2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之十三：如何使行文中副词及其他词丰富多彩

2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之十三：如何使行文中副词及其他词丰富多彩

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之十三：如何使行文中副词及其他词丰富多彩 大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的高级词汇，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉，从而可以提高文章的得分档次。‎ ‎[典题1]　(一般词)If there is anything I can do for you, I would be very glad to help.‎ ‎(高级词)If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.‎ 如果有什么我能为你做的，我将非常乐意帮忙。‎ ‎[典题2]　(一般词)He comes to our room for a chat sometimes.‎ ‎(高级词)He comes to our room for a chat once in a while/occasionally.‎ 他偶尔来我们房中闲谈。‎ 高中阶段常见的副词及其他写作高级词汇 ‎①突然suddenly→all of a sudden ‎②立即 immediately→in a flash ‎③有时sometimes→occasionally/once in a while/from time to time ‎④另外；况且besides→in addition/what's more/moreover ‎⑤因此so→therefore ‎⑥第一，首先 first→to begin/start with ‎⑦第二，其次 second→in addition/what's more ‎⑧最终 finally→eventually ‎⑨和，也and→as well as ‎⑩大多数most→the majority ‎⑪许多 a lot of→a large quantity/amount of/endless ‎⑫完成finish→accomplish ‎⑬事实上in fact→as a matter of fact/actually ‎⑭也too→as well ‎⑮几天前a few days ago→the other day ‎⑯故意 on purpose→deliberately/by design ‎⑰因为 because of→on account of/due to/owing to/thanks to ‎⑱总之 in a word→to sum up/in conclusion/in summary ‎⑲由……构成be made up of→consist of ‎⑳越来越多more and more→an increasing number of ‎○21否则or→otherwise/or else ‎○22应当should→be supposed to ‎○23如果if→suppose/supposing/on condition that ‎○24即将到来coming soon→around/round the corner ‎○25使某人意识到make sb. realize→raise sb.'s awareness of ‎[专题过关训练]‎ Ⅰ.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加彩部分 ‎1．(2018•浙江高考写作)And I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective and improve my spoken English.as_well_as ‎2．(2017•全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)In fact, I am very fond of Tang poems.Actually ‎3．A few days ago, I went out and I almost had an accident.The_other_day ‎4．You must have noticed how tired he sometimes looks.occasionally/once_in_a_while ‎5．The most of the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.majority ‎ ‎6．As high school students, we should be neatly dressed at school.are_supposed_to Ⅱ.用所给词的高级词汇补全句子 ‎1．我们的人口在增长，因此我们需要更多的食物。‎ We have a growing population and therefore_we_need_more_food.(so)‎ ‎2．抓住这个机会，否则你会后悔的。‎ Seize the chance, otherwise/or_else_you'll_regret_it.(or)‎ ‎3．这次比赛不仅职业运动员可以参加，而且业余运动员也可以参加。‎ The tournament is open to ‎ amateurs_as_well_as_professionals.(and)‎ ‎4．第三，你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。‎ Thirdly, you say that there is a discount suppose/supposing_(that)_I_pay_in_advance.(if)‎ ‎5．我喜欢踢足球，也喜欢游泳。‎ I like playing football and I_enjoy_swimming_as_well.(too)‎ Ⅲ.请用高级词汇升格下面的考生作文 假定你是中学生李华，家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的家乡伦敦，并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容包括：‎ ‎1．自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；‎ ‎2．发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；‎ ‎3．存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；‎ ‎4．对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：高层建筑 highrise building ‎[考生作文]‎ Dear Jason，‎ I'm ①very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.‎ Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing ②fast during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been ③built, with highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.④More and more schools and hospitals are ⑤useful for the native people.It is developing into a modern and ⑥beautiful city.⑦But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧serious air pollution, which have a bad ⑨effect on people's daily life.⑩I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in the future.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[升格作文]‎ Dear Jason，‎ I'm ①more_than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.‎ Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing ②rapidly during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been ③set_up,_with highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.④An_increasing_number_of schools and hospitals are ⑤available for the native people.It ‎ is developing into a modern and ⑥attractive/charming city.⑦However,_there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧severe air pollution, which have a bad ⑨influence/impact on people's daily life.⑩In_my_opinion/As_far_as_I_am_concerned,_Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in the future.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua