专题50提纲类书面表达（一）-2017年高考英语二轮核心考点总动员

专题50提纲类书面表达（一）-2017年高考英语二轮核心考点总动员

专题 50 提纲类书面表达（一）‎ 关键词：提纲类,汉语提示,书面表达 难度系数：✱✱✱✱ 推荐指数：✱✱✱✱✱‎ ‎【基础回顾】‎ 考点归纳：‎ ‎ 提纲作文是高考英语书面表达的热点题型。命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、报道、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强。学科网]‎ 基础必读：‎ ‎ 1．提纲作文的特点 ‎ 提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作。这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏。‎ ‎ 2．思维空间灵活、开放]‎ ‎ 为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力。最近几年高考提纲书面表达，给出的汉语提示越来越少，这样给考生留出的自由发挥的空间就更大了。‎ ‎【技能方法】‎ 基本解题步骤：‎ ‎①审题：观察判断要写文章的类型和特点；‎ ‎②抓点：要点就是高考评分的给分点或者扣分点。要求能在提纲的提示下用简单词语写出所表达的内容。这样做可以防止要点遗漏或者过分发挥；]‎ ‎③定调：即确定体裁与题材，确定格式、人称、时态语态、人称口吻、顺序段落、开头和结尾。然后将要点扩展成句；‎ ‎④成文：连句成文。正确使用过渡词，使行文流畅。并注意段与段的衔接；‎ ‎⑤修改：看看是否有要点遗漏，字数是否符合要求，人称、时态、主谓一致等方面的错误，以便及时修改；‎ ‎⑥誊写：修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。‎ ‎【基础达标】]‎ ‎ 【四川省成都市2017届高三第一次诊】假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你按照以下要点给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。‎ ‎1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；‎ ‎2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；‎ ‎3.多与同学交流，互相鼓励。]‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经为你写好(不记入总词数)，但不得抄入答题卡内 。‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear William，]]‎ Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good mind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________]]‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua]‎ ‎【答案】 ‎ Dear William，‎ Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good kind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.‎ First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. One way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind. In this way we can memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.‎ Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study. Keep trying, and we will make it.‎ I hope all these can benefit you.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。现在分词做结果状语：This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job；倒装句的使用：Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind.非限制性定语从句的使用：Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.固定句型的使用：Keep trying, and we will make it.连接词的使用使得文章结构层次清楚明了：First of all, Last but not least。‎ ‎【能力提升】]‎ 假定你是李华，是学校的学生会主席，正在准备排练英语节目参加于 2017 年 1 月 10 日举行的株洲市“十分好英语”(Ten-minute Brilliant English)竞赛(参赛者表演英语节目，时间十分钟）。你给你校外籍教师 Sophie 写一封电子邮件，向她说明竞赛的基本情况、你对节目的设想和排练的时间；请她担任一个角色和对脚本（script）进行修改。‎ 注意：1. 词数100 左右; ‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。]‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Sophie，]‎ The Ten-minute Brilliant English Competition will be held on January 10, 2017. The participants are required to perform English programmes in ten minutes.‎ As for our school, we will put on Romeo and Juliet on the stage. I’m hereby so privileged to invite you to act one of the roles, and I sincerely believe that your attendance will b e a great encouragement to all of us. So if it is convenient to you, please come to the dancing hall of the ‎ school at 5 pm every day of this week.‎ In addition, I’ve attached the script of our programme to this e-mail and we will appreciate it greatly if you can polish it for us. Many thanks!‎ Yours,]‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用：I sincerely believe that your attendance will b e a great encouragement to all of us.条件状语从句的使用：So if it is convenient to you, please come to the dancing hall of the school at 5 pm every day of this week.‎ 固定句型的使用we will appreciate it greatly if you can polish it for us.‎ ‎【终极闯关】‎ ‎ 假如你是学生会主席李华，为了让外国人了解中国传统文化，学生会将进行“唐诗吟诵大赛”(Tang Poetry Recitation Contest)，特邀请学校国际部学生参加，请你根据提示写一则通知。‎ 主要内容包括：‎ ‎ 1．大赛目的和意义；]‎ ‎ 2．主办方：校学生会。时间：201 6年12月30日。地点：校报告厅(assembly hall)；‎ ‎ 3．范围：唐诗三百首(Three Hundred Tang Poems)。]‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。‎ ‎ Notice]‎ ‎ Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture?‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Notice]‎ ‎ Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture? Here comes your opportunity: the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest. I'd like to share with you some details.‎ ‎ As scheduled, the contest is to be held on Dec 30th ,2016. You are supposed to get prepared before the contest. Above all, it's recommended that you should read Three Hundred Tang Poems , and learn to appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese culture. Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible. If you want to attend, please come to the school assembly hall. Don't miss the chance of being a winner, and some appealing prize is eagerly waiting for you.]‎ ‎ Don't hesitate to take part ! I'm sure you will benefit a lot and your Chinese will gain much progress.‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。倒装句的使用：Here comes your opportunity；主语从句的使用：it's recommended that you should read Three Hundred Tang Poems；让步状语从句的使用： Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible.祈使句的使用：Don't hesitate to take part !]‎