2020届二轮复习精点书面表达之示范写作课件(135张PPT)课件

2020届二轮复习精点书面表达之示范写作课件(135张PPT)课件

高中英语二轮复习示范写作第（ 1 ）篇 类型： 如何提建议。 典例： 给交友有困难的同学提建议。 模板： I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. [ 引出建议 ] Here are some tips to help you . ［列举建议］ First , why not go and talk to people standing on their own? I agree this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you will soon have a new friend. Second ， you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes, ( 理由 ) which will make you find people with the same interests . Finally ， you should try to join in a discussion, ( 理由 ) letting people know how friendly you are. I hope you find these ideas useful. ⑴ 引导建议可以用： ① Here are my suggestions on how to ... ② Suggestions on ... can be listed as follows. ③ The ways for you to ... can be suggested as follows. ⑵ 列举建议可以用： ① first of all/first/ to begin with ； Second (ly)/ then/ besides/in addition/ What’s more ； finally/ lastly/ last but not least ② for one thing ...and for another (thing) ⑶ 在列举的建议后常常会用起补充说明作用的分词短语、定语从句等说明提出此建议理由或原因。 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 2 ）篇 类型：发言稿 典例：介绍英语学习的情况和对英语教学的建议 模板： ( 江苏 ) Dear teachers and schoolmates ， It’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. [ 目的 ] I’m interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future ， so it’s very important for me to learn English well. [ 方法 ]Since vocabulary is an essential part of language, just like bricks in a building, I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. After class, not only do I listen to English programs on TV and on the radio but I’ve also learned a lot from the Internet and other sources. [ 建议 ]Now I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals. Thank you for listening. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 3 ）篇 类型： 记叙事件经过或过程 典例： 参观清华大学 ( 日记或游记 ) 模板： [ 总述 ] Today we visited Qinghua University. [ 过程 ] Early in the morning we arrived at the gate of Tsinghua University, where we were warmly welcomed by an old professor, who then showed us around the campus. In the library , we saw some university students reading attentively in the reading rooms. After that , we came to the lab building. At the end of the visit , the old professor gave us a lecture on science in the afternoon, which interested us very much. Time passed so quickly that before we knew it, it was time that we had to say goodbye to the professor. [ 结果 ] Since then , I have worked harder at my lessons than usual and made up my mind to be a student of Qinghua University. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 4 ）篇 类型：灾难性事件 典例：报道汶川地震 模板： [ 时间地点 ] A terrible earthquake, measuring at 8.0Ms, struck Wenchuan ， Sichuan, China on May 12 th , 2017. [ 灾情 ] Being the strongest earthquake in China since the 1976 Tangshan earthquake, it caused 69, 197 deaths ， 374, 176 injured, and 18, 340 missing. A great number of houses and buildings were destroyed, leaving as many as 10 ， 000, 000 people homeless and there were hill slides, with roads blocked as well as water supply, electricity and telecommunication cut off. [ 救援 ] Fortunately, the government took immediate action . A great many soldiers were sent there to rescue the people from danger, and lots of volunteers offered to help. Large quantities of food, water, tents, and medicine were transported from all over China and other parts of the world to the earthquake-stricken area. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 5 ）篇 类型 : 人物简介 典例 : 用英语简介李敏同学 模板： [ 姓名职务与特点 ] Li Min, monitor of Class 1 Grade 2( 同位语 ), is healthy and lively. [ 成绩与爱好 ] She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. [ 事迹 ] When she came to school, she had much difficulty with English, but through hard work she made great progress. In she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize . Li Min is very strict with herself in her work and daily life, and is always ready to help others. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 6 ）篇 晨读狂背 类型：讨论或辩论 典例：禁止乞丐在地下人行道行乞留宿 模板： [ 引出主题 ] Recently, Guangzhou passed a law to ban beggars from begging and sleeping in the subways and our class had a discussion about it last Monday. [ 反对及其理由 ]56% of the students don’t agree with the idea because they think some beggars really have difficulty in making a living and have to play music in the subway to survive. [ 赞成及其理由 ] However , 44% of the students favour the idea because they think beggars bring a lot of trouble for the city. What’s more , some beggars are just taking advantage of people’s compassion to make easy money. [ 个人看法 ] Personally, I think it is a good idea to forbid beggars in public places and we should take some measures to help them. