高考英语作文万能模板(附范文)

高考英语作文万能模板(附范文)

只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 1 英语作文模板 一、英语作文的框机架 对比观点题型 （1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1. 有一些人认为…… 2．另一些人认为…… 3．我的看法…… The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持 A 的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持 B 的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥ ------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . （2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think ② -----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③---------------(为他们带 来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④ -------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤---------(反对的理由 之二)． Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主 题的看法)． 阐述主题题型 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 2 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述． １．阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义． ２．分析并举例使其更充实． The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说 明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举 例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)． In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it. 解决方法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 １．问题现状 ２．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ----------(举例进一步说明现 状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,---------------(解决方法一). For another-------------(解 决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处). 说明利弊题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或 弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测） １．说明事物现状 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 3 ２．事物本身的优缺点（或一方面） ３．你对现状（或前景）的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(Ａ的优 点之一). Besides -------------------（Ａ的优点之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)． Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)． (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．) 议论文的框架 (1) 不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ） There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一 _______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some peoplehold the idea that_观二_____. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___ 原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二_. Itis not onlybecause ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________. （2）利弊型的议论文 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 4 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____. Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides",讨论议题 is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with,缺 点 一 . In addition, 缺 点 二 . To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 讨论议题 into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___. ( 3 ) 答题性议论文 Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem. As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____. Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____. ( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文 It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语 has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically ) A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____. With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 5 ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.. 图表作文的框架 As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________. There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded. 二、高考英语作文经典范文 名人名言 No one can degrade us except ourselves; that if we are worthy, no influence can defeat us. (B.T.Washington, American educator)除了我们自己以外，没有人能贬低我们。如果 我们坚强，就没有什么不良影响能够打败我们。 为了大家能更多的得到写作部分的 25 分，我们特精选了以下范文，希望同学们务必研读背 诵！（尤其注意：文中划线部分为该体裁的套话；黑体部分为写作中的经典表达。） May you succeed in the coming college entrance examination. 