【英语】2018届二轮复习书面表达篇之提纲作文写作指导教案（10页）

【英语】2018届二轮复习书面表达篇之提纲作文写作指导教案（10页）

‎2018届 二轮复习 书面表达篇之提纲作文写作指导 考纲解读 考试大纲 要求 考纲解读 ‎《普通高中英语课程标准》对语言技能目标＂写＂的要求如下：(1)能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要；(2)能根据文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告；(3)能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；(4)能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。‎ ‎(1)主题明确；(2)内容充实；(3)结构合理；(4)逻辑性强；(5)语言准确、得体。‎ ‎《考试说明》要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能:准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。提纲作文要求考生根据给出的提示性文字,首先确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述,表达主旨。‎ 高考预测 提纲类作文是近年高考书面表达的热点题型。它往往以列要点或用表格的形式呈现给考生相关信息，通常有较多的文字说明，对考生需要表达的内容有明确的要求和一定的限制。考查形式有书信、报道、通知、日记、发言稿、对某人或某物的介绍、欢迎辞等。如下表所示：‎ 命题轨迹 命题趋势 ‎2014年 ‎2015年 ‎1. 书面表达多数以书信或电子邮件的形式进行控制性或半开放性考查，也会出现其他体裁的写作，比如：日记、通知、记叙文、议论文和说明文等。‎ ‎2. 题材内容大都是与中学生学习生活密切相关的活动，尤其是学校的课堂学习、课外活动、讲座、中外联谊、同学友谊等。‎ 新课标卷Ⅰ 新课标卷Ⅱ 新课标卷Ⅰ 新课标卷Ⅱ 体裁 书信 征文 书信 书信 话题 暑假去 英国学习 十年后的我 征稿 邀请去敬老院 类型 图表 开放 提纲 提纲 题目以提纲等形式给出主题或几点提示，要求考生充分围绕提示合理发挥，‎ 拓展主题，组织语言，写出一篇内容充实的短文。2016年高考仍会延续近年考查特点，写作内容同样贴近考生的生活实际。‎ 答题技巧 写作时我们要注意：‎ ‎1. 认真审题，分析所给的提纲要点，认清题目和提纲之间的关系，确定文章的主题、内容和文体。‎ ‎2. 每一个提纲要点都可以作为文章的段落层次的依据，段落的展开围绕提纲的中心内容，不能偏离，也不能任意增减。‎ ‎3. 提纲只是对文章的提示和概括，不是主题句。这需要根据提纲的性质写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子，使之成为主题句。然后围绕主题句进行扩展。‎ ‎4. 收集材料，支持主题句。材料可以是事实、例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。‎ ‎☞【素材锦囊】‎ ‎1. 开头语句 ‎(1)I’m very delighted to have the chance to...‎ ‎(2)As is often said/the case...‎ ‎(3)We had a heated discussion about/on...and different students held different opinions.‎ ‎(4)With the development of...more and more people...‎ ‎(5)At present, there is a widespread concern that...‎ ‎2. 衔接语句 ‎(1)Wonderful as sth is, however, it has its own disadvantages as well.‎ ‎(2)As/So far as I’m concerned, I’m in favor of the first/second ‎ view.‎ ‎(3)The main reason why...is that...‎ ‎(4)The reasons are as follows.‎ ‎(5)Every coin has its two sides. ‎ ‎3. 结尾语句 ‎(1)Taking all these into account/consideration, we may safely reach the conclusion that...‎ ‎(2)So we must take measures to...‎ ‎(3)I felt excited, though tired out, to make a difference to sb/sth…‎ ‎☞【写作步骤】‎ ‎1．仔细审题，明确要求。‎ 审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎2．列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。‎ 此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。‎ ‎3．检查核实，确保无误。‎ 书面表达写作八要 审题要准确，段落要合理；‎ 要点要全面，句子要正确；‎ 句式要多变，行文要连贯；‎ 字数要标准，卷面要整洁。‎ 真题回顾 典例一 (2015·新课标卷I)‎ 假定你是李华，你校英文报＂外国文化＂栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：‎ ‎1. 栏目介绍；‎ ‎2. 稿件内容；‎ ‎3. 稿件长度：约400词；‎ ‎4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头语已为你写好。 ‎ Dear Peter,‎ I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【审题谋篇】‎ ‎1. 审文体：应用文，属于提纲式半开放作文 ‎ ‎2. 审格式：书信 ‎3. 审人称：以第三人称为主，第二人称为辅 ‎4. 审时态：一般现在时 ‎5. 审要点：注意要点要齐全，包括栏目介绍、稿件内容、稿件长度和交稿日期。写作时注意恰当地使用衔接词和过渡词，以使文章行文连贯、流畅。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Peter,‎ I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.‎ The ＂Foreign Cultures＂ section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 典例二 (2015·新课标卷Ⅱ)‎ 假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 出发及返回时间；‎ ‎2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 结语已为你写好。‎ Dear Lucy,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于英文书信，要求根据提示信息、说明邀请Lucy一起去参加活动（去敬老院陪老人们过重阳节）。写作时注意以下几点：‎ ‎1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：邀请、时间、具体活动。‎ ‎2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定的逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。‎ ‎3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。就本文而言应该用一般将来时态。‎ ‎4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Lucy,‎ I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【范文点评】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。文中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing sth。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语，如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。‎ 名校典题 ‎(2016·山西沂州四校联考)假设你是新华中学高三的学生李华，进入高三后你的朋友William感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。‎ 要点：‎ ‎1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；‎ ‎2. 积极参加体育活动，听听音乐；‎ ‎3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右； ‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头和结尾已经为你写好。‎ Dear William,‎ Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three.______________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ 参考范文 Dear William,‎ Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three. Here is some advice on how to study effectively.‎ First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and it can help us concentrate better.‎ Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.‎ Hope these can benefit you.‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 专家解读 A 假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。最近，你校广播站面向全体学生招募两名英语播音员。你很想尝试一下，请根据下面的要点写一封自荐信。‎ ‎1. 对播音感兴趣，受过专业训练，梦想成为一名播音员；‎ ‎2. 擅长英语，去年获得英语竞赛第一名；‎ ‎3. 希望被录取。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I am Li Hua, a student in Grade 3. ____________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua B 最近，某英语交流学习论坛提出一个话题＂Should square dancing be forbidden?＂，并邀请网友参与讨论。你打算参加，请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿。‎ 内容包括：‎ ‎1. 广场舞的现状；‎ ‎2. 表明你的观点；‎ ‎3. 给出理由。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Should square dancing be forbidden?‎ In recent years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in cities.______________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ C 美国高中生Mike将来北京参加冬令营活动，你家是他的接待家庭。请根据以下提示给Mike写信。 ‎ ‎1. 机场接机；‎ ‎2. 单独卧室, 可以上网；‎ ‎3. 陪同浏览北京。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右。‎ ‎ 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎ 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Mike, ‎ My parents and I are so happy that you’re coming to stay with us next month. __________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Joe 参考范文 A Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I am Li Hua, a student in Grade 3. I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers, so I’m writing to introduce myself.‎ First of all, I am greatly interested in broadcasting. I have received some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future. Besides, I am good at English,‎ ‎ and won the first prize in the English Speech Competition last year. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. If I am admitted, I will try my best to serve the students. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station.‎ I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua B Should square dancing be forbidden?‎ In recent years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in cities. Many people have a habit of dancing to music with others. However, the loud noise disturbs the people who live around the square. Should square dancing be forbidden?‎ I think square dancing is of great benefits, and it shouldn’t be forbidden. Here are the reasons. First of all, dancing is a good way to take exercise, which can help people to build themselves up. It also provides a chance for people to communicate with each other. Besides, the square is a good place for people to work it out.‎ At the same time, the people living near the square have the right to live in peace. So I suggest the time and volume when people dance on the square should be limited.‎ C Dear Mike, ‎ My parents and I are so happy that you’re coming to stay with us next month. We’re going to pick you up at the airport when you arrive. We have arranged a separate room for you, and there is a computer in it. You can get online whenever you want and learn whatever you want. I hope you will feel comfortable and convenient here. Beijing has its ‎ special beauty in winter. I’d like to be your tour guide to get around Beijing when you are free. Since both of us are teenagers, I believe we have a lot in common and will have a good time together. ‎ Looking forward to seeing you soon! ‎ Yours,‎ Joe