2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十五：如何使写好普通书信与电子邮件

2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十五：如何使写好普通书信与电子邮件

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之三十五：如何使写好普通书信与电子邮件 ‎ [题型技法]‎ 英文email和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同，其开头和结尾常常都会给出，正文根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。具体写作结构如下：‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[典例悟法]‎ ‎(2017•全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：‎ ‎1．时间和地点；‎ ‎2．内容：学习唐诗；‎ ‎3．课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 满分范文 Dear Leslie，‎ I am delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems.Now I'm writing to tell you the plan for the next class.‎ Actually I am very fond of Tang poems.I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.We are to meet on Sunday morning in the People's Park, where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful.We will learn from 8：00 am to 10：00 am.Besides, I advise you to go to the library to borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, which can help you better understand the poems to be learned.‎ If you have any questions, please let me know.Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 范文赏析 ‎(1)文章开门见山告知写邮件的目的，随后表述具体内容(学习时间、地点；学习唐诗；提前了解唐朝的历史)，最后表达希望并期盼回复。‎ ‎(2)范文中使用了较高级的词汇，如be fond of, are to meet, in advance等，增加了文章的得分点。另外，范文中也应用了较多的语法结构，如where引导的定语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句，提高了文章的写作档次，也显示了作者较高的语言运用能力。‎ ‎[增分佳句]‎ ‎1．开头部分常用语 ‎①Thank you for your letter of December 15th.‎ 谢谢你12月15号的来信。‎ ‎②I'm very glad/pleased to tell you that ...‎ 我很高兴告诉你……‎ ‎③I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.‎ 我非常高兴收到你两周前寄给我的信。‎ ‎④Thanks for your invitation to the Christmas party.‎ 谢谢你邀请我参加圣诞晚会。‎ ‎⑤How are you getting along with your study?‎ 你近来学习进展怎样？‎ ‎2．话题引入常用语 ‎①I'm very glad to tell you something about ...‎ 我很高兴告诉你一些关于……的事情。‎ ‎②As far as I know/am concerned/can see ...‎ 据我所知……‎ ‎3．结尾部分常用语 ‎①Please write to me soon and tell me about your ...‎ 请马上写信给我，告诉我关于你的……‎ ‎②I'm looking forward to your reply.‎ 我盼望着你的回复。‎ ‎③If so, please email me in response ...‎ 如果这样，请给我回复邮件……‎ ‎④With kind/best regards/wishes!‎ 最美好的问候/祝福！‎ ‎[热点押题]‎ 假定你是李华，上周你的外教Peter给你来信说他开始对中国古诗词感兴趣，希望你能教他几首中国古诗词。请你用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：‎ ‎1．乐于帮助；‎ ‎2．确定见面相关事宜(如时间、地点等等)。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Peter，‎ How is everything going on with you recently？　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 　‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua 参考范文：‎ Dear Peter，‎ How is everything going on with you recently？I'm more than glad to receive your letter asking me for help.As a matter of fact, it is a great honor for me to introduce some Chinese ancient poems to you.The following are my arrangements for it.‎ Firstly, let's fix a time when both of us are available.What about this Saturday afternoon? In addition, there is no doubt that the People's Park is an excellent place to learn classical Chinese poetry, which is not far away from my home nor yours.If it is not convenient for you, please tell me to make necessary adjustments.‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Hua