高中英语人教版必修4测试：Unit1 Section Ⅳ　Writing

高中英语人教版必修4测试：Unit1 Section Ⅳ　Writing

www.ks5u.com Section Ⅳ　Writing 如何描写人物 普通表达——常用词汇　普通句式　让学生写作思路“活”起来 任务呈现 某英文报正在举办主题为“A person I admire most”的征文活动，你有意参加。请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。‎ 注意：词数100左右。‎ 写作指导 一、审题定调 本写作任务要求介绍最钦佩的人，属于描写文。这类作文主要是通过对人物外貌、事迹等的描写来反映人物的思想、性格、品质等特点。‎ 本写作时态以现在时态为主；人称以第三人称为主。‎ 二、谋篇布局 本写作任务可分为三部分：‎ 第一部分：引入话题(介绍人物的基本情况，如外貌、年龄等)。‎ 第二部分：具体介绍(包括人物的性格、事迹等)。‎ 第三部分：总结全文(对所介绍人物进行整体评价)。‎ 三、组织语言 第一部分：引入话题(介绍人物的基本情况)。‎ ‎1．________________________________________________________________________.‎ 我最钦佩的人是我最好的朋友。‎ ‎2．She is ________________________________. (一个漂亮的17岁女孩)‎ ‎3．She/He has ________________________ (一张漂亮/英俊的脸) and there's always a bright smile on it.‎ 第二部分：具体介绍(包括人物的性格、事迹等)‎ ‎4．________________________________________________________________________.‎ 她学习和帮助老师都做得很好。‎ ‎5．________________________________________________________________________.‎ 她非常喜欢科学并且有一些了不起的发明。‎ ‎6．What moves me most is that ________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________.(当别人遇到困难时，她总是乐于助人)‎ 第三部分：总结全文(对所介绍人物进行整体评价)。‎ ‎7．She is ________________________ (最好的学生之一) our school has ever had.‎ ‎8．________________________________________________________________________.‎ 所有的老师和学生都对她评价很高。‎ ‎9．________________________________________________________________________.‎ 我们所有的人都很喜欢她。‎ 四、连句成篇 ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 我的写作体会：________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 高级表达——精彩词汇　句式升级　让学生满分作文“易”起来 任务呈现 假定英语课上，老师让同学们写一篇英语短文介绍一位国内的杰出女性。请你根据以下表格写一篇短文介绍网坛名将李娜。‎ 职业 中国职业网球运动员 经历 ‎1.有运动天赋，7岁开始打网球，1999年成为职业选手；‎ ‎2.2002年离开国家队到大学学习；‎ ‎3.在丈夫的鼓励下，她2004年继续网球生涯；‎ ‎4.在2011法国网球公开赛和2014年澳大利亚网球公开赛上获得两次大满贯，是亚洲第一位大满贯女子单打冠军。‎ 评价 她在训练场上的决心和努力使她成功，她的精神对中国年轻人有很大影响。‎ ‎　　注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：‎ 单打冠军 singles title 大满贯 Grand Slam 法国网球公开赛French Open 澳大利亚网球公开赛 Australian Open 写作步骤 一、统筹安排 Outline of the text：‎ Paragraph 1：Giving a brief introduction to Li Na Paragraph 2: Describing Li Na's experiences in detail Paragraph 3: Making comments on Li Na 二、词语储备 A：professional, gift, influence, encourage, succeed，‎ ‎ determination B：1.________________　　　在……期间 ‎2．________________ 对……有天赋 ‎3．________________ 在……的鼓励下 ‎4．________________ 继续；坚持 ‎5．________________ 对……有很大影响 三、备用句型罗列 ‎1．李娜是一名中国职业网球运动员，在职业生涯中她赢得了许多单打冠军头衔。‎ ‎→Li Na is a Chinese professional tennis player and she won many singles titles over the course of her career.(改为非限制性定语从句)‎ ‎→Li Na is a Chinese professional tennis player, ________________________ over the course of her Career.‎ ‎2．李娜对运动很有天赋，而且在7岁时就开始打网球。‎ ‎→Li Na had a great gift for sports and began to play tennis at age 7. (改为含with的句子)‎ ‎→________________________， Li Na began to play tennis at age 7.‎ ‎3．在她丈夫的鼓励下，李娜在2004年继续她的网球生涯。‎ ‎→With the encouragement of her husband, Li Na carried on her tennis career in 2004. (改为同义句)‎ ‎→________________________， Li Na carried on her tennis career in 2004.‎ ‎4．她在训练场上展现出的决心和努力使她成功。‎ ‎→The determination and hard work that Li Na showed at the training ground made her succeed. (改为主语从句)‎ ‎→________________________ the determination and hard work she showed at the training ground.‎ ‎5．然而，2002年李娜离开国家网球队去大学学习。(汉译英)‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 四、扩充要点，连词成句 ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 我的写作体会：‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Section Ⅳ　Writing 一测　基础过关 写作指导 三、组织语言 ‎1．The person I admire most is my best friend ‎2．a goodlooking 17yearold girl ‎3．a pretty/handsome face ‎4．She does well both in her studying and helping the teachers ‎5．She likes studying science very much and has made some wonderful inventions ‎6．