2018届二轮复习2004-2016全国卷书面表达汇总教案（10页）

2018届二轮复习2004-2016全国卷书面表达汇总教案（10页）

2004 — 2016 年全国卷英语书面表达 敬泽宇 第 1 页 共 10 页 2004-2016 年高考英语全国卷书面表达统计 年份 内容 作文主题 类型 2016 请帮修改申请书的文字和格式 2016 年全国卷 I 作文：请求帮助修改文章 书信（求助） 写信为摄影展约稿，主题、时间、邮箱 2016 年全国卷 II 作文：写信为摄影展约稿 书信（约稿） 无法赴约，写信致歉并附原因 2015 年全国卷 III 作文：无法赴约，写信致歉 书信（道歉） 2015 告知 栏目介绍; 稿件内容长度和交稿 日期等信息 2015 年全国卷 I 作文：请给美国朋友彼得写信约 稿 书信 告知时间活动流程等 2015 年全国卷 II 作文：邀请外教去敬老院的信 书信 2014 询问信息完整性 2014 年全国卷 I 作文：就暑期学习询问有关情况 书信 从家庭，工作，业余生活等方面描述十 年后的我 2014 年全国卷 II 作文：十年后的我 记叙文 2013 说明自己情况，询问是否可以帮助接机 2013 年全国卷 I 作文：问朋友是否可以帮助接机 借机 书信 介绍代卖中国结，外观、象征意义、大 小尺寸 2013 年全国卷 II 作文：请朋友代卖中国结 书信 2012 夏令营申请信 2012 年全国卷 I 作文：申请参加夏令营 书信（申请） 告知生日 party 相关消息，邀请来参加 2012 年全国卷 II 作文：生日 party 邀请信 书信（邀请） 2011 向语言辅导中心寻求帮助 2011 年全国卷 I 作文：向语言辅导中心寻求帮助 书信（求助） 报刊征求意见，给主编写信 2011 年全国卷 II 作文：给主编的信 书信（建议） 2010 邀请当评委，并且通知相关时间及安排 2010 年全国卷 I 作文：写信邀请当评委 书信（邀请） 学校招聘外教，告知朋友招聘要求 2010 年全国卷 II 作文：写信告知招聘信息 书信（招聘） 2009 告知几个事情的留言条 2009 年全国卷 I 作文：英语留言条 留言 介绍前门大街位置交通特色等 2009 年全国卷 II 作文：回信介绍前门大街改造情 况 书信（介绍） 2008 询问熊猫相关情况 2008 年全国卷 I 作文：给动物园工作人员的信 书信 根据信息完成回信，怎样学习中文 2008 年全国卷 II 作文：怎样学中文的回信 书信（建议） 2007 根据条件描述理想中笔友，理由 2007 年全国卷 I 作文：找笔友 书信（人物） 宾馆信息介绍 2007 年全国卷 II 作文：宾馆介绍 说明文（宾馆） 2006 根据图片给出信息进行描述 2006 年全国卷 I 作文：图书馆介绍的信 书信（图画） 自我介绍 2006 年全国卷 II 作文：申请志愿者的信 书信（申请） 2005 动物园是否迁址：正反两方面观点 2005 年全国卷 I 作文：就动物园搬迁问题给报社 的信 书信 询问旅游广告信息的完整性 2005 年全国卷 II 作文： 英文电子邮件 书信 2004 邀请外国学生报名参加才艺大赛,告知 信息 2004 年全国卷 I 作文：给美国朋友介绍才艺比赛 的信 书信（信息介绍） 借宿你家表示欢迎并安排活动流程 2004 年全国卷 II 作文：给朋友介绍活动安排的信 书信（活动安排） 写信请假 2004 年全国卷 IIII 作文：写信请假 书信 写信介绍汉语班的情况 2004 年全国卷Ⅳ作文：写信介绍汉语班的情况 书信（信息介绍） (2016 年全国卷Ⅰ,分值 25 分，100 词左右) 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教 Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format） 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 【参考答案】 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I havealready finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor. Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful. Yours , Li Hua (2016 年全国卷Ⅱ,分值 25 分，100 词左右) 假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友 Peter 写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1．主题：环境保护； 2．展览时间； 3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com. 注意： 1．词数 100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【参考答案】 Dear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know youtake good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, youcan send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours , Lihua (2016 年全国卷Ⅲ,分值 25 分，100 词左右) 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友 Bob 约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【参考答案】 Dear Bob, I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. 2004 — 2016 年全国卷英语书面表达 敬泽宇 第 2 页 共 10 页 Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours , Li Hua (2015 年全国卷Ⅰ,分值 25 分，100 词左右) 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋 友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： 1. 栏目介绍。 2. 稿件内容； 3. 稿件长度：约 400 词汇 4. 交稿日期：6 月 28 日前天 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 【参考答案】 Dear Peter, I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，内容是美国节日 风俗和中学生生活。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个 要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议 Peter 介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的 要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。 【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如 It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如 be popular among, so long as,look forward to , hear from 等。 考点：考查提纲作文。 (2015 年全国卷Ⅱ,分值 25 分，100 词左右) 假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。 请给外教 Lucy 写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括： 1. 出发及返回时间； 2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 结语已为你写好。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours Li Hua 【参考答案】 Dear Lucy, I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning. Looking forward to your reply. Yours ,Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息说明邀请 Lucy 去参加的活动和时间等。写作时注 意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：邀请、时间、具体活动。 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一 定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态； 就本文而言应该用一般将来时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。 【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了 which 引导的定语从句和句式 spend time doing。此外， 还有 if 从句以及一些短语如 invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings 等。 考点：考查提纲作文。 (2014 年全国卷Ⅰ,分值 25 分，100 词左右) 假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校 写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。 