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 7 ）篇 类型： 兴趣爱好 典例： 我最喜欢的运动是游泳 模板： My favorite sport is swimming. [ 喜欢的程度 ] I first became interested in swimming when I was eight in primary school. Now I am a member of my school swimming team and I keep on swimming every day in the river near my home even in winter. [ 喜欢的原因 ] I like swimming because it can not only help me build up my body ， but also enrich my life. [ 最喜欢的运动员 ] In this sport, although I like Liu Yu, I admire Michael Phelps, who is one of the best athletes in the world and got 8 gold medals in Beijing Olympics. [ 愿望 ] How I wish to be an Olympic champion some day! 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 8 ）篇 类型 : 赞成反对型 典例 : 学生网上交友 模板 : [ 提出问题 ] Should students make friends on line? [ 赞成及理由 ] Some people say yes, saying the Internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line ， students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help in their foreign language studies. [ 反对及理由 ] Others, however, think students should not, for they think making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line. [ 你的看法 ]In my opinion, students should place their study, health and safety before other things, and as for friendship, we can easily find it on our classmates and other people around us. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 9 ）篇 类型：利弊对比 典例：网购的利弊 模板： [ 点明主题 ] Nowadays many people prefer to shop on line. [ 罗列益处 ] Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, it’s convenient for us to shop on line. Secondly, it helps save much time, with which we can do more other important things . But just as the saying goes, every coin has two sides. Its negative aspects are also apparent . One of the disadvantages is that we are not sure whether the goods we buy are in good quality. Through the above analysis, I believe that positive aspects of shopping on line far outweigh negative ones. Therefore , I would like to shop on line. 高中英语示范写作第（ 10 ）篇 晨读狂背 类型 : 通知 典例 : 举办“中学生才艺大赛”的通知 模板 : (2017 东莞一模 ) Notice A “High School Students Talent Show” will be held in Guangzhou Television Station on May 1. There will be eight kinds of talents, including speeches, songs, dances, and musical instruments playing etc. One 1st prize, three 2nd prizes and five 3rd prizes for each type of talent will be offered at the show. If you’d like to have a try, please go to the TV station to sign up before April 30. It’s a good chance for you to show your special talent. The Students’ Union 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 11 ）篇 类型 : 节日简介 典例 : 介绍端午节 模板 : [ 时间 ]The Dragon Boat Festival, a traditional Chinese festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. It dates from over 2000 years ago, which falls on June 6th this year. [ 方式 ] On this day , Chinese people prepare Zongzi — glutinous( 粘黏的 ) rice dumplings wrapped in bamboo leaves. As the festival name shows, people have dragon boat races to celebrate it, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. [ 意义 ] The Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet of ancient China. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 12 ）篇 类型：列举个例 典例：网购 模板： Shopping on the Internet is becoming very popular. People can shop for a variety of products on it. For example , on the Internet, people can buy various physical products like books, CDs, clothes, etc. They can also buy information products such as online news and stories at the same time. They can download computer softwares from the Internet. What’s more, services such as booking airline tickets or hotel rooms are also available on the Internet. Internet shopping has many advantages, of which the most obvious one is convenience, for the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is often cheaper to buy goods on the Internet. However, we can’t actually see the products we want or check their quality. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 13 ）篇 类型：观点论证 典例：时间比金钱重要 模板：论点 → ( 用论据 ) 论证 → 结论 [ 论点 ] People often say time is money, but in fact time is more valuable than money. [ 论据 ] When money is spent, we can earn it back, but when time is lost, it will never return. The time we have in all our life is limited, and it is even more precious for us senior students. Time is easily lost because of the fact that it is not scarce though it is limited, so it should be valued most. [ 结论 ] In a word , we should get into the habit of saving time and never leave what can be done today until tomorrow. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 14 ）篇 类型： 采访类 典例： 中学生上网成瘾问题 模板： [ 时间、对象、主题 ] Last week, I had an interview with Professor Yang about the middle school students’ addiction to the Internet. [ 数据、问题 ] According to Professor Yang, the number of the netizens in our country has increased to 338 million, and 25% of them are middle school students, most of whom are playing computer games while surfing the Internet. Internet addiction will certainly cause them lack of sleep and will have a bad influence on their health and studies. [ 建议 ] He suggested that schools should try not only to reduce students’ heavy burden and relieve their stress, but also enrich their after-class activities. He also pointed out that it is useful to improve the relationship between teachers and students and to create a warm and harmonious atmosphere in schools and families. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 15 ）篇 类型：地点简介 典例：介绍英国 模板： [ 范围与面积 ] The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, commonly known as the United Kingdom, the UK, or Britain, consists of England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland, with a total area of 244,820 sq km. [ 首都位置与人口 ] The United Kingdom, whose capital is London, lies in the North Atlantic Ocean off the northwest of mainland Europe, with a total population of 161,110,000. [ 气候 ] Britain enjoys warm winters and cool summers with a lot of rainfall throughout the year. [ 历史景点 ] The UK has a long history with many famous places of interest, such as Big Ben, the Tower of London and Greenwich. Besides , Britain is among highly industrialized countries in the world and has made a great contribution to human industrialization. 高中英语示范写作第（ 16 ）篇 晨读狂背 类型：调查类 典例：调查“谁是你的偶像” 模板： [ 调查的时间、问题、对象 ] Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”.[ 调查结果 ] The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows , “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However , the percentage of the boys choosing “great figure” is the same as that of the girls. [ 个人观点 ] As for myself , Thomas Edison is my idol, because his inventions have greatly changed our life. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 17 ）篇 类型：今昔对比类 典例：描述今昔通讯方式的变化 模板： ( 广东 ) [ 总述变化 ] Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years. [ 事例对比 ] In the past , people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using public telephones, which was inconvenient and took much time. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone and people can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more , people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like. With these changes , people’s pace of life has quickened and people’s work has been more efficient. It used to take several days to receive a letter, but now it takes only several seconds, even if they are in different countries. [ 结尾 ] In a word , people are having a much easier life. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 18 ）篇 类型：招领启事类 典例：招领一个钱包 模板： Found [ 时间、地点、物品 ] At about 8:00 am on April 6, , a staff of our airport found a purse at the security check. [ 物品的特征 ] More specifically, it is a black purse made of ox leather, whose brand is LV. To be exact, inside the purse, there is an air ticket of Flight EU2218 from Shenzhen to Chengdu, a credit card, an ID card and some Hongkong dollars. [ 寻找主人意图与联系方式 ] We hope to find the owner . If you are the very one we are looking for, please call us at 0755-23235666 or come to the consultation service in our airport directly. [ 提醒失主该启事的有效期 ] Last but not least, we would like to remind you that we will undertake the responsibility for one and a half month. Shenzhen International Airport 高中英语示范写作第（ 19 ）篇 晨读狂背 类型：心得体会 典例：诚实 / 勿以善小而不为 模板： 1.(2017 广州调研 ) After reading the story, I am so touched by Alan, whose behavior is worth praising. There is no doubt that honesty still plays a very important role in people’s life and only those who are honest will be trusted and respected by people. ( 诚实 ) 2.