she is always helpful when others meet with difficulties ‎7．one of the best students ‎8．She is highly thought of by all of the teachers and students ‎9．We all like her very much 四、连句成篇 The person I admire most is my best friend, LiLi. She is a goodlooking 17yearold girl. She has a pretty face and there's always a bright smile on it.‎ As a monitor, Li Li does well both in her studying and helping the teachers. Besides, she likes studying science very much and has made some wonderful inventions. What moves me most is that she is always helpful when others meet with difficulties.‎ Li Li is one of the best students our school has ever had and she is highly thought of by all of the teachers and students.‎ 二测　能力提升 写作步骤 二、词语储备 ‎1．over the course of...‎ ‎2．have a gift for...‎ ‎3．with the encouragement of...‎ ‎4．carry on ‎5．have a great influence on...‎ 三、备用句型罗列 ‎1．who won many singles titles ‎2．With a great gift for sports ‎3．Encouraged by her husband ‎4．What made Li Na succeed was ‎5．However, in 2002, Li Na left the national tennis team to study at university.‎ 四、扩充要点，连词成句 Li Na is a Chinese professional tennis player, who won many singles titles over the course of her career.‎ Li Na had a great gift for sports and began to play tennis at age 7. She became a professional player in 1999. However, in 2002, Li Na left the national tennis team to study at university. With the encouragement of her husband, Li Na carried on her tennis career in 2004. She won two Grand Slam singles titles at the 2011 French Open and 2014 Australian Open, which made her achieve the first Grand Slam women's singles champion status in Asia.‎ What made Li Na succeed was the determination and hard work she showed at the training ground. Her spirit has a great influence on young Chinese people.‎ 三测　学业达标 写作训练 一、One possible version：‎ One of the great women that I respect is Audrey Hepburn, who was a famous actress.‎ Born on May 4,1929, Audrey Hepburn was goodlooking with beautiful hair and smooth skin. She was a ballet dancer before becoming an actress. Recognized as a film and fashion icon, Hepburn was active during Hollywood's Golden Age. After playing the leading role in Roman Holiday, a screen classic, she won several important awards. Besides, she devoted much of her later life to ‎ helping unfortunate children in the world and went to some of the poorest countries.‎ Audrey Hepburn is remembered not only for her attractive appearance, but also for her contribution to charity events for children.‎ 二、One possible version：‎ My favourite teacher is Mark, an American in his fifties teaching us English.‎ Mark is a strict and highly experienced teacher. His teaching style is quite different from that of other teachers in our school. He's able to create an atmosphere in which all of us would like to voice our minds actively. Apart from that, he's easy to get along with. In his spare time, he often organises activities such as outings and parties for us, from which we benefit a lot. As a responsible teacher, he checks our homework carefully every day.‎ I feel so lucky to have such an amazing teacher.‎ 写作训练 一、假定你是李华，某英文杂志社要设立Great Women专栏，正在征集相关稿件。请你根据以下表格写一篇短文并向该杂志社投稿。‎ Audrey Hepburn 职业 演员 出生日期 ‎1929.5.4‎ 经历 ‎1.成为演员前是一名芭蕾舞舞者；‎ ‎2.在《罗马假日》中饰演主角后，赢得了几项重要奖项；‎ ‎3.晚年致力于帮助世界上不幸的孩子，去过一些最穷的国家。‎ ‎　　注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：‎ 芭蕾ballet　《罗马假日》Roman Holiday ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 二、你校英文报正举办主题为“My favourite teacher”的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。‎ 注意：词数100左右。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