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 6 一、与报社等讨论稿（带手机利弊） Dear Editor: [引出话题] I’m a senior three student. I’m writing to tell you my opinion on whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones. [赞成]I think they can do that. Because students can keep in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun. [反对] However, every coin has 2 sides. There are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. Another students is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages. [个人观点] In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、看对照表格写调查报告（孩子出国利弊） [调查内容] A survey is taken on public opinions of the fact that many parents spend a large amount of money sending their children to study abroad, some of whom are middle school students. [调查结果]From it we can see that 38 percent of those surveyed think it is worth the money letting children study abroad to get a better education so that they can get pay in return in the future However, not all are for it / some are against it. 62% of them hold the view that it is difficult for young people to live and study in a foreign country. It’s easy for them to fall / get into some bad habits and the cost of education in another country is ten times as much as that at home. [解决措施]The survey shows that the government should set up different kinds of schools to meet the demands of different children. （句型 do something /take measures / steps about sth .to do sth） 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 7 三、读柱状图表写调查报告 [注意句式变换] Middle school students have some ideas about their future jobs. The most striking contrast is in teaching: 30percent of the girls would like to become teachers while only 5percent of the boys want to do the job. 20 percent of the boys want to do business and another 20 percent want to become lawyers, while girls make up 15 percent in these two fields. What boys like to do most is to become managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists. Besides teaching, the second choice for girls is to be scientists and managers. The number is not small. Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields. 四、写信（过去/现在对比） Dear editor, I’m a middle school student. I once had a very happy family, but everything has changed because of my father. He used to be a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients. He took good care of the family and shared the housework with my mother everyday. However, he is now quite a different person. He plays mahjong all night and often quarrels with my mother. I just can’t concentrate on my studies and my grades are coming down. I’m very much worried and I’m afraid it will destroy my family as well as my father Could you help me what to do? I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much. Li Hua 五、图画+个人想法 One day during the summer holidays, I met my classmate Li Ming, whose nickname is Tao taopi. We chatted for a while as we walked. I asked him where he would go during the holidays. He replied that he had to stay at home studying. Then I’d like to know why he didn’t go out for a tour. Much to my surprise, he told me that it was just because he failed to be accepted by key universities. 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 8 In my opinion/Personally/ I think, traveling during the holidays not only increase a student’s knowledge of his or her motherland but also makes life meaningful. What’ s more, at the present time, we students are suffering a lot both at home and school. Why not go out to get relaxed. 六、幽默画 We want our schoolbags lighter [图画内容]The picture shows us a schoolboy and a big woman. The boy is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy bag. The woman is taking some exercise. The boy is saying to the woman jokingly: “Mum, if you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure you will easily lose weight….” [社会实际]It’s quite common that Chinese students are overburdened with the lessons and homework. What we do every day is to listen to the teachers’ lectures, take notes and do our homework which seems endless. [个人想法]We do hope our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way can we have time to do sports every day. Then we will be mentally and physically healthy. 七、 补全图画 Yesterday afternoon I went to the park. It so happened that I saw a touching event. At that time there were some people boating on the lake. A girl and her parents were taking photos. All of a sudden, the little girl fell into the lake as a result of carelessness. Obviously she couldn’t swim and was struggling in the water. Her parents cried for help. Hearing the cry, a young man immediately rushed to the bank and jumped into the water without taking off his clothes. He swam to the drowning girl and managed to push to the bank. At last the girl was saved. The girl’s parents were very grateful to the young man. Many people were greatly moved by the young man’s deeds. What a kind and brave young man! 