专题23 书面表达-3年高考2年模拟1年原创备战2017高考精品系列之英语（解析版）

专题23 书面表达-3年高考2年模拟1年原创备战2017高考精品系列之英语（解析版）

‎3年高考2年模拟1年原创精品系列 专题23书面表达 ‎【2017年高考命题预测】‎ 预测一话题与考生的生活实际、社会热点内容密切相关。书面表达提供的写作情景比较真实，写作的话题与考生的校园生活、成长经历、社会热点及科技动态等内容密切相关，关注考生的情感、态度和价值观，能够充分考查考生的独立思考能力和创新精神。‎ 预测二书面表达的词数仍将保持100词左右。虽然部分地区的高考试卷要求考生写一篇120词左右的英语作文，考生要在文章的结构、段落的衔接和过渡等方面花费更多的心思和笔墨。‎ 预测三 写作的开放度可能加大。高考英语书面表达写作要求也呈现了开放的趋势，这使考生的写作内容受到的限制减少，并为考生提供了一个更加自由和开放的写作空间。‎ ‎【考点定位】2017考纲解读和近几年考点分布 ‎《英语考试大纲》对学生的书面表达能力作了明确的规定：“要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。”高中英语课程标准也对写作作了必须要达到的要求：‎ ‎1.能通过文字及图表提供的信息进行简单描述；‎ ‎2.能写出常见体裁的应用文，如信函和一般通知等；‎ ‎3.能描述人物或事件并进行简单的评论；‎ ‎4.能填写有关个人情况的表格，如申请表等；‎ ‎5.能以小组形式根据课文改编短剧。‎ 书面表达是考查考生用英语表达自己思想的能力，即运用所学的英语知识及合乎英语习惯的表达方式来传递信息，进行思想交流的能力。这将要求考生根据所给的情景和要求，在限定时间内(一般30分钟)写出100个词左右的书面材料。因此考生要做到：审题正确、要点全面，能够运用所学的语法结构、词汇知识，使上下文连贯，同时语言要准确、得当，条理清楚，书写规范。所以，具有良好的书面表达能力是非常必要的，它也进一步突出了对考生创新能力的考查。‎ 一、命题多样化 虽然每年的书面表达都属于提高性写作，但越来越重视创造情景，命题由单纯的汉语提为主、‎ 其他提示（如：图表）为辅。考生必须首先理解写作提示，然后才能组句成文。‎ 二、书面表达的体栽呈现多样化，为应用文(书信、通知、便条等)、记叙文图表作文、 日记等)和说明文(人物介绍、活动介绍)‎ 三、试題突出了交际性、实用性 书面表达的内容主要取材于校园、家庭生活和一般外事活动，符合高中学生的年龄特点和生活背景，基本都是考生己经熟悉的或将来有可能经历的事情，情景真实可信。 所提出的要求符合考生的实际英语水平，具有可写性，能够充分展示学生的书面表达能力。‎ 四、改革力度逐年増大 高考英语书面表达(全国卷I、II的命题方式和题型相公対急定，与单独命制的试题相比， 全国卷改革的力度较小，命题思想相对稳定。而单独命制的试题则敢于创新，勇于求变。‎ 五、内容更突出时代特色 近几年的话题十分贴近现代生活，因此内容贴近考生的学习和生活将成为今后命题 的方向。‎ ‎【考点pk】 名师考点透析 早在2004年公布的高中英语新课标中就已明确指出“培养初步写作的能力是英语教学的目的之一”。 而高考英语书面表达高考资源网命题目的就是要测试学生运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能来表达思想和进行交流的能力。可以说这种题型最能检验出学生综合运用英语语言能力的高低。‎ 高考英语书面表达具体主要考查学生以下几种能力：‎ ‎1.观察分析，获取，加工和输出信息的能力。‎ ‎2.体现语法规则，并且正确熟练运用语法的能力。‎ ‎3.语言交际表达得体，突出正确语用的能力。‎ ‎4.关注社会现实，锤炼思维表达能力。‎ 备考策略：‎ ‎1.学习生活中多参加一些集体和公益活动，重视交流，在交流中有目的的运用语言，以达到学习和学以致用的目的。同时注意归纳整理得体用语，以扩充知识面。注重积累时尚语言，增强时尚语言表达意识。‎ ‎2. 平时就要注重体裁，话题等方面的积累准备。并且寻找适当材料进行作文专项训练，并定期进行归纳整理和分类巩固，循序渐进掌握作文写作技巧。实际写作时要认真分析材料所提供的背景，落实已知信息与所求信息。注重灵活应对开放式写法。‎ ‎3. 学好语法知识，注重操练运用。平时可以多做一些句型转换、单句翻译、用词、短语或句型造句、文章缩写、改写等练习。‎ ‎4.‎ ‎ 回归高中英语课本，切实找到并且分析高考英语书面表达在课本中的典型体现。学生一定要牢固掌握和灵活运用文化、地理、环境、健康、社会等话题的内容。同时课本中精选的文章不仅语言规范准确，而且内容丰富，能够让学生体会到学习和运用英语的快乐。‎ ‎【三年高考】 14、15、16高考试题及其解析 ‎2016年高考试题 ‎1. 【2016·全国新课标I】书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎ 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1. 词数100左右;‎ ‎ 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Ms Jenkins,‎ I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.‎ In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.‎ Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【名师点睛】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are ‎ something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。‎ ‎2.【2016·全国新课标II】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：‎ ‎ 1．主题：环境保护；‎ ‎ 2．展览时间；‎ ‎ 3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1．词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Peter,‎ Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.‎ ‎ Hope to hear from you soon.‎ ‎ Yours ‎ Lihua ‎【名师点睛】‎ 本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.时间状语从句.... theme the last time you visited our school.条件状语从句If you want to join....；等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。‎ 考点：考查半开放作文 ‎3.【2016·全国新课标III】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：‎ ‎1.表示歉意；‎ ‎2.说明原因；‎ ‎3.另约时间。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Bob,‎ ‎ I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.‎ ‎ Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：题目要求写一封道歉信，就不能如约一起去书向Bob道歉，使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。‎ 亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much ‎ trouble；目的状语从句so that we’ll have more time to read and select books；条件句If it’s convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。‎ 考点：书信类作文 ‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。‎ ‎4. 【2016·北京】书面表达（共两节，35 分） ‎ 第一节（15分）‎ ‎ 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 该人物是谁； ‎ ‎2. 该人物的主要贡献； ‎ ‎3. 该人物对你的影响。 ‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数不少于50；‎ ‎2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ‎ Dear Jim, ‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Jim,‎ ‎ It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.‎ ‎ As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.‎ ‎ Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.‎ ‎ Cheers!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 亮点说明：范文使用了词组hear from, As for, In fact和搭配 inspire sb to do sth等，丰富了作文内容；范文注意上下文的语意连贯。 ‎ 考点：应用文写作 ‎【名师点睛】‎ 题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。‎ 第二节 （ 20 分）‎ 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。‎ 注意：词数不少于60。‎ 提示词：地球日Earth Day ‎【答案】‎ Actions for a Greener Earth ‎ A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.‎ ‎ Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.‎ ‎ We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：题目要求按照四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。词数不少于60词，参考词汇必须使用。使用一般过去时和第一人称进行写作。‎ 亮点说明：范文使用了非谓语动词calling upon us to join in the actions和so...that句型与宾语从句we can do more for a better world等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组call sb to do sth, join in, come up with. Make use of, turn...into, give away, be proud of等，使作文内容变得丰富。‎ 考点：情景作文 ‎【名师点睛】‎ 话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。一定要按照四幅图的顺序来写，不可打乱顺序；注意行文的连贯性，多使用一些连接词。‎ ‎5.【2016·天津】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。‎ （1） 回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；‎ （2） 谈谈收获或感情；‎ （3） 表达祝愿语期望。‎ 注意：‎ （1） 词数不少于100；‎ （2） 可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；‎ （3） 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear friends,‎ How time flies! ‎ ‎ ‎ Thank you.‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version: ‎ Dear__friends,__‎ How__time__flies! Two weeks went by before we realized that our exchange activities ended. On behalf of our school, I would like to express my feelings.‎ As scheduled, we took part in several instructive activities. We have learnt many Chinese characters and often took exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was extremely delicious and different from our food. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists' works.‎ As far as I'm concerned, everyone here is a member of our big family. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip to your country. I hope we'll get together again next year. ‎ Thank__you. ‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文 ‎【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点，适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用，尽量使用简洁的语言。‎ ‎6.【2016·上海】Guided Writing ‎   Directions:  Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：‎ ‎1.描述调研数据；‎ ‎2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎（略）‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文属于图表作文。要求考生以姚平的身份写一则报告，通报“父母是否以子女为荣”的调研报告的内容。文章使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异。2.百分之80的父母亲以孩子为荣；自由百分之60的孩子认为父母以我为荣。3.分析原因：父母亲把全部的精力都倾注在孩子身上，孩子的成功也证明自己的教育方法是正确的；而现在的孩子因为年龄较小，并没有很强的责任感，他们并没有感受到自己承担的义务和责任。建议在写作的时候添加适当的谚语，如Every coin has two sides.提升文采，以增加获得高分的可能性；穿插使用多种句式，让文章富有变化。同时要使用两到三个复合句，并适当使用串联词。‎ 考点：考查图表作文 ‎7.【2016·四川】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 你最喜欢的季节；‎ ‎2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受……）。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 题目已为你写好；‎ ‎3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；‎ ‎4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ One possible version: ‎ Among the four seasons in a year, summer is my favourite, which makes me free, excited and energetic. ‎ When summer vacation for us students comes every year, we can do all that we can't do during our school time, going shopping with friends, swimming in warm water and even hiking and camping in the deep valleys, all of which, I think, lead me to full freedom. We can find us in an exciting world every day, with the sun shining brightly, trees growing greenly and flowers coming out with all kinds of colours. Summer makes me full of energy and I feel I have the strength to do the most difficult things in my life. I like summer best, and what about you？‎ ‎8.【2016·浙江】书面表达（满分30分）‎ ‎“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。‎ 要求如下：‎ ‎ 1.简述你对这句名言的理解；‎ ‎ 2.用一个具体事例加以说明；‎ ‎ 3.给出恰当的结尾。‎ 注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：‎ ‎ 2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。‎ ‎ Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】One possible student version Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better ‎ Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.‎ ‎ My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.‎ ‎ I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.‎ ‎【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。‎ 考点：考查开放式作文 ‎9.【2016·江苏】书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎81.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。‎ In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.‎ Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’‎ ‎ daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.‎ Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer冶 competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.‎ ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；‎ ‎2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2 ~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；‎ ‎2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3. 不必写标题。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。‎ ‎【答案】‎ On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not. ‎ In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. ‎ To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting. ‎ ‎(150 words)‎ Possible version two:‎ Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it. ‎ In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.‎ ‎ Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.‎ In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.‎ ‎(150 words)‎ ‎2.支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。3.理由及依据：（1）它是一种社会生活的方式；网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚。同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠。（2）虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有更好的参与规则，网络投票会更加规范合理。3.反对：网络投票会给人带来负面影响。（1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉。（2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。注意使用本人熟悉的词汇及句式，以增加获得高分的可能性。不要堆砌使用串联词，穿插使用陈述句、祈使句和被动句式，让文章更加丰富多样化。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 本篇范文很好地完成了所有任务。文章结构合理，层次分明。第一段总结归纳短文内容提出网络投票很流行，给人们带来好处同时也有不利之处。第二段提出个人观点并给出理由，两篇范文中正反观点明确，论据有力；第三段中提出合理化建议；时态和人称运用准确无误无误，全文无中国式英语思维，体现出很高的运用语言的能力。从写作技巧来看，文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句..... in which candidates go around to seek supports.状语从句.....if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.同时文章中串联词运用较为合理，如in my opinion、in addition、furthermore、to be honest等等。‎ 考点：考查任务型读写 ‎2015年高考试题 ‎ 书面表达之文字提纲式 ‎1.【2015·新课标全国II】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 出发及返回时间；‎ ‎2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 结语已为你写好。‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎【参考答案】‎ ‎ Dear Lucy,‎ ‎ I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息说明邀请Lucy去参加的活动和时间等。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：邀请、时间、具体活动。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本作文从实际生活出发，以英语的交际性和实用性为目标，兼顾尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意义。体现了课程标准要求的以知识运用为教学目标的要求。在高三备考时，应该多从把语言作为交流的工具的角度去准备书面表达。‎ ‎2.【2015·新课标全国I】‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：‎ 1. 栏目介绍；‎ 2. 稿件内容；‎ 3. 稿件长度：约400词；‎ 4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。 ‎ 注意：‎ 1. 词数100左右；‎ 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；‎ 3. 开头语已为你写好。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Peter,‎ I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.‎ The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please ‎ write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to , hear from等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和过渡词语，不仅增强了表达效果，而且实现了形式与内容的统一。‎ ‎3.【2015·北京】‎ 假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：‎ ‎ 1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）；‎ ‎ 2. 说明你打算参加的原因；‎ ‎ 3. 询问对方的意向。‎ ‎ 注意： 1. 词数不少于50；‎ ‎ 2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp Dear Jim,‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Jim,‎ I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you’d like to go with me.‎ This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.‎ Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. ‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if you’d like to go with me.‎ 文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。‎ ‎【考点定位】应用文类书面表达 ‎【名师点睛】本题是一篇考的是邀请信，龙舟的一个艺术节，仍然是传统文化的主题。采分点主要是三个板块，第一个板块是相关细节的处理。因为在第一个要点当中写到，学生要自己设计时间、地点以及参赛人员，这使学生需要自行发挥得，编纂的时候要合理一些。第二个板块提到你的参加原因，原因必然是考官会关注的，为什么要参加龙州艺术界的活动。第三，他提到两个字，就是询问，希望学生在写作的时候尽量避开一些非常生硬的词汇。注意写邀请信常用句型：On behalf of…, I am writing to invite you to take part in the…；I’d like to be involved in…due to the fact that…；I am looking forward to your reply/ arrival/coming/‎ ‎ attendance等考生在应用文写作中一定要体现出交际功能，重视该文体的写作结构，除称呼与落款必须写齐全外，正文部分一般开头应道明写作目的，中间呈现具体细节，结尾处补充礼貌性话语。另外，应用文的语言结构忌过于复杂，用词忌过难过偏，少用倒装从句嵌套等长难句。语言与用词做到适用应用场合，准确到位即可。只要做到以上几点，应用文部分即可拿到一个不错的分数。‎ ‎4.【2015·广东】‎ 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）‎ 你接受了一项写作任务，为英语校报写一篇科技报道。‎ 写作内容]‎ 请根据以下信息，介绍国外医疗行业出现的一项新技术。内容包括：‎ 技术名称：DNA检测 检测方法：唾液样本分析 检测费用：125英镑 检测时长：4到6周 检测用途： 1. 预测重大疾病 ‎2. 预知食物偏好 ‎3. 提示合适的锻炼方式 检测影响： 1. 增强健康意识 ‎2. 易引起过度焦虑 ‎*唾液样本：saliva sample 写作要求]‎ 只能用5个句子表达全部内容；‎ 评分标准]‎ 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ 第一节DNA Detection We can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：对于基础写作用5个句子概括医疗新技术，要求必须用上所有的要点，不能遗漏。对于概括短文大意，要抓住要点。叙述自己的班级情况时：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。2.‎ 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态及一般将来时。 3.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运用了宾语从句，以及Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定语从句。副词Therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本题所给用5个句子概括医疗新技术的材料是学生不太熟悉的内容，所以要尽量使用学生熟悉的句式来写，还必须用5个句子表达所有的信息。此题主要考查阅读概括能力及语言的组织的能力。需要用一些高级句式及词汇来增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎5.【2015·陕西】‎ ‎ 书面表达（满分30分）‎ 假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。 ‎ ‎ Volunteers Wanted Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.‎ 写作要点：‎ ‎1.表示写信意图；‎ ‎2.陈述应征目的；‎ ‎3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。‎ 写作要求： ‎ ‎1.邮件词数不少于100；‎ ‎2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯 ‎4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ Dear MS Chen ,‎ ‎ I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. ‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply. ‎ ‎ Yours truly,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【参考答案】‎ Dear MS Chen ,‎ ‎ I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.‎ ‎ I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.