【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达之读后续写学案

【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达之读后续写学案

读后续写(一)‎ ‎ (建议用时：每篇25分钟)‎ A 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。‎ Somewhere，sometime，there lived a rich man whose name was Kadish．He had an only son called Atzel．Kadish had a distant relative，an orphan(孤儿) girl，called Aksah．Atzel was a tall boy with black hair and black eyes.Aksah had blue eyes and golden hair.Both were about the same age.As children，they ate together，studied together，and played together.It was taken for granted that when they grew up they would get__married．‎ But when they had grown up，Atzel suddenly became ill.It was a__sickness no one had ever heard of before. Atzel imagined that he was dead.‎ How did such an idea come to him? It seems he had had an old nurse who always told stories about paradise(天堂)．She had told him that in paradise it was not necessary to work or to study.In paradise one ate the meat of wild oxen(牛) and whales; one slept late into the day; and one had no__duties．‎ Atzel was lazy by nature.He hated to get up early and to study.He knew that one day he would have to take over his__father’s__business and he did not want to.‎ Since the only way to get to paradise was to die，he had made up his mind to do just that as quickly as possible.He thought about it so much that soon he began to imagine that he was dead.‎ Of course his__parents became terribly worried.Aksah cried in secret.The__family did everything possible to try to convince(使相信) Atzel that he was still alive，but he refused to believe them.He would say，“Why don’t you bury me? You see that I am dead.Because of you I cannot get to paradise.”‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；‎ ‎2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；‎ ‎3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。‎ Paragraph 1: ‎ Many doctors were called in to examine Atzel.___________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Paragraph 2: ‎ The wise man took a look at Atzel and called out，“Why do you keep a dead body in the house? Why don’t you make a funeral(葬礼)？”___________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version：‎ Paragraph 1：‎ Many doctors were called in to examine Atzel. They tried all methods they knew to make Atzel believe that he was alive. They pointed out that he was talking and eating while dead people could do neither. But before long, Atzel began to eat less, and he hardly spoke. The__family feared that he would die soon. So Aksah went to ask a wise man for help.‎ Paragraph 2：‎ The wise man took a look at Atzel and called out. “Why do you keep a dead body in the house? Why don’t you make a funeral (葬礼)？”Hearing these words, Atzel smiled and said, “You see, I was right.” His__parents became terribly frightened. But Aksah persuaded them to follow the wise man’s idea and made a funeral for their son immediately. Then the wise man suggested preparing a room like paradise for Atzel to move in. They made life in paradise as boring as possible according to the wise man. Soon, Atzel got fed up and started to miss his parents and Aksah. Several days later, Atzel finally realized that it was much better to be alive．‎ B 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。‎ I grew up in the shadow of Yankee Stadium and just fell in love with baseball.‎ When Roger came to the New York Yankees from the Kansas City Athletics in 1960, I was eleven. I had been burned in a fire in__August,__so I was laid up for a while and followed baseball even more closely. I remembered a headline that said Roger refreshed the__Yankees. It made me think this Roger was someone special.‎ For me, there was something about the way he swung the__bat,__the way he played right field and the way he looked. I had an idol. In 1961 the entire country was wrapped up in the homerun race between Maris and Mickey Mantle and Babe Ruth’s ghost. I cut out every single article on Roger and told myself that when I got older and could afford it, I would have my scrapbooks(剪贴簿) professionally bound(装有封面的). ‎ I usually sat in Section 31, Row 162A, Seat 1 in Yankee Stadium. Right field. I would buy a general admission ticket, but I knew the policeman,__so I would switch over to the reserved seat, ‎ and that one was frequently empty.‎ I’d get to the stadium about two hours before it opened. I would see Roger park his car, and I would say hello and tell him what a big fan I was. After a while, he started to notice me. One day he threw me a baseball during__batting__practice,__and I was so surprised that I couldn’t lift my arms. Somebody else got the ball. So Roger spoke to Linz,__a utility infielder, and Linz came over, took a ball out of his pocket and said，“Put out your hand. This is from Roger.”‎ After that, my friends kept pushing me，“Why don’t you ask him for one of his homerun bats？”Finally, when Roger was standing by__the__fence,__I made the request. He said，“Sure. Next time I break one.”‎ This was in 1965. The Yankees had a West Coast trip, and I was listening to their game against the Los Angeles Angels on the radio late one night, and Roger cracked a bat. ‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；‎ ‎2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；‎ ‎3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。‎ Paragraph 1: ‎ When the club came back to town, my friend and I went to the stadium，_______________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Paragraph 2：‎ I waited in the boxseat area to the left of the rest place.___________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version：‎ Paragraph 1：‎ When the club came back to town, my friend and I went to the stadium, and during__batting__practice Roger walked straight over to me and said，“I’ve got the__bat for you.”I said，“Oh, my God, I can’t thank you enough.”Before the game, I went to the rest place. I stepped up to the great big policeman stationed there and poured my heart out，“You have to understand, please understand, Roger told me to come here！”‎ Paragraph 2：‎ I waited in the boxseat area to the left of the rest place. Then, during batting practice, I told Linz that I wanted to see Roger, my idol. He agreed. When I saw Roger walking up the runway with ‎ a bat in his hand, I was so excited that I almost fell. I didn’t know what he was thinking seeing a kid hanging upside down, but when he handed me the bat, it was one of the most exciting moments in my young life.‎ C ‎(2019·浙江金丽衢十二校高三联考)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。‎ A long time ago，there was a huge apple tree.A little boy loved to come and play around it everyday.He climbed to the top，ate the apples，took a nap under the shadow...He loved the tree and the tree loved to play__with him.‎ Time went by...The little boy had grown up and he no__longer played around the tree every day.‎ One day，the boy came back to the tree，looking quite sad．“Come and play with me，”the tree asked the boy.“I am no longer a kid.I don’t play around trees anymore.”The boy replied，“I want toys.I need money to buy them.” “Sorry，but I don’t have money...but you can pick all my apples and sell them.So you will have money.” The boy was so excited. He grabbed all the apples on the tree and left happily. The boy never came back after he picked the apples. The tree was sad.‎ One day，the boy returned and the tree was so excited.“Come and play with me！” the tree said. “I don’t have time to play.I have to work for my family. We need a house for shelter.Can you help me？” “Sorry，but I don’t have a house.But you can chop off my branches to build your house.” So the boy cut all the branches off the tree and left happily.The tree was glad to see him happy but the boy never came back since then.The tree was lonely and sad again.‎ One hot summer day，the boy returned and the tree was delighted.“Come and play with me！” the tree said.“I am sad and getting tired．I want to go sailing to relax myself.Can you give me a boat？” “Use my trunk to build your boat.You can sail far away and be happy．” So the boy cut the tree trunk to make a boat.He went sailing and never showed__up for a long time.‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；‎ ‎2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；‎ ‎3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。‎ Paragraph 1：‎ Finally，the boy returned after he left for so many years.__________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Paragraph 2：‎ This is a story of everyone.The tree is actually our parents._________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version：‎ Paragraph 1：‎ Finally, the boy returned after he left for so many years. “Sorry, my boy. But I don’t have anything for you anymore. No more apples,__no more branches__and no more trunk. The only thing left is my dying roots，” the tree said with tears. “I don’t need much now, just a place to rest. I’m tired after all these years.” The boy replied. “Good! Old tree root is, just a place to rest. Come, sit down with me and rest.” The boy sat down and the tree smiled with tears...‎ Paragraph 2：‎ This is a story of everyone. The tree is actually our parents. When we were young, we loved to play__with__Mom and Dad, when we grow up, we leave them and only come when we need something or when we’re sad. No matter what happen, parents are always there and ready to give everything they have to make us happy. You may think that the boy is cruel to the tree but that’s how all of us treating our parents.‎ 读后续写(二)‎ ‎ (建议用时：每篇25分钟)‎ A ‎(2019·金华十校高三调研)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。‎ There was once a beautiful town and a couple of lovers would often stay together on the top of the mountain enjoying__the__sunrise and by the sea appreciating the__sunset．Everyone who knew them could not help envying them for their happy love.‎ But one day，the man was severely injured and lying in bed in hospital for several days without any consciousness．The woman guarded him by the bed in daytime，calling his name nonstop while at night，she would go to the__church and pray to God until her tears ran out.‎ A week passed by and the man was still sleeping.One day，God was finally moved by her love and persistence and would like to do her a special favor.‎ God said，“I can help your lover recover quickly on the condition that you should promise to be a butterfly for three years.Do you agree with the deal？” She said excitedly and firmly，“Yes，I do! I won’t regret doing that.”‎ The next day，the woman became a beautiful butterfly，flying hurriedly to the hospital.It turned ‎ out that the man came to his consciousness and woke up，talking with a doctor.She could not hear what they were talking about because she could not fly into the house.What she could do was watch her beloved through the windows helplessly.‎ Another spring came and the__butterfly was in a hurry to fly back to see the man，only to realize that there was a pretty lady standing by him.At that moment，she was so shocked that she almost fell down from the sky.She could hardly believe her eyes.‎ People were talking about that the man was seriously ill during Christmas and that the pretty and cute female doctor took good care of him and that finally they fell in sweet love.‎ The butterfly felt heartstricken．In the following days，she often saw the man take the woman to the top of the mountain to enjoy the sunrise and to the seaside to enjoy the sunset together.‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；‎ ‎2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；‎ ‎3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。‎ Paragraph 1：‎ The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her，but now they belonged to another woman.She could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Paragraph 2：‎ God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly，“Do you regret for what you have done？”________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version：‎ Paragraph 1：‎ The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her, but now they belonged to another woman.She could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on. On the last day of the third year when the deal between God and the__butterfly was almost over, the man held a wedding with his girlfriend. The__church was crowded with people. The butterfly flew into the church quietly and rested on the shoulder of God, listening to the man’s promise to the bride and seeing him put a ring on her finger and kiss her sweetly. The butterfly was sad in tears．‎ Paragraph 2：‎ God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly，“Do you regret for what you have done？”