【英语】2018届二轮复习短文改错原创试题10篇汇聚之四（含有解析）学案（11页word版）

【英语】2018届二轮复习短文改错原创试题10篇汇聚之四（含有解析）学案（11页word版）

‎2018届二轮复习短文改错原创试题10篇汇聚之四 ‎【一】‎ There are lots of experience in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally，I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confident that makes people successfully.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎【小题1】experience改为experiences ‎【小题2】holding改为hold ‎【小题3】加上been ‎【小题4】me改为myself ‎【小题5】such改为so ‎【小题6】去掉a ‎【小题7】do改为did ‎【小题8】in改为with ‎【小题9】confident改为confidence ‎【小题10】successfully改为successful/succeed ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查后置定语，固定短语，时态等。‎ ‎【小题1】experience改为experiences；第一句There are lots of experience in our life，lots of要修饰可数名词复数，故experience改为experiences ‎【小题2】holding改为hold；第二句The most unforgettable one for me is the speech ‎ competition holding last year.要做competition的后置定语，应是被举行，故用ed形式表被动，故holding改为hold ‎【小题3】加上been；第四句When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition,我应是被选择参加演讲比赛，故在had后加上been ‎【小题4】me改为myself；第四句I devoted me to the preparation.，devote oneself to…固定短语，致力于…故me改为myself ‎【小题5】such改为so；第六句I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything.so…that…固定句型，如此…以致…我如此紧张以致于站在台上时忘了一切，故such改为so ‎【小题6】去掉a；第七句Not until I caught a sight of my teacher，catch sight of…固定短语，看见….故去掉a ‎【小题7】do改为did；第八句Finally，I do a good job，本文是讲述过去的事，应用过去时，故do改为did ‎【小题8】in改为with；第九句my heart was filled in joy，be filled with固定短语，充满了….,故in改为with ‎【小题9】confident改为confidence；最后一句it is confident that makes people successfully，it is ..that是强调句，本句是表达自信使人成功，应用自信的名词形式，故confident改为confidence ‎【小题10】successfully改为successful/succeed；最后一句it is confident that makes people successfully，make为使役动词，后接动词原形或形容词表示使人…，故successfully改为successful/succeed ‎【二】‎ Our English club was set up two months ago．Now, we have members of 25. We met once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far, we have been held a variety of activities on English learning，such as watching English films, including a Christmas party and get together with some foreign students. Last week we held a English story－telling competition. We required that the entries would be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes. Every member took an actively part in it. Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judge. At last, Li Bing won first prize. Many members said that the activity benefited them many ways.‎ Not only did it improve their speaking English, but also it brought them many fun. ‎ They hope many such activities can be held．‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎【小题1】met 改为meet ‎【小题2】去掉been ‎【小题3】get改为getting ‎【小题4】a改为an ‎【小题5】would 改为should(或去掉would)‎ ‎【小题6】actively改为active ‎【小题7】judge 改为judges ‎【小题8】many ways 前加上 in ‎【小题9】speaking 改为spoken ‎【小题10】fun 前的 many 改为much ‎【解析】‎ ‎【小题1】本句讲的是现在的状况，每周周六下午集合一次。一般过去时改为一般现在时met 改为meet。‎ ‎【小题2】到目前为止，我们举行了很多活动，主动举行，因此去掉been。‎ ‎【小题3】和外国学生们聚会和看英语电影是并列关系，做such as宾语，用doing形式，get改为getting ‎【小题4】上周我们举行了一次“讲英语故事”竞赛。English“英语”以元音开头， a改为an。‎ ‎【小题5】require“要求”在虚拟语气中，从句要用should+动词原形，should可以省略。因此would 改为should(或去掉would)‎ ‎【小题6】形容词修饰名词，因此“积极地”actively改为active。‎ ‎【小题7】邀请两名外教做评委，名词“评委”用复数形式judge 改为judges。‎ ‎【小题8】“在很多方面”用in many ways ，因此many ways前加上 in。‎ ‎【小题9】“口语”是spoken English，speaking 改为spoken。‎ ‎【小题10】fun是不可数名词，因此fun 前的 many 改为much。