2004 — 2016 年全国卷英语书面表达 敬泽宇 第 3 页 共 10 页 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：住宿 accommodation 【思路点拨】 本文是一篇书信应用文。文章内容是李华计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，看到广告后 感觉广告里有一些问题没说清楚，想要给校方写信咨询有关事项。考生要注意信的格式，还要注意时态 的选择，即以一般现在时为主，兼有将来时，人称用第一人称。注意恰当地使用一些连词，使文章自然、 流畅，还可以使用一些高级句型和词汇来提高作文档次。 【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam， I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad，and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week？Besides，I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully， Li Hua （2014 年全国卷Ⅱ，分值 25 分，100 词左右） 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。 1. 家庭； 2. 工作； 3. 业余生活。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. ________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】 本文的话题是“十年后的我”，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面来畅想十年以 后的自己。文章应该使用将来时和第一人称。 参考要点：1.十年以后的生活和现在完全不同，会成为一个成年人，有了自己的家庭，甚至有了可 爱的孩子。2.希望自己能够在自己喜欢的计算机行业工作，做一名程序设计师。工作顺利，和同事相处 融洽。3.在业余生活中经常参加锻炼，如游泳、登山等。假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。 本文要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表 述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。考生要根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料， 同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有 无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【参考范文】 I_often_imagine_what_my_life_will_be_like_in_the_future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer. I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I'll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I'll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I'll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colourful. (2013 新课标全国卷Ⅰ，分值 25 分，100 词左右) 假定你是李华。请你给笔友 Peter 写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅 中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明: 李明:高个子,戴眼镜 航班号:CA985 到达:8 月 6 日上午 11:30 注意:1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, How are you doing? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨: 本文要求考生写一封信。提示信息充足,主要包括:①介绍叔叔的情况;②给笔友带去一幅他想要的中 国画;③询问他是否可以接机;④其他信息:叔叔的外貌特征、航班号及到达时间。本文以第一人称为主,时 态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 语言素材: 1.去某处参加会议 go to someplace for a conference/meeting 2.帮某人个忙 do sb. a favor;help sb. 3.戴眼镜 wear glasses 参考范文: Dear Peter, How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference,and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before. Also,I’d like you to do me a favor.Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.?Thank you in advance! His flight number is CA985,and it will arrive at 11:30 am,August 6.My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses.And he will be in a blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua (2013 新课标全国卷Ⅱ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友 Tom 写封信,请他代卖,要点包括: 1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料) 2.象征意义 3.价格 注意:1.词数 100 左右; 2004 — 2016 年全国卷英语书面表达 敬泽宇 第 4 页 共 10 页 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头已为你写好。 Dear Tom, How are you doing? Li Hua 思路点拨: 本文为一封书信。要求考生给外国朋友写信,请朋友在网店代卖自制的中国结,所提供要点不具体,考 生有较大的自由发挥的空间。本文人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。 语言素材: 1.自己制作…… make....oneself 2.呈……形状 in the shape of 3.象征友谊、爱和好运 stand for friendship,love and good luck 4.把……作为礼物送给朋友 give...as gifts to friends 参考范文: Dear Tom, How are you doing?I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.I made them myself with red silk threads,cloth and other materials.They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond,about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.In China,these knots stand for friendship,love and good luck.People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.They are only 12.99 US dollars each.If anyone wants to know more about the knots,let them write to me.Also,do let me know if you need further information.Thank you! Li Hua (2012 新课标全国卷Ⅰ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学 生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括: 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力); 2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3.希望获准。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。 Dear Sir or Madam, Regards,Li Hua 思路点拨: 本文属文字信息类作文,要求学生根据所给要点内容写一封电子邮件,人称以第一人称为主,时态以一 般现在时为主。该题材学生熟悉,体现了学以致用的原则。 语言素材: 1.说流利的英语 speak English fluently;speak fluent English;be fluent in spoken English 2.