‎ ‎ As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.‎ ‎ I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply. ‎ ‎ Yours truly,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了so…that…‎ 句型，以及定语从句I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with,,have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文 ‎【名师点睛】这篇作文类似于读写类作文。首先要读懂招募启事，抓住重要信息。再结合提纲写作。内容贴近学生的生活，学生有话讲。也富有实用性。对学生的交际能力也会有所帮助。‎ ‎6.【2015·四川】‎ 书面表达（共35分)‎ 假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。‎ 1. ‎ 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；‎ 2. ‎ 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；‎ 3. ‎ 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；‎ 4. ‎ 提出你学习英语的具体需求。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；‎ Hi Sharon,‎ This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Hi Sharon,‎ ‎ This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.‎ ‎ Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time ‎ practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.‎ ‎ In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking. ‎ Hope for you early reply!‎ ‎ Yours Sincerely ‎ ‎ Li Xia ‎【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.、表语从句：It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲类作文 ‎【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。‎ ‎7.【2015·天津】‎ 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。 ‎ ‎（1）自我介绍；‎ ‎ （2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等； ‎ ‎（3）询问对方的其他需求。‎ 注意：‎ ‎（1）词数不少于100；‎ ‎（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇： 学生会 the Student Union ‎ Dear Chris, ‎ ‎ 此处不能答题 ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Jin ‎【参考答案】‎ Dear_Chris，‎ I am Li Jin, chairman of the Student Union of Chenguang High School. I am writing to inform you of our donation.‎ In order to enhance the friendship between our two schools, our school has appealed to the students to donate books to your Chinese class. The books, which can be used as reading materials or reference books in your Chinese class, include 30 storybooks, 25 magazines and 20 ChineseEnglish dictionaries. We will take the books over to you when we take part in the summer camp to be held in your school in July.‎ Should you need any other things, please do not hesitate to tell us.‎ Yours，‎ Li_Jin ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.自我介绍及写信目的；2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；3. 询问对方的其他需求； 4．告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。‎ ‎8.【2015·重庆】‎ 写作二（满分20分）‎ Bookcrossing. Com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：‎ ‎· 表明写信目的 ‎· 选择一种分享方式 ‎· 简述作出该选择的理由 ‎· 希望了解更多信息 注意：（1）词数不少于80；‎ ‎ （2）在答题卡上做答 ‎ （3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books. ‎ You’ve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.‎ If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.‎ ‎【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，不拖拉，使用短语：apply for申请；Looking forward to盼望着；Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for ‎ it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.这句话运用learning做伴随状语，reason后面跟着一个同位语从句；not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.这个句子not only but also连接两个句子，第一个句子需要用部分倒装；‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本题的解题思路，一、表明写信目的：申请参加该活动（添加得知消息）；二、选择一种分享方式：二者选一；三、阐述理由 ；四、书信结尾（添加希望）；注意表达句式1. Between them, I would like to choose…2. Of the two, I prefer the latter to the former.表示希望的表达句式1. I am looking forward to more information.2. I would appreciate it if you would offer more information.‎ 书面表达之图画式 ‎1.【2015·上海】‎ Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.‎ 学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；‎ ‎2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Dear Sir/ Madam,‎ Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.‎ In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Pan Yang ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。‎ 运用定语从句a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.; a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration; your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well；My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book； ‎ 运用连词 Though, ‎ 运用副词 deeply 修饰impressed 运用了宾语从句discussing heatedly what they have just read；It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion; Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story; it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity；I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration 此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如not only …but also; as far as I’m concerned; To sum up ; share with; 等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查描述图片及表达理由。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾。‎ ‎2.【2015·福建】‎ 书面表达(满分25分）‎ 请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。 ‎ 内容包括：‎ ‎1. 描述画面；‎ ‎2. 概述其含义；‎ ‎3. 谈谈个人感想。 ‎ 凿壁偷光 注意：‎ ‎1. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；‎ 参考词汇：凿，钻：bore In the picture,‎ ‎【答案】‎ In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.‎ This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.The boy, being poor ,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour ‘s house to read at night.The moral of the story is spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be Of course, things are totally different today It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本题为看图写作，主题是古时候的一则成语“凿壁偷光”。注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。‎ ‎【亮点分析】‎ 文章第一段描述图片，第一句中用到了动词ing形式的非谓语动词做伴随状语和with 的复合结构In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.图中我们可以看见一个男孩穿着破旧的衣服坐在一个堆满书的桌子旁边。A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.一丝微弱的光亮从墙上的一个小洞穿过，他沉静在自己的阅读中。‎ 第二段第一句开始说这个图片的主题。This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.这是一个众人周知的中国古代成语。第二句也是用了一个分词结构表示伴随状语The boy, being poor ,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour ‘s house to read at night.这个贫穷的男孩甚至不能够买得起一根蜡烛，于是他把墙凿了一个洞，从他邻居那里偷了一些光在夜晚阅读。第二段最后一句用了一个no matter引导的让步状语从句。The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.故事的精神是要不遗余力的获取知识，并且不管有多么困难的情况从不轻易气馁。‎ 第三段结束Of course, things are totally different today .当然，现在可完全不同了。第二句是一个not… but 结构以及宾语从句It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.不是这个故事本身而是这个故事反映出来的东西才是重要的。俗语：Hard work pays off.功夫不负有心人。We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.我们应该带着苦来通过学习来改进自己并且为未来做准备。‎ ‎【考点定位】看图说话写作。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本文考查看图说话写作，要求学生仔细描述图片并且发表自己的感受。一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾以丰富文章的内容。‎ ‎3.【2015·北京】‎ 假如你是红星中学学生李华。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中，面向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。并以”A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊”英语角“写一篇英文稿件。‎ 注意：词数不少于60.‎ 提示词：一个面团a piece of dough 面人dough figurine ‎【答案】‎ ‎ Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines. ‎ When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently.‎ ‎ Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.‎ ‎ We hope we can have more activities of this kind!‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。‎ 全文适用的是一般过去时，注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。‎ 范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：非谓语动词Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.；定语从句we put the figurines we made on the table…；时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. 语法知识使用得当，叙事清晰。‎ ‎【考点定位】图表类记叙文 ‎【名师点睛】本题考查的细节是手工艺人教大家如何去做这个东西，学生认真聆听，是教育学。第二幅图最重要的点就是学生能不能找到学生认真聆听这个环节，因为老师教一定能看得出来，但是学生能不能写到学生在听，这应该是一个得分点。第三幅图是一个指导。所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。最后一幅图是我们在上课的时候会重点讲的照相，大家很欢乐，做成一个作品。 所以，除了四幅图的要点之外，所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。所以写好这样的作文一定要抓住细节，才能得分。还需要注意时态，词汇不要拼写错误，多用复合句式才能体现出亮点。考生切忌在文章开篇犯低级的语法错误，尤其注意时态、单复数及冠词的正确使用。相比于实用性强的应用文来说，情景作文可以在保证要点齐全的前提下适当增加长难句的使用，如对非谓语、三大从句及连词进行灵活运用。关注句式的多样性及用词的准确性对取得该板块的高分会有更大的保障。‎ 书面表达之开放式 ‎1.【2015·安徽】‎ 某英文杂志正在举办以"Fancy yourself as an interviewer"为主题的征文活动，请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题，写一篇英语短文。 ‎ 内容包括：‎ ‎1. 采访的对象；‎ ‎2. 采访的原因；‎ ‎3. 想提的问题。 ‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数120左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；‎ ‎4. 短文的标题已给出，不计人总词数。‎ A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview ‎ The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.‎ I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.‎ If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.‎ ‎【亮点说明】范文使用了一些重点句型：定语从句I would like to interview is Yang Liwei；原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese...；宾语从句①I could learn a great deal from him about it，②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained；条件状语从句If I could interview him；非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等，显示了扎实的语法功底，也使作文的句式变得多样；‎ 范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语：not only...but also...；one of the...；the first to do sth；be interested in；a great deal；such...as等，使作文的内容变得更加丰富；‎ 范文注意使用not only...but also, and, also和finally等来衔接句子，使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。‎ ‎【考点定位】命题类材料作文 ‎【名师点睛】题目给出了一个征文的通知，要求考生根据提示以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to ‎ Interview”为题，写一篇英语短文。题目属于命题作文，不过，题目给出了写作的框架，一定程度上降低了难度。需要注意的是，所写的作文必须涵盖所有的要点，如果能够使用高级词汇和重要句型，将会给作文增色不少。‎ ‎2.【2015·湖南】‎ Section C (25 marks)‎ Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.‎ 请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。‎ ‎ As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 将所有句子写在答题卡上；‎ ‎2. 续写词数不少于120个；‎ ‎3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ As_a_student,_I_can_tell_you_that_there_is_nothing_better_than_being_praised_by_my_teacher_before_my_classmates.‎ Yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and I went home together after school. Suddenly we saw an old lady knocked down by a car. The driver ran away in his car. Li Ming and I ran over to find that the old lady's head was bleeding. She had already lost consciousness. Immediately I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with it. Li Ming stopped a taxi quickly. Together we put the old lady into the taxi and drove her to the nearest hospital. ‎ The old lady was saved and we also felt very pleased. What's more, I remembered the number of the car, and the traffic police caught the driver later.‎ ‎3.【2015·湖北】【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ 短文写作 ‎ 请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，有英语写一篇短文。‎ ‎ Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer,you will learn.‎ 注意：1.无须写标题；‎ ‎ 2.除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎ 3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；‎ ‎ 4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎ 5.词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.‎ Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class. Although the answer seemed a little strange, nobody but I doubted it. Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. Half an hour later, I managed to find the correct answer. When I showed my answer to him, the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.‎ From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.‎ ‎【亮点说明】首句“Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.”鲜明地亮出了作者的观点。文章使用了状语从句“If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.”及分词做状语“Thinking that his solution might be wrong,…”等句型，为文章增色不少。此外，一些短语的使用也恰到好处，如offer sb. sth.，work sth. out，manage to do sth.，praise sb. for sth.，serve as等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查“提纲类开放式”作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】今年的高考短文写作仍然沿袭了近几年的模式，考生对“提纲类开放式”作文比较熟悉。考生答题时，先提取关键词question，doubt，learn来确定中心，确保不走题。通过英文提示，考生很容易得出这一观点：质疑既是求知的一种方式，也是“批判性思维”的起点。这对引导考生进行独立思考，发展批判性思维，培养创新意识，极具启发和指导作用。‎ ‎4.【2015·江苏】‎ ‎ 书面表达 (满分 25 分)‎ ‎81.请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章.‎ 写作内容]‎ ‎1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;‎ ‎2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;‎ ‎3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。‎ 写作要求]‎ ‎1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句; ‎ ‎2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;‎ ‎3. 不必写标题。‎ 评分标准]‎ 内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。‎ ‎【答案】‎ The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.‎ Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What’ s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.‎ In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don’‎ t secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track. (150 words)‎ ‎【亮点说明】范文严格按照“三步走”的格局，第一段用短短26字（不含标点）概括了所给材料，得益于使用了“not only…but also…”这一经典句型；第二段分析了导致交通问题的原因，使用了“give rise to, large-scale construction of, the increasing number of, (be) vital to”等高级词汇，同时“what’s worse”衔接词的恰当使用使该段条理清晰。第三段句型多样，变换使用了“Without虚拟语气，it is…who…强调句型，it is one’s duty to do sth.”等句型，为文章增色不少。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查“说明文类材料+图形+提纲类”作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】说明文类材料的概括方法：主题概括法 （段意合并法）。考生应抓住主题句（关键句），一般为文章第一段和各段第一句，然后进行段意合并，再用1-2个漂亮的句式整理成文；分析原因时，注意分条称述，并使用恰当的衔接词，但要避免落入俗套；谈论启示时注意句式的变换使用，避免句式的单一。另外，考生应尽可能多地使用一些高级词汇，为文章增色。‎ ‎5.【2015·广东】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）‎ Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: “Rule 1: We are family! “ All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3… In the following weeks, Sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and require everyone to follow them.‎ Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students. Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class. At the graduation ceremony, just as she expected, she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.‎ 写作内容]‎ ‎1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。‎ ‎2. 用约120个词就班规谈谈你的想法，内容包括：‎ ‎(1) 你们班最突出的问题是什么？‎ ‎(2) 针对该问题你会设计一条什么班规？‎ ‎(3)你认为班规会带来什么影响？‎ 写作要求]‎ ‎1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。‎ ‎2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。‎ 评分标准]‎ ‎ 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Sally was a teacher. who taught some students full of problems. The students didn’t follow the school rules. Therefore, she made the rules for them. Later they made great progress.‎ In our class ,some students don’t work hard and often fight with each other. I will tell them some stories about hard-working people.I will make a study plan to encourage them to study work. I put up some sayings on the walls to remind them to do so.I will explain to them that studying hard is very important. They aren’t allowed to fight at school.In this way, students have a good habit. Most of the students follow the school rules and study work. They will respect teachers and other classmates. They will have good manners and confidence. Later they will get better grades.‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运用了宾语从句，以及Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定语从句。