【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达申请信(一)写作指导例析（3页word版）

【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达申请信(一)写作指导例析（3页word版）

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达申请信(一)写作指导例析 假如你叫李华，某英语报社准备在你所在城市举办英语夏令营，开设的课程有街舞(the street dance)、烹饪(cooking)、中国武术(Chinese kung fu)、护理(nursing)等。你想发电子邮件报名参加其中一门课程。内容包括：‎ ‎1．你感兴趣的课程；‎ ‎2．你期望从这门课程中学到什么；‎ ‎3．为什么想学这些内容。‎ 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； ‎ ‎2．词数100左右，开头与结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。‎ Dear Editor，‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[四步写作]‎ 一、定人称、定时态，审题快而不偏 人称以第一人称为主，主要时态用一般现在时 二、列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 ‎1．听说你们要在我们城市举办英语夏令营，我很高兴，并且想报名参加其中一门课程，并说明原因 ‎①举办英语夏令营 hold_the_English_summer_camp ‎②申请参加 apply_to_attend ‎③梦想成为一名护士 dream_of_becoming_a_nurse ‎2．你期望从这门课程中学到什么；为什么想学这些内容 ‎①更好地了解 gain_a_little_more_knowledge_of ‎②有助于照顾好 help_to_take_good_care_of ‎3．再次表明自己的诚意，希望得到答复 ‎①利用这个机会 take_advantage_of_this_chance ‎②学习一些护理的基础知识 learn_some_basic_knowledge_of_nursing 三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 ‎1．从报纸上得知你们将在我们城市举办英语夏令营，我迫不及待地想申请参加你们的其中一门课程。‎ Having learned from the newspaper that you will hold the English summer camp in our city, I cannot wait to apply to attend one of your courses.‎ ‎2．你们提供的课程中，护理最吸引我。‎ Of the courses you’ve provided, the course about nursing appeals to me most.‎ ‎3．我希望能获得更多的护理知识，以便我上大学后，对我主修护理专业有所帮助。‎ I hope to gain a little more knowledge of nursing so that it can help me major in nursing after I attend college.‎ ‎4．学习更多关于护理的知识可以帮助照顾好我的父母。‎ Learning more about nursing can help to take good care of my parents.‎ ‎5．我希望我可以利用这个机会学习一些基本的护理知识。‎ I hope that I can learn some basic knowledge of nursing by taking advantage of this chance.‎ 四、衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用to begin with, additionally等衔接词串句成文 Dear Editor，‎ Having learned from the newspaper that you will hold the English summer camp in our city, I cannot wait to apply to attend one of your courses.‎ Of the courses you’ve provided, the course about nursing appeals to me most, as I have always been dreaming of becoming a nurse since my childhood.‎ To begin with, I hope to gain a little more knowledge of nursing so that it can help me major in nursing after I attend college. Additionally, learning more about nursing can help to take good care of my parents, who have been devoted to caring for me as I grow up.‎ I hope that I can learn some basic knowledge of nursing by taking advantage of this chance.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[写改两用]‎ 这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。‎ Dear Editor，‎ I’m glad to hear that you will held the English summer camp in our city, which consist of many courses. Of the courses you have, one in particular has aroused my interested, and that is the street dance. The street dance is a popular urban youth culture close associated with rap music and holds the fancy of young. For another one thing, it’s a good form of exercises. However, it’s a good way for us to get relaxed and refreshed when we are dancing to the beat of the music.‎ As a student, I usually bury myself on my lessons and often feel stressed. By learn the street dance, I can get rid of some stress and get motivated for my lessons.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎ 答案：第一句：held→hold; consist→consists 第二句：interested→interest 第三句：close→closely; young前加the 第四句：去掉another; exercises→exercise 第五句：However→Besides 第六句：on→in 第七句：learn→learning