【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题应用文10篇训练之六（11页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题应用文10篇训练之六（11页word版）

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达专题应用文10篇训练之六 ‎[一]‎ 假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.参加者；2.时间、地点；3.活动：登山、野餐等。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Chris，‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 参考范文：‎ Dear Chris，‎ I am sincerely inviting you to join us to go for an outing this weekend．‎ Aiming to enhance our relation and build up our bodies，the trip involves climbing mountains and a picnic．（高分句型一）（活动：登山、野餐等）As is scheduled，the activity will take place at 8：00am on Saturday at the gate of our school and we hope all the students in our class will take an active part in it．（高分句型二）（参加者、时间、地点）Climbing is an important part of the trip．While pushing our strength to the limit，we are also breathing fresh air and appreciating the gorgeous scenery on the way．（高分句型三）‎ Hope you won't miss the joyful activity．Your attendance is greatly expected．‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[二] ‎ 假如你是高三学生李华，毕业后想去康奈尔大学（Cornell University）深造。请结合以下要点给康奈尔大学的负责人写一封电子邮件，希望获得奖学金。‎ ‎1. 自我介绍，包括英语水平、独立生活的能力以及与人沟通的能力；‎ ‎2. 希望获得奖学金；‎ ‎3. 希望得到答复。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎  2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考范文：‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ ‎ I’m Li Hua. I’m writing in the hope of obtaining a scholarship in Cornell University for the bachelor’s degree.‎ As a straight A student, I have a good command of both science and arts, especially English. I’ve passed TOEFL with an excellent score. Apart from my outstanding academic achievements, I take part in various after-class activities to improve my social skills and broaden my horizons, thus preparing me for an independent life. Furthermore, child as I am, I’m willing to help others. All in all, I believe I have the appropriate qualifications and experience for my further study.‎ Thanks for your time and consideration. I’d appreciate it if my application could be approved of. ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎ [三] ‎ 假设你是李华，计划高中毕业后去美国的大学深造。你在网上了解到了 Prof. Smith，根据以下内容给他写一封e-mail。‎ ‎1. 表示对他的研究领域area及课题subject感兴趣，‎ ‎2. 提供关于申请的准备及专业(major)建议， 3. 表示感谢。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件的开头与结尾己为你写好。‎ Dear Prof. Smith,‎ ‎ I am Li Hua, ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Look forward to your early reply.‎ Yours, Li Hua 参考范文：‎ Dear Prof. Smith,‎ I am Li Hua, a high school student from China. I am planning to study at your university after high school, and writing to see if it is possible for you to advise on my preparation.‎ When viewing the website of the school, I felt extremely interested in the area and subjects of your study. Therefore, would you please provide me with further information about the application procedure and requirements?‎ I have been learning 9 subjects in high school, among which physics and chemistry are my favorites. If I should pay more attention to one or two subjects, what are they?‎ Thank you in advance! Your professional advice would be of great help to me. (111word)‎ Look forward to your early reply.‎ Yours Li Hua ‎ [四] ‎ 假定你是李华，在你校就读的英国交换生Peter 对中国古典音乐很感兴趣，你恰好非常擅长二胡演奏。请你给Peter写封邮件，约他周末到你家去了解一下这种中国乐器，并为他演奏二胡，要点如下;1‎ ‎ 简介二胡：始于唐朝，已有1000多年的历史 ‎2 二胡音乐优美3 发出邀请 注意：1 词数100左右 2 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。‎ 参考范文：‎ ‎ [五] ‎ 假定你是李华，你校外籍教师Miss Rose常常在课余时间辅导你英语口语，使你在上周学校举行的英语演讲比赛中荣获第一名。为此，你决定写一封感谢信，对Miss Rose的帮助表示真诚的感谢。‎ ‎2‎ 参考范文：‎ Dear Miss Rose,‎ ‎ I am writing to you to tell you a piece of good news. Last week our school held a Spoken English Competition. I stood out in the competition and won the first place. In my view, all the achievement that I have gained is owed to your help. During your spare time, you often spent so much time in helping me with my spoken English that I made rapid progress. During the competition, I followed your advice on how to behave and how to keep a good state, which led to my success. I’m grateful for your help. Without your help, I couldn’t have won such a prize. I decide that I will make more efforts and try to make grater progress.‎ ‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you.‎ ‎ Yours truly,‎ ‎ [六] ‎ 假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike给你来信说他最近沉迷于电脑（Internet addiction）难以控制。请你给他回一封信，告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、与家人产生矛盾等问题，并提出一些建议。‎ 注意: 1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ‎ Dear Mike, ‎ I am glad to hear from you.________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎ 参考范文：‎ Dear Jack, ‎ I am glad to hear from you. As your close friend, I’d like to talk about the harm of Internet addiction to you as I feel worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games.‎ As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. However, our life will be greatly affected if we are addicted to it. For example your grades may go down and your health will be going from bad to worse. To make things worse, it can also damage the relationship with your family. So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit. It is a good idea for you to read some meaningful books and do some physical exercise.‎ I am looking forward to hearing your good news soon．‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ [七] ‎ 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友David目前在北京学习汉语，希望你能帮他提高普通话水平。请你根据以下提示用英语给他写一封电子邮件。‎ ‎1. 表达给他提供帮助的意愿；‎ ‎2. 给出讲好普通话的建议（至少两点）；‎ ‎3. 祝他学习进步。