副词Therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查提纲作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本题所给用5个句子概括医疗新技术的材料是学生不太熟悉的内容，所以要尽量使用学生熟悉的句式来写，还必须用5个句子表达所有的信息。此题主要考查阅读概括能力及语言的组织的能力。需要用一些高级句式及词汇来增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎6.【2015·浙江】‎ 书面表达（满分30分）‎ 在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英文写一篇100～120个词“短文。要求如下：‎ ‎1.从以上两种做法中选择一种；‎ ‎2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。‎ 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。‎ When I Have a Different Opinion ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ When I Have a Different Opinion ‎ We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it . By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.‎ ‎ Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day . Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.‎ An alternative student version:‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.‎ ‎ The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism; I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如not only …but also…不仅而且。‎ 运用连词while 表对比观点。运用because 表达原因。‎ 运用了表语从句表达原因The main reason for my choice is that …。‎ 运用了宾语从句 decide whether do have a … ；discuss where to go for an outing ‎ 运用了介词短语 By doing so, Without hesitation. ‎ 运用了强调句 we did have a lots of fun that day. ‎ 此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be worth doing sth; stick to sth.; have a good time; have lots of fun , tend to do 等。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查观点理由。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾。‎ ‎7.【2015·重庆】‎ ‎ 写作一（满分15分）‎ 请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。‎ If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?‎ 要求：‎ ‎（1）作出回答并说出理由；‎ ‎（2）词数不少于60；‎ ‎（3）在答题卡上做答。‎ ‎【参考答案】‎ Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，使用了多种句式和结构。比如I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals.宾语从句；Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward.这个句子还运用到非谓语动词；If only I could go back and reset my goals.还运用到虚拟语气。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查开放性作文。‎ ‎【名师点睛】这种开放性的作文，采取表明观点+阐释理由+结尾总结的解题思路，一、建议句式：主要考虑从虚拟语气着手 ‎1. 宾语从句 I suggest/ advise that…I should…‎ ‎2. 主语从句 It’s strongly recommended that…‎ ‎3. 条件状语从句 If I were three years younger, I would…‎ 二、原因句式：建议陈述两个原因，用并列结构not only, but…as well连接 ‎1. The reason why… is that…‎ ‎2. Why I say so is that…‎ 三、结尾部分：表达对“回不到过去”的惋惜 How I wish I could be three years younger!‎ ‎2014年高考试题 文字提纲式 ‎1.【2014·全国大纲卷】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。‎ ‎1.家庭：‎ ‎2．工作：‎ ‎3.业余生活。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右：‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：‎ ‎3.开头语已为你写好。‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ I often imagine what my life would be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty –eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do .In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.‎ ‎【亮点说明】本篇范文短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对未来的畅想，然后从生活，工作，家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文。‎ ‎2.【2014·重庆卷】写作（共两个写作任务，满分35分）‎ 写作二（满分20分）‎ 青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。‎ 假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，内容应包括：‎ ‎*赞同Susan的看法 ‎*你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么 ‎*该礼物的意义 ‎*期待大家回复 注意：1. 词数不少于80；‎ ‎ 2. 符合语言规范；‎ ‎ 3. 在答题卡上作答；‎ ‎ 4. 开头已给出（不计入总词数）。‎ ‎ I am a high school student from China. _________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________.‎ ‎【答案】‎ I am a high school student from China and I am quite for your opinion about best gifts: the value of gifts lies in its intension so we should devote more to them. ‎ The best gift I’ve ever received is a book from my English teacher, Debbie, which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA. The book’s name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul: The Real Deal: Friends. I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way. And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me because she found me at loss dealing with friends at one time. Reading it, I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study.‎ I strongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply. ‎ ‎ Yours ever,‎ ‎ Li Hua 写作技巧：一般情况下应分三段来完成改写任务：阐释Susan的观点并表示认同。收到或送出的礼物的具体描写及其意义。该部分是本写作任务的重点，应多费笔墨完成。表期待应另外起段完成，以便阅卷老师发现和评判内容要点。遣词造句尽量使用自己熟悉的词句。优秀学生一定要在保持正确的前提下尽量使用较为复杂的句型，如状语从句，定语从句，倒装句和适量的非谓语动词。特别强调：一定要注意卷面整洁并避免拼写错误。‎ ‎3.【2014·天津卷】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示， 给他写封邮件：‎ ‎(1) 表示欢迎 (2) 介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如天气， 饮食等）‎ ‎(3) 介绍本班情况 (4) 希望Chris做哪些事情， 以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊 注意：‎ ‎(1) 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。 (2) 可适当加入细节， 使内容充实，行文连贯。‎ 词数不少于100； 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。‎ ‎(1) 参考词汇： 交换生 exchange student Dear Chris, ‎ I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version:‎ Dear Chris，‎ I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. Welcome to our class in China. I'm glad you can join our class, which is a wonderful group. Every student not only enjoys studying, but is ready to help each other. So if you join us, I’m sure you can get along well with them and quickly make friends with them, too. ‎ The climate here is changeable. Now, it is very cool in autumn and cold in winter, so don't forget to bring different kinds of clothes with you. In your spare time, you can visit some famous places of interest in our city, as well as tasting all kinds of delicious traditional Chinese local foods. We Chinese use chopsticks to have Chinese food instead of forks and knives. And I can be your tour guide if you like.‎ As an American, there is no doubt that you are familiar with your country. So if it is convenient to you, please bring a map of America and some photos of your families，friends, and some famous buildings with you, and give us some speeches to introduce your school life and different culture of America. And we’ll exchange our different lives and cultures together then.‎ looking forward to your coming!‎ Yours Li Jin ‎【亮点分析】本文包括了四个要点。1. 表示欢迎。2. 介绍班级情况，运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句。not only…but also 连接词是句子连贯。3. 注意事项。4. 希望Chris做的事。用了get along well with，make friends with，as well as， instead of， it is convenient to you等短语和固定句型。‎ ‎4.【2014·北京卷】书面表达（共两节，35 分） ‎ 第一节 ‎(15分)‎ ‎ 你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：‎ ‎ 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；‎ ‎2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；‎ ‎3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。‎ 注意： 1.词数不少于50.‎ ‎ 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎ 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Chris,‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Joe ‎【答案】‎ Dear Chris,‎ How is everything going?‎ I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.‎ I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.‎ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.‎ Yours, ‎ Joe ‎【亮点说明】文章范文使用了高级从句及省略：1. I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.‎ ‎2.高级短语：put off look forward to hear from 考点：考查应用文写作 ‎5.【2014·山东卷】写作（满分30分） ‎ 某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1.该谚语的含义；2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。‎ ① A friend in need is a friend indeed. ‎ ‎②Where there’s a will, there’s a way.‎ 注意：1.词数：120-150； ‎ ‎2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。‎ 参考词汇：谚语 proverb ‎ 考点：考查夹叙夹议文 ‎6.【2014·江西卷】书面表达 ‎ 假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。‎ ‎ 1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；‎ ‎ 2.学会做人：真诚，友善；‎ ‎ 3.学会其他：考生自拟。‎ 注意：1.词数120左右；‎ ‎ 2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。‎ Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Thank you! ‎ ‎【题型分析】‎ ‎ 今年江西高考英语书面表达属于演讲稿写作。给予提纲，半自由半开放类。与学生实际生活十分贴切。让学生有话可说，但要得高分必须有深度的思想以及就话题语言灵活运用能力。即要能在清晰的框架内在语言和内容方面写出自己的特色。‎ ‎【审题要素】‎ ‎ 写作时需注意下列几点。‎ ‎ 1. 应该使用第一人称。全文以现在以及将来范畴的时态为主，当然不排斥用过去时态。‎ ‎ 2. 按提纲提示清晰分段，不能缺少要点（学会学习：方法，习惯等；学会做人：真诚；友善；学会其他）。‎ ‎ 3.注意语言逻辑性和思维想象力。多用些语际衔接性词语（first of all ，besides ，on the one hand 等）。‎ ‎【思路导引】‎ 首先， 思考出要学会学习，要有个符合自己的方法，要养成良好的学习习惯，要有个正确的学习态度等；思考出要学会做人，要与人和善，要和睦相处，要正气真诚等；当然还要学会锻炼，学会娱乐，学会自我管理等。‎ 然后，根据要点思考可用哪些表达法：the best way of .../ an acceptable thing is .../get into a habit of .../be active in..../go over.../behave well/it is kind of .../be involved in...等；根据提纲，连成句子，清晰分段。可用firstly.../in addition.../last but not the least等。‎ 最后，虽然试卷给出了演讲开头，但我们别忘了在演讲稿结尾时，或总结，或展望未来，或表决心等。‎ ‎【标准范文】‎ Good morning, everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in ‎ senior high school.‎ In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. First, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.‎ Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.‎ No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.‎ ‎ Thank you!‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ ‎【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ 重点 词汇 语句 Challenging，used to In addition build up Develop a good habit get actively involved in No pains no gains.‎ get along well with ‎ ‎...‎ 高级 句型 ‎1. Developing a good habit is also of importance. （动名词短语作主语）‎ ‎2. ...review what had been taught after class. （名词性从句）‎ ‎3. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. （强调句）‎ ‎4. I am sure that with great efforts, you will... （名词性从句）‎ ‎...‎ 段落 框架 First,...‎ In addition,...‎ Finally,...‎ ‎7.【2014·四川卷】面表达（共35分）‎ 假设你是李夏I你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况，请根据以下要点回信告知。【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎1. 考试日期与科目； ‎ ‎2. 考试准备情况；‎ ‎3. 考试吋的状态；‎ ‎4. 对试题的感受； ‎ ‎5. 可能的考试结果。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.       词数120左右； ‎ ‎2.       开头语和结尾语已为你写好； ‎ ‎3.       可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯； ‎ ‎4.       文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 ‎ 参考词汇：college entrance examination Dear Sam,‎ Thank you for your concern.                                                            ________________________ ‎ ‎                                                                             ______________________________________ ‎ ‎                                                                           ________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version :‎ Dear Sam ,‎ Thank you for your concern. I am glad to tell you something about what you asked about our college entrance examination .‎ The college entrance examination falls on June 7and June 8 every year ,and the subjects that we should prepare for are different depending on each province .Generally speaking , we are busy reviewing and preparing for it the moment we enter senior three ,which is considered a vital period .With the exam approaching , most students will feel nervous and upset .But by now when I am sitting the exam , I feel calm ,because I think the exam is neither too easy nor too difficult . I am sure I will get a good result .But whatever the result is, I will face it calmly. After all , I have made every effort ,and I won’t regret .‎ ‎ Best wishes ! ‎ ‎ Yours ,‎ ‎ Li Xia ‎【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，语言流畅，时态、人称和标点符号的使用正确，很好的完成了写作任务。在作文中作者开门见山提出自己写信的目的，即告诉Sam有关高考的事情，这种结构安排符合书信类文体的结构安排。在句式方面作者使用了定语从句which is considered a vital period，状语从句whatever the result is, 宾语从句what you asked about our college entrance examination等，而且还用到了Generally speaking , With the exam approaching , After all ,等短语，这些短语和句式的使用有效地增加了文章的亮点，提高了作文档次。‎ 考点：考查提纲类作文。‎ ‎8.【2014·陕西卷】书面表达（满分30分）‎ 假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。 ‎ 写作要点：‎ ‎1.表示对客人的欢迎；‎ ‎2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；‎ ‎3.表达对客人的祝愿。‎ ‎ 写作要求： ‎ ‎1.词数不少于100；‎ ‎2.称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；‎ ‎3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ Dear American guests,‎ ‎ ____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ Dear American Guest,‎ On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week Activities.‎ As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.‎ I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是对美国代表团的欢迎词，所以要用一般现在时。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段欢迎美国朋友的到来；第二段介绍英语周的活动；第三段表达愿望：希望获准。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如on behalf of，As scheduled， consist of， benefit from等等；还运用了不定式to have作状语，to develop作表语等，动名词listening等作宾语，hope后宾语从句等等。‎ 考点：考查应用文写作。‎ ‎9.【2014·安徽卷】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。‎ 内容要点如下：‎ ‎1．表示理解并给予安慰；‎ ‎2．提出建议并说明理由。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数120左右；‎ ‎2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；‎ ‎3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪 Hi Worried.:‎ I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Jamie ‎【答案】‎ Hi Worried:‎ ‎ I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:‎ ‎ First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.‎ ‎ I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.‎ Yours，‎ Jamie ‎【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：a good way of…的好方法， let out 释放，get rid of消除， carry on 继续进行，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：I’m sorry to know that you’re ‎ having such a bad time at the moment. 这句话用了宾语从句，The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. 这句话用了表语从句和时间状语从句， The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. 这句话用了不定式做表语和so that引导的结果状语从句， talk to someone you trust about how you feel. 这句话用了定语从句。文章还使用了合适的连接词First, Second, And third使文章很连贯。‎ 考点：考查提纲类书面表达 ‎ ‎10.【2014·湖南卷】Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.‎ 学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品（如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic_______”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。‎ 内容：‎ ‎1.说明设计理由 ‎2.介绍新功能。‎ 注意;:‎ ‎1.词数不少于120个字 ‎2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎【答案】‎ My magic pen Pens are necessities for every student. So we are all familiar with them. ‎ I design my pen. On the one hand, it’s easy to carry. On the other hand, it’s used not only for writing but also for other important aspects.‎ Firstly, I put some batteries in the pen and fix a light bulb, so when it is dark on my way home or to school, I can use it for a flasher. I won’t be afraid of darkness any more. Secondly, I fix a tiny clock in the pen, so I can know the time and I don’t have to wear my watch. At last, I put a sharp knife on the top of the pen, I can either use it for cutting things or even protecting myself when I come across danger. ‎ Such is the pen which I designed. Isn’t it useful and attractive? ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文语言规范，条理清楚，脉络清晰。过渡性词汇Firstly, Secondly, at last One the one hand, One the other hand，等等的贴切使用使文章意义更连贯，逻辑更严密。 总体上讲不失为一篇优秀的习作。‎ ‎11.【2014·浙江卷】书面表达 （满分30分）‎ ‎ 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需 要购置科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。