2020届二轮复习书面表达中如何写好拓展句和结尾句课件（15张）

2020届二轮复习书面表达中如何写好拓展句和结尾句课件（15张）

2020届二轮复习书面表达中如何写好拓展句和结尾句 1 如何围绕主题句展开拓展句 概括后要根据要点来写作，文章的一个段落通常包括主题句和拓展句两部分 ( 有的还有结尾句 ) 。其中，主题句一般位于段首，提出段落主题、确定段落发展方向及展开模式，而拓展句则用以阐述、论证、支持主题句的要点，使段落更加丰满。 一般来说，围绕主题句展开拓展句的模式有以下几种： 1 . 解释原因 例如：在大城市工作有什么好处。 Working in a big city is of course an exciting thing ， which means better opportunities and more conveniences.It’s easier to find a well － paid job or a better platform to improve oneself. 2 . 列举支撑点 例如：我们如何做才能改善环境。 If we want to improve environment then we need to change the way we behave. On the one hand ， we need tobuy appliances that are more energy efficient and limit the amount of time we use them. On the other hand ， to reduce the effect the greenhouse gases have on our atmosphere ， we should plant more trees. 3 . 举例 例如：成长环境对学生的影响。 Since students are brought up in different environments ， they will have different habits and characters ， which will cause many conflicts in daily life. In such cases ， these youngsters will often act impulsively ， quarreling or even fighting with his or her classmates because of some trivial things.They may curse each other with hatred words or ask their friends to isolate these students.What’s worse ， they may find some excuses to hurt ， beat or even bully those who have conflicts with them. 4 . 比较和对比 例如：是不是越快越好？ Is it the faster the better? Many people believe that the faster the better ， because they can save time in this way. However ， others including me hold the opinion that ， in many situations ， the result is far less than being satisfactory and quite often goes to the opposites.Haste makes waste. 5 . 细化主题句 例如：你所喜欢的体育项目对你的影响。 As far as I’m concerned ， I’m fond of jogging which is very essential in my life. On one hand ， it’s not a rough sport and convenient to do every day ， from which I relax myself a lot and refresh my mind. On the other hand ， it strengthens my suppleness ， endurance and perseverance to deal with the difficulties in my study. 6 . 引出经历 例如：讲述你 ( 或你朋友 ) 因为太多干扰而受到影响的经历。 This reminds me of what happened when I entered high school as a Senior One student. I was so excited to find that there were various student organizations and after － class activities for us students.It seemed that many groups were suitable for me.During this term ， I was attracted whenever there was a notice from a student group and I was eager to find out more about it.As a result ， I didn’t spend enough time on my studies ， nor could I settle down to my homework every day.Consequently ， I failed in an important exam. 7 . 说明结果 例如：你对国家 “ 禁止商场免费提供塑料袋的看法 ” 。 It is necessary for the government to forbid shops from offering free plastic bags. With this ban ， shopping customers would gradually form a habit of bringing environmentally - friendly bags with them so that the consumption of plastic bags would be greatly reduced. 2 如何写好结尾句 文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的，常见的有以下几种： 1 . 首尾呼应，画龙点睛 把 含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。例如 “ 如何处理好学习和课外活动之间的关系 ” 。 Thus ， in my view ， if we focus too much on any one ， either study or after － school activities will be negatively affected.But with the right balance ， both can improve. 2 . 重复主题句 结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到强调的效果。例如 “ 我更喜欢传统购物 ” 的结尾： As for me ， I prefer traditional shopping.It is really fun to go into shops and look at the goods in person... So traditional shopping is better than Internet shopping. 3 . 重申主题 例如 “ 客观分析去外地读大学的好处 ” 的结尾： All in all ， I’m fully convinced that to study in another city is really a good way to enrich one’s life experience. 4 . 自然结尾 随着 文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。例如 “ 老年人应该得到的待遇 ” 的结尾： They’ve already contributed a lot to their family and society ， so they deserve love from us all. 5 . 发出号召或呼吁 结尾 表示对将来的展望或期待读者投入行动。例如 “ 乱扔垃圾现象 ” 的结尾： In conclusion ， people’s littering habit is turning our communities into a rubbish holder.It is high time that we made joint efforts to solve the rubbish problem.Otherwise ， we will live with rubbish in the future. 6 . 陈述积极意义 例如 “ 对童年时期的生活有怎样的认识 ” 的结尾： All in all ， as far as I am concerned ， I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children. 7 . 提出解决问题的方法、建议 例如 “ 你对周围爱吃零食的人的合理化建议 ” 的结尾： It’s highly advisable that those who are crazy about snacks should eat snacks when necessary.You’d better have some healthy snacks ， which is much enough to add the necessary calories or nutrients but will not cause health problems. 8 . 表明决心 例如 “ 对将来能上重点大学 ” 的结尾： I am convinced that I will be admitted into a key university if I put all my heart into study.