19年中考英语真题 分类 专题21-3 书面表达（咨询建议类）（第02期）（解析版）

19年中考英语真题 分类 专题21-3 书面表达（咨询建议类）（第02期）（解析版）

‎2019年中考真题英语分项汇编 专题21 书面表达 考点3 咨询建议类 ‎（一）【2019 •四川省成都市】‎ 假如你叫Ann，你的中国朋友小华发来email请教如何利用词典学习英语。请参考截图及注释，根据提示回一封email。要点如下：‎ ‎1. 根据示例，概括介绍词条构成；‎ ‎2. 如何用词典解决词汇学习中的问题（至少两点）；‎ ‎3. 介绍词典对英语学习的好处（至少两点）。‎ ‎(taken from an English- Chinese dictionary ‎ 注意：l. 截图内容仅供参考，可以引用，不能照抄；‎ ‎ 2. 文中不能出现真实学校和姓名；‎ ‎ 3. 词数：100左右。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Xiaohua,‎ Glad to receive your letter. You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English. Here are some of my thoughts.‎ Words in a dictionary are called entries. Each entry has five sections, such as pronunciation, part of speech, definition, usage and word group. Of course, sometimes the same word has different parts of speech and definitions.‎ Using dictionaries can solve problems in vocabulary learning. When we meet a new word, with the help of a dictionary, we can not only find out its pronunciation, but also know its meaning. A dictionary is of great benefit to English learning. First of all, it can help us understand the meaning of words accurately. Secondly, it can enrich our knowledge and exercise our thinking. Finally, it can help us learn to express our ideas.‎ I hope it's helpful to you.‎ Yours,‎ Ann ‎【名师点评】‎ 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to use a dictionary, such as, to learn English, part of speech, word family, of course, different parts of, with the help of a dictionary, not only... but also, find out, first of all, help sb. do, learn to do等。而You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English./ When we meet a new word, with the help of a dictionary, we can not only find out its pronunciation, but also know its meaning./ I hope it's helpful to you等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。‎ ‎（二）【2019 •安徽省】‎ 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：‎ ‎1. 经常做户外活动；‎ ‎2. 很少用电子产品；‎ ‎3. 坚持做眼保健操；‎ ‎4. ……‎ 注意：1.词数80-100；‎ ‎ 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；‎ ‎ 4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。‎ Dear Mike,‎ I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ____________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【写作思路】‎ 这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，给自己的英国笔友Mike写信，给他介绍一下你在保护视力方面的做法。审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在是，第一人称来叙述，内容应包括：首先讲述题目中Mike的视力减退问题，并引出文章的主题；然后具体介绍自己在保护视力方面的做法，这一部分是文章的主体可以按照题目中所列的内容进行介绍，并对第四条进行补充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。写作时应注意：短文按内容表达的需要，分成三段，每一段一个主题；内容应包括题目中的所有要点，不能遗漏；课根据表达需要，增加细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。其次应注意文章的表达，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，句式应符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使行文连贯，表达流畅。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Mike,‎ I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.‎ At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I ‎ usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy. ‎ I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【名师点评】‎ 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，对Mike介绍了自己在保护视力方面的一些做法。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。短文结构清晰，共分成三段：第一段将题目中的写作背景进行了介绍，并引出了文章的话题；第二段具体介绍了自己的做法，这一段是文章的中心，所占篇幅最大。作者按照题目的提示进行表述，并对细节进行了拓展；第三段提出了自己的希望。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句式结构比较复杂，使用了很多较高级的表达方式，包括动词短语、介词短语、宾语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等。如I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life. At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.、In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. 等。‎ ‎（三）【2019 •湖南湘西州】‎ 湘西自治州正在进行“美丽湘西”建设，我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们家乡变得更美。作为学生，请以“Start out small”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书。‎ 要点提示：1. 多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。‎ ‎ 2. 购物时重复使用袋子。‎ ‎ 3. 不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。‎ ‎ 4. 遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。‎ 要求：1. 80词以上。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 2. 文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然。不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。‎ 参考词汇：protect the environment；reuse bags；plant；cut down；throw；wait in line；be wie；oboeysart outsnal Start out small Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown?‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Hello，everyone．We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable．What can we do for our hometown？（点题）In order to make our hometown more beautiful，as students，I think we should start from small things．【高分句型一】（从小事做起）First of all，we should know the importance of protecting the environment．