‎ ‎ 注意：信的开头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。‎ ‎ Dear Mr. Wang,‎ ‎  ____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎                                                      Yours sincerely ‎                                                       Li Yue ‎ 【答案】‎ ‎ Dear Mr. Wang,‎ Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.‎ What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.‎ In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.‎ I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Yue ‎【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式增加了文章的色彩，如：would like to do；help sb do sth；not only...but also;encourage sb to do sth;That is why…等，还用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化，如：What we need most are popular science books这里what引导的主语从句；That is why I recommend another category of books：这里why引导的表语从句；I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.这里是if引导的条件状语从句。‎ ‎ 考点：提纲作文。‎ ‎12.【2014·全国新课标II】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。‎ ‎1.家庭：‎ ‎2．工作：‎ ‎3.业余生活。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右：‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：‎ ‎3.开头语已为你写好。‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ I often imagine what my life would be like in the future . I think my life will be very different in ten years .i will be twenty –eight years old by then . I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child . I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer . I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues . I’will do a good job in whatever I do .In my free time , I will continue to take regular exercise , such as swimming , running and various ball games . On my holidays , I will travel around the world .In a word , my life will be much richer and more colorful.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文是一篇记叙文，主题是“十年后的我”‎ ‎。在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手，因为提示信息较少，所以要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容。比如可以联想到的内容有健身，度假，聚会等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词或者插入语以使文章层次分明，条理清晰。还要正确使用多种句式结构和高级亮点词汇来提高文章的档次，如定语从句，宾语从句和状语从句等。此外，因为是畅想未来，所以要用一般将来时。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本篇范文短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对未来的畅想，然后从生活，工作，家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文。‎ ‎13.【2014·全国新课标I】书面表达 假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）‎ 注意：1.词数100左右 ‎ 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。‎ 3. 参考词汇：住宿—accommodation ‎【答案】‎ Dear Sir/Madam,‎ I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?‎ I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours faithfully,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】李华计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚，想要给校方写信咨询有关事项，考生要清楚这是一封信，要符合信的格式。这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体。考生要注意动词时态的变化，以一般现在时为主，兼有将来时，比如：功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情。注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。使用一些高级句型和词汇来提高作文档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语，增加了文章的色彩，如：plan to do sth ;would like to do sth;pay for; look forward to doing/sth等；用了一些过渡词如：First ；Besides等，使文章过渡自然；用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一。如：I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气，增加了文章的亮点。‎ 考点：考查书信应用文。‎ ‎14.【2014·上海卷】Directions:Write an English composition in 120—150words according to the instrucions given below in Chinese.‎ 学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：‎ ‎1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；‎ ‎2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Editor,‎ I’ve learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one. I’m writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.‎ Needless to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students’ interest and have positive effects on their study and life.‎ Compared to the entertainment ,I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important . The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life. In addition, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.‎ Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one hand, it covers one’s career development a great deal .On the other hand, it makes a great difference to one’s career success in the future.‎ What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Cheng Fei ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴，这篇作文要求就校英语报改版是事情给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容： 1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由； 2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由，根据自己的建议选定栏目的设置并以邮件方式表达自己的观点。考生在写作过程中要确定切题且符合英语写作逻辑的篇章结构。确立邮件文体之后，要弄清要点，围绕要点展开，条理要清晰，理由要充分，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，文章尽量简洁，在文章中尽可能多地使用高大上的词汇，遵循短语优先原则在配以特殊句型和复合句的应用，让文章更上档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组： share with 和…分享，Needless to say不必说，‎ according to 根据， have positive effects on对…有积极的影响，in turn反之，take… into account将…考虑在内，makes a great difference to对…有很大的影响，in the hope that希望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：compared to the entertainment ,I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important . 这句话用了过去分词和同位语从句，The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. 这句话用了表语从句和while表示对比的用法， the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句， What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. 这句话用了主语从句，还有范文还使用了 In addition, Furthermore, On the one hand, On the other hand,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。‎ 考点：考查提纲类书面表达 图画式 ‎1.【2014·北京卷】书面表达（共两节，35 分） ‎ 第二节（20 分）‎ 假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。‎ 注意： 1. 词数不少于 60.‎ ‎ 2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.‎ ‎【答案】‎ There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 这篇情景作文主要涉及四个要点：1. 点明问题;2. 讨论问题;3. 提交建议;4. 看到变化。在写作时要以时间为主线，事件为辅助，写清事件的过程。宜用一般过去时、第一人称来写。‎ ‎【亮点说明】使用了从句：1.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.2.不定式短语及形式主语：Now it is easy to park our bikes there.‎ 考点：考查看图写话 ‎ ‎2.【2014·辽宁卷】书面表达(满分25分)‎ 假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限”‎ ‎(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示，以短文 形式用英语写一份书面通知。‎ 注意: 1.词数100左右;‎ ‎ 2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯;‎ ‎ 3.开头及结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。‎ 参考词汇: 校园campus 创意作品innovation 颁奖prize-giving ‎【答案】‎ Notice An exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner. Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.‎ ‎ Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.‎ All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! It’ll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18. So don’t miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. For any questions. Call Li Hua at 44876655.‎ Come on, everybody! It’s your show time.‎ Student Union ‎【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：around the corner.即将到来，Along with连同， hand in上交，occur to使想起，on show展览， Look forward to盼望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如： Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.这句话用了定语从句， Note that your innovations must be school things. 这句话用了宾语从句，Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.这句话使用现在分词做状语和宾语从句。‎ 考点：考查图画类书面表达 开放式 ‎1.【2014·重庆卷】写作（共两个写作任务，满分35分）‎ 写作一（满分15分）‎ 请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。‎ ‎“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.”‎ 要求：1. 就此材料发表你的看法；‎ ‎ 2. 紧扣材料，有明确的观点；‎ ‎ 3. 词数不少于60；‎ ‎ 4. 在答题卡上作答。‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version This happens frequently in a teenager’s world which depends on cell phones too much. In the eyes of the youngsters’, friendship is important. But when it comes to the balance of friends and phones, kids tends to regard the latter as their bigger share. ‎ I don’t think it is wise to neglect a devoted human friend but favor the phone, because human friends can push us on in the fierce struggle in life while phones are only our tools. So next time, when your friend falls, don’t laugh at him or her but help him or her stand up. ‎ ‎2.【2014·福建卷】书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎ 如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。‎ ‎ “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."‎ ‎ - Sir Winston, Churchill ‎ 内容要求：‎ ‎ 1．你对该引语的理解：‎ ‎ 2．你的相关经历：‎ ‎ 3．恰当的结尾。‎ ‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数：‎ ‎ 2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息：‎ ‎ 3．词数：120左右。‎ ‎ This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that__________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.‎ ‎ At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should stick at it.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题，自己对于该引语的理解；第二段写出自己的相关经历；第三段恰当地结尾。2. 时态：自己的相关经历用一般过去时；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.这里含有一个时间状语从句。What's important is that we should stick at it.这里含有一个主语从句 和一个表语从句。‎ 考点：话题类书面表达 ‎3.【2014·湖北卷】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）‎ 请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.‎ 注意：①无须写标题； ②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；‎ ‎④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。‎ ‎【答案】‎ It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.‎ I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.‎ As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 本文是篇英语材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必需认真审题，首先要注意文章是要求结合具体的事例，所以一般都是发生过的，故描述是要用一般过去时。既然是具体事例来理解，因此最好用第一人称。再有就是写的事例内容一定要符合所给的主题，并形成文章主题的首尾呼应从而提高作文的档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文章第一句It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society就鲜明概括并亮出了作者的观点。文中使用了定语从句I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon以及非限制性定语从句which drove off quickly都为文章增色不少，一些短语和短句的使用也恰到好处比如knock down，drive off，be proud of, rush to sb to do sth，compare with等并注意了句子的衔接如： when， luckily 等等。‎ 考点：考查提纲类作文 ‎4.【2014·江苏卷】书面表达 (满分 25 分)‎ ‎81. 请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。‎ When we read newspapers, we often come across such English words as “AIDS” and “PK.” When we watch TV, we frequently hear words like “NBA” or “PM2.5.” When we speak, we automatically use words like “OUT” or “Bye-bye.” English words and expressions like these are getting popular. They have already become part of our daily language. And 239 English words have been included in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese. ‎ The inclusion has started a heated discussion. A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these English words, which, they think, goes against Chinese language policies. They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing an increasing number of English words but are also concerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language. However, others are in favor of the inclusion because it is hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language. They believe the selection is mostly a result of their function and use in daily life.‎ 写作内容]‎ ‎1. 用约 30 个单词写出上文概要;‎ ‎2. 用约 120 个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:‎ ‎(1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇;‎ ‎(2)用 2- 3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。‎ 写作要求]‎ ‎1. 可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据;‎ ‎2. 阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;‎ ‎3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;‎ ‎4. 不必写标题。‎ 评分标准]‎ 内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。‎ ‎【答案】‎ 支持:‎ Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese includes 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not.‎ Generally, I am in favour of the inclusion. As the number of English learners is on the rise, it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. Besides, it is, on some occasions, more convenient to use English words. Most people nowadays use “IT” instead of ‎ its translation “xinxi jishu.” In our global village, we can see that it’s not uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages. In English, there are many words borrowed from Latin, French, or even Chinese. In fact, Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages, say, “ganbu” or “minzhu” from Japanese.‎ So, it’s safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communication.‎ 反对:‎ With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: “For” and “Against.”‎ I tend to take the “Against” side for two reasons. Firstly, this inclusion has actually polluted our mother tongue. Sooner or later, many English accents will rise and fall with the four Chinese tones. And, rules don’t tell us how to pronounce such English-turned Chinese words as “wifi” and “Out” in a Chinese way! Secondly, such an inclusion may give rise to prejudices of the educated against those with little knowledge of English. Just for one illustration, while college students take “Bye-bye” for granted when parting from each other, it may unconsciously hurt the feelings of someone who is used to “zaijian.”‎ In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本书面表达是一篇议论文写作。今年江苏英语高考首次采用新题型，这也是2014年高考大纲中第一次出现。本书面表达的要求考生首先用30个单词概括所给的文字，然后再给出自己的评判。不管考生是赞成还是反对哪一观点，都要提供足够的理由或者论据。首先，概括部分考查了学生的概括能力，学生再概括的时候要注意语言的精炼性，要点要齐全。其次，阐述的理由或论据要简洁明了，层次分明。最后， 对自己的观点要作出总结。‎ ‎【亮点说明】范文用了一些词组：如in favour of, on some occasions, it’s not uncommon for …, divide into, give rise to, take … for granted, be used to等等。注重句子的连接：如Besides, or, Firstly, Secondly, and, while, not only … but also …，句型上也是多变：With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: “For” and “Against.”这句话用了with的复合结构和非谓语动词作状语，In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people这句话运用了倒装结构等等。‎ 考点：考查议论文 ‎【2014·广东卷】写作（共两节，满分40分）‎ 第一节 基础习作 你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。‎ 写作内容］‎ 请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：‎ 人物：英国人查理德·阿维斯（Richard Avis）‎ 出生日期：1974年12月1日 时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人 目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义 相关信息：‎ · 借助当地媒体寻找 · 迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家 · 职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等 · 计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人 · 打算根据此经历写一本书 ＊ 同年同月同日生的人：time twin 写作要求］‎ ‎ 只能用5个句子表达全部内容 评分标准］‎ ‎ 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Richard Avis, a British, was born on December 1st, 1974. In order to understand the meaning of successful life in different cultures, Richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the world. With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. Richard intends to find 40 time twins before his birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【亮点说明】短文用了短语，增加了文章的色彩，如：in order to do sth; With the help of sb; intend to do sth等；文章用了whom引导的定语从句，把那么多的信息放在了一个句子里来表达，可见写作的功底；增加了文章的亮点。