2019届二轮复习“短文改错”解题指导及备考建议课件（20张）

2019届二轮复习“短文改错”解题指导及备考建议课件（20张）

2019 届二轮复习 “短文改错”解题指导及 备考 建议 第Ⅱ卷 第四部分 写作 （共两节，满分 35 分） 第一节 短文改错 文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。（共 10 小题，每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 第二节 书面表达（满分 25 分） 2013 年 前 “短文改错” 的要求 第四部分：写作（共两节，满分 35 分） 第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如果有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正。 此 行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此 行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ^ ），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此 行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。 I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our 76 ． ________ monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. 77 ． ________ Clever as she is, but she works very hard. We have a 78 ． ________ lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she 79 ． ________ told me that something happened when her parents was out. 80 ． ________ She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when 81 ． ________ she smelt something burning. She stopped look out 82 ． ________ of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out 83 ． ________ of her neighbor’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten 84 ． ________ minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor 85 ． ________ was very thankful for her help. whose √ but in were homework ︿ to found immediately ︿ the 2004 福建卷短文改错 2012 全国卷短文改错 Every one of us can make a great efforts to 76. _________ cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all 77. _________ of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only 78. _________ when we have a real need. That won’t be easy, I know, 79. _________ but we have to start anywhere. What’s more, we can go to 80. _________ work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy 81.__________ smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our 82. __________ everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, 83. __________ how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the 84. __________ lights or television when no one else was there? 85. __________ a down to √ somewhere or Another electricity left ︿ on 2 、 2013 起 全国卷“短文改错”的要求 第四部分 写作 第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌 之 间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除： 把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. hold passed well/clearly shoulders to/into him ︿ and when ever 2013 全国卷短文改错 Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes ( 圣女果 ) in our back garden. Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! ago of years have ︿ a everywhere tasty many 或把 but 改为 yet wonderful 2014 全国卷短文改错 When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it. thought ︿ the and with serious air Many find our 2015 全国卷短文改错 1、第一人称记叙文； 2、词数为 108 、 106 和 105 ； 3、文字浅显易懂，没有生僻或超纲词； 4 、句子结构简单，基本上是简单句或并不复杂的复合句； 5、设题主要是学生常见错误。 三、近 3 年全国卷“短文改错”特点分析 时态： 13: passes → passed I was only four when… 14: had been allowing → have been allowing 15: think → thought When I was a child, 15 : have been shown → have shown 名词： 13 : shoulder → shoulders broad shoulders 14: year → years for all these years 15: airs → air The air we breathe in is… 词形： 14: taste → tasty but juicy and tasty wonderfully → wonderful tomatoes 15: seriously → serious a serious problem 短语： 13 ： remember sb. very much → well/clearly 14 ： nearly five years before → nearly five years ago with the help by our father → with the help of our father 15 ： on the development of → w ith the development of 代词 ： 13 ： himself → him set sb. apart 15: your → our We …to protect our environment. 冠词 : 13: in a fact → in fact 14: as result → as a result 15: in countryside → in the countryside 其它： 14: much → many There are so many that… 15: much → many Many rare animals… 13: never → ever I have ever known. 14: somewhere → everywhere 15: must found → m ust find 句型： 13: He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. → and he was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me . → w hen they came over to play or do homework with me. 14: Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems . → we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. 四、短文改错指导建议 2015 年 《 考试说明 》 中对写作部分（ 1 ）的考核目标与要求是： 准确使用语法词汇 。 学生通过 错误改正 、 缺词添加 、 多词删除 三种形式修正文章中的错误。 一般设置多词 1-2 个，少词 1-2 个，改词 6-8 个。 1 、基础为本 （ 1 ）语法教与学，基础为本。 （ 2 ）词组记与用，基础为主。 （ 3 ）词形思与辨，基础为重 。 2 、能力为重 We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! wonderful （ 1 ）学会观察 Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. serious I was only four when she passes away. passed （ 2 ）学会思考 13: He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 14: Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. ︿ and when （ 3 ）学会改错 13: However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 14: As a result, the plants are growing somewhere. with the help of with the development as a result in the countryside in fact ever everywhere Thank you !