefully my suggestions could be of some help and I am convinced that you’ll find the way out. Looking forward to your good news.‎ Yours sincerely Lihua ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。‎ 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。‎ 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ ‎【点睛】本文是一封书信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。I am sorry to hear that you fail to adapt yourself to Senior 3 for lack of rest in the past short vacation.句中that引导宾语从句；keep yourself occupied physically and mentally so that you don’t have time to be downcast.句中so that引导目的状语从句；As the saying goes, failing to plan is planning to fail.句中as引导非限制性定语从句；另外，Moreover, To begin with, Instead, What’s more, Last but not least,等的运用为文章增色添彩。 友Tom对你的家乡菜很感兴趣，你买了一本英文版的中国地方菜谱（local recipe）快递给他，请给他写一封电子邮件提醒他接收，内容包括：‎ ‎1．礼物简介；‎ ‎2．预计收件时间。‎ 注意：1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Tom,‎ Knowing that you are interested in my local food,I bought a Chinese local recipe for you as a gift.‎ It is a best-seller with an attractive cover that is recommended by many popular restaurants in China. When going through the content, not only can you find varieties of Chinese local food, but also you can get to know the simple tips on making them. In addition, the recipe is translated into English and that's why I chose it for you. Yesterday afternoon I delivered it through Mail Express.You are expected to receive it next Wednesday. Please keep me informed if you get it.‎ I hope my gift can bring you joy and enrich your life.‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。‎ ‎【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：英国网友Tom对你的家乡菜很感兴趣，你买了一本英文版的中国地方菜谱（local recipe）快递给他，请给他写一封电子邮件提醒他接收，内容包括：礼物简介；预计收件时间。‎ ‎【点睛】本文是一篇电子邮件，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。Knowing that you are interested in my local food,I bought a Chinese local recipe for you as a gift.现在分词做原因状语；It is a best-seller with an attractive cover that is recommended by many popular restaurants in China.此处it是形式主语，that是真正的主语从句；When going through the content, not only can you find varieties of Chinese local food, but also you can get to know the simple tips on making them.现在分词做时间状语，同时句中使用部分倒装；the recipe is translated into English and that's why I chose it for you.句中使用why引导的表语从句。‎ ‎10. 【衡水中学2019届高三开学二调】假定你是李华，你校将举办一个中国古代发明展览，你想邀请你的英国朋友Peter一起参观。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 展览的时间和地点；‎ ‎2. 展览的内容（古代发明成就）。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Peter,‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Peter, ‎ I know you are interested in ancient Chinese culture. There is a good news that an exhibition of ancient ‎ Chinese inventions will be held in our school next Monday. It will last for five days. We can visit it at any time during the exhibition.‎ The show will display some great inventions in ancient China, including the world-famous Four Great Inventions: the compass, papermaking, gunpowder and printing. They had significant effects on the development of society. For example, thanks to papermaking and printing, a great deal of ancient information has been kept in books. These great ancient inventions made tremendous contributions to the world civilization.‎ Looking forward to your reply!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 学校将举办一个中国古代发明展览，李华想邀请英国朋友Peter一起参观。要求给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 展览的时间和地点；2. 展览的内容（古代发明成就）。‎ ‎【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句you are interested in ancient Chinese culture.同位语从句that an exhibition of ancient Chinese inventions will be held in our school next Monday.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。‎