‎ 考点：人物报道类作文。‎ 第二节 读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）‎ 阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。‎ Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.‎ The money was all my savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.‎ Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure.‎ 写作内容]‎ 1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。‎ 2. 用约120个词就Miss McCarty的捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括：‎ （1） 你如何看待她的捐助行为；‎ （2） 你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响；‎ （3） 如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。‎ 写作要求]‎ 1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。‎ 2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。‎ 评分标准]‎ ‎ 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Oseola McCarty, an ordinary worker with a thrifty lifestyle, donated a great deal of money to a university, which aroused public attention and earned her widespread social recognition. In return, she received a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment.‎ Virtuous and warm-hearted, the lady concerned has donated a considerable amount of saving to help college students struggling with financial difficulties, thereby motivating people at any other corner of the world to participate in this affectionate activity.‎ ‎ From where I stand, not only will the lady’s generosity paint a very brilliant blue print for the future of those students in want of money, but also it will rekindle their faith in life by convincing them that their life goal is elevating and worth trying.‎ ‎ Given the choice, I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living condition. Convincing arguments as follows can be made to support my stance. For one thing, generous and selfless dedication may take indispensable assistance to them, especially for the time when they are confronted with pain and sorrow,twists and turns.For another,just as an Indian old saying goes, roses in her hand; flavor in mine. That is to say,great satisfaction would step slowly and gracefully in to the mercy-producers’ souls as well.‎ ‎ To bring as many angel-like smiles as possible to our society, we should practice more beneficial performance by leading a thrifty life.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：根据提示1:用约30个词概括上文的主要内容,需要考生能够读懂所给的原文，文中的复杂的句子结构能够理解，要用最简短的语言概括短文大意，不能抓住细节铺开来写，那样字数就会超过了，只介绍了Oseola McCarty做了什么，社会影响是什么就行了。‎ 提示2：用约120个词就Miss McCarty的捐助谈谈你的想法，考生要对Oseola McCarty的做法，发表自己的观点，要注意主语及动词时态。写作中注意使用连接词，做到语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。‎ ‎【亮点说明】短文用了短语和谚语，增加了文章的色彩，如：a great deal of；arouse public attention；make donations to；roses in her hand;flavor in mine等；还用了一些过渡词或句子；如：For one thing，For another；That is to say等；使短文读起来流畅自然。还用了一些关系词，如：which，who及when引导的定语从句，使句子结构复杂，并且用了not only…but also引导的倒装句，增加了作文的亮点。‎ 考点：考查议论文。‎ ‎2013年高考试题 ‎【2013·安徽卷】 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。‎ 内容主要包括：‎ ‎1.遵守交通法规；‎ ‎2.注意举止文明。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.词数120左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；‎ ‎4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数 题型分析 ‎ 2013年安徽高考作文，属于提纲式要点作文，话题为：讲文明从我做起。要求学生写一篇短文，叙述自己上学途中文明的行为举止。这个话题体现了实用性、生活性的原则，贴近学生的生活和学习，为考生所熟知。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。‎ 审题要素 ‎ 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称。‎ ‎（2）注意时态的正确使用：根据试题的内容要求，本文用一般现在时和一般将来时。‎ ‎（3）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。‎ 思路导引 首段，引入话题 — 发生在身边的不文明现在，从我做起（start from my self）。‎ 其次，上学途中应该怎么做到文明：遵守交规；个人举止。（obey the traffic rules; behave politely）‎ 最后，总结并提出呼吁。（appeal to everyone to…）‎ 标准范文 On the way to School ‎ These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on my way to school.‎ ‎ I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bike, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference. ‎ 赏析：本文要点齐全，层次清晰, 表达地道，并使用相应的高级句型和高级词汇，不失为一篇佳作。‎ 重点短语 Cause harm to 造成危害；As for… 就…而言；keep… in mind 牢记在心；keep to the right 靠右；the pedestrian crossing 人行横道；regard … as my duty… 把…看做职责；make a difference 有作用；有影响。‎ 高级句型 causing serious harm to…非谓语动词作结果状语。‎ If …条件从句。‎ I will regard it as my duty to…it作形式宾语，指代动词不定式to help keep…。‎ Not only… but also 结构。‎ ‎【2013·北京卷】‎ 第二节 开放作文（15 分） 请根据下面提示。写一篇作文。词数不少于 50.‎ You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so. ‎ 审题要素 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意人称：应该用第一人称阐述自己的看法，描述图片应用第三人称。‎ ‎（2）注意时态的正确使用：漫画的描述以及自己观点的陈述都用一般现在时。‎ ‎（3）要用简洁的语言概括出漫画的主要内容，并理解隐藏在漫画中的寓意，从而阐明自己的看法。‎ ‎（4）注意恰当使用连接词，使行文通顺。‎ 思路导引 首先，简述图画表达的寓意。（difference; dream/wish; reality）‎ 其次，结合图画内容发表自己的看法。（face; catch a small fish; learn to accept; keep on doing; realize one’s dream）‎ 标准范文 I think the picture is telling us that there is usually a difference between one’s dream and reality. People need to learn to face it. Everyone has his dream. However, it is not so easy for people to realize their dream every time. Just like the man in the picture, instead of the big fish he wishes for, he actually catches a small one. In my opinion, people need to learn to accept the reality and keep on trying. With another try, they may gain what they dream of. ‎ ‎【2013·福建卷】‎ 第二节书面表达(满分25分）‎ 孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面 的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。 ‎ ‎ ‎ 内容要求： ‎ ‎1.描述漫画内容；‎ ‎2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题； ‎ ‎3. 提出你的看法。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； ‎ ‎2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； ‎ ‎3.词数120左右;‎ ‎4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。‎ 参考词汇:pave the way From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. ‎ ‎_______________________________‎ 题型分析 这是一篇看图写作题，是高考英语写作中对考生来说相对比较难的一题。它主要考查考生综合运用语言的能力，要求考生通过观察和分析单幅或一组画，把图画内容转化成文字信息。但是，它并不是要求考生按照试题里的“提示”进行逐句翻译，而是要求考生在充分领会“提示”的前提下，用自己的语言写成一篇内容充实、语言正确、句子连贯、用词贴切的作文。‎ 审题要素 ‎（1） 要认真审图 ‎（2） 需从整体上把握图画所呈现的主要内容，处理好人物与时空及局部与整体的关系，找出文章的线索或主题 ‎（3） “丰满的想象+变化的表达”‎ 思路导引 ‎ 第一段：描述漫画：描述这幅图所要呈现的内容 ‎ 第二段：揭示画旨：分析漫画所揭示的问题 第三段：发表看法：提出自己的看法 标准范文 From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.‎ It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.‎ Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should ‎ encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.‎ 赏析：‎ 重点短语 well dressed穿着体面的；a common phenomenon一种普遍现象；pave the way 为……铺平道路，为……做准备；spare no effort不遗余力，不计代价；‎ 高级句型 Only in this way can they……只有这样他们才能……‎ ‎【2013·广东卷】‎ Ⅲ 写作（共两节，满分40分）‎ ‎ 基础写作（共1小题；满分15分）‎ 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。‎ 写作内容] ‎ ‎ 请根据以下信息，写一篇关于移民火星的快讯 写作要求]‎ 只能用5个句子表达全部内容 评分标准]、‎ 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。‎ 试题分析 今年的基础写作任务主要呈现出以下几个特点：‎ 一、话题上令人出奇不意。相比较前几年的话题，如运动项目介绍（2008）、近视和公共场所禁烟调查活动（2009、2010）、图书和人物介绍（2011、2012），今年的基础写作话题跳离了生活性和实用性，呈现出了多样性和开放性的命题趋势。‎ 二、文体上稳中求变、更加灵活。命题形式为观点表述型，近似于2009年和2010年的调查报告类的阐述型文章。至此，基础写作的文体主要为两种：介绍类文章（2011年和2012年、2008年）、阐述类文章（2009和2010年为调查报告类、2013年的观点表述类）。‎ 三、信息要点上与往年基本相当：今年的基础写作任务信息要点为8个。据此，除2007年外，连续五年信息要点基本保持在八至九个。这说明，合并句子的能力对于基础写作取得高分依旧起着至关重要的作用。‎ 四、句子结构上：本次写作更加体现出了考查考生对于并列关系的信息的处理能力。要想取得高分，考生应避免使用单一的并列句式，而应有意识地选用丰富的语法结构来处理并列关系信息，如非谓语结构、定语从句、介词短语、平行结构等。总之，挖掘信息的逻辑关系、灵活并熟练使用高级语法结构对于基础写作的备考依旧是至关重要的。‎ 五、词汇上：本次写作依旧承续了历年基础写作任务较为书面的正式用语的特点，在注重基础词汇运用能力的同时，对于考生的词汇积累与熟练运用的要求有增无减。在某种意义上可以说，要想在本次写作中得高分，词汇运用上一定要出彩。重要词汇如：移民火星行动：Project of immigration to Mars；招募志愿者：recruit/ attract volunteers；从全球范围：worldwide/ from all over the world/ throughout the world/ around the world；申请志愿者条件：requests for volunteers；至少18岁：at least/ over 18 years old/ 18 years older and over/ only above 18 years old；做好（心理）准备： be wiling/ ready/ (mentally)prepared/ agreed to be；愿意永远不再返回地球：never returning to the earth/ make a no-return trip (to Mars)/ be wiling/ ready/ prepared/ agreed to be the first permanents of Mars settlers/ habitants/ inhabitants；愿与他人保持良好的关系：be willing to keep a good/ harmonious relationship with others；火星上生活条件艰苦： harsh/ hostile living conditions on Mars; living conditions on Mars are harsh/ severe/ hostile；面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧：be faced/ challenged with severely cold/ freezing weather, loneliness and fears 厌倦地球生活：be/ get tired of (living on) the earth；想体验火星生活：be/ feel eager to experience living (a life) on Mars; be/ feel eager to live a thrilling life on Mars；人类英雄：human beings heroes。‎ 总之，基础写作作为广东省高考的亮点新题型，越来越走向成熟的命题趋势。在词汇方面，新高三学生们在熟练使用基础写作词汇的同时，还应特别重视话题写作词汇量的积累。‎ 审题要素 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）确定文章主题为：为移民火星招募志愿者的快讯；‎ ‎（2）时态与人称：以现在时态为主（一般时、将来时），将来时态为辅。人称为第三人称叙述。‎ ‎（2）写作要点：写作内容为四大部分：第一部分介绍“移民火星”志愿者选拔活动。第二部分介绍志愿者的条件。第三部分介绍专家的观点。第四部分介绍志愿者的观点。写作时可分别陈述，确保思路清晰、结构明了有条理；‎ ‎（3）切忌照译，可适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎（4）句型方面，为了用五个句子表达全部内容，复合句的使用依然是考查的重点。除此以外，还应注意灵活运用介词短语、非谓语结构等高级句式来打造句子结构，使句子表达灵活的同时更加高级。‎ 思路导引 在文章结构方面，一定要紧扣考题已给出的写作提示：1.志愿者的选拔；2.志愿者的（申请）条件；3. 专家观点；4. 志愿者观点。本次写作内容也就是以上的四大部分。‎ 基本写作要求考生用5句话来写出，这就要求考生首先结合各信息要点的逻辑将信息分为五组，并选用适当的结构来分别表达出来。本次基础写作信息分组相对比较容易，四大写作内容，可以考虑将其中一个写作部分分为两个信息组，即用两个句子来表达一个写作部分。这里将第四个写作部分“志愿者的两个观点”分为两句话进行陈述。至此，正好为五句话。‎ 词汇与句式方面：词汇与句式的处理（见上述分析内容）‎ ‎【2013·湖北卷】‎ 第二节：短文写作（共1题；满分30分)‎ 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ We all know that“sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.‎ 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；‎ ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎④词数为120左右。‎ 审题要素 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ 一、 读“提示语”，锁定写作“话题”‎ ‎ 英文提示语其实是让学生在英文语境中选择一个恰如其分的话题，所以读懂提示语，选择合适的话题是写作的关键。写作要围绕words can hurt people进行，写作时要做到“观点”和“事例”的统一性、互衬性。‎ 二、 拟定提纲，按照规律行文写作 ‎　 可采用三段式结构，即引言(introduction)——主体(body)——结尾(conclusion)。引言部分通常引题即可，然后在限定的范围内组织要点，完成主体部分和结尾部分。写作时要遵循以下规律：‎ ‎1．开头部分 ‎　开头部分必须点题，用 2－3个句子完成，其中要有一个漂亮的过渡句。‎ ‎2．主体部分 ‎　主体部分其实是让学生用言简意赅的语言叙述一个结构完整、思想意义饱满的事例。注意所讲的事例一定要能突出话题的中心，可用8—10个句子完成。‎ ‎3．结尾部分 ‎　结尾部分要用概括性的语言来总结全文主题，得出结论，回归话题。其实，该部分就是在叙事的基础上加以评论，是记叙文写作中的“小抒情”。 ‎ 思路导引 首先，读懂提示语，sticks and stones may break our bones，words can hurt people, too.提炼写作的关键。‎ 其次，结合事例说明主旨。‎ 最后，点题说明words can hurt people。‎ 标准范文 My deskmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his ‎ compliments.‎ ‎　 One day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying “My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.” Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmate’s face turned red. After class, I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadn’t been helped by others. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.‎ ‎　 Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways. We should avoid hurting others if we can’t always be encouraging when we speak.‎ 赏析：‎ 重点短语、词语 compliment n.赞美(话) pl.]问候 vt.赞美，恭维。make a sentence造句，burst into laughter突然大笑，drop out of school退学，avoid doing sth避免做某事，feel encouraged感到鼓舞，mindless无需动脑的, 愚蠢的，eccentric a.古怪的，怪癖的，异乎寻常的，volunteer to do sth志愿做某事。‎ 重点、高级句型 1. My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him本句是由whose引导的定语从句。‎ 2. Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter…本句使用了分词做状语，hearing this…‎ 3. ‎…my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadn’t been helped by others.本句是由if引导的非真实条件句的虚拟语气。‎ 4. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.本句用了must have done结构，表示对过去所发生事情的肯定猜测。‎ 5. Not until then did I realize words could be powerful…本句使用了部分倒装，增加了句式的多样性。‎ ‎【2013·湖南卷】‎ Section C (25 marks)‎ Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.‎ 请以下词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。‎ 内容：‎ ‎1．自己或他人的一次经历；‎ ‎2．你的感受。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．必须使用所给4个关键词 ‎2．词数不少于120个；‎ ‎3．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ 审题要素 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意第一段叙事的简洁性和完整性，不可过于简短也不可太过冗长。‎ ‎（2）注意时态的正确使用：第一段叙述经历时要用过去时。第二段表达自己的感受时可能会用到过去时和一般现在时。‎ ‎（3）分段明确，语言简练。注意恰当使用过渡词、逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。‎ 思路导引 首先，叙述经历。（）‎ 其次，谈自己的感受。（return books）‎ 标准范文 Mrs. Wilson,‎ I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.‎ Li Hua 赏析：‎ 重点短语 ask for help求助；provide…for…给……提供……；be anxious to急切地要做 高级句型 But I have some difficulties with… and I have no idea of...但是我再……有困难，我不知道……‎ ‎【2013·江苏卷】‎ 第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎81.请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。‎ 参考词：‎ banner (横幅）‎ stump (树粧）‎ 你的作文应包括以下内容:‎ ‎1.简要描述两幅图的内容；‎ ‎2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；‎ ‎3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.可参照图片适当发挥；‎ ‎2.作文词数150左右；‎ ‎3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。‎ Actions Speak Louder than Words 作文 Actions Speak Louder than Words People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.‎ The message conveyed here is clear: “Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment.‎ Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.‎ 名师点拨：‎ 一、审题：‎ 这是一篇看图写作题，是高考英语写作中对考生来说相对比较难的一题。它主要考查考生综合运用语言的能力，要求考生通过观察和分析单幅或一组画，把图画内容转化成文字信息。但是，它并不是要求考生按照试题里的“提示”进行逐句翻译，而是要求考生在充分领会“提示”的前提下，用自己的语言写成一篇内容充实、语言正确、句子连贯、用词贴切的作文。‎ 二、要点 第一段：描述图画：描述两幅图的内容 ‎ 第二段：揭示画旨：概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解 第三段：发表启示：举例说明图画给你的启示 三、赏析：‎ 重点短语 put up a banner竖起一面旗子；suffer severe damage遭受严重破坏；take practical measures采取实际措施；better the environment优化环境；donate books捐赠书籍；follow traffic rules遵守交通规则 高级句型 Only when we……can we……只有当我们……时，我们才能……‎ ‎【2013·江西卷】‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎ 星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：‎ ‎ 1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；‎ ‎ 2. 活动的过程；‎ ‎ 3. 你对于这次活动的评论。‎ 注意： 1. 词数120左右。‎ ‎ 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 题型分析 审题要素 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称。‎ ‎（2）注意时态的正确使用：以过去时为主。‎ ‎（3）注意发挥想象力，详实叙述活动中发生的事情。。‎ 思路导引 首先，交代活动的目的、参与者和时间、地点。（take exercise; take part in）‎ 其次，叙述登山活动的过程。（gather; set out/off; enjoy; scenery; help each other; climb; reach; cheer）‎ 最后，对活动进行评价。（benefit; get close to; relax; promote/ build up）‎ 标准范文 In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.‎ ‎ It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. Al the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.‎ ‎ The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time !‎ 赏析：‎ 重点短语【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ take outdoor exercise户外锻炼；take part in 参加；参与；set out for出发前往；fall behind 落后；get close to 靠近；接近；‎ 高级句型 In order to..., our school organized... 为了...，我们学校组织了....（目的状语）‎ Not only did it..., it also promoted....它不仅...而且...（倒装句）‎ ‎【2013·辽宁卷】‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个 节日里的主要活动。‎ 1. 写作要点：它是中国的传统节日之一； ‎ 2. 家人团聚；‎ 3. 赏月、吃月饼；‎ 4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。‎ 参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar ‎ 赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake 题型分析 ‎2013年辽宁的作文题，属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容介绍中国的传统节日——中秋节，这是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性、生活性的原则。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要直奔主题。