(2017 汕头一模 ) After reading this story, I was lost in thought. I came to realize that people should never ignore the deed of small kindness. Your small good deeds sometimes will get big returns or make a great difference! ( 勿以善小而不为 ) 高中英语示范写作第（ 20 ）篇 晨读狂背 类型：举例说明 典例：和谐的师生关系对你的影响 模板： (2017 天河一模 ) [ 要证明的观点 ] Actually, having a good relationship with teachers makes it easier for us to get along smoothly with our study at school . [ 引出例子 ] Take me for example . [ 例子 ] My teacher is my good friend. When I fail in the exam, it is my teacher that first helps me to analyze the problem. She is patient enough to make me get over all the difficulties in my study. When I am unhappy, she always listens to me carefully and then gives me some reasonable suggestions, so that I can focus on my study soon. Also, I have learned to be helpful and considerate. [ 重申主题 ] But for the good relationship with my teachers, I could not have made such progress. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 21 ）篇 类型：口头通知。 典例：通知明天全班同学参观科学博物馆。 模板： An Announcement Boys and girls, Attention, please! I have an announcement to make. We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow. We will meet at the school gate at eight in the morning and we will go there on foot. Take your pens and notebooks with you. We should listen and watch carefully and write down something interesting when we visit the museum. Please don’t make any noise in the museum and don’t take any pictures. You’ll have to hand in a report about the visit next Monday. Thank you 高中英语示范写作第（ 22 ）篇 晨读狂背 类型：举例说明 典例：和谐的师生关系对你的影响 模板： Dear Mr. Green, On behalf of the Students’ Union, I’m writing this letter to invite you to participate in our New Year Evening. The party is going to be held in the school meeting hall from 7:00~9:00 p.m. next Friday. Many wonderful performances, presented by the teachers and students in our school , will be shown on the stage, such as the Chinese folk songs and dances , Chinese musical instruments, short plays of traditional style and so on . So it will surely offer you a good opportunity to obtain a clearer picture of Chinese traditional culture. We should be very delighted if you could come ; meanwhile, our evening would be more cheerful if you could give a performance. We are looking forward eagerly to your participation. Yours, Li Ming 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 23 ）篇 类型：关联词语 模板： 1. To start with we haven’t enough money, and secondly we’re too busy. 2. For one thing , I have no money; and for another I’m too busy. 3. The naughty boy in the story “The Boy Who Cried Wolf” has grown up. Now he works as a weatherman in his village. One day he studied the weather carefully and found that a storm was coming. Immediately , he told all the villagers to prepare for the bad weather, but no one believed him. At first , the weather was fine, so the villagers thought that the young man was lying again. Then the weather suddenly changed and a storm came. All the villagers tried to save the crops but it was too late. Finally , the storm ruined all the crops. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 24 ）篇 类型： 图表作文 模板： 1 . [ 总述现象 ] From the chart, we can see clearly that there has been a sharp rise in the average income of Chinese farmers in the past 30 years. 从上表可以清楚地看出 , 在最近 30 年里中国农民的人均收入急剧上升。 2. [ 数据变化 ] As early as 1978, the average income of Chinese farmers was only 193 yuan . Then only 16 years later , it increased to 2181.52 yuan. And by , the average income of Chinese farmers had reached 7890 yuan, which was 40 times as much as 30 years ago. 3. [ 解释原因 ] There are many reasons accounting for this change. Firstly ... Secondly ... Finally ... 有许多原因可以解释这种变化。第一 …… 第二 …… 最后 …… 4. [ 阐述观点 ] As far as I’m concerned, I firmly support the policy of reform and opening up, which is the exact way to make China powerful. 就我来说 , 我坚决支持改革开放政策 , 改革开放是强国之路。 