专题61 书面表达咨询信-高考全攻略之备战2018年高考英语考点一遍过

专题61 书面表达咨询信-高考全攻略之备战2018年高考英语考点一遍过

考点61 书面表达咨询信 高考频度：★★★★★‎ ‎1. 写作方法 ‎① 首段：‎ a. 复述题目场景，表明写作目的；‎ b. 遵守礼貌原则，只问相关信息；‎ c. 简要介绍自己，表明写作目的。‎ ‎② 主体：‎ a. 询问具体问题，注意疑问句式；‎ b. 提供背景材料及询问原因；‎ c. 强调所需信息的重要性；‎ d. 题目要求的内容均应涉及。‎ ‎③ 尾段：‎ a. 表明急切心情，提供联系方式；‎ b. 结尾彬彬有礼，表示诚挚谢意；‎ c. 希望得到对方的帮助并合作。‎ ‎2. 写作流程图 说明写信目的 介绍背景 询问详情 表示谢意，期盼回复 第一部分：说明写信的目的 套语：‎ ‎(1) 我是……，暑期计划到贵校学习。‎ I am …and planning to study in your university this summer.‎ ‎(2) 我是一名中国学生，想到贵校学习。我计划下个学期开始上课，如果您能告知一些必要的信息，我将不胜感激。‎ I am a Chinese student who wishes to study at your university. I will start my course from the next term, and I would be grateful if it’s so kind of you to give me some essential information.‎ ‎(3) 我写信是要询问……‎ ‎ I’m writing to ask if …‎ 第二部分：介绍背景 套语：‎ ‎(1) 我获得……高校的……学士学位。毕业后便开始在……工作。‎ I received a bachelor’s degree in…After graduation, I began working….‎ ‎(2) 是我的朋友建议我写这封信的。他去年毕业于贵校，热情地向我推荐贵校。‎ I am writing at the suggestion of a friend who graduated from your university last year and has warmly recommended it to me.‎ ‎(3) 我已经取得了生物学学士学位，并希望能在贵校继续学习。‎ ‎ I have had a bachelor’s degree in biology and wish to continue my study at your university.‎ 第三部分：询问详情 套语：‎ ‎(1) 您能向我介绍一下贵校的……情况吗？‎ ‎ Could you please tell me something about… of your college?‎ ‎(2) 能否寄给我一份申请表及与申请有关的其他必要的材料？‎ ‎ Would you please send me an application form and other materials necessary for my application?‎ ‎(3) 您能尽快告知这些信息并邮寄给我相关表格吗？非常感谢！‎ ‎ Would you please send me all the information and the forms as soon as possible? Thank you very much. ‎ ‎(4) 如果你能告诉我那些必要的程序，我将不胜感激。‎ ‎ I would be much obliged to you if you tell me the necessary procedures.‎ 第四部分：表示谢意，期盼回复 套语：‎ ‎(1) 很抱歉打扰您，对您的友善帮助不胜感激。‎ ‎ Sorry to bother you, your kind help would be greatly appreciated.‎ ‎(2) 如果您能回复，我将感激不尽。‎ ‎ I will appreciate it very much if you can give me a reply.‎ ‎3.写作模板 Dear  ______ ,‎ ‎①I am ______（自我介绍）. ②I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding ______（要询问的内容）.‎ ‎③First of all, what are  ______（第一个问题）? ④Secondly, when will  ______（第二个问题）? ⑤Thirdly, is  ______（第三个问题）?‎ ‎⑥I would also like to inquire ______（将最重要的问题单独成段）. ⑦Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?‎ ‎⑧Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Ming 假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）‎ 注意：1.词数100左右 ‎ 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。‎ 参考词汇：住宿—accommodation ‎【思路点拨】‎ 李华计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周，看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚，想要给校方写信咨询有关事项，考生要清楚这是一封信，要符合信的格式。这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体。考生要注意动词时态的变化，以一般现在时为主，兼有将来时，比如：功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情。注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。使用一些高级句型和词汇来提高作文档次。‎ ‎【范文赏析】‎ Dear Sir/Madam,‎ I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?‎ I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours faithfully,‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】‎ 短文用了一些短语，增加了文章的色彩，如：plan to do sth ;would like to do sth; pay for; look forward to doing/sth等；用了一些过渡词如：First ；Besides等，使文章过渡自然；用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一。如：I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气，增加了文章的亮点。‎ ‎ ‎ Writing 1‎ 假如你是李华。你打算暑假去美国参加一个国际中学生夏令营活动。请根据下面图示信息写一封英语咨询信，询问这个夏令营的有关情况。内容包括：‎ ‎1.你打算参加为期几周的夏令营；‎ ‎2.询问开营日期、地点、主要活动和费用。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ America’s Best Summer Camps We have welcomed international campers from more than 40 countries worldwide for many years.‎ The staff at each camp is fluent in many languages and most of our camps can provide English training.‎ We invite you to explore our 4 summer camps presented here which offer from 2- to 8- week summer sessions for boys and girls aged 3—18.‎ Start dates?　　Where?　　　What?　　How much?‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I am Li Hua. ______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua Writing 2‎ 假定你是李华，最近你在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告，称其有称职教练( instructor)，一周包会。