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数）；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：普通话Mandarin Dear David,‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours, Li Hua 参考范文：‎ Dear David,‎ Happy to know your eagerness to improve your Mandarin, I will try my most to help you. ‎ Recognized as one of the most difficult languages in the world, Mandarin learning takes time. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. If you want to learn it well, you should spend much time practicing Mandarin every day, such as reading aloud or communicating with local people. Besides, you’d better read as many books as you could so that you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture, in which way your Mandarin will be greatly improved. Other alternatives including watching Chinese programs and singing Chinese songs are also good choices.‎ I’m sure that you will make great progress as long as you devoted yourself to learning the language and persist with your study. Wish you all the best!‎ Yours, Li Hua ‎[八] ‎ 假定你是李华，你市一家剧院将在本周末举办一场京剧演出，外教Jackson对此很感兴趣并向你打听相关事宜。请你用英语给他写封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1.简要介绍中国京剧；‎ ‎2.演出内容：京剧名段；‎ ‎3.邀请他一同前往观看。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文：‎ There will be a Beijing opera performance held in a theater this weekend. Now, let me introduce some details to you. As a perfect example of Chinese culture, Beijing opera has a long history. Centered in Beijing, the opera has many types of facial makeup, which refer to different characters.‎ As the poster says, some popular selections will be performed during the show time this weekend and some famous actors will show a visual feast for audience. So I sincerely invite you to go to watch the show with me. It can give you some interesting things to appreciate even though you can't understand what the actors sing. It will be a nice experience for you at least.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，你市一家剧院将在本周末举办一场京剧演出，外教Jackson对此很感兴趣并向你打听相关事宜。请你用英语给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.简要介绍中国京剧；2.演出内容：京剧名段；3.邀请他一同前往观看。‎ 其次选用正确的人称和时态，一般现在时和一般将来时是主体时态、用第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句Centered in Beijing, the opera has many types of facial makeup, which refer to different characters. 和让步状语从句It can give you some interesting things to appreciate even though you can’t understand what the actors sing.‎ ‎ [九] ‎ 假如你是李华、你在英语学习上遇到了一些困惑，希望通过署期学习取得更大进步，请给你的外教John写封邮件，询问以下内容。‎ 内容：1. 暑期英语学习的建议；2. 下学期的学习内容。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文：‎ Dear John,‎ I am Li Hua, a student in your class. You always impress us deeply with your passionate and enthusiastic teaching style and remain one of the favorite teachers in many students’ hearts. Therefore, with the ‎ intention of making some improvement in my English, I am writing to enquire of you how I can make the most of my summer vacation.‎ To begin with, despite many years’ learning of English, I still feel puzzled in some aspects, for instance, writing. I always find myself trapped in the situation where Chinese stands between me and what I want to express, that is to say, I can’t think directly in English. With regard to this point, do you have some constructive suggestions to make? Then, my grade of the final exam makes it plain that I am left behind by the majority of my classmates, so would you please give me some advice on English learning so that I can catch up with them next term? Lastly, to make some preparation in advance, I also want to know what is generally covered in your class next term.‎ I would feel obliged if you can point out a way for my English learning. Looking forward to your reply.‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】试题分析：本文是篇提纲类作文，材料简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，要点分三部分来写：1、描述英语学习上遇到的困难；2、寻求暑期英语学习的建议；3、询问下学期的学习内容。文章要用一般现在时态和第一人称来写，另外要适当增加细节，还应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的得分档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文中使用了不少高级短语和句子，为文章增色不少，比如I would feel obliged if you can…，impress… with …, enquire of sb. …等句型，定语从句… in the situation where Chinese stands between me and what I want to express...等等; 并注意了句子的衔接如：that is to say, …, To begin with，…Then，… Lastly,… 等等，增强了文章的高级感和紧凑感。‎ ‎ [十]‎ 假如你是李华、你在英语学习上遇到了一些困惑，希望通过署期学习取得更大进步，请给你的外教John写封邮件，询问以下内容。‎ 内容：‎ ‎1. 暑期英语学习的建议；2. 下学期的学习内容。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文 Dear John,‎ I am Li Hua, a student in your class. You always impress us deeply with your passionate and enthusiastic teaching style and remain one of the favorite teachers in many students’ hearts. Therefore, with the intention of making some improvement in my English, I am writing to enquire of you how I can make the most of my summer vacation.‎ To begin with, despite many years’ learning of English, I still feel puzzled in some aspects, for instance, writing. I always find myself trapped in the situation where Chinese stands between me and what I want to express, that is to say, I can’t think directly in English. With regard to this point, do you have some constructive suggestions to make? Then, my grade of the final exam makes it plain that I am left behind by the majority of my classmates, so would you please give me some advice on English learning so that I can catch up with them next term? Lastly, to make some preparation in advance, I also want to know what is generally covered in your class next term.‎ I would feel obliged if you can point out a way for my English learning. Looking forward to your reply.‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Li Hua