八、广播稿（看图海啸） Boys and girls, 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 9 May I have your attention, please? At the end of 2004, a strong earthquake hit the west part of Indonesia, which brought on a terrible tsunami to some areas of western Asia. This disaster has caused millions of deaths and destroyed many beautiful cities. How terrible things are! Besides, millions more who have become homeless are in great need of help now. At present many countries all over the world including China have sent rescue teams there and thousands of people in every corner of the world are donating money to show their concern for them. It is true that many natural disasters can’t be avoided sometimes. But at least we can do something to help the people in the tsunami-hit areas. So let’s offer our pocket money to them! Thank you. 九、通知 Dec. 19th, 2004 NOTICE To help students learn more about computers, we have invited Professor Wang from the Computer Department of Qinghua University to give us a lecture on Saturday, December 22nd. Professor will talk about the use of computer and how to learn through the Internet. The lecture begins at 2;00pm in Room 204 of the Library Building. Any computer-lover is welcome to attend the lecture. Please bring your questions in computer learning. Professor Wang will leave you time for questions. Don’t forget to be on time. the Students’ Union 十、欢迎词 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! Now let me introduce something aboutthe changes that have taken place in our class. 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 10 We used to listen and take notes in class, but had no time to think for ourselves. Because we were not interested in the lessons, we often felt sleepy while listening. After school we had to finish much homework, unable to have some sports. However, things are different now.With the help of computers, the lessons are so lively and interesting that the students are active to answer the questions instead of falling asleep. As a result, we have made greater progress than before, though we spend less time doing our homework. And we can enjoy ourselves after class. The good teaching method is popular with all of us. We will try our best to study even harder. That’s all. Thank you! 十一、填写求职表格(高三教材 P140) Family name: Zhou First name: Lan Sex: Female Date of birth: March 25,1983 Place of birth:Zhuzhou, Hunan Nationality: Chinese Address:No 4 Middle School of Zhuzhou Telephone number:0733-8483628 Education:Graduated from Hunan University Explain why you think you are suited for the job: I enjoy working with people. I’m young and healthy, delightful, helpful. I can speak standard Chinese and I’m good at English. I once won the first prize of English competition in our college. I’m very interested in traveling and know many places of interest in China. 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 11 十二、求职信 Dear sir, The other day from China daily I know that your company need a travel guide.I’m writing to apply for the job. I’m Chinese, female. I was born on March 25,1983 in Zhuzhou, Hunan province. I graduated from Hunan University last month. I enjoy working with people. I’m young and healthy, delightful, helpful. I can speak standard Chinese and I’m good at English. I once won the first prize of English competition in our college. I’m very interested in traveling and know many places of interest in China. I think I’m suited for the job.If you can let me have this chance I will try my best to do it well. Expecting you answer. You can connect me by posting a letter to No 4 Middle School of Zhuzhou or dial this number:0733-8483628. Yours sincerely, Zhoulan 十三、回复公司关于面试的信件(高三教材 P144) No 4 Middle School of Zhuzhou, Hunan July 28, 2005 Dear Mr Lively, Thank you for your letter of July 20 asking me to come to inter view on Friday, August 2 at 2:30 pm. Unfortunately, I shall not be in that day, as I have another appointment. May I suggest another date for the interview? I could come to an interview on Thursday, August 1, or the morning of August 2. I hope one of these dates will be possible for you, as I am extremely interested in the post. I look forward to hearing from you. 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 12 作文范文 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请 你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 60％的同学认为 1．不应该收门票 2.公园是公众休闲的地方 3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形 象 40％的同学认为 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高 2．支付园林工人工资 3．