【英语】2018届二轮复习图画型书面表达的写词造句教案（4页）

【英语】2018届二轮复习图画型书面表达的写词造句教案（4页）

‎2018届二轮复习 图画型书面表达的写词造句 ‎[学审题谋篇] ‎ ‎(2017·江苏启东中学模拟)‎ 右面这幅漫画展现了人生的一个道理，请根据你对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。‎ 你的短文应包含以下内容：‎ ‎1．描述图画内容，如图中人物的行为和心情等；‎ ‎2．揭示图画所要表达的人生哲理；‎ ‎3．结合自身实际，谈谈这一漫画给你的启示。‎ 注意：词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up.‎ In this picture, we can see ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎1．审题 图画作文要审清题意，看懂图画所表达的意思，紧扣主题。审题时应做到三定：①定体裁；②定人称；③定时态。‎ 如本篇为夹叙夹议文；在叙述时主要是第三人称，就图画议论时也是第三人称，表述自己观点时用第一人称；时态方面叙述时用一般现在时，议论时也用一般现在时。‎ ‎2．谋篇 图画类作文以图画形式给出信息，所以需要抓住每幅画所传递的信息，将图画信息转化为文字要点。‎ 如本文分成三个方面进行描述：首先叙述图画内容；然后介绍图画所反映的社会现象；最后陈述我们应该怎样去做。‎ ‎[学增分亮点] ‎ ‎[满分范文]‎ Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up.‎ ‎①In this picture, we can see a man is cutting earth in a tunnel, hoping to find some diamonds. ②He makes great efforts in his work. ③However, after a long time of pains without gains, he decides to give up. ④If he had had one or two more attempts of cutting, he would have seen those diamonds right in front of him.‎ ‎⑤This story tells us a very simple but important piece of truth: we should be confident in what we have chosen to do and never stop our efforts until we succeed. ‎ ‎⑥As a student preparing for the entrance examinations, I should learn a lesson from the man. ⑦Just like the diamonds in the picture, success is just waiting for my last efforts. ⑧I have been cutting earth for so many years, so I will never give up before I succeed.‎ ‎[满分缘由]‎ ‎1．结构布局 本文为三段式作文：‎ 第一段介绍图画内容，这个人在快要挖到钻石的时候却放弃了，令人惋惜。‎ 第二段主要介绍我们要自信，要坚持才能成功。‎ 第三段作者从中悟出了坚持不懈努力的重要性，并决心坚持到底。‎ ‎2．亮点词汇 pains, gains, attempt, give up, make great efforts, be confident in ‎3．亮点句式 第①句中hoping ...为现在分词短语作伴随状语；‎ 第④句包含与过去相反的虚拟语气；‎ 第⑤句包含what引导的宾语从句作介词in的宾语，还包含until引导的时间状语从句；‎ 第⑧句由so连接两个并列句，其中包含before引导的时间状语从句。‎ ‎[句式改写]‎ ‎1．用“感官动词＋复合宾语”改写句①‎ In_this_picture,_we_can_see_a_man_cutting_earth_in_a_tunnel,_hoping_to_find_some_diamonds._‎ ‎2．用倒装句改写句④‎ Had_he_had_one_or_two_more_attempts_of_cutting,_he_would_have_seen_those_diamonds_right_in_front_of_him.‎ ‎[写满分作文] ‎ ‎(2017·江苏省扬州中学模拟)‎ 下面这幅照片展现了志愿者慈善义卖活动(Charity Bazaar)的情景。请根据你对照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应该 包括以下内容：‎ ‎1．简述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；‎ ‎2．结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；‎ ‎3．举例说明你能为公益事业做点什么，并陈述原因。‎ 注意：1.可参照图片下面的文字及文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。‎ ‎2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎[要求]‎ 请用定语从句、名词性从句、不定式、分词、被动语态、it作形式主语、状语从句的省略、not just ... but also ...句式完成作文。‎ Volunteers in high schools help our society in many ways. They devote their time and effort to helping people in need. ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ 参考范文：‎ Volunteers in high schools help our society in many ways. They devote their time and effort to helping people in need. ‎ The picture above illustrates a common scene that can be seen in many campuses, where volunteers hold charity bazaars to collect money for the needed. They put their books, toys or even music players on desks for sale. These stalls can always attract large numbers of ‎ students, who buy the things not just out of love of the items, but also out of their loving hearts.‎ This picture reminds me of children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty, and of senior citizens in nursing houses who need better care. It is everyone’s responsibility to help make the world a better place to live in. ‎ Like the volunteers in the picture, I also have a willing heart to help people. I have every hope to visit the house for orphans, to donate my money to those who are in need and most importantly, to help the people around me whenever necessary.‎