专题30 书信、邮件＋叙事类记叙文-2019年高考英语二轮复习提分秘籍（解析版）

专题30 书信、邮件＋叙事类记叙文-2019年高考英语二轮复习提分秘籍（解析版）

A ‎ 假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Peter一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假的打算，但你因准备考试未能及时回复。请给他回封邮件，说明情况。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Peter，‎ How is everything going？I have a couple of things to tell you.‎ In the first place，I'm sorry for failing to answer your letter in time a week ago. That was because I had to make full preparations for my final exam. I will be much relieved if you could accept my apology.‎ Secondly，my schedule for the coming summer vacation goes as follows. I'm going to undertake a community survey about neighbors in an effort to gain some social experience. Following this，a voluntary job is also included in the schedule，which，I think，will definitely enrich my holiday.‎ What about your holiday plan? Hope to hear from you soon.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎2.本文段落分明，表达清楚明了，用词恰当。‎ B 假如你是李华，上周末，你和同学们去当地一家孤儿院(orphanage)开展志愿者活动。请根据下列要点写一篇英语报道。‎ 要点：1.时间、地点、人物及活动(赠送书籍、玩具等)；‎ ‎2．孤儿院孩子们的反应；‎ ‎3．简短评论。‎ 要求：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Last weekend，we went to the local orphanage to do some voluntary work. On the way，we bought books and toys with the money donated by our classmates. Upon our arrival，we handed out all the gifts to the children，then we patiently taught them to sing songs. Before leaving，we received pictures drawn by them as souvenirs of the visit.‎ When we were about to leave，the children waved their hands and thanked us for our kindness. Seeing the children's bright smiles，all of us considered the visit to be well worthwhile. We have made an effort to bring sunshine to the children's lives，and were really happy to be able to help them.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎1.审题：开展志愿者活动 ‎2.注意所要求的要点不能漏 ‎3.学会分段 范文用了Upon our arrival，Before leaving，Seeing the children's bright smiles和donated by our classmates等比较高级的表达方式，是靓点。另外，作者使用了石时间状语从句When we were about to leave及并列句and were really happy to…增加色彩。当然文章中的一些短语也很好地吸引力我们：handed out ，were about to，made an effort to。 ‎