购新花木 注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。2．词数：100 左右。3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet peoples expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees. With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua 书面表达(满分 25 分) 假设你是刘英。最近你就流行节目“超级女生”(Super Grls)或“快乐男生”(Happy Boys) 收集了同学们的不同看法。请根据下表内容给征稿的某英语报刊编辑写封信，并谈谈你自己 的观点。 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 13 一些同学的看法 另一些同学的看法 有助于发现自己的优缺点 能挑战自我并丰富生活经历 易误导年轻人 会带来一些问题，如学习受到影响 注意：1．词数 100 个左右，信的开头和落款已为你写好(不计人总词数)； 2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3．参考词汇： 误导——mislead 挑战——challenge Dear Editor, _________________________________________________ Yours, Liu Ying Dear Editor, Recently, I've collected some different opinions from my classmates about the program Super Girls or Happy Boys. Some of them argue that it offers a good chance for young people to discover their own strong points as well as weaknesses. Meanwhile, it can get them ready for any challenges and enrich their life experiences. However, st)me of my classmates don't think so. They feel that it could mislead those youngsters. Especially to the school girls and boys, it may cause some troubles. For example, it may affect their study badly. 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 14 In my opinion, every coin has two sides. So long as we have a correct attitude and good self-control, it's still OK to join in it. Yours, Liu Ying 作文例题 1. 外国留学生 Tom 是你的同学，他住在友谊宾馆。你到宾馆请他参加明天下午李明的生日 晚会，碰巧他不在。你给他留个条子，邀请他参加晚会，同时告诉他去李明家的路线。图中 标有*号的地方就是李明家。 June 6th Dear Tom, I came to see you but you were out. Tomorrow is Li Ming's birthday. We will have a birthday party at Li Ming's tomorrow afternoon. We would be very happy if you will come. Li Ming's home is not very far from your hotel. When you come you may go straight along Blue Road. Turn right at White Road. Then go across Stone Road. you will find a cinema on your left. Li Ming's' house is just beside it. Hope to see you at the party. Yours, Tong Hua 2. 写一短文论述书本的价值。 Books are called“King's Treasures/Wealth” because they have something as valuable as gold and silver. They have the riches of knowledge. Kings keep their valuable objects carefully locked up and keep the keys themselves. Nobody can touch their valuable things. Yet the riches of knowledge are entirely different. Anyone can have the key to the riches of knowledge. The key is simply “READING”. Anyone who can read can open the door of the treasure house and go in 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 15 and take what he likes. Why don't we therefore learn to read and fill ourselves with the riches of knowledge which everybody admires? 3. 假设你最近去旅游一次，请把活动情况记述下来。 I went for a pleasant outing on Saturday with some friends from school. We went to a lovely lake about a hundred kilometers north of here. We left by bus at seven o'clock in the morning and arrived at the lake at eight thirty. We spent the morning swimming and rowing small boats. Then we had lunch in a small restaurant by the lake. After lunch we climbed a large hill behind the lake and enjoyed the beautiful view from the top. We got back to the bus at around four o'clock and then we came back to town. We had a wonderful time. 4.写一则失物招领启事。 在操场拾到绿色书包一个，内有两本新教科书、练习本、袖珍英汉词典一本及铅笔盒一个， 请失主到高三年级办公室认领。 高三年级办公室 1995 年 9 月 1 日 Found September 1, 1995 A green school bag was found on the playground yesterday afternoon. Inside of which there are two new textbooks, exercise books, a pocket English—Chinese dictionary and a pencil-box. Loser is expected to come to the Office of Senior Grade 3 to identify it. 5. 假定你的名字叫李童，上个月学校派你去美国。在美国期间，你住在 Jane 家里。她带你 参观和浏览了许多地方。Jane 的妈妈为你做了许多可口的饭菜，这一切使你在美国度过了 十分美好的日子。写一封感谢款待的信，表示对 Jane 及其家人的感谢。希望今后有机会在 中国以同样的方式招待她。 No 15 Middle School Xuanwu District Beijing China 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 16 August 10,1995 Dear Jane, Thank you so much for your hospitality and kindness last month. It was very kind of you to put me up at your house while I was in America. I really appreciate your taking me around delicious. Surely I had a wonderful time in America. I hope I can repay you in the same way in China some time in the future. Best Wishes, Li Tong 6. 假定你现在在英国进行短期参观访问，你的英国朋友 George 和 Angle 给你寄来一张邀请 卡。读后写一封拒绝接受邀请的回信。说明你星期五上午要离 Oxford 去 London.在信中表 示你希望这次聚会成功、大家玩得高兴。假使你在英国的住址是 29East Avenue, Oxford. 