2020届二轮复习英语专题辅导专题6书面表达教师课件5

2020届二轮复习英语专题辅导专题6书面表达教师课件5

第 5 讲 　 规避常见的五种错误 　　语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中 , 语法错误 , 尤其是较为严重的错误 , 是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”。因此 , 认清各种各样的语法错误 , 尽可能地少犯 , 对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。 错误 1. 句子成分残缺不全 (1)We always working till late at night before taking exams. 改 : We always work till late at night before taking exams. (2)We should read books may be useful to us. 改 : We should read books which may be useful to us. 错误 2. 句子成分多余 (1)This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. 改 : One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (2)The driver of the red car was died on the spot. 改 : The driver of the red car died on the spot. 错误 3. 主谓不一致 (1)Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. 改 : Some think that reading should be selective. (2)My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. 改 : My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. 错误 4. 动词时态、语态的误用 (1)I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. 改 : I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (2)We have little time to read some books which we interest. 改 : We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (3)I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. 改 : I have been studying in the college for two years. 错误 5. 词类混淆 (1)Honest is so important for everyone. 改 : Honesty is so important for everyone. (2)The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. 改 : The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. 【过关检测 】 Ⅰ. 写出下列经常写错的单词 1. 成功 ; 成功的 ______________________ ______________ 2. 大学 ______ 3. 语言 ________ success( n . ), succeed( v . ), successful( adj . )  college language 4. 选择 ___________________ 5. 责任 ____________ 6. 目前 , 现在 _________ 7. 方便的 , 便利的 __________ 8. 志愿者 _________ choose( v . ); choice( n . ) responsibility nowadays convenient volunteer 9. 社会 ______ 10. 耐心 ; 病人 ________________________  11. 当代的 _______ 12. 观点 , 看法 _______ 13. 外国的 _______ 14. 政府 ___________ society patience( n . ); patient( adj . ) modern opinion foreign government 15. 环境 ___________ 16. 促进 , 提升 ________ 17. 困难的 _______ 18. 不同的 ________ 19. 有必要的 _________ 20. 交流 ____________ environment promote difficult different necessary communicate Ⅱ. 写出下列经常写错的短语 1. 在周末 ___________  2. 对 …… 感兴趣 ______________  3. 在网上 _____________  4. 养成 …… 的习惯 ______________________  on weekends be interested in on the Internet form/develop the habit of 5. 总而言之 _____________________  6. 重视 __________________  7. 在我看来 __________________________________  8. 为 …… 树立好的榜样 ______________________  9. 和某人交流 ___________________  to sum up/in conclusion attach importance to in my opinion/as far as I am concerned set a good example to sb . communicate with sb . 10. 我乐意做某事 ____________________ 11. 不遗余力做某事 _______________________ 12. 在我业余时间 _______________  13. 做一名志愿者 _________________  14. 文明和谐的社会 ______________________________  I am willing to do sth .   spare no efforts to do sth .   in my spare time work as a volunteer a civilized and harmonious society 15. 高考 ______________________________  16. 长处和短处 __________________________  17. 容易得多 ___________  18. 对 …… 有好处 _______________________  the College Entrance Examination advantages and disadvantages much easier do good to/be beneficial to 19. 克服各种困难 ____________________________  20. 盼望您的早日回复 ___________________________ _____  overcome all kinds of difficulties Looking forward to your early reply. Ⅲ. 常用句型需牢记 1. 我有很多爱好 , 比如看小说 , 跳舞等等。 (such as) _______________________________________________ __________ 2. 如果你能帮助我 , 我将不胜感激。 (appreciate) _____________________________________ I have many hobbies, such as reading novels, dancing and so on.   I would appreciate it if you could help me.   3. 我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些困难。 (help. . . with. . . ) ____________________________________________ 4. 在我看来 , 和你的父母经常交流是解决问题的关键 所在。 (the key to) _____________________________________________ ____________________________________________  I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties.   As far as I am concerned, communicating with your parents regularly is the key to solving the problem. 5. 我给您写信是给你一些建议。 (suggestion) _____________________________________ 6. 对于你的帮助 , 我谨表示万分感谢。 (gratitude) _______________________________________________ _____________________ I am writing to give you some suggestions.   I show my heartfelt gratitude to your help/I am greatly grateful for your help.   7. 我对这个职位很感兴趣 , 想申请这份工作。 (apply for) _____________________________________________ ________ I am interested in the position and want to apply for the job.   8. 踢足球和读故事是我的最爱 , 它们让我受益颇多。 (which, do good to) ______________________________________________ ________________________ Playing football and reading stories are my favorites, which do good to me a lot.   9. 我相信 , 在老师和学生的共同努力下 , 我们的校园一 定在不久的将来会变成一个更舒心的地方。 ( with the joint efforts of) _______________________________________________ ________________________________________ _______________________________ I believe that with the joint efforts of both the teachers and students, our campus will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.   10. 如果你有其他任何问题 , 请让我知道。 (any other) ______________________________________________ 11. 我急切地想得到您的帮助。 (anxious) _______________________________ If you have any other problem, please let me know.   I am anxious to get help from you.   12. 我非常喜欢它 , 主要有以下两个原因。 (mainly) _________________________________________________ 13. 你现在学习和生活怎么样 ? (how) __________________________________________________ I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.   How is everything going on with your life and study now?   14. 到了应该采取一些有效的措施来解决这个问题的 时候了。 (It’s high time that) ______________________________________________ ____________________________ 15. 很高兴能做一下自我介绍。 (pleasure) _________________________________ It’s high time that we should take/took some effective measures to solve the problem.   It is my pleasure to introduce myself.