此外 what’s more;in addition;besides;furthermore 参考范文: Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua,a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it.I’ve been learning English for 10 years,and I speak fluent English.What is more,I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Regards,Li Hua (2012 新课标全国卷Ⅱ,分值 30 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教 Susan 参加，要点包括： ⒈ 时间：周五晚 8 点至 9 点 ⒉ 地点：学生俱乐部 ⒊ 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 ⒋ 要求：备小礼物 注意：⒈ 词数 100 左右，开头语已为你写好；⒉可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；⒊ 答案必须写在 答题卡相应的位置上。 Hi, Susan, We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. 【解析】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事， 这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一 段引出话题；第二段自我介绍；参加意图；第三段表达愿望：希望获准。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主； 3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇 以提高作文档次。 【考点定位】考查提纲类写作。 参考范文： Hi, Susan, We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. We’d like to invitee you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We’ll gather at the Students’ Club at 8 p.m. this Friday, after the evening classes. And it’s going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we’ll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we’ll sing songs and play games. It’ll be nice to see how excited he will be. I’m sure you’ll have a good time at the party, too. Yours, Li Hua (2011 新课标全国卷Ⅰ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 1．本人简介； 2004 — 2016 年全国卷英语书面表达 敬泽宇 第 5 页 共 10 页 2．求助内容： 3．约定时间； 4．你的联系方式(Email：lihua@1236. com；Phone：12345678)。 注意：1．词数 100 左右： 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3．结束语已为你写好。 Dear Sir/Madam, ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Look forward to your reply. Yours，Li Hua 参考范文： Dear Sir/Madam, I’m LiHua, a Chiese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@1236.com;12345678. Look forward to your reply. Yours,Li Hua (2011 新课标全国卷 II,分值 30 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华，你所喜爱的 Global Mirror 周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见．请你依据以下内容给 主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1．说明你是该报的忠实读者 2．赞赏该报优点： 1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事 3．提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章 注意： 1．词数 100 左右，开头语己为你写好； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulations on,the,5'h anniversary,of Global Mirror! Sincerely yours , Li Hua 书面表达 Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulations on,the,5'h anniversary,of Global Mirror! I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reassons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English leaarning, and I hope that it will become even more popular. Sincerely yours , Li Hua (2010 新课标全国卷Ⅰ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华，你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）,希望附近某大 学的外籍教师 Smith 女士来做评委，请参照以下比赛通知给她写一份信， 英语演讲比赛 www.ks5u.com 主题：人与自然 时间：6 月 15 日下午 2:00—5:00 地点：501 教室 参赛选手：10 名学生 联系人：李华（电话 4487665） 欢迎大家光临 注意：词数 100 左右。 Dear Ms .Smith, With best wishes Li Hua 内容要点： 1. 自我介绍 2. 邀请做评委 3. 演讲主题 4. 比赛时间 5. 参赛选手 6. 联系方式 参考范文： Dear Ms. Smith, I'm Li Hua, a chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm in Room 501 and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions. I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes, Li Hua (2010 新课标全国卷 II,分值 30 分,100 词左右) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友 Peter 曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告 知招聘信息。内容主要包括： 2004 — 2016 年全国卷英语书面表达 敬泽宇 第 6 页 共 10 页 1. 教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2. 授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 3. 工作量： ——每周 12 学时，任先三门课 ——担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor） 注意： a) 词数 100 左右； b) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； c） 开关语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。 Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Best, Li Hua 参考范文： Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper. Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help. Best, Li Hua (2009 新课标全国卷Ⅰ ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东 Mrs Wilson 不在家， 你准备外出，请给 Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括： 1.外出购物 2.替房东还书 3.Tracy 来信留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消 2）此事已告知 Susan 3）尽快回电 注意：1 词数 100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Mrs. Wilson， 【解析】作文题仍然同去年一样，属于提供要点式作文，要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条，是学 生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。