29 East Avenue Oxford December 6th Dear George and Angie. Thank you very much for the invitation to your housewarming party this Friday. I'd love to come, but I can't because I will leave Oxford for London on Friday morning. I hope you all have a good time and that your party is a big success. Yours sincerely, Wang Mei 7. 假定你叫田兵，你的妈妈身体不太好，家中有许多家具。前些日子你家刚刚搬入一个新 单元中。在搬家时，你的外国朋友 Jack 主动帮忙。给他写一封感谢信。表达谢意。信中谈 到你将举行一个乔迁之喜的聚会，盼望早日在聚会上再见到他。 2 Doorway 1 Building 5 Xi Luo Yuan 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 17 Feng T District June 3 1994 Dear Jack, I am writing to thank you for all the help you gave us in moving into our new flat. As you know, my mother is in poor health and there is a lot of furniture. I know we would never have been able to move all the things into the new flat without your help. I am arranging a housewarming party soon and I look forward to seeing you then. Thank you again for everything you have done for us. Love. Tian Bing 8. 写一封抱怨信，诉说你日前购买某厂生产的一双皮鞋穿了三次就坏了这一状况，要求厂 方退回货款。 Dear Sir, I am writing to you to complain about the shoes I bought a week ago from your shop. Although I have only worn the shoes for three times, the soles are worn out, and the shoes are out of shape. At your price, I expect high quality. I am returning the shoes to you by post. I expect to receive another pair of better quality or the full refund of the shoes. Sincerely, 9. 用英语给朋友写一个便条，告诉她今天早晨开会你去晚了，因为自行车出故障了。请她 别生气。 Catherine, I'm sorry I was late for the meeting this morning. There was something wrong with my bicycle. I hope you're not angry with me. Sally 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 18 10. 写一则遗失启事。李燕，高二(4)班学生，本月 4 日下午在本校大教室遗忘红色长大衣 一件，大衣的一个口袋中装有一个小笔记本，另一口袋中装有自行车的钥匙。拾到者请交高 二(4)班的班长或本人，我将不胜感谢。高二(4)班教室在 1 号楼 204 室。 I was careless and lost my red long overcoat in the lecture room on the afternoon of 4th of this month. In one of the pockets there is a small notebook and in the other pocket there is key to my bike. Will the finder please send it either to the monitor of Class 4, Senior Grade 2 or to myself? Many thanks to the finder. Our classroom is in Room 204, Building 1. Li Yan 重点诠释 1．说明文是以说明为主要表达方式，用简洁明了的语言来解释说明事物，阐明事理，从而 给读者提供知识的一种文体。 2．在高考书面表达中，其主要命题形式为图表式作文，有时也以图画式和提纲式作文来呈 现写作材料。 3．它要求语言要简明扼要，通俗易懂，说明过程讲究层次性和条理性。 4．这种文体通常用第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主。 写作典例： 根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来 的影响。（广东 06） 注意： 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 19 1．词数：100 左右 2．生词：通讯：communicate (with sb．) vi. communication n． 互联网：the Internet n. 案例分析 从材料的呈现方式（两幅图对比）及材料所提供的要求“描述变化及影响”可知，本文应该 用说明文体来写作。时态的把握是本文的一大难点，一般情况下，说明文应用一般现在时， 但本文描述的是今昔通讯方式的变化，所以在描写过去通讯方式的时候要用一般过去时，例 如 in the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone 及 It used to take several days to hear from each other. 在描写过去发生的动作对现在造成的影响时，谓语动词要用现在完成时，例如本文的起始句 可用“Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years”及讲述影响的过渡句“with these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more dfficient”. 相对来说，本文 用第三人称容易把握。 高分范文 Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years. In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents. In a word, people have an easier life nowadays. 针对练习 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 20 1．下表是你根据平时了解所得到的中国高三学生选择高考志愿的信息。请你根据该表用英 语写一篇简要介绍，向编辑部反映该情况。 注意： 1．文章的开头已为你写好。 2．词数：100 词左右。 Chinese senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities. 【预测依据】 在高考中，图表类写作经常出现。其内容上多为中学生日常生活中熟悉的生活经历，以及社 会热点。高考志愿填报问题，是考生、家长、社会等非常关注的一个热门话题，对于该话题 的报导以及争论是人们经常耳闻目睹的。 【解题指导】 本文从体裁上看属于议论文，其命题方式属于图表类。图表类作文多以说明文和议论文为主， 要求考生根据所给的图表、数据及标题进行分析、研究，阅读其中的文字和说明，弄清各种 信息之间的关系，提炼和确定出文章的中心思想。然后进行分析、概括和归纳。 注意：（1）图表和数据内容不一定要全部描述。（2）善于抓住总的规律，趋势，归纳增减 率。（3）时态：特定时间用过去时。经常出现的情况或自己的评述用一般现在时。 （4）要适当运用一些高级词汇并灵活使用图表类写作常用的经典好句型。 【参考范文】 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 21 Chinese senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities. A survey has been done to study it. We can see from the table that about 35% of the students believe the choice should be based on their own interest. They say interest is the mother of success. Besides, it is a miserable thing to have to spend most of your time studying what you have no interest in. More students （around 45%）, however, insist that main consideration should be given to the needs of the society, for, they argue, not everyone can find the job they like best. What’s more, interest can be born and lost. Interestingly, there are about 20% who find it too difficult to make a choice and would rather depend on their parents or teachers to make a decision. 