We should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees randomly．Second，we had better reuse the bag when shopping．【高分句型二】We can't throw rubbish about，and we should keep the rivers clean and so on．In addition，we must obey public rules and be civilized students．When we got on the bus，we should wait in line．（具体做法）‎ ‎【名师点评】‎ 能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ In order to make our hometown more beautiful， as students， I think we should start from small things．为了使我们的家乡更美丽，作为学生，我认为我们应该从小事开始。‎ in order to do sth为了做某事；I think+宾语从句。‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ Second， we had better reuse the bag when shopping．第二，我们最好重用当购物袋。‎ had better do sth 最好做某事。‎ ‎（四）【2019 •湖南省益阳市】‎ 最近，你美国的笔友Tony在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件——提出你的一些建议。‎ 建议内容包括：遇到问题多倾诉，多与他人分享情绪，尊重他人，与人为善，诚实守信……‎ 要求：l．词数60-80，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。‎ 参考词汇：share solve respect friendly be honest to Dear Tony,‎ I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates: I'm glad to help you. ________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ I hope everything will go well with you soon.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【写作思路】‎ 本文的写作要求是一封电子邮件。首先，对于朋友在交友过程中遇到难题表示歉意。用情态动词提建议，最后希望能交到跟多朋友。然后，分步骤给出另外四个建议处理和同学们的关系。最后希望一切会好起来。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Tony,‎ I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. I'm glad to help you. Here are some suggestions for you.‎ First, when you have difficulties, you should talk to your parents, your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happiness with them. They will help you solve the problem.‎ Second, when you get along with your friends, you are supposed to respect them.‎ Third, you should be friendly to people around you. You can help each other.‎ Last but not least, you have to be honest to your friends. Then you will make more friends.‎ I hope everything will go well with you soon.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【名师点评】‎ 本文对于在和同学们交往中遇到的问题提出建议，分四步给出合理建议，最后指出对朋友要诚实，并希望能够交到更多朋友。用到的短语有：share sth. with sb.；get along with和……相处；be supposed to do应该做某事和Last but not least等，使得文章丰富多彩；长短句搭配合理。‎ ‎（五）【2019 •贵州省黔南州】‎ 每年的6月6日是我国的"爱眼日"，可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要，为此，学校将在英语文化节期间举行一场"爱眼日"英语演讲比赛．请你写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议．‎ 内容：1．保护视力的重要性（请写1点）‎ ‎ 2．对保护视力的建议：‎ ‎ （1）阅读时注意用眼卫生；‎ ‎ （2）少用电子产品；‎ ‎ （3）常看绿色植物；‎ ‎ （4）做眼保健操；‎ ‎ （5）多做户外运动．‎ 要求：1．结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；‎ ‎ 2．文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；‎ ‎ 3．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：Sight Day "爱眼日"； electronic products 电子产品； eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操 Dear friends,‎ June 6 is our country's Sight Day _____________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Thank you!‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear friends,‎ ‎ June 6 is our country's Sight Day. As we know, "Eyes are the windows of the soul". Everyone understands the importance of the eyes.（保护视力的重要性）But now more and more students are getting near-sighted. So ‎ how can we protect our eyes? Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes.‎ First, we should be cautious on the health of using eyes. We should not keep your eyes working for a long time. While reading, we should keep the book about a foot away from us. After reading for an hour or two, we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance. Second, using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes.【高分句型一】 Besides, we should see green plants as often as possible. Finally, remember to do eye-protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports, which will help us keep good eyesight.【高分句型二】 （对保护视力的几条建议）‎ ‎（六）【2019 •吉林省】‎ 假如你是李华，想参加China Daily 举办的以"梦想职业体验"为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。‎ 内容包括：1. 个人信息与兴趣爱好；‎ ‎ 2. 梦想职业与个人计划。‎ 写作要求：1. 词数90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. _____________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours Sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Mr. Smith, ‎ It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.（开篇点明题意）‎ My name is Li Hua. I like reading and writing. I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates ‎ after school （高分句型一）．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp ，I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience．If I have this kind of oppotunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance（高分句型二）．After work，I will spend more time making a summary．（从自己的个人信息和兴趣爱好出发进行介绍自己）‎ I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．（结尾给出期望）‎ Best wishes!‎