应注意下面几点：1）注意人称， 应该用第一人称的形式给房东（第二人称）写便条；2）注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上可以看出 在表达要点 1 和 2 时应用将来时；而要点 3 中的几个方面则需要注意时态的替换，会用到一般过去时， 现在时和将来时。3）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，是各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是 简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排 结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。 参考范文： Mrs. Wilson, I’m going out shopping and won’t be back until 5:00pm. I have taken with mw the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon. Tracy called. Saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Li Hua (2009 新课标全国卷 II ,分值 30 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你 写封回信，简单介绍以下内容： 1. 简况：长 800 余米、600 多年历史、300 余家商铺； 2. 位置：天安门广场南面； 3. 交通：公共汽车 17、69、59 等路，地铁 2 号线； 4. 特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。 参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street 当当车 trolley car 地铁 subway 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。 Dear Sarah, Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street. Here is something about it. 参考范文： Dear Sarah, Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it. Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I’m sure you‘ll like it. (2008 新课标全国卷Ⅰ ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物 园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一 封信： 1、 自我介绍； 2、 祝贺苏琳生日； 3、 感谢工作人员； 2004 — 2016 年全国卷英语书面表达 敬泽宇 第 7 页 共 10 页 4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。 注意：1、词数 100 左右； 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、开头语已为你写好。 Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China! __________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 【写作要点】 1. 自我介绍 2. 信息来源 3. 祝贺生日 4. 感谢照顾 5. 索取照片 6. 合适的结尾 【易错提醒】有的考生可能会不认真审题而漏掉要点：信息的来源以及合适的结尾。文章书信开头有了， 但是结尾没有给出，有时候是给出结尾的。因此要注意审题，提炼要点。 【备考提示】 1、确定文章体裁、格式、结构及常用时态。书信以应用文形式出现，时态以一般现在时或一般将来时为 主。 2、依据题目列出内容要点、分清文章层次。只写与要求一致的内容，文章层次应结合问题特点来安排。 在确定内容时，应使用自己最熟悉的英语词汇或句型来表述。 参考范文： Dear Sir/ Madam, Greetings from Chian! I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website. Now she’s going to be there. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly , Li Hua (2008 新课标全国卷 II ,分值 30 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友 Peter 来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点: 1. 参加中文学习班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视； 3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 【写作要点】 1. 参加中文学习班； 2. 看中文书刊，电视； 3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友 5. 合适的结尾。 参考范文： Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wishes ，Li Hua (2007 新课标全国卷Ⅰ ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师 Peter 找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的 条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括： 年龄；性别；爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。 注意：1．词数 100 左右； 2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3． 开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. Best regards, Li Hua 参考译文： 参考范文： Dear Peter, I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share with her our traveling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Li Hua (2007 新课标全国卷Ⅱ ,分值 30 分,100 词左右) 一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要 内容应包括： 2004 — 2016 年全国卷英语书面表达 敬泽宇 第 8 页 共 10 页 1．地点：距白山人口处 500 米； 2．房间及价格：单人间(共 20 间)，100 元／天； 双人间(共 15 间)，150 元／天； 热水淋浴； 3．餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡)； 4．游泳池：全天免费开放； 5．欢迎预定。 注意： 1．词数 100 左右，开头语已为你写好； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. 参考范文： Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 afaigle rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the cafe drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge. All are welcome! (2006 新课标全国卷Ⅰ ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华。应英国朋友 Bob 要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两 幅图中的相关信息。 参考范文： Dear Bob Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library is in the center of the school. There is a beautiful garden in front of it and our classroom building is right behind it .The library is big .When you get inside ,you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects .There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some reading in the library. According to the rule ,every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days .It is open from 9 am to 7pm from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends. We all like our library very much. Best wishes, Li Hua (2006 新课标全国卷Ⅱ ,分值 30 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。 