【范文点评】 该篇文章从总体上来讲，能够把握议论文的特点。语言流畅，能够正确地利用一些较为高级 的词语以及一些精彩短语、句型（文中黑体字）。人称使用正确，为第三人称。能够把握主 体时态：用一般现在时。因为是经常出现的情况。能够按题目的要求，涵盖所要求的内容， 并适当增添了一些相关内容，较好地完成了写作任务，达到了预定的写作目的。 2．根据漫画，请以“烟”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述下面的内容，并就此发表你的评 论。 要求：1. 文章必须包括描述和评论两部分；根据内容适当发挥，注意行文连贯。 2. 词数：100 词左右。 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 22 【预测依据】 看图类写作是高考写作的热点之一，具有一定的难度。内容上多为中学生日常生活中熟悉的 经历，社会热点，具有一定的交流性、应用性、时代性、教育性。 【写作指导】 1．要审清写作要求。 2．此题只提供了一幅相关的图画信息。通过观察及写作要求，我们可以确定：（1）体裁： 夹叙夹议；（2）人称：须用第三人称；（3）时态：可用一般现在时。 3．审清图画的主题和梗概：一个年轻人在工厂，嘴里正吸着烟，这时他看到工厂里的一个 禁止吸烟的标志牌，而工厂本身也正向大气中排放滚滚浓烟。年轻人顿时觉得困惑不解…… 由此，作者发表评论：相关部门应当采取措施禁止工厂污染自然环境的行为！ 4．增加细节，连贯成文，做到层次分明，结构严谨，并准确选用相关词语、句型表达图画 内容。 【参考范文】 Smoke This is a funny and instructive picture. In the picture, a young man is smoking happily in a factory when he sees a sign which means “No smoking” on the wall. But he finds that the factory is giving off large quantities of heavy smoke which 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 23 makes him feel very puzzled, “Why does the factory forbid people to smoke while the factory itself emits so much poisonous smoke?” Nowadays, many factories know the danger of smoking to themselves and don’t allow people smoking in the factory. However, they don’t pay any attention to the danger that they cause to the whole society. And they let out lots of polluted smoke which does great harm to our environment. In my opinion, we could live without most of the industrial products, but we could not survive without nature! Therefore, something must be done to prevent the pollution caused by all factories! 【范文点评】 本文首先对图片内容进行了简短的介绍，接着发表了作者的简短评论。文章结构严谨，审题 准确，语言流畅，过渡自然。文章的得分亮点也较多。如最后一段，一句“In my opinion, we could live without most of industrial products, but we could not survive without nature.”，便不入俗套地点明了要采取相关措施的原因！可谓一语惊人，令人深思！ 3．下面是一个学生的情况登记表，请用英语将表中所列情况进行全面介绍。 姓名 李 刚 性别 男 出生年 月 1982.9 籍贯 山东 现就读学校 北京外国语大学英语系 职 务 团支部书记 兴趣、爱好、特长 体育运动、唱歌、跳舞、口语流利 志 向 当一名好翻译 学校鉴定 该生多才多艺，出类拔萃 主要家庭成员情况 简介 父母：教师，工作认真，教学成绩优秀，受人尊敬 姐姐：医生，在一家医院工作，远近闻名 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 24 要求： 1.层次要清楚，条理性要强； 2.字数在 100~140 字。 Li Gang, a boy student of 21, is now studying in the English Department of Beijing Foreign Languages University. He likes sports and games, singing and dancing, and can speak English fluently. As a League secretary, he is highly spoken of by the teachers and students and regarded as an outstanding student with great ability. Li Gang is from Shandong Province. His parents are both teachers. They are dearly loved and respected by the students for their wonderful teaching work. Li Gang's elder sister, a famous doctor, works in a big hospital. Li Gang has made up his mind to be a good translator after graduation and serve “the four modernizations”of our country. 4。根据下列图示以“The New Grading System in Our School”为题为你校英语报 写一篇短文,说明这一举措以及你对学校实施这一举措的认识. 要求: 1.词数 100 字左右, 已给出部分不包括在内。生词: 评分体制 grading system 参与 participation（n.) The New grading system in Our School In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart shows how it works. The students’ final score will be made up of 5 parts. About 30% of it will come from their test results. The rest of the score is decided by the performances of the students in the following parts: 20% comes from your notes, and another 20% is 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 25 decided by how you do your homework. If you take an active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score. Teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates. 5．下面的饼状图（pie chat）显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给 English Weekly 写一篇短文，报道你的调查结果，并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。字数 120 词左右。首句已给出（不计入词数）。 A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. In my opinion, our school has made a good decision. This new grading system will certainly help to improve ourselves in all ways. From the pie chat, we can see 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school. The second popular activity for students is surfing the Internet and 36 % of the students have interest in it. Only a few students, about 8 percent of them, take reading as a hobby. And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments. In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students. Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students’ interests in reading and music. 