‎ ‎【三】‎ Yesterday morning I became first to come to the classroom, and to my surprising, I found my bench broken. As there was everybody around at that time, I immediately changed bench with Li Kang, of whose seat was just behind mine. Five minutes late, Li Kang came in. Seen the broken bench, he could do nothing but stand listening to the teacher during the first class. When the class over, he carried it out and began to repair it by himself. My face suddenly turned red and I kept silent in my seat. You can never imagine how regretfully I felt for that I had done.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎【小题1】加the ‎【小题2】surprising改为surprise ‎【小题3】everybody改为nobody/no one ‎【小题4】bench改为benches ‎【小题5】去掉of ‎【小题6】late 改为later ‎【小题7】Seen 改为Seeing ‎【小题8】加was ‎【小题9】regretfully改为regretful ‎【小题10】that 改为what ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：短文改错题。‎ ‎【小题1】加the。第一句中应该是became the first，the first才强调我是第一个到达教室的人。故加the。‎ ‎【小题2】surprising改为surprise。第一句中to my surprise才表示“令我惊讶的是”。故surprising改为surprise。‎ ‎【小题3】everybody改为nobody/no one。第二句中应该是as there are nobody around at ‎ that time。因为上一句说：我是第一个到教室的，所以那个时间点就我一个人，周围都是没人的。故everybody改为nobody/no one。‎ ‎【小题4】bench改为benches。第二句中应该是changed benches with，因为是交换我和李康的椅子，所以交换的是两把椅子，是复数。故bench改为benches。‎ ‎【小题5】去掉of。第二句中：在我的座位后面就是behind mine，不用加介词of，所以whose前面也不应该有of。故去掉of。‎ ‎【小题6】late 改为later。第三句中late表示“迟，迟到”，five minutes later才表示“五分钟后”。故late 改为later。‎ ‎【小题7】Seen 改为Seeing。第四句中应该是seeing the broken bench，动名词做主语，动词原形+ing。故Seen 改为Seeing。‎ ‎【小题8】加was。第五句中，课结束是个隐含的被动，课是被老师结束，所以要使用被动语态，又因为事情是昨天发生的，所以be动词用was，class was over。故加was。‎ ‎【小题9】regretfully改为regretful。第七句中的感叹句应为：how+adj.+主语+谓语。Regretfully是副词，regretfull是形容词。故regretfully改为regretful。‎ ‎【小题10】that 改为what。第七句从句去掉that则句子不成立，所以在这个宾语从句中关系词是作成分使用的，要用what。故that 改为what。‎ ‎【四】‎ Dear schoolmates,‎ In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and improve our sense to protect the environment, and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest． A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31st． Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student． The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline．‎ Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time．‎ Students' Union ‎【答案】‎ ‎【小题1】attaching改为attach ‎【小题2】去掉and ‎【小题3】interestingly改为interesting ‎【小题4】A改为The ‎【小题5】end改为ends ‎【小题6】that改为which ‎【小题7】student改为students ‎【小题8】加上be ‎【小题9】after改为before ‎【小题10】them改为it ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查从句，词形变换，名词单复数等 ‎【小题1】attaching改为attach；第一句In order to get high school students to attaching importance to…介词to后应该接动词原形，故attaching改为attach ‎【小题2】去掉and；第一句and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest，前半句是In order to….做目的状语，后半句是主句，不需要用and连接，故去掉and ‎【小题3】interestingly改为interesting；第一句and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest，应用形容词来修饰名词短语knowledge contest知识竞赛，故interestingly改为interesting ‎【小题4】A改为The；第二句A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31st．此处的知识竞赛在前句出现过，应用the表特指，a是表泛指的，故A改为The ‎【小题5】end改为ends；第二句A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31st．主语为contest是单数，and后的动词同starts并列做谓语，故应保持一致，故end改为ends ‎【小题6】that改为which ；第三句Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student.此处的从句为非限制性定语从句，that不能领导，只能由which领导，故that改为which ‎【小题7】student改为students；第三句Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student，student为可数名词，前无冠词就要用复数，故student改为students ‎【小题8】加上be；第四句The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper主语为The answer sheet应是被剪，应用被动语态，故在must后加be ‎【小题9】after改为before；第四句The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline．答案应是在截止日期之前送，而不是之后，故after改为before ‎【小题10】them改为it；最后一句Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time ，contest此处是单数，要指代应用it，故them改为it ‎【五】‎ On the first day when I went to high school，I felt exciting．After 9 years’study, I felt I was so closely to university．During the first year, I made many friends．I got to know all of my classmates．Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When second year came，I was arranged to other class．I was worried that no one could talk to me，but I made new friends quickly．Now that it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress．High school life is challenging for me，but I won’t give out．‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎【小题1】exciting改为excited ‎【小题2】closely改为close ‎【小题3】Because改为Though/Although ‎【小题4】sorrow with改为sorrow for ‎【小题5】when second改为when the second ‎【小题6】other class改为another class ‎【小题7】it was改为it is ‎【小题8】that 去掉 ‎【小题9】but改为and ‎【小题10】out改为in ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：短文改错题。‎ ‎【小题1】exciting改为excited。考查分词作形容词。动词的过去分词作形容词时，其主语为人，意为某人有什么样的心情；现在分词做主语时，主语为物，意为某物令人感到..。I felt exciting该句中主语为I。故exciting改为excited ‎【小题2】closely改为close。考查固定搭配。be close to：意为离...近。 I felt I was so closely to university句子so为副词，用来形容形容词close。故closely改为close ‎【小题3】Because改为Though/Although。考查连词。Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends应理解为即使学业艰难，但我还是和同学分享喜怒哀乐，前后表转折。故Because改为Though/Although ‎【小题4】sorrow with改为sorrow for。考查固定搭配。Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends应理解为即使学业艰难，但我还是和同学分享喜怒哀乐，share sth with sb：与...分享..。故将sorrow with改为sorrow for ‎【小题5】when second改为when the second。考查序数词的用法。序数词表示事物的顺序，它一般跟定冠词the一起出现在可数的单数名词之前，When the second year came：意为第二年到了的时候。故when second改为when the second ‎【小题6】other class改为another class。考查other的用法，other表示其他的，通常与可数名词复数连用，another表示三者或三者以上中的另外一个，通常与可数名词单数连用。I was arranged to other class应理解为我被安排到另外一个班级。故other class改为another class ‎【小题7】it was改为it is。考查时态。Now it was the last year of my high school life意为现在是我高中生涯的最后一年。由now可知用一般现在时。故it was改为it is ‎【小题8】that 去掉。Now that 意为既然；而在此句中所要表达的是当前，是一个时间状语。故将that 去掉。‎ ‎【小题9】but改为and。考查连词Now it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress意为这是我高中的最后一年，我决定学习更刻苦，取得更好的进步，根据句意可知前后只是顺承关系。故but改为and ‎【小题10】out改为in。考查give的词组。give out：分发；精疲力竭。give in ：放弃。High school life is challenging for me，but I won’t give out意为高中生活对我来说具有挑战性，但我不会放弃的。故out改为in ‎【六】‎ Walter’s goal in life was become a successfully doctor. He knew he had to finish high school first, so he put his heart into his study —in particular, biology, chemistry, and maths. Because he worked hard at these subjects, Walter became good at it. However, Walter forgot that he needed to master some other subjects beside those he had been chosen. As a result, Walter fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year. But he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate like planned. Walter learned a good lesson.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎【小题1】was后加to ‎【小题2】successfully-successful ‎【小题3】study-studies ‎【小题4】it-them ‎【小题5】beside-besides ‎【小题6】去掉been ‎【小题7】fails-failed ‎【小题8】in-at ‎【小题9】But-So ‎【小题10】like-as ‎【解析】‎ ‎【小题1】“目标是”解释内容，be动词后用to do结构，因此was后加to。‎ ‎【小题2】形容词修饰名词，因此successfully-successful。‎ ‎【小题3】各科学业，应该用名词复数形式study-studies。‎ ‎【小题4】代词是指代复数名词“科目”。因此it-them。‎ ‎【小题5】besides“另外；除此之外”，beside“旁边”，根据句意因此beside-besides。‎ ‎【小题6】他已经选择的，是主动关系，去掉been。‎ ‎【小题7】通篇是一般过去时，因此现在时fails-failed 。‎ ‎【小题8】at the end of，“在….之末” 介词in-at。‎ ‎【小题9】因此他不得不重新学习，前后是因果关系。But-So。‎ ‎【小题10】按照计划，like是介词“像”。因此like-as。