高中英语示范写作第（ 25 ）篇 晨读狂背 类型 : 感谢信 典例 : 含感谢之意的电子邮件 模板 : 陕西 Dear Sue , [ 表示感谢 ] I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us and we all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us . [ 告知近况 ] The other day we had an English speech contest at which I won the first prize and this again reminded me of all your kind help. Yesterday we went to water the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood in your honor . [ 表达愿望 ] We hope to know more about you and your American students and also hope to keep in close touch with you. All the best Li Hua 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 26 ）篇 类型：说明异同 典例 : 古典音乐与流行音乐的异同 模板： [ 同 ]From the point of many people, there are many similarities between classical music and pop music. Both of them can make people relax and enjoy life as well. [ 异 ] However, the differences are also obvious . Classical music can remind them of the sweet memories in the past. Besides , classical music, which was made by the famous musicians like Beethoven is in high class and can last long, while the words of pop music are often concerned with modern life, even true love between friends or lovers. What’s more , pop music is easy to sing. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 27 ）篇 类型：假设处境 典例：假如你有一百万美元 , 你会怎么用？ 模板 : 2017 佛山二模 If I had a million dollars, I would first donate some of the money to poor children in remote mountainous areas because I think they need the money badly. What I would do next is to buy my old parents an agreeable house, for they have brought me up with all their efforts, now it is my turn to repay them in their later years. After having done all the above, I would use the rest of the money to receive further education. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 28 ）篇 类型： 说明计划 典例： 你计划如何向英语老师表达祝福 模板： Teachers’ day is coming soon , I am eager to show my respect to my English teacher. First, I will send her a greeting card in which I will write down all my sincere words. Next, I will send her a bundle of flowers, which represents my gratitude to her. Finally, I will have a heart-to-heart talk with her, telling her that I will work harder to improve my English. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 29 ）篇 类型：分析原因 典例：人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照？ 模板： (2017 广东 ) [ 指出现象 ] When visiting wildlife parks, many tourists love to take photos with animals. [ 分析原因 ] ( 引出 ) Reasons for this are varied . ( 逐条列出 ) ( 旅客 ) Some people want to remember their enjoyable and unforgettable experience with the animals by taking photos with them ( 第一条 ). ( 动物 ) Besides , animals like koala and panda are so lovely that many tourists can not help hugging them and photographing with them ( 第二条 ). 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 30 ）篇 类型：问题解决 典例：如何解决上大学的费用 模板： Many college students, especially the poor ones, are faced with a problem ， that is, how to finance their college education. Therefore, how to finance the college education is worth paying more attention to. The following ways can be adopted to solve the problem . Firstly , with the development of the economy, the society is providing the students with more and more opportunities to do part-time jobs, such as sales promotion, public services and private tutoring. Secondly , the students can ask for a student loan to further their study. Thirdly , they can work hard to win scholarship, which is a great honor as well as an effective solution. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 31 ）篇 类型： 说明重要性 典例： 责任心的重要性 模板： [ 提出观点 ] Responsibility is essential to us. [ 论证 ] ( 正面 )It not only represents one’s noble quality, but also enables one to be steady-going. Being responsible, you will gain many precious things, such as true love. ( 反面 ) Without responsibility, however , you will be an annoyance and can’t do anything successfully. What’s worse ， people will lose belief in you if you are irresponsible. [ 总结 ] In short , only when we are responsible will we be respected and loved by others. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 32 ）篇 类型： 发表看法 典例： 你是否赞成假期外出旅游及理由 模板： Nowadays, more and more people are in favor of travelling during vacation. [ 表明观点 ] To be frank , I can’t agree more with it. [ 说明理由 ] There are several factors contributing to my point . In the first place , journeys can widen our knowledge of geography, customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries and enrich our experiences. In the second place , it is a good way to relax ourselves in my opinion. Furthermore , we can develop better relationship with our friends or family. [ 得出结论 ] Therefore, it goes without saying that we can benefit a lot from travelling. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 33 ）篇 类型： 观点对比 典例： 说说人们对幸福的理解 模板： [ 引出不同观点 ] Opinions are divided on the feeling of happiness. [ 观点一 ] Some people believe that if they have much money or many things, they will be happy. With great wealth, they will be able to do everything they want, with which they will be happy. [ 观点二 ] On the other hand , some people regard their intelligence, or their health as their great happiness. [ 观点三 ] Still others maintain that happiness is closely tied to their family, for they believe that they feel happy when all members of their family are happy and healthy. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 34 ）篇 类型：经历感受 典例：叙述你或你的朋友类似“揠苗助长”的经历和感受 模板 ： The story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. He was once badly ill and went to see the doctor. The doctor gave him some pills, telling him to take them three times a day. However, he failed to follow the doctor’s advice and took them 6 times a day. To his great surprise, he became worse. Just as the old saying goes , “more haste less speed”. No matter what we do, we should obey the law of nature. It is the same with our studies. Only by learning step by step can we achieve something. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 35 ）篇 类型：概括记叙文的内容要点 典例：诚实才是上策 模板 ： 1.The author tells a story about ( 某人 )a Chinese student with an excellent academic achievement who ( 做某事 ) couldn’t find a job in Germany ( 原 因 ) because of his stealing rides at the subway, ( 启示 ) which shows honesty is the best policy. (2017 广州一模 ) 2. ( 某人做了某事 )The author happened to pick an umbrella on a bus and tried to find its owner . ( 结果 )She was pleased to find the owner and also got a job offered by the owner of the umbrella. 晨读狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 36 ）篇 类型：概括说明文的内容要点 典例：父母过度照顾孩子 模板：广州一模 1.( 原因 ) Because of fewer or only child, ( 现象 ) the parents take care of their children too much, ( 结果 ) which causes their children less independent and more anxious about their success. 2. A survey made in Australia shows ( 现象 ) that many teenagers lack one hour’s sleep ( 原因 ) due to organized activities and homework, ( 结果 ) which results in such serious problems as slow progress in study, weight problem, depression, illness and so on. 高中英语示范写作第（ 37 ）篇 晨读狂背 类型：概括议论文的内容要点 典例：早起很重要 / 良好教育很重要 模板： 1.(2017 珠海一模 ) The passage tries to tell us ( 论点 ) that getting up early in the morning ( 论据 ) will benefit us a lot ， including a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day. 2. The author thinks that ( 论点 ) a good education plays an essential part in one’s life, ( 论据 )for it can release our potential and help us gain better-paid jobs. ( 结论 ) Therefore, everyone is supposed to receive higher education. 晨读 狂背 高中英语示范写作第（ 38 ）篇 类型：说明理由 典例：诚实可以赢得友谊吗？为什么？ 模板： ( 提出观点 : 主题句 ) There is no doubt that one can win real friendship by being honesty. ( 谚语证明 ) Just as the popular saying goes, honesty is the best policy. ( 理由一 ) Honest people are more trustworthy, so others are more likely to make friends with them. ( 理由二 ) Besides, being honest can avoid misunderstanding between friends, which will contribute to harmonious relationship between them. 高中英语示范写作第（ 39 ）篇 晨读狂背 类型：观点论证 典例：自信的重要性 模板： [ 提出观点 ] Self-confidence plays an important role in anything we do . Just as Edison said, self-confidence is the first secret of success. [ 论证 ] It is clear that self-confidence means trust in one’s abilities. ( 正面论证 ) If you are full of self-confidence, it will bring you creative power to play ， arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties; as a result, your dreams will come true . ( 反面论证 ) On the contrary, if you have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything. Failure will be following you. It turns out that all your plans fall through. [ 论证 ] No one can deny another fact that self-confidence gives you light when you are in the dark and encouragement when you are discouraged. For example , the secret of Madam Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular. [ 得出结论 ] From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that you must have self-confidence if you want to achieve anything. 高中英语示范写作第（ 40 ）篇 晨读狂背 类型： 问题解决 典例： 如何建立和谐的师生关系 模板： [ 引出建议 ] Here are some suggestions on how to build a harmonious relationship between students and teachers. [ 列举建议 ] Above all , students and teachers should trust each other, which may result in better communication and understanding. What’s more , students should respect teachers while teachers treat every student fairly. [ 结束语 ] Only by trusting and respecting each other can they achieve their goal.