6.联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提 示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况： 1)大小：近 100 户人家，约 500 口人。 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 26 2)变化：过去很穷，78 年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。 3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有 4 层，是村里最美的建筑物。村 所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。 注意： 1）要点齐全，前后连贯。 2）词数：100-120 之间。 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! ①This village is a small onewith/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However,it has changed a lot since 1978 ③and has been developing very fast.④ People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and the newly built teaching building ⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ What’s more,they enjoy free education. ⑩May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 写作模板——图表式作文 It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少). What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因). More importantly, …(第二个原因). Most important of all, …(第三个原因). From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken 括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化 趋势). 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 27 重点诠释： 1． 议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过摆事实，讲道理的方式来辩明是非 曲折，从而表达出作者的观点。它常由论点，论据和论证三部分构成。 2． 在近几年的高考书面表达中，其主要命题形式是以表格式和提纲式来呈现写作材料的。 3． 它要求语言必须简练，准确，要尽可能避免使用口语，多用书面语，可适当使用名言警 句；以议论为主，辅之以叙述，说明和描写等手法。 4． 写作时要围绕中心论点展开议论，即论据和论证要围绕论点展开。根据题目要求，有时 需要从正反两面来论述，可增强论证的力度。最后，可得出结论，照应开头，形成一个有机 的整体。 5． 写作时常以三段式的形式展开议论。 写作典例： 暑假即将来临，你班同学就假期计划进行讨论，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇英语短 文，并谈谈你的看法。 优点 缺点 呆在家中 花费少，舒适方便 不能亲自了解外界 外出旅游 增长知识，开阔眼界。 花费多，旅途不便 注意：1。词数 120 左右（不含已写好部分） 2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述； 3．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； 4．参考词汇：眼界 horizon(view) 案例分析 这是一篇典型的议论文体的写作，它以表格的形式提出了论点（呆在家中的优点和缺点以及 外出旅游的优点和缺点）和论据，还以文字提示形式提出了话题（假期计划）及需要考生自 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 28 由发挥的部分（你的看法），自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种，并就此发表个人的见解。 本文的重点是表格中两种方式的优，缺点，根据题目的特点，以三段式的形式来写作比较好。 根据内容，尽管讨论已经发生，但它是就一般的暑假假期计划而进行的讨论，没有特定的时 间界定，因而考生应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。相当一部分考生用一般过去时进行论 述，这会失掉较多的分数。从题目所给的开头可知应用第一人称来写。 范文： The summer holiday is coming. Our class have a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework. 一．书信 重点诠释 英文书信格式与中文书信格式有许多不同，它包括五部分，即：信头，称呼，正文，结束语 和签名，具体如下： 精典题例解读 下面是 2003 年 NMET 的书面表达试题。体裁为书信，内容为学生所熟悉。要点通过汉语和图 示两种方式给出。汉语句子虽不算少，但无法照译。 考生在完成本题时需要做到以下几点： 1.认真审读所给文字和草图，确认全部信息要点。 2.确定写的动机：向你的英国笔友介绍你为他所找住房的情况。 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 29 3.确定写的基本路子：以回信的口气，介绍情况，询问态度。 4.确定语篇的结构：书信开头、介绍情况、询问态度、书信结尾。 5.起草语篇，考虑措辞。 6.进行文字修改。 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校来学中文，来信请 你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房 面积为 25 平方米，月租 500 元。 注意：1.词数：100 左右。 2.参考词汇：房租—rent(n.)。 Dear Bob, _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 30 内容要点： 1.开头; 2.公寓（一室带浴室、厨房）; 3.面积、家具（25 平米、床、沙发、书桌、椅子）; 4.公寓位置（芳草街，离学校一站远）; 5.月租 500 元; 6.结尾。 说明： 1.内容要点可用不同方式表达。 2.对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 3.开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑、语言得体。 Dear Bob, I’m so glad to learn that you’re coming in September. I’ve found a place for you, It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxiu Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact. it’s only one stop. Do you think you’d like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know. Yours, Li Hua 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 31 1．假如你校学生会（Students’ Union）要举办一次英语演讲比赛(contest)，请你用英语 写一篇书面通知，以便张贴到布告栏上。通知须包括以下内容： 1.比赛目的：提高学生的英语口语水平 2.比赛时间：2002 年 11 月 20 日下午 4 点 3.比赛地点：四楼阶梯教室（auditorium） 4.评比办法：由五位老师做评委其中包括 Mr.Smith 5.奖项设置：一等奖 1 名，二等奖 3 名，三等奖 5 名 6.报名办法：到各班班长处报名 注意：1.不要逐条翻译说明内容，通知必须用短文的形式； 2.词数 100 个单词左右。 【参考范文】 NOTICE In order to improve the students’ spoken English, an English speaking contest will be held by the school Students’ Union in the auditorium on the fourth floor at 4:00 p.m. on November 20,2002.Five teachers, including Mr.Smith, have been invited to be judges. One first prize, three second prizes and five third prizes will be given to the excellent speakers. Anyone who is willing to take part in the contest, please go to your monitor and sign your name for it. All are welcome to be present at the contest. Students’ Union 2．