The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face, “No.” God felt a bit relieved and said, “Tomorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life...” Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy__the__sunrise and the__sunset happily together with them.‎ B 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。‎ A merchant sent his son to learn the__secret__of__happiness__from the wisest of men.__The__young__man__wandered through the desert for forty days until he reached a beautiful castle__at the top of a mountain.There lived the__wise__man that the young man was looking for.‎ However，instead of finding a holy man，our hero entered a room and saw a great deal of activity: merchants coming and going，people chatting in the corners，a band playing sweet music，and there was a table with different kinds of delicious food on it.The wise man talked to everybody，and the young man had to wait for two hours until it was time for his audience.‎ The wise man listened attentively to the reason for the boy’s visit，but told him that at that moment he did not have the time to explain to him the secret of happiness.He offered his suggestion__that the young man take a walk around his castle and come back in two hours’ time.‎ ‎“However，I want to ask you a favor，” he added，handing the boy a teaspoon，in which he poured two__drops__of__oil. “While you walk，carry this spoon and don’t let the oil spill(溢出)”．‎ The young man began to walk around the castle，always keeping his eyes fixed on the spoon.At the end of two hours he returned to the presence of the wise man.‎ ‎“So，” asked the wise man，“did you see the beautiful curtains hanging from the windows of my dining room? Did you see the garden that the master of gardeners took ten years to create？Did you notice the beautiful furniture in my library？”‎ Embarrassed，the young man admitted that he had seen nothing.His only concern was not to spill the drops of oil the wise man had given him.‎ ‎“So, go back and see the wonders of my world，” said the wise man.“You can’t trust a man if you don’t know his house.”‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；‎ ‎2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；‎ ‎3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。‎ Paragraph 1：‎ Now more at case，the young man took the spoon and walked around the castle again.________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Paragraph 2：‎ ‎“But where are the two drops of oil I gave you？” asked the wise man.______________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version：‎ Paragraph 1：‎ Now more at ease, the young man took the spoon and walked around the castle again. This time he paid attention to all the works of art that hung from the ceiling and walls. The__young__man saw the gardens, the mountains all around the palace, the delicacy of the flowers, the taste with which each work of art was placed in its cupboard. Returning to the__wise__man,__he reported in detail all that he had seen.‎ Paragraph 2：‎ ‎“But where are the two drops of oil I gave you？” asked the wise man. Looking down at the spoon, the young man realized that he had spilled the oil. “Well, that is the only advice I have to give you，” said the wise man. “The__secret__of__happiness lies in looking at all the wonders of the world and never forgetting the two__drops__of__oil in the spoon．”‎ C 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。‎ Once upon a time, two brothers who lived on neighboring farms fell into conflict. It was the first serious disagreement in forty years of farming side by side, sharing machinery, and trading labour and goods as needed without a hitch. Then the long cooperation fell__apart. It began with a small misunderstanding and then grew into a major difference, and finally it exploded into an exchange of bitter words followed by weeks of silence．‎ One morning, there was a knock on John’s door. He opened it to find a man with a carpenter’s toolbox.“I’m looking for a few days’ work，”he said.“Perhaps you have a few jobs here and there. Could I help you？”“Yes，”said John.“I do have a job for you. Look across the small creek at that farm. That’s my neighbor. In fact, it’s my younger__brother. Last week there was a meadow between us and he took his bulldozer(推土机)there and now there is a creek between us. ‎ Well, he may have done this to annoy me but I’ll do better. See that pile of wood by the barn(谷仓)? I want you to build__a__fence—an 8feethigh fence—so I won’t need to see his place anymore.”The carpenter said，“I think I understand the situation. Show me the nails and hole digger and I’ll be able to do a job that please you.”The older brother had to go to the town for supplies, so he helped the carpenter get everything ready and then he left．‎ The carpenter worked__hard all that day measuring, sawing and nailing the bridge. At sunset when John returned, the carpenter had just finished his job. John’s eyes opened wide, his jaw dropped.‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；‎ ‎2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；‎ ‎3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。‎ Paragraph 1：‎ There was no fence at all. It was a bridge! ______________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Paragraph 2：‎ They turned to see the carpenter lift the toolbox onto his shoulder.________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version：‎ Paragraph 1：‎ There was no fence at all. It was a bridge! A bridge stretched from one side of the creek to the other! John was about to complain about everything when he found the__neighbor,__his younger__brother,__was coming across the bridge, his hands outstretched.“You are quite a fellow to build this bridge after all I have said and done，”said John’s brother. The two brothers met in the middle, taking each other’s hand and hugging each other.‎ Paragraph 2：‎ They turned to see the carpenter lift the toolbox onto his shoulder.“No, wait! Stay a few more days. We have more jobs for you，”said the older brother.“I’d love to stay on，”the carpenter said，“but I have many more bridges to build.”Observing the carpenter leaving, the two brothers waved ‎ grateful goodbye to him. What a thoughtprovoking story! Every day we have the choice of building__a__fence or a bridge. One leads to separation and anger while the other leads to openness and friendship.‎