‎ ‎【七】‎ In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there. It’s a long and bored journey. But the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. It’s such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too carefully when crossing the street.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎【小题1】把paid visit中间加上a ‎【小题2】把bored 改为boring ‎【小题3】把fall改为f ell ‎【小题4】把such改为so ‎【小题5】把cleaning改为clean ‎【小题6】把wind后面去掉to ‎【小题7】把far改为long ‎【小题8】把moreover改为however ‎【小题9】把driver改为drivers ‎【小题10】把careless改为careful ‎【解析】‎ ‎【小题1】把paid visit中间加上a；第一句we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.，visit为可数名词，需加数量词，故加a ‎【小题2】把bored 改为boring；第二句It’s a long and bored journey. Bored ‎ “无聊的，无趣的，烦人的”。通常用来形容人的感受。Boring“无聊的，无趣的； 令人厌烦的”，用来形容物给人的感觉。这里是形容这次旅行既漫长又无聊，故把bored 改为boring ‎【小题3】把fall改为fell；第三句But the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. 前面用arrived可知时态是过去式，后面fall也应该用过去时态。故把fall改为fell ‎【小题4】把such改为so；第四句It’s such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.so和such修饰名词的结构是这样的：so + adj + a/an + n（可数），such+（a/an） n +adj 这里先接的是beautiful。要用so，句意：这是一个如此美丽的城市以至于我几乎找不到任何一个词来形容它。故把such改为so ‎【小题5】把cleaning改为clean；cleanadj.清洁的； 整齐的。第五句The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. 句意：街道是干净的，天空是蓝色的。故把cleaning改为clean ‎【小题6】把wind后面去掉to；第六句If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. blowing on your face是用现在分词短语作状语。句意：如果你沿着海岸线行走，你会感觉到风吹着你的脸。故把wind后面去掉to。‎ ‎【小题7】把far改为long；as fas as只要；远到…； 直到…为止，多表示程度范围达到。As long as只要； 如果； 既然； 由于。多表示条件满足，达到。第八句You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. 句意：只要被允许，你也可以去钓鱼。故把far改为long ‎【小题8】把moreover改为however；Moreoveradv.再者； 此外； 而且； 同时。However adv.不管到什么程度； 无论如何； 然而。第九句Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. 句意：然而，我觉得那儿的街上开车的司机开得太快了。故把moreover改为however ‎【小题9】把driver改为drivers；第九句Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. Driver是可数名词，应该用复数形式。句意：然而，我觉得那儿的街上开车的司机开得太快了。故把driver改为drivers ‎【小题10】把careless改为careful；careless adj.粗心的； 无忧无虑的； 漫不经心的；careful adj.仔细的，小心的； 周到的。第十句You can never be too carefully when crossing the street.句意：过马路的时候，你在小心都不为过。故把careless改为careful ‎【八】‎ I still remember the morning. My father suddenly wake me up at about 5 and the sky ‎ was still gray. I jumped out bed, surprised and extreme happy, for we were going to get a book! When we drove to the bookstore, many people were already waiting there. We waited for our turn at about 8:30. I was overjoyed when I got a book, not only because of the book themselves, but also of the love from my father. Never before had I feel such a love from him, because my father, I believed then, had always been busy with his own work. That was “Harry Potter” that helped I feel the deep loves from my parents!‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎【小题1】wake→woke/waked ‎【小题2】out→out of ‎【小题3】extreme→extremely ‎【小题4】at→till/until ‎【小题5】a→the ‎【小题6】themselves→itself ‎【小题7】feel→felt ‎【小题8】That→It ‎【小题9】I→me ‎【小题10】loves→love ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：题目主要考查学生对冠词、名词、介词、副词、反身代词、时态、强调句等知识的掌握情况。做题时注意短文所用的时态。‎ ‎【小题1】考查时态。根据“the morning...the sky was still gray”可知，这里叙述的是那天早上的事情，应该用一般过去时，故把wake改为woke/waked。‎ ‎【小题2】考查介词。out of...向......外，jumped out of bed跳下床，故把out改为out of。‎ ‎【小题3】考查副词。修饰形容词用副词，这里修饰形容词happy，应该用副词，故把extreme改为extremely。‎ ‎【小题4】考查介词和连词。我们一直等到了八点半，这里是“直到”的意思，故把at改为till / until。‎ ‎【小题5】考查冠词。这里特指上文提到的书，应该用定冠词the，根据后面“because of the book”可知答案，故把a改为the。‎ ‎【小题6】考查反身代词。book是单数，而themselves表示复数含义，指事物本身用itself，故把themselves改为itself。‎ ‎【小题7】考查时态。