某海滨游泳场从今年夏天起对外宾开放,请你根据下列内容为海滨游泳池(Swimming Pool) 用英语写一份“游泳须知”（Swimming Rules）。（字数：100 左右）。 1.游泳者不得越过红线； 2.所借的游泳衣、救生圈（life-buoy）、太阳伞（sunshade）、椅子不得损坏或带走； 3.不准乱扔废弃物,请放入垃圾桶； 4.下午 6 点前必须上岸； 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 32 5.不准在游泳区钓鱼。 游泳者必须遵守以上规定，违者处罚金(fine)5~200 元。 【参考范文】 NOTICE Swimming Rules Swimmers are required to obey the following rules. Anyone who breaks the rules will be fined 5~200 yuan. 1.Nobody is allowed to swim beyond the red line. 2.Swimming suits, life buoys, sunshades and chairs borrowed from here are not to be destroyed or taken away. 3.Don’t throw waste things everywhere .Put them into the dustbins. 4.Swimmers must get out of water before 6 p.m. 5.Fishing is not allowed here. 3．五月四日，高三年级一班和二班之间将进行一次有关环保问题的演讲比赛（a talk show on environment protection）。此前，二班邀请清华大学的 Dr Li 做相关内容的报告。 假定你是二班的班长，请你草拟一个有关报告会的口头通知。 注意：1.内容应包括提示及表格内的全部要点； 2.词数在 100 左右； 3.开头已为你写好。 报告内容 近些年北京的环境问题及已取得的进步 地 点 教学楼三楼会议厅（auditorium） 时 间 四月三十日，星期三下午 2：00 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 33 目 的 帮助大家收集信息，为演讲做好准备 参加人员 全班同学 其他安排 会后议论 May I have your attention, please? As you know, our class will have a talk show on environment protection with Class One on May 4th. Before it takes place, we ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ May I have your attention, please? As you know, our class will have a talk show on environment protection with Class One on May 4th.Before it takes place, we will invite Dr Li from Qinghua University to give us a talk on the environment problem and he will also tell us about the improvement in environment protection in recent years in Beijing. The report will begin at 2:00 pm on Wednesday, April 30th in the auditorium on the third floor in the classroom building. I’m sure we can get enough information from his talk to make good preparations for the coming talk show. everyone should be there on time, then listen to the report and make full notes at the same time. By the way, we will have a discussion after the report. That’s all. Thank you. 武汉第三制药厂(Medical nant)研制了一种新药，药品已被外商订购。制药厂请你为该厂产 品写一份说明书，请根据提示完成。 1. 本药品为中药，对心脏病疗效显著。 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 34 2. 用量：每日三次，一次两粒(pi11)；发病时可加服 1～2 粒。可长期服用。 3．服药后如感身体不适请停服。小孩和孕妇(Pregnant)禁服。 4．本药品应放在阴凉干燥处。 5．使用本药品还应严格听从医生的指导。 注意：1．说明书必须包括以上所有要点，但不要逐条翻译。2．词数 100 左右。 A New Kind of Medicine Wuhan No.3 Medical Plant has invented a new kind of medicine.It is very good for heart trouble (disease). It should be taken three times a clay and two pills once. It can also be taken one or two more pills if needed. This kind of medicine can be used for a long time.It's dangerous for children and the pregnant. They mustn't take this medicine. If you are not feeling well after taking the medicine, you should stop taking it. This medicine should be kept in a cool and dry place. It's better to follow the doctor's advice before taking it. 四．演讲稿 1．假如你是一名导游，陪同某外国旅游团游览长城。车抵长城，下车前你准备对大家作必 要的介绍和交代。请拟一份讲话稿。讲话稿必须包括以下内容： 1.简单介绍长城（世界上最长的城墙，有两千多年的历史，是世界奇观之一）； 2.在长城逗留两个半小时，11 点离开； 3.游览车在入口处等候，记住车号，准时返回； 4.贵重物品随身携带，下车前关上车窗； 5.游览时注意安全，祝大家玩得愉快。 注意：不要逐句翻译，字数 100 个单词左右。 【参考范文】 Ladies and gentlemen, 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力，才能尝到成功的滋味。 35 Here we are at the foot of the Great Wall. It is the longest wall in the world and has a history of over 2 000 years. It is one of the wonders of the world. We’ ll stay here for two hours and a half, that is to say, we’ll leave at 11 o’clock. The bus will be waiting for us at the entrance. Please remember our bus number and be back on time. Besides, please take your valuable things with you and shut all the windows before you get off. Be careful while you are on the Great Wall. Have a good time! The Seaside Swimming Pool 2．假如你是业余气象员，你从之声天气预报节目得知了今晚和明天上午你处的天气情况， 晚饭后 6 点钟在校广播室用英语向全体师生作天气预报，并提出忠告。要点如下： ①午夜至凌晨两点有强劲北风。 ②气温将下降 5-8 度。 ③明天上午有阵雨。 ④要求同学们今晚 离开教室时关好门窗。 ⑤明天早上起床时多穿些衣服，以防感冒。 词数 100 在右。 Attention, please. It is six o'clock in the afternoon. I'm now giving the weather forecast as usual. From midnight to 2:00 tomorrow morning there will be strong north wind blowing across our town and the temperature will drop by 5-8℃.Also there will be showers tomorrow morning. Therefore be sure to close all the windows when you leave your classroom tonight and when you get up tomorrow morning. Please put on more clothes in order to protect yourself catching cold. That's all. Thank you. Wang Xiaoming