你会一点游泳，但水性不太好，想在暑假参加训练。请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况，要点如下：‎ ‎1.训练的具体时间和地点；‎ ‎2. 条件和费用；‎ ‎3. 其他特别注意的事项。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数 100 左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。‎ Dear Sir/Madam,‎ I have read your advertisement in the newspaper. ________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua Writing 3‎ 假定你是李华得知英国牛津大学面向海外高中生举办暑期夏令营。请你写一封英文信，咨询相关情况，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 活动安排及费用；‎ ‎2. 住宿情况；‎ ‎3. 索取报名表及相关资料。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；‎ ‎. 开头和结尾已为你写好。‎ Dear Sir/Madam,‎ I'm Li Hua, a Senior Three student from China. ‎ ‎_________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully,‎ Li Hua Writing 4‎ 假如你是星光中学高二的李华，你打算高中毕业后到美国某大学读书，所以写了一封信给该校了解情况。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 介绍自己的情况，例如目前的学业水平，爱好，特长，参加社会实践活动等；‎ ‎2. 咨询到该所大学留学的条件，如：外语水平、所需学费，申请奖学金条件等；‎ ‎3. 希望得到更多关于该校的资讯。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear sir/ madam,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ Writing 1‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I am Li Hua.  I am a 17-year-old student from China. I am planning to attend America’s Best Summer Camps during the summer vacation. I am writing to inquire about it.‎ First, I have decided to join the 3-week summer camp. Could you tell me when it starts and ends so that I can plan my trip in advance? Second, I am wondering where the summer camp will be held. Third, what activities are we going to take part in at the camp? Besides, how much shall I pay for it?‎ I would appreciate it if you give me a reply at your earliest convenience.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ Writing 2‎ Dear Sir/Madam,‎ I have read your advertisement in the newspaper. You mentioned in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week’s training.‎ I can swim a little but I’m not very confident in the water. So I’m interested in taking part in the training course. Fortunately, the summer holiday is around the corner. I’m writing to inquire when and where the course will be given, and how long the training course will last each day.‎ I also want to know how much you will charge me for that. Besides, would you be so kind as to tell me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary?‎ I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua Writing 3‎ Dear Sir/Madam,‎ I'm Li Hua, a Senior Three student from China. Greatly interested in your summer club intended for international students, I'm writing to inquire about the program.‎ First, would you please tell me the specific time of the program and how long it will last, so that I can properly schedule my time. Second, what core lectures and social activities does it offer to students? Are there any English cultural lessons and cultural tours? Besides, I also wonder how much I have to pay for the program and whether accommodations will be provided for the participants. I would appreciate it very much if you could send me the application forms and some related materials that provide further information regarding the program.‎ Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to getting your reply!‎ Yours faithfully,‎ Li Hua Writing 4‎ Dear sir/ madam,‎ I am a Senior Two student in Xingguang High school in China. I will graduate from high school in one year. I plan to study in your university after graduation. Now, my academic performance is pretty good and I competed in Nation Olympic Math Contest for High school students last year and won the first place. I love sports, especially ball games and I am a member of school basketball team. Also, I am a volunteer in Protection The Great Wall.‎ If I attend your university, what kind of English level should I have? How much the fee should I pay? What qualification do I need to apply for a scholarship?‎ I am looking forward to receiving your reply and more information about your university.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