before与完成时连用，feel的过去分词是felt，故把feel改为felt。‎ ‎【小题8】考查强调句。It is/was...that是强调句型，可以强调除谓语以外的任何句子成分，这里强调主语，故把That改为It 。‎ ‎【小题9】考查代词宾格。help sb(to) do sth帮助某人做某事，应该用代词的宾格作help的宾语，故把I改为me。‎ ‎【小题10】考查名词。love爱，不可数，故把loves改为love。‎ ‎【九】‎ Recently I have read an article in a magazine. It was about the mother who was worried about her son just because of he always kept his hair long. The mother thought that was not right, but the son felt there was nothing unusually about it. Different generations have different opinion on the same thing. That is what is meaning by "the generation gap". We can see them in our daily lives. Most of our parents like listening to old songs when young people prefer pop songs. Every time my father finds me listen to rock music, he always shouted, "Shut it off. It's awful!" How can we deal the generation gap?‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎【小题1】the 改为 a mother ‎【小题2】because of去掉of ‎【小题3】unusually 改为unusual ‎【小题4】opinion改为opinions ‎【小题5】meaning改成meant ‎【小题6】we can see them改成it ‎【小题7】when改成while ‎【小题8】listen改成listening ‎【小题9】shouted改成shouts ‎【小题10】deal 后面加with ‎【解析】‎ ‎【小题1】.此处是泛指，表示“关于一个妈妈”，故把 the 改为 a mother。‎ ‎【小题2】because of 后面不能跟完整的句子，he always kept his hair long 是一个完整的句子，故because of去掉of。此处是because引导的原因状语从句。‎ ‎【小题3】nothing是不定代词，形容词修饰不定代词，且放在不定代词后面，故把 unusually 改为unusual。‎ ‎【小题4】此处表达的是不同的观点，所以opinion要用复数，故把opinion改为opinions。‎ ‎【小题5】固定搭配what is meant by…这个的意思是指...，故把meaning改成meant。‎ ‎【小题6】“在日常生活中我们也能看到它”，这里的它指"the generation gap"，故把we can see them改成it。‎ ‎【小题7】此处不是时间状语从句而是一个并列句，表示前后形成鲜明对比，“然而”，故把when改成while。‎ ‎【小题8】“每次我父亲发现我听摇滚乐时”，此处表示正在听，用现在分词作宾语补足语，故把listen改成listening.‎ ‎【小题9】“每次我父亲发现我听摇滚乐时，他都冲着我大声喊”，此处表达的是一般现在时态，故把shouted改成shouts。‎ ‎【小题10】考查固定搭配。“我们怎样处理这代沟”?故deal 后面加with。deal with处理 ‎【十】‎ Friday evening.‎ Today I’d like to tell you anything about riding a bike in London. If you visit London, you’ll see many buses, cars or bikes. It’s very cheap and quick to use bike. If you take a bus, I often have to wait for an hour or so. Besides, the buses move very slowly. The underground is quickly but expensive and often crowded. I used to travel to work by bus. I was often late, and tiring. Then a friend suggested we ‎ went to work by bike. I followed him. Although we went slowly, but we always arrived on time. Taking a bus takes 50 minutes, while ride a bike only half an hour. Now I love riding to work and I feel more better.‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎【小题1】anything--something ‎【小题2】or--and ‎【小题3】bike—a bike/bikes ‎【小题4】I--you ‎【小题5】quickly--quick ‎【小题6】tiring--tired ‎【小题7】went--go ‎【小题8】去掉but ‎【小题9】ride—riding ‎【小题10】more—much/去掉more ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：‎ ‎【小题1】文中第一句。句意：今天我将告诉你一些在伦敦骑自行车的事情。一些用：something，而不是anything。故把原文的anything改成something。‎ ‎【小题2】文中第二句。句意：如果你去伦敦游览，你会看见很多的公共汽车、小汽车和自行车。根据句意，是和而不是或者，故把or改成and.‎ ‎【小题3】文中第三句。句意：骑自行车很便宜也很快。考点在于骑自行车应该是:use bikes/use a bike。因此把原句中的bike改成bikes/a bike。‎ ‎【小题4】文中第四句。句意：如果你坐公交车，你将不得不等上一个小时左右时间。前后主语都应该是你。故把原句中的I改成you。‎ ‎【小题5】 文中第六句。句意为：地铁很快但是很昂贵而且很拥挤。考点在于形容词担当表语而不是副词。故把原文中的quickly改成quick。‎ ‎【小题6】文中第八句。句意为：我经常迟到而且也很疲倦。考点在于tiring和tired之间的区别。Tiring表示令人疲倦的而tired表示感到疲倦的。根据句意，把tiring改成tired。‎ ‎【小题7】文中第九句。句意为：一个朋友建议我们骑车去上班。考点在于suggest表示建议时，其后所接的宾语从句中需要使用虚拟语气should+ v原型，且should可以省略。故把went改成go。‎ ‎【小题8】文中倒数第三句。句意为：虽然我们走得很慢，但是我们总是能按时到达。在状语从句中,although和but连用，故去掉but。‎ ‎【小题9】文中倒数第二句。句意为：然而骑自行车只需要半个小时。考点是ving形式担当句子的主语。故把原句中的ride改成riding。‎ ‎【小题10】文中最后一句。句意为：现在我喜欢骑车去上班也感觉好多了。考点是修饰比较级用much。故把原句中的more改成much或把more去掉。‎