请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。内容应包括： 1．个人情况：年龄、性别、学历 2．个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况 3．承诺：提供最佳服务 注意： 1．词数 100 左右，开头语已为你写好 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3．生词：申请—apply (v.), application (n.) 志愿者—volunteer 解析：内容要点 1．年龄、性别 2．学历及英语水平 3．爱好体育、熟悉本地 4．善于交际、乐于助人 5．承诺 6．合适的结尾 Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 参考范文： Dear Sir / Madam: I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one. Yours faithfully, 2004 — 2016 年全国卷英语书面表达 敬泽宇 第 9 页 共 10 页 Li Hua (2005 新课标全国卷Ⅰ ,分值 30 分,100 词左右) 假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨 论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。 赞成迁出： 反对迁出： 1. 游客多，交通堵塞 2. 郊区环境好 1. 建于 1906 年，中外闻名 2. 搬迁易造成动物死亡 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右，信的开头已为你写好。 2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 参考词汇： 郊区—suburb June 3 ,2005 Dear Editor , Recently ,our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . 参考范文： Dear Editor , Recently ,our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing. Yours truly, Li Hua (2005 新课标全国卷Ⅱ ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起 了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。 注意：1．词数 100 左右，信的格式已为你写好。 2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．参考词汇：牛津——Oxford 费用——fee Dear Sir/Madame, __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 参考范文： Dear Sir/Madame, I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford University , I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food? How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London. Yours, Li hua (2004 新课标全国卷Ⅰ ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你 的美国朋友 Peter 正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并 表示可以提供帮助。 比赛时间：7 月 18 日 报名时间：截止到 6 月 30 日 报名地点：北京电视台 注意： 1.词数：100 左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇：才艺大赛—talent show Dear Peter, 2004 — 2016 年全国卷英语书面表达 敬泽宇 第 10 页 共 10 页 Yours, Li Hua 内容要点： 1．才艺大赛的内容和对象 2．比赛时间 3．报名时间和地点 4．建议参加，表示可提供帮助 参考范文： Dear Peter, I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' ll have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help. Yours, Li Hua (2004 新课标全国卷Ⅱ ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith 将借住你家。 请你代表全家写信给 Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下： ※ 上午：学校活动 ※ 下午：游览市区 ※ 晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天 注意：1．词数：100 左右 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3，参考词汇：安排—arrange 参考范文： Dear Andy, I am glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home. My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. Now let me tell you what we have arranged for you. I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the afternoon, I’ll show you around and take you to some places of interest. We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people. I’m sure we’ll have a wonderful time and enjoy each other’s company. I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua (2004 新课标全国卷 III ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假设你是李华，你的美国老师 Miss Morgan 要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不 能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向 Miss Morgan 请假。 内容要点：*表示歉意 *理由：去机场接人 *询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座 注意：1. 词数：100 左右 2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 Dear Miss Morgan, Yours sincerely Li Hua 参考范文： Dear Miss Morgan, I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon. I am very much interested in American society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. Yours sincerely Li Hua (2004 新课标全国卷 IV ,分值 25 分,100 词左右) 假设你是李华．你的一位美国朋友 Paul 想在暑期来中国学习汉语。你帮他询问了暑期汉语班的情况。 请根据下列要点写封回信。 *时间：7 月初开始，4 小时/天 (周一至周五) *程度：三个级别(初级到高级) *授课教师经验丰富，小班上课 注意：1.词数：100 左右 2 可根据要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 Dear Paul， Yours， Li Hua 参考范文： Dear Paul, I am so glad that you are planning to take a summer course in China. Our university runs summer Chinese language courses at three levels, from beginning to advanced. All the courses start in early July. Lessons will be given in small classes of no more than ten students. You will get a lot of practice in such a class. All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students. Classes meet four hours a day, five days a week-Monday through Friday. If you decide to come or need any further information, do let me know. Yours. Li Hua