‎ 审题要素 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意人称，必要时应该用第一人称we。‎ ‎（2）注意时态的正确使用：从作文题目上可以看出全文主要使用一般现在时。‎ ‎（3）使用尽可能多的语法结构和词汇。‎ ‎（4）注意表述时，语言要简练、流畅，层次分明、清楚。‎ ‎（5）有效使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。‎ 思路导引 首先，说明节日的日期。（fall, eighth month）‎ 其次，说明节日的流行程度。（all over the country）‎ 最后，节日这天的主要活动。（enjoy, eat, travel and visit）‎ 标准范文 The Mid-Autumn Festival ‎ The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends. ‎ 赏析：‎ 重点短语 enjoy great popularity 极受欢迎；with the beautiful moon up in the sky一轮明月挂在空中； in addition to… 除了……；a wider range of choices 更广泛的选择 高级句型 no matter how … 不管多么……；‎ what we love most is… 我们最喜欢的是……‎ ‎【2013·山东卷】‎ 第二节 写作（满分30分）‎ 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：‎ 1. 未及时回信的原因；‎ 2. 你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）‎ 注意：1. 词数：120-150； 2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ‎ 写作：‎ ‎【题型分析】‎ 山东卷的作文题属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一封信，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活性的原则。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。‎ ‎【审题要素】‎ 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给美国朋友Tom写信。‎ ‎（2）注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1时应用过去时态；而要点2中的几个方面则应该用一般将来时态。‎ ‎（3）书信的格式正确，语言简练。‎ ‎（4）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。‎ ‎【思路导引】‎ 首先，说明未及时回信的原因。（prepare for the final-term examination）‎ 其次，告诉对方自己假期的打算（part-time job, travel, volunteer）‎ 最后，欢迎Tom 到中国玩(welcome to China)‎ ‎【标准范文】‎ Dear Tom, ‎ How are you!‎ To begin with, please accept my sincere apology for not replying to your last letter in time. During those days, I’d been busy preparing for the final exam which was very important to me. ‎ Now summer vacation is approaching, during which time I want to do many things, one of which is making a trip to some places of interest together with a few of my good friends, aiming to broaden our horizons. Additionally, being a volunteer is another thing I want to do, from which I can ‎ benefit a lot. At last, I’d like to do a part-time job, with the purpose of knowing more about society and, at the same time, I can earn some money, which can be called killing two birds with one stone. ‎ What do you think of my plan? Hope you could come to China in your spare time and have a wonderful time with us. ‎ Best wishes!‎ ‎ Yours, sincerely 赏析：‎ 重点短语 be busy doing忙于做，make a trip to到……去旅行，aim to do旨在做，broaden one’s horizon开阔视野，benefit from从……中收益， kill two bird with one stone 一举两得 高级句型 1. Now summer vacation is approaching, during which time I want to do many things, one of which is making a trip to some places of interest together with a few of my good friends, aiming to broaden our horizons.这是一很长的主从复合句，其中有两个非限定性定语从句，一个分词做状语，增加了句子结构的复杂性。‎ 2. Additionally, being a volunteer is another thing I want to do, from which I can benefit a lot.本句中，动名词做主语，其中有一个定语从句，之后又跟了一个非限定性定语从句。‎ 3. At last, I’d like to do a part-time job, with the purpose of knowing more about society and, at the same time, I can earn some money, which can be called killing two birds with one stone. 这是个并列句，前一个分句中，介词短语做状语，后一个分句中，有一个非限定性定语从句，并且恰当的用到了一个谚语。‎ ‎【2013·陕西卷】‎ 第三节 书面表达（满分30分）‎ 假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。‎ 写作要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1.短文词数不少于100；‎ ‎2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ I am an 18-year-old middle school student, _________________________________________‎ 书面表达 题型分析 本篇作文是属于提纲式作文，要求学生用英语写一篇日记。内容为周末帮助家人做家务，这是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性、生活性的原则。提纲类书面表达要求学生在写作时条理清晰，将所给的几个要点适当展开，并合理的组成比较通顺的语句。写作中要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，首先要保证句子的正确，然后尽量使用一点高级词汇，适当的时候变换句式结构，使得条理清晰，行文优美。‎ 审题要素 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意人称，日记应该用第一人称来写。‎ ‎（2）注意时态的正确使用：试卷要求记述周末的一次经历，所以应该用过去时。 ‎ ‎（3）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。‎ 思路导引 首先，说明做家务的理由。‎ 其次，交代做家务的过程。‎ 最后，谈谈你的感受。‎ 以上各提纲自然成段，条理清晰。‎ 标准范文 Possible Version:‎ I’m an 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.‎ Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorouhg cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapera and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.‎ At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy ‎ and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired I was, I never felt so happy.‎ 赏析：‎ 重点短语 be busy with… 忙于。。。 put them in place把。。。放在固定地方wiped … off 檫去。。。‎ 高级句型 Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.‎ ‎（因为）感到非常抱歉，我开始想着怎么做来帮（父母）。‎ Tired I was, I never felt so happy.‎ 尽管我很累，但我从没有（像这样）开心过。‎ ‎【2013·上海卷】‎ Ⅱ. Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.‎ 上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：‎ ‎1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；‎ ‎2. 说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）‎ II. Guided Writing To whom it may concern:‎ I’ve learned that you’re collecting suggestions on the location of the coming art exhibition. I know it makes a big difference to our city, such as promoting the image of Shanghai. I’m writing to share with you my opinions. ‎ In my view, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows:‎ Firstly, citizens will have easy access to it because Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. Besides, it entitles people to a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.‎ Secondly, with a reputation of being professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions, it is bound to live up to people’s expectations. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities ‎ can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.‎ I hope you can give a thought to my advice which I believe will help.‎ Wang Min 名师点拨：‎ 一、 审题与构思 本次高考作文考查观点论述，题型较为常见，要求对画展的展出场所做出选择，并且说明理由，而且已经提示了可以从便利性和专业性两个角度来分析，难度不算太大，要写好这篇作文，只要观点明确并且言之有理即可。‎ 范文按照书信的形式，首先要提出给收信人，To whom it may concern这里表示的是敬启者，是在读者身份不明时用在信件、通知和证明书开头的套语，也是除了Dear xxx之外英语书信的常见用语。‎ 二、 成篇 信的第一段交待了自己的身份，并且表明了些这封信的目的。‎ 第二段明确提出了自己的观点，用了it is more advisable to do...句型，表明“……是更合理的”，常用在提出建议时。段落最后用My reasons are as follows.“我的理由如下”作为一个过渡句引出下面的理由论述。‎ 第三、四段用firstly, secondly “首先……；其次……”进行连接，层次清楚。在论述观点时连词的使用可以使逻辑显得更清晰。第三段从便利性角度进行分析，博物馆交通更便利而且环境更舒适。第四段从专业性角度说明博物馆的优势。‎ 最后一段总结并重申自己的观点。‎ 三、 好词好句 it is more advisable to………是更合理的 makes a big difference有重大作用 have easy access to更容易进入 entitle people to使人有资格享用 with a reputation of有……的荣誉 live up to达到标准 be bound to一定 give a thought to考虑 ‎【2013·四川卷】‎ 第三节 书面表达(共35分)‎ ‎ 某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。‎ ‎ 1． 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;‎ ‎ 2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；‎ ‎ 3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1． 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；‎ ‎ 2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；‎ ‎ 3． 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎ It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.____________________________________‎ 审题要素 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称介绍自己关于学习习惯的观点、建议、问题及改进措施。‎ ‎（2）注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上本文以一般现在时为主。‎ ‎（3）要点全面，语言简练，结构紧凑。‎ ‎（4）注意恰当使用连接词，使行文通顺。‎ 思路导引 首先，说明学习习惯和学习效果间的关系。（learning habits; learn efficiently; ）‎ 其次，介绍一种好的学习习惯（如：及时复习）并提出养成该习惯的建议。（review regularly; develop/form the habit of...）‎ 最后，描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。（have difficulty/trouble doing sth.; improve）‎ 标准范文 It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, learning habits play a key role in our study. Only if we form a good learning habit, can we learn efficiently. ‎ Among learning habits, reviewing regularly is a most important one. If we go over our notes and textbook regularly, they will become more meaningful and be remembered easily. How should we do to develop such a good habit? I think making a practical plan and sticking to it will be of great help. In addition, I think it also important to turn to our teachers for advice.‎ But there also exit many problems. For example, I can’t take down what the teachers say in class. To improve this situation, I decide to learn to take notes quickly and try to focus on the important points. ‎ ‎【2013·天津卷】‎ 第三部分：写作 ‎【2013·天津卷】书面表达 61. 假设你是某大学的学生李津，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。‎ ² 个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等）‎ ² 组织校内的活动的设想（如举办讲座、英语晚会等）‎ ² 组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等）‎ ² 表达竞选的愿望。‎ 注意：‎ 1. 词数不少于100；‎ 2. 请勿提及真实学校姓名 3. 可适当的加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；‎ 4. 开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：‎ 副主席：vice president 竞选： run for ‎ Good afternoon, my dear friends,‎ ‎ My name is Li Jin, ‎ ‎ ‎ Thank you.‎ 题型分析 ‎2013年天津的作文题仍然同去年一样，属于应用文。去年是邀请函，今年是竞选演讲稿（A Campaign Speech）。要求学生结合自身的个人优势，设想组织校内外活动的活动，贴合学生实际生活，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性、生活性的原则。应用文较之一般说明文和议论文，与生活、社会联系更紧密，格式、行文习惯更有规矩，不能随意杜撰。因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山点出演讲目的。‎ 审题要素 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式，开头第一句已经给出：My name is Li Jin.。‎ ‎（2）注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1应用一般现在时，要点2和3应用将来时或者主将从现；要点4总结与愿望，会用到一般现在时和将来时，也可以使用I promise…/ I wish …。‎ ‎（3）演讲稿的格式正确，语言简练。‎ ‎（4）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。‎ 思路导引 首先，说明演讲目的。（a great honor for, announce, run for, vice president）‎ 第二，介绍个人优势。（pleasant personality, a good team member, advocate the spirit）‎ 第三，设想组织校内外各种活动。（lucky enough , a series of activities）‎ 最后，表达当选的愿望。（cooperate, offer help to, promise）‎ 标准范文 Good afternoon, my dear friends.‎ My name is Li Jin. Thank you for coming to this election campaign today. It is a great honor for me to stand here and announce that I am running for vice president of the Student Union.‎ To begin with, let me introduce myself. As a diligent young man with pleasant personality, I have been always considered to be a good team member. Meanwhile, as a fan of sports I fully realize the importance of teamwork and advocate the spirit of being quicker and stronger. I possess strong determination to achieve the objectives of my team. In addition, I have abundant working experience. So I think I’m qualified to take this position.‎ Looking into the future, I will try my best to serve the students, if I am lucky enough to be the vice president. I plan to have a series of activities both inside and outside school, including holding lectures and English parties in our school, organizing cooperation and exchange programs between schools like debate and speech contests. ‎ On the one hand, I will cooperate well with my fellow members of the Union. On the other hand, I will offer help to the students who need our help. I promise I can make it and I wish all of you the best. ‎ ‎　 Thank you.‎ 赏析：‎ 重点短语 a great honor for sb. to do sth.很荣幸做某事；a diligent young man ‎ 一个勤奋的年轻人；with pleasant personality有好的品性；realize the importance of teamwork意识到团队合作的重要性；advocate the spirit of being quicker and stronger倡导更快更强的精神；achieve the objectives 实现目标；abundant working experience 丰富的工作经验；be qualified to 能胜任……‎ 高级句型 Looking into the future, I will try my best to... , if I am lucky enough to...展望未来，如果我有幸……我会尽全力……‎ ‎【2013·新课标II】‎ 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese knot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：‎ ‎1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）‎ ‎2.象征意义 ‎3.价格 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎      2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎      3.开头语已为你写好。‎ 题型分析 ‎ 新课标Ⅱ卷的作文题仍然同去年一样，属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一封信，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性、生活性的原则。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。‎ 审题要素 ‎ 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给网友（第二人称）写信。‎ ‎（2）注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上可以看出这封信时态多用一般现在时，但在向网友描述制作过程的时候，注意时态需要转换为一般过去时。‎ ‎（3）书信的格式正确，语言简练。‎ ‎（4）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。‎ 思路导引 首先，问候朋友（how are you doing?）‎ 其次，介绍中国结的外观、象征意义以及价格。（5 inches long,4 inches wide, stand for ‎ friendship, love and good luck,12.99 dollars each）‎ 最后，阐明自己的一些建议。（know more about, write to me）‎ 标准范文 ‎ Dear Tom,‎ ‎ How are you doing these days?‎ ‎ I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and some other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship、love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 dollars each.‎ ‎ If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information.‎ ‎ Thank you!‎ ‎ Li Hua 赏析：‎ 重点短语 in the shape of呈……形状；stand for代表；either……or或者……或者；further information进一步的信息 高级句型 Also, do let me …… if you need ……‎ 而且，一定让我……，如果你需要……‎ ‎【2013·全国新课标I卷】‎ 第二节 书面表达(满分25分)‎ 假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：‎ 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985‎ 到达：8月6日上午11:30‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右 ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。‎ Dear Peter,‎ How are you doing?___________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 审题要素 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给笔友Peter写信。‎ ‎（2）注意时态的正确使用：信中对将来事情（如叔叔开会、航班抵达等）的描述与x写信人的请求应用一般将来时，叔叔李明的情况介绍用一般现在时。‎ ‎（3）要点全面，层次清楚，语言简练。‎ ‎（4）注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。‎ 思路导引 首先，说明写信的目的。（go to ... for a conference; bring; ask for）‎ 其次，交代自己的请求。（do sb. a favor; meet; ）‎ 最后，说明叔叔的体貌特征及所乘航班情况。（tall; wear glasses; flight number; arrive; ）‎ 标准范文 Dear Peter,‎ How are you doing?‎ I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.‎ Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!‎ His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【2013·浙江卷】‎ 第二节：书面表达（满分30分）‎ 请以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100-120词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：‎ ‎1．事情的经过；‎ ‎2．简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。‎ 注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）‎ One Thing I’m Proud of 试题分析 今年书面表达的任务有两个特点：一、文体上比较灵活：既可以为以记叙文，也可以为典型的夹叙夹议文体。二、选题上更具有开放性。这样的命题方式让学生都有话可说，可以充分发挥想象力。但是，开放性的话题对于考生迅速确定话题并构思素材的能力也是一个非常大的挑战。建议考生在平时的学习中应养成多多积累写作素材的好习惯，这样在考场上才能更加地得心应手地发挥 本次书面表达的写作任务关键在于素材的选取，考生应先确定写作主题（原因或启示），然后选取素材。总之，考生应尽量选取自己最得心应手的主题来进行构思写作。‎ 审题要素 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）确定写作主题、选取素材。最容易写的主题如：取得成功、帮助别人等。‎ ‎（2）人称与时态：因为是讲述自己的经历，故叙述时应采用第一人称的视角。时态的选择上，讲述事情的经过和原因时应以一般过去时态为主，讲述从中得到的启示，既可以是一般过去时，也可以为现在时态。‎ ‎（3）要点全面、层次清楚、语言简练。‎ ‎（4）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间连贯，行文通顺。‎ 思路导引 首先进行构思，本文可以使用典型的“总-分-总”的三段式结构：‎ 第一段：用一句话引出事件的主题，引出下文。举例：我交了很多朋友。但是有一件事情令我思索：什么是真正的朋友。‎ 第二段：简要描述事情的经过：注意交代事件的时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过、结果。注意记叙部分常以时间或空间的顺序进行过渡。‎ 第三段：阐述令我自豪的原因或从中得到的启示，并注意与上文的过渡。举例（启示）：我把我的进步归功于Jenny。（她令）我明白了这样一个道理：真正的朋友不是帮助你作弊的人，而是能够帮助你进步的人。‎ 满分作文 ‎ ①I never forget how proud I felt when I did a favor for a foreigner on the Great Wall. ‎ It was cold day during the winter vacation. ②When I, with visitors from my hometown, enjoyed the fantastic view of the Great Wall, a middle-aged foreigner came to me and ask if I could tell him about the wall. ③Encouraged by the guide, I displayed him a vivid history of the Great Wall in English. The man felt pleased and kept expressing his admiration, ④saying that it was a marvelous wonder in the world. ‎ I felt proud at that moment, not only because I was helpful to a foreigner in my country. ⑤‎ It was also because I, as a Chinese, was proud of our splendid history. ‎ ‎①本文首句便先声夺人，以一个较为复杂的句子（两个从句层叠）开头：how后面引导了一个宾语从句，作forget的宾语。另外，该从句中还包含了一个由when引导的状语从句。‎ ‎②本句中依旧包含两个从句：由when引导的状语从句，和由if引导的宾语从句。另外，这里巧妙地将介词短语with visitors from my hometown处理为插入语，显示出驾驭语言的水平。‎ ‎③本句过去分词短语Encouraged by…作状语，从句子结构上提高了语言的档次，同时对句与句之间的连贯起到了很好的作用。‎ ‎④saying that…为现在分词作伴随状语。‎ ‎⑤这里巧妙地将not only because, but also because处理为两个句子，使句子保持层次清楚的同时，更加均衡有力。另外，本句将as a Chinese处理为插入语，再一次显示出考生灵活运用语言结构的功底。‎ ‎【阅卷笔记】 ‎ 本文可圈可点的地方有很多，简要分析如下：‎ ‎（1）本文思路清晰、结构工整，采取了典型的总-分-总的结构。‎ ‎（2）本文行文流畅、过渡自然，而且熟练地使用了一些高级结构，如：宾语从句、状语从句、插入语、介词短语等。体现了考生优秀的语法功底与灵活运用的能力。‎ ‎（3）本文中值得我们借鉴的短语有：do a favor for sb, enjoy the view, display a history of sth, vivid, expressing one’s admiration (for…), wonder in the world。另外，本文在描述长城、长城的风景和历史时，分别使用了三个同义词fantastic，marvelous和splendid，显示出作者丰富的词汇功底。‎ 标准范文 One Thing I’m Proud of I remember how I become a good table tennis player.‎ The first day when I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their skill. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.‎ I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve something through hard work. It also helps me understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect”.‎ ‎【2013·重庆卷】‎ 写作 (共两节，满分50分)‎ 第一节：完成句子（共10小题；每小题2分，满分20分)‎ A mother said, "My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends, or in his room. He never has lime to talk to me. "‎ 写作一 ‎ 题型分析 这是一篇材料写作题，对考生来说，是高考英语写作中相对比较难的题型。它主要考查考生综合运用语言的能力，它要求考生读懂材料并明确材料指向，在充分领会材料的前提下，用自己的语言写成一篇内容充实、语言正确、句子连贯、用词贴切的作文。‎ 审题要素 ‎（1）读懂材料：理清材料思路，明确材料指向，归纳材料要点，把握材料寓意，最终提炼写作中心。这是材料作文写作的关键 ‎ ‎（2）联系实际：联系学习、生活实际，写实事、抒真情、谈看法、说体会 思路导引 ‎ 第一段：材料复现：透过简短的一句话，看到背后隐藏着父母的无奈与孤单 ‎ 第二段：联系实际：联系生活实际，写发生在我们身边的实事 ‎ 第三段：发表观点：呼吁年轻人抽时间经常给父母打打电话或经常陪他们聊聊天 标准范文 ‎ "My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends, or in his room. He never has time to talk to me." The words above show the deep sadness and loneliness of hers as well as other old parents. ‎ ‎ Nowadays, young men look so busy in modern society that they will never feel free to live or talk ‎ with their parents, even on some festival days. However, to the parents, what they really hope for is that their children can come to see them just for a little time or give them a frequent telephone call.‎ ‎ The older they get, the more lonely our old parents will feel. However busy we may be, we should try our best to spend more time talking with them and accompanying them. It is not just because they once gave us so much selfless love, but it’s our duty to look after them well.‎ 赏析：‎ 重点短语 the deep sadness and loneliness深深的忧伤与孤独；hope for… 期望……；give them a frequent telephone call 经常打电话；‎ 高级句型 It is not because… but... 不是因为……而是……‎ 第二节：短文写作（共1题；满分30分)‎ 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。‎ We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.‎ 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；‎ ‎②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎④词数为120左右。‎ 写作二 ‎ 题型分析 ‎ 这是一篇提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一封信，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性、生活性的原则。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。‎ 审题要素 ‎ 写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给WWF（世界自然保护基金组织）写信。‎ ‎（2）注意内容的完整性，信的内容必须囊括所给的所有要点。‎ ‎（3）书信的格式正确，语言简练。‎ ‎（4）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。‎ 思路导引 首先，问候语 其次，简述江豚现状，点明写信的目的 第三，希望WWF如何帮助（比如：资助江豚保护项目等）‎ 最后，表示感谢并期待回复 标准范文 ‎ Dear Sir,‎ ‎ How are you doing? Hope everything goes well with you! ‎ Right now I am writing to you to tell you something about Yangtze Finless Porpoise. On account of lack of human protection, the number of Yangtze Finless Porpoise is becoming smaller and smaller, only 1000 left up to now. Most of them are dying out. Therefore, it’s time we took immediate measures to change the situation. ‎ So I hope WWF will do something to help Yangtze Finless Porpoise by setting up a special fund organization or drawing up some rules on how to protect it and so on.‎ I will be looking forward to your reply. Thank you!‎ ‎ Li Hua 赏析：‎ 重点短语 on account of… 由于……；die out灭绝；take immediate measure立即采取措施；set … up建立……；draw … up 起草…… ‎ 高级句型 It’s time we…. 是我们……的时候了。‎ ‎【两年模拟】2015、2016名校模拟题及其答案解析 ‎2016年模拟题 ‎1.【浙江省宁波市效实中学等十校2016届高三3月联考】 爬山（mountain climbing）是一项很好的运动，修身养性，但涉及环保和森林防火隐患等问题。请你就爬山这项运动的优缺点谈谈自己的看法，写一篇英语短文。‎ 词数：120字左右。‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ ‎ Nowadays there is an increasing number of people who go in for mountain climbing. Indeed, it is an awesome outdoor sport, which can offer us a chance to get close to nature. While climbing a mountain, we can enjoy beautiful views along the way and totally relax ourselves after tiring work or ‎ study. Besides, it can not only benefit our health but also shape our character.‎ ‎ However, mountain climbing is also likely to cause some negative effects. Take environmental protection for example, some people always throw away empty bottles or garbage bags along the path while climbing a mountain, which has become a real headache for the cleaners. What’s worse, many forest fires are caused by cigarette ends which are left behind carelessly by some smokers.‎ ‎ To sum up, mountain climbing is a sport worth joining in. But when climbing a mountain, we must pay attention to the two problems mentioned above. Only by our joint efforts can we make mountain climbing enjoyable and worthwhile! ‎ 考点：书面表达 ‎1.【河南省重点中学协作体2016届高三第二次适应性考试】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假设你是吉林希望中学学生刘洋，得知2013年香港大学要在大陆进行自主招生的消息后，有意向香港大学申请，参加自主招生考试。请用英语写一封自荐信，主要包括：‎ ‎1. 个人信息：男，18岁，高三学生 ‎2. 性格、爱好与特长 ‎3. 学习情况 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 信的开头已为你写好 (不计入总词数)；‎ ‎3. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎4. 参考词汇：自主招生 independent recruitment Dear Sir，‎ My name is Liu Yang, from Hope High School in ‎ Jilin______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Liu Yang ‎【答案】‎ Dear Sir,‎ ‎ My name is Liu Yang, from Hope High School in Jilin. I’m glad to get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland, so I would like to apply for it.‎ ‎ I am eighteen, studying in Senior 3. I am sociable, easy－going and good at communicating with others. Besides, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and managed to get high grades. All these will enable me to continue my study in your university. What’s more, my hobbies are playing basketball and football and I am also good at playing the violin.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ ‎                                                      Yours sincerely Liu Yang ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查半开放作文。因为2013年香港大学要在大陆进行自主招生的消息后，有意向香港大学申请，参加自主招生考试。要求考生以刘洋的身份用英语写一封自荐信。所以使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 个人信息：男，18岁，高三学生；2. 性格、爱好与特长：随和，独立，适应新环境能力很强；3. 学习情况：学习很努力，总是努力获得高分。我很喜欢打篮球踢足球也很擅长弹小提琴。在写作的时候，要尽量多使用陈述句、祈使句或倒装句等，让文章富有变化。建议文章分为两段，第一段介绍背景知识，第二段介绍三个要点内容。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 范文结构合理，层次分明。全文没有中国式英语的思维，遣词造句很合适到位，时态和人称使用准确无误。文章中使用了同位语从句I’m glad to get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland。使用了较多的串联成分，如besides，what's more等等，这些串联成分让文章更流畅合理。同时文章中还使用了apply for、adapt to、manage to do sth等结构，这些写作技巧的使用有效地提高了文章的档次。‎ 考点：考查半开放作文 ‎2.【江西师大附中、鹰潭一中2016届高三下学期第一次联考】书面表达 (满分25分)‎ 高考在即，你发现班级中有的同学的压力很大，平时不眠不休拼命做题。请在校英语报上，就此现象，结合自己的经历，写一篇100-120个词的短文，向大家宣传正确的应试态度和做法。（开头已给出，不计入总字数）‎ We Should Lessen the Test Anxiety As the College Entrance Examination draws near, quite a few of my classmates suffer much pressure. ________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎【答案】‎ We Should Lessen the Test Anxiety As the College Entrance Examination draws near, quite a few of my classmates suffer much pressure. Some of them bury themselves in endless homework day and night against the clock, which robs them of happiness and does them harm physically and mentally. ‎ Although pressure, to some extent, can provide motivation, too much pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a student’s confidence. More seriously it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors. ‎ ‎ Considering the great damage of excessive pressure, we should learn how to relieve pressure. First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves so as to make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. Second, we’d better squeeze out some time for fun such as listening to music. Sometimes even crying is an efficient way to release stress. Finally, if you find pressure is nearly beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本次作文要求根据高考在即，你发现班级中有的同学的压力很大，平时不眠不休拼命做题这一现象在校英语报上，结合自己的经历，写一篇100-120个词的短文，向大家宣传正确的应试态度和做法。 故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。‎ 写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：定语从句which robs them of happiness and does them harm physically and mentally. ‎ 非谓语动词Considering the great damage of excessive pressure, to release stress. draws near, negative effect, lose control of, make use of , squeeze out 等词汇及First, Second, Finally 等连接词。‎ 考点：应用文写作。‎ ‎3.【河南省焦作市2016届高三第一次模拟】假如你叫李华，你校英语报社开辟了“Reader’s Voice”专栏，邀请读者针对一些热点问题发表自己的看法。请你以Should high school students study abroad during the holidays?为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。主要内容包括：‎ ‎ 1．分析高中生出国游学的利弊；‎ ‎ 2．阐述你对此现象的看法。‎ ‎ 注意：1．词数100左右。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Should high school students study abroad during the holidays?‎ In recent years more and more high school students study abroad during the holidays.‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ In recent years more and more high school students study abroad during the holidays.‎ Studying abroad is beneficial to them. First of all, it will open their mind and enrich their experience.‎ ‎ In addition, it is a good chance to learn new culture and make new friends, which can improve their communication skills. However, it will take parents a lot of money to send their children abroad. And some students prefer traveling to learning. So it is a waste of money and absolutely not worthwhile.‎ Personally, studying abroad can help students broaden their horizons and learn to be independent. But I think it will be better for them to study abroad when they are old enough to support themselves financially.‎ ‎【亮点说明】In addition, it is a good chance to learn new culture and make new friends, which can improve their communication skills.it做形式主语，后面的动词不定式做真正的主语，在句中还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；But I think it will be better for them to study abroad when they are old enough to support themselves financially.宾语从句和时间状语从句在句中完美结合；另外，First of all, In addition, However,Personally, But等的运用显得文章结构严谨，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。‎ 考点：考查话题类作文 ‎ ‎4.【广东省深圳市2016年高三第二次调研】书面表达 （满分 25 分） ‎ 假定你是李华，你所在的“中国剪纸文化的传承（inheritance）和发展”课题研究小组刚刚获得今年的“中国大智汇创新研究挑战赛（China Thinks Big 2016）”二等奖。请你写信给你的外籍教师史密斯先生，感谢他一直以来对你们的支持与帮助。要点如下：‎ ‎1. 比赛时间：4 月 18-20 日；‎ ‎2. 比赛地点：哈佛（Harvard）上海中心；‎ ‎3. 课题与收获；‎ ‎4. 感谢与祝愿。 ‎ 注意：1. 词数 100 左右；‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 信的开头与结尾已为你写好。‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ I am Li Hua, a student of yours. ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Mr. Smith, ‎ I am Li Hua, a student of yours. I’m writing to share with you the good news that our research group has just won the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016. It was recently held in Harvard Shanghai Center, from April 18 to 20. Here could I give a very big “Thank you” for your continuous help and encouragement? ‎ In fact, the research on the Inheritance and Development of Chinese Paper-cutting has benefited us a lot. It enables us to know more about our traditional cultures. It also increases our sense of pride to do more to promote its inheritance and development. We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best! ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查提纲类短文，本文要求考生以李华的身份给外籍教师史密斯先生写信，告知你所在的“中国剪纸文化的传承（inheritance）和发展”课题研究小组刚刚获得今年的“中国大智汇创新研究挑战赛（China Thinks Big 2016）”二等奖；并感谢他一直以来对你们的支持与帮助。本文要使用第一人称和一般过去时为主的时态。要点：1. 比赛时间：4 月 18-20 日；2. 比赛地点：哈佛（Harvard）上海中心；3. 课题与收获；4. 感谢与祝愿。在写作的时候尽量使用多样化的句式让文章富有变化，而不是总是使用陈述句。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 本篇范文结构合理，全文分成两段，很好地完成了文字提示部分的所有任务。而且本文英语思维体现得很好，遣词造句很合理。句式也富有变化，时态和人称使用准确无误，第一段使用一般过去时介绍比赛情况，第二段使用一般现在时叙述个人收获并表示感谢和祝愿。‎ 文章中使用了强调句：We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best!同位语从句I’m writing to share with you the good news that our research group has just won the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016.这些句式的使用让文章富有变化。‎ 考点：考查提纲类作文 ‎5.【湖南省师大附中、长沙一中、长郡中学、雅礼中学2016届高三四校联考】书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎ 假设你是美国加州大学的中国留学生李华。你负责为在该校就读学习语言的30名中国学生筹划圣诞节期间的墨西哥之行，为期7天。请你给加州大学的学生旅行社(Students' Travel Agency)经理Robert发一封邮件，联系有关事宜。要点如下：‎ ‎(1)希望对方能够打折；‎ ‎(2)希望旅行社能够派车接送；‎ ‎(3)需要一名双语导游，能说英语和西班牙语；‎ ‎(4)请求告知旅行日程及就餐、旅馆等情况；‎ ‎(5)你的联系方式：电子邮箱地址：Lihua@sina．com．cn或电话号码：013-227-5647。‎ 注意：(1)词数：100左右；‎ ‎ (2)开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ (3)参考词汇：旅行日程安排itinerary。‎ Dear Robert,‎ I'd like you to organize a trip to Mexico for us.___ ‎ ‎ _ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Robert,‎ I'd like you to organize a trip to Mexico for us. I have a group of 30 Chinese students here studying language at the University of California, and they would like to go on a seven-day tour during the Christmas vacation. I hope you would be able to arrange a coach taking us to our destination and then bringing us back to our university. We also need a bilingual guide who speaks English and Spanish. I would be very grateful if you could work out an itinerary and tell us about our accommodation. Also, considering our group size, would you be able to give us a discount? Please either email me at Lihua@sina. com .en or call me at 013-227-5647.‎ I look forward to your reply.‎ ‎ Yours.‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【名师点睛】‎ 本篇范文结构合理，语言流畅。包含了所有要点，而且添加了适当内容，有较多的个人发挥。时态和人称运用准确无误，全文没有中国式英语的思维，交替使用陈述句、疑问句和祈使句，体现出考生很高的驾驭语言的能力。在文章中使用了较多的高级句式，如非谓语动词I have a group of 30 Chinese students here studying language at the University of California...；定语从句We also need a bilingual guide who speaks English and Spanish.等等。‎ 考点：提纲式书面表达 ‎6.【吉林省松原市油田高中2016届高三上学期第三次模拟】‎ 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris刚刚转学，感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境，请你根据以下信息回信。‎ ‎ 1．多跟同学交流沟通；‎ ‎ 2．积极参加学校活动；．‎ ‎ 3．向老师寻求帮助。‎ 注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Chris， ‎ I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours,]‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Chris,‎ I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.‎ First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. In this way ,‎ ‎ you will get to know each other better. Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. Lately, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking our teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.‎ I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do to help, please let me know.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文属于应用文中的书信，同时也属于提纲类短文。要求以李华的身份给笔友Chris写信，回答他关于如何融入新环境的问题。所以要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.知悉对方转学以后难以融入新环境。2．多跟同学交流沟通；3．积极参加学校活动；4．向老师寻求帮助。考生可以适当添加一些书信转换常见的串联句，如在文章最后可以加上I am looking forward to hearing from you.等句子。建议文章分成三段，第一段叙述知悉对方的转学以后不适应新学校的情况。第二段阐述具体的建议。第三段表示希望自己的建议有效，并期待收到对方的回信。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 本篇范文是难得一篇优秀的提纲来作文。本文从题材来说属于应用文，要点都给出来了。文章的结构也不存在较大的难题，所以范文在遣词造句方面下足了功夫。最突出的就是文章中的高级句式，如非限制性定语从句...... in more activities, which usually involve teamwork....；分词做状语用法Lately, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking our teachers；同时范文中串联词的使用也是一个亮点，第二段中提出了三个建议，作者使用了first、second连接了这些要点。‎ 考点：考查提纲类作文 ‎7.【广东省华南师范大学附属中学、广东实验中学、深圳中学、广雅中学四校2016届高三上学期期末联考】假定你是李华，你所在的学校将要举办一场春节庆祝活动。你和你的同学邀请在你校的美国交换生Tom参加。请你写一封信给Tom，要点如下：‎ 1. 活动内容；‎ 2. 邀请Tom一起表演一个中西合璧的节目；‎ 3. 活动时间：2015年农历12月30日晚7：00-10：00‎ 4. 活动地点：学校学术报告厅。‎ 注意：‎ 1. 词数100左右；‎ 2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；‎ 3. 开头语已经为你写好。‎ Dear Tom,‎ ‎ You have told me that you are very interested in how we Chinese celebrate our traditional festivals._______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎ We are looking forward to your reply. 【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎ Yours sincerely ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Tom,‎ You have told me that you are very interested in how we Chinese celebrate our traditional festivals. With the Spring Festival approaching, I would like to invite you to join us in the celebration in our school. A variety of activities will be included at the celebration, such as performances, games and gift-exchanging, which will surely enable you to know better about our culture. To get fully involved, I, together with my classmates, hope that you can put on a performance with us. And I think it will be a good combination of both our culture and yours. By the way, the celebration will take place in the school lecture hall from 7:00p.m. to 10:00p.m. on December 30, 2015, according to the Chinese lunar calendar. ‎ ‎ We are looking forward to your reply. ‎ ‎ Yours sincerely ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎ 试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文属于半开放性的作文，对学生的谋篇布局的能力要求较高，同时本文属于应用文中的书信，要求以李华的身份写信给在你校的美国交换生Tom，邀请他参加春节庆祝活动。所以本文使用第一人称和一般现在时的时态。要点：1.学校将要举办一场春节庆祝活动。你和你的同学邀请在你校的美国交换生Tom参加。2.活动内容：表演、游戏、交换礼物；可以更好的了解中国文化。3.邀请对方和你一起表演一个中西合璧的节目。4.时间地点： 2015年农历12月30日晚7：00-10：00；学校学术报告厅。‎ 建议文章分成两段，第一段提出邀请，第二段说明演出的内容意义和时间地点。在写作的时候考生可以根据亲身经历适当添加部分内容，同时要注意书信的格式。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 本文属于半开放性作文，所以在谋篇布局的时候要适当第拓宽要点，在活动内容方面做适当添加。根据Tom是交换生，可以加上与中国春节文化有关的内容，如放烟花，贴春联等活动。但是这些在范文里都没有显示出来。本篇范文的亮点在于高级词汇及短语的运用。如a variety of各种各样的；get sth done使某事被做；combination结合等等；另外高级句式使用的也较多，如定语从句...which will surely enable you to know better about our culture.另外范文中主动句和被动句交替使用，让文章充满变化。‎ 考点：考查半开放性作文 ‎8.【河北省衡水中学2016届高三上学期七调】 假如你是李华，你的美国网友Tom想要了解一下你所在学校的校园布局，请你根据自己的校园给他写一封e-mail，描述一下你的学校，并简单表达你对学校的情感。‎ 注意:1.词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3.不要提及学校名称；‎ ‎ 4.开头语和结束语已经为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Tom，‎ ‎ How I miss you! I'd like to introduce the layout of my school to you. ‎ ‎ ‎ Best wishes!‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear tom.‎ ‎ How I miss I'd to introduce the layout of my school to you .‎ ‎ Entering the campus，you will step oil die leading through the whole campus. On the left of the cross- road is located the modern laboratory building while our splendid teaching building is on the right where we have fascinating lessons every day. At the end of the main path, the library on the left greets you and the gym on the opposite side. Happily, we have sports after class in the foot- ball field which is between the library and the gym building; the basketball court face field across the main path.‎ ‎ I love my school with student working hard to realize their dreams and teachers training us like our parents. Provided you can visit my school some day, I will show you around it.‎ Best wishes!‎ 考点：‎ 考点：考查半开放性作文。‎ ‎9.【湖南省长沙市长郡中学2016届高三下学期第六次月考】假如你是美国的Mike，你的朋友张平打算到国外留学，他写信询问你什么样的 中国学生最受国外高校青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：‎ ‎ 1．语言能力是基础；‎ ‎ 2．适应能力很重要；‎ ‎ 3．兴趣爱好被看重；‎ ‎ 4．要有社会责任感。‎ ‎ 注意：词数100左右。‎ Dear Zhang Ping．‎ ‎ ‎ Yours，‎ ‎ Mike ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ Dear Zhang Ping,‎ I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students favored in foreign college and universities.‎ As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What's more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are respected and welcomed.‎ This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck!‎ ‎【解析】【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ 试题分析：本文是一篇应用文。在写作时要注意从题干所列出的四个方面要点着手，因为提示信息较少，所以要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容，比如为什么题干中的四方面对留学生来说很重要。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词，插入语以使文章层次分明，使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次，如定语从句，宾语从句和状语从句等。此外，这是一篇建议书信，行文用一般现在时。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出出国留学的四大要点，并且充分阐述了原因。在文中作者用到了短语communicate with，has a lot to do with等介词短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句you want to study abroad in your letter和表语从句what I know about what kind of Chinese students favored in foreign college and universities等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文。‎ ‎10.【黑龙江省哈尔滨师大附中、东北师大附中、辽宁省实验中学2016届三高第一次三校联合模拟】假定你是李华，你的班级准备举行一场中秋诗会。请代表班级给外教Mr. Hill发一封英文邀请函，主要内容包括：‎ 1． 活动时间：9月15日晚7点至9点。‎ ‎ 2．活动地点：南湖公园 ‎ 3．活动内容：赏月、品尝月饼、朗诵诗歌等 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头和结语已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：诗歌朗诵会 poetry recital party 南湖公园South Lake Park Dear Mr. Hill ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Mr. Hill,‎ ‎ I’m writing on behalf of my classmates to invite you to join us for a poetry recital party on September 15 for the Mid-Autumn Festival. ‎ ‎ It is a traditional Chinese festival to celebrate the coming of the harvest season. The party is going to take place in South Lake Park from 7:00 pm to 9:00 pm., during which time we will admire the beautiful full moon, eat delicious mooncakes and enjoy some classic Chinese poems about the moon and the festival. ‎ It will be a great pleasure if you could come and have fun with us. I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together. If you’d like to participate, please let us know at your earliest convenience. We will arrange for a student to pick you up. ‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours sincerely, ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】试题分析：考查应用文写作。本文属于应用文中的书信。要求以李华的身份给外教Mr. Hill写信，邀请对方来参加你班举行的中秋诗会。所以本文要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.你班要举行一场中秋诗会，想邀请对方来参加。2.活动时间：活动时间：9月15日晚7点至9点；活动地点：南湖公园。3. 活动内容：赏月、品尝月饼、朗诵诗歌等。因本文内容较为简单，在写作的时候考生可以做适当发挥，添加一些邀请函中的过渡语，让文章更加自然协调。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 范文结构很合理，全文第一段叙述写信目的：邀请对方参加中秋诗会。第二段说明诗会时间地点和具体活动。第三段表示对Mr. Hill参加诗会的期待并提出接送安排。第四段为邀请的过渡句。灵活使用一般现在时和将来时，运用准确无误。同一时态还使用了不同的形式来表示，如句中就是使用了不同的形式来表示将来时，如be gong to do sth和will do sth。同时文章中还使用了一些高级句式，如定语从句....during which time we will admire the beautiful full moon；形式主语句：It will be a great pleasure if you could come and have fun with us.‎ 考点：考查应用文写作 ‎11.【江西省九江市七校2016届高三第一次联考】昨天下午，五点十分，在你放学的路上（一个邮局附近的十字路口）发生了一起交通事故：一个骑着自行车并听着MP5的学生被一个开着轿车的中年男人撞了，该学生受伤了并被送到医院，其自行车被严重损坏。假如你是校刊的一名记者，请你根据以下要点就此事给校刊写一篇约100词左右的英语新闻报道。‎ 要点如下：‎ ‎1.事故发生的时间，地点；‎ ‎2.事故发生的经过;‎ ‎3.你的观点。‎ ‎【答案】‎ A traffic accident ‎ A traffic accident happened at a crossroad near the post office at 5:10 yesterday afternoon. A student, who was listening to the MP5 while riding a bike ,was knocked down by a car which was driven by a mid-aged man .Luckily, the student just got slightly injured and was immediately sent to the nearest hospital .However, his bike was badly damaged.‎ ‎ The accident reminds all of us that we shouldn’t listen to music ,use cellphones or do something distracting when we are walking or riding a bike ,what’s more ,we should always obey the traffic rules and pay more attention to our own our safety.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本题是一篇记叙类作文，假如你是校刊的一名记者，请你根据以下要点就此事给校刊写一篇约100词左右的英语新闻报道。要点如下：1.事故发生的时间，地点；2.事故发生的经过;3.你的观点。写作时需要包括要求中所要求的要点。1.纵观全文，列出记叙的要素；一篇记叙文，要交代清楚人物和事件，就必须交代清楚记叙的要素，即：时间、地点、人物、事件的原因、经过和结果2.弄清记叙的顺序：初中阶段的记叙文多为顺叙3.理解记叙的人称：弄清记叙文中的人称代词指代的对象，有利于更好地理解文意。4.找出记叙的线索：线索是记叙文的纲，抓住线索，就能理顺文章内容，掌握文章结构，更好地理解文章的中心思想。5.体会记叙文的表达手法：记叙文以叙事为主，但有时也运用描写、说明和议论。尤其是要注意夹叙夹议类文章，它的题目往往设计为推理性和总结性题目。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文在时态，和应用语言方面都比较好，用了很多加分句式，例如：A student, who was listening to the MP5 while riding a bike ,was knocked down by a car which was driven by a mid-aged man 是一个较长的句子，用了两个定语从句，被动语态等结构，是一个加分的高级句式。what’s more也是一个亮点，最后用总结的语句结束全文。‎ 考点：考查提纲类作文 ‎12.【甘肃省西北师范大学附属中学2015届高三下学期第五次诊断】近年来大城市交通拥堵严重，影响了人们的生活和经济发展，对此人们十分抱怨。‎ 假如你是李华，请根据以下要点用英语给报社写封信。‎ ‎1.交通现状及影响；‎ ‎2.提出改进建议；‎ ‎3.希望建议被采纳。‎ 注意：1.词数 100 左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear editor,‎ I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic.‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear editor,‎ I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problem, I’d like to put forward some pieces of advice.‎ For one thing, more streets and roads should be built. In this way, we can speed up the flow of buses and cars. For another, the number of bikes and cars can be limited, which can decrease the traffic flow. But the most important thing is that the number of private cars should be put under control. Meanwhile, buses should have their own special routes which cannot be used by other vehicles. Besides, underground train and city train should be developed quickly.‎ I do hope my suggestions will be taken.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua 考点：考查书信类作文 ‎13.【安徽省合肥一中、芜湖一中等六校教育研究会2016届高三第一次联考】 假定你是学生会主席李华，学校将举办一次“校训征集”（Collection of School Motto）的校园活动，请根据下面提示以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。‎ ‎ 校训要求：积极向上、原创、简洁 ‎ 征集时间：9月10日至20日 ‎ 征集部门：学生会 campusactivity@163.com ‎ 展出时间及地点：9月23日 体育馆 ‎ 颁奖时间及地点：9月27日 体育馆 ‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯 Notice ‎ A Collection of School Motto activity is to be held in our school. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Student Union ‎【答案】‎ Notice ‎ A collection of School Motto activity is to be held in our school. You are supposed to send your work between September 10th and September 20th , and explain your design idea for the motto which is expected to be brief and positive. You can hand in your work to Student Union in person or send it to campusativity@163.com. Note that your work must be reacted by yourself. ‎ All the works will be on display on September 23rd in our school gym and the best ones selected will be awarded in prize presentation to be held on September 27th in the gym.‎ Don’t miss the chance of being the winner. Looking forward to your wonderful work. 104‎ Student Union 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一个通知。写通知时候要注意写明事件、时间、地点等内容。语言要简明扼要，不拖泥带水。一般用第二人称，可以用祈使句在通知末尾写上有号召性的句子，鼓励人们参加。此外还要注明发通知的个人或者单位。‎ 亮点说明：本篇书面表达语言简洁流畅，通俗易懂，而且符合通知的格式。要点表述详尽。在文中作者使用了多种句式结构，如定语从句which is expected to be brief and positive，宾语从句Note that your work must be reacted by yourself，祈使句Don’t miss the chance of being the winner.等，给文章增添了亮点。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文 ‎14.【安徽省蚌埠市第二中学2016届高三12月月考】书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎ 请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。‎ ‎ It is a great honor as well as a pleasure for me to be praised by the teacher publicly before my classmates.‎ ‎ 注意：1. 续写词数100个左右；‎ ‎ 2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎【答案】‎ It is a great honor as well as a pleasure for me to be praised by the teacher publicly before my classmates.‎ ‎ When young, I was very shy. I didn't dare to speak in public. When the teacher asked me to answer a question, I was always too nervous to answer it, which made me very sad.‎ ‎ One day, the teacher asked me to come to his office, where he told me to recite a text. I recited it fluently. The teacher praised me and told me I would recite it the next day before my classmates. I told him that I was too nervous, but he insisted that I should do it. The next morning, Although I did poorly, the teacher praised me highly.‎ ‎ After being frequently praised before my classmates, I began to gain confidence and tried even harder. Eventually，I overcame my shyness. It was the teacher's praise that made me become a better student.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文属于开放性作文，以老师当众表扬你为话题。本文作者以记叙文的形式展开叙述，以从小很害羞不敢当众发表自己的观点，后来经过个人努力，克服了缺点，最后取得成功。开放性作文 对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。‎ ‎【名师点睛】1.这篇范文的布局很合理，分成三段叙述整个事情。第一段叙述曾经存在的问题，第二段寻求解决方法并不断努力，第三段中叙述自己最好取得成功。时态运用合理恰当，句式长短搭配合理。2.非限制性定语从句运用很好，如One day, the teacher asked me to come to his office, where he told me to recite a text. 3.多种时态混合运用合理，如The teacher praised me and told me I would recite it the next day before my classmates.句中既有一般过去时，也有过去将来时。‎ 考点：考查开放性作文 ‎ ‎15.【贵州省遵义航天高级中学2016届高三第四次模拟】 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 在学习、生活和工作中，学会与人合作是非常重要的。请你根据下表中提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Partner ”的英文演讲稿。‎ 为何合作 有利于互相学习，增进友谊，节省时间与精力 与谁合作 与喜欢的人合作【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ 心情愉快, 同甘共苦【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ 与不喜欢的人合作 学会容忍，发现优点 怎样合作 你的观点…… （至少2个）‎ 注意：【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎ 1. 对所给要点进行陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。‎ ‎2. 词数100左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 ‎ ‎ 3. 参考词汇：合作cooperation(n.) cooperate(v.)‎ Good afternoon, everyone! ‎ The topic of my speech today is “being a good partner” . _____________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version:‎ Good afternoon, everyone!‎ The topic of my speech today is “being a good partner”. Cooperation is a good way for us to learn from each other as well as to improve our friendship. Successful cooperation can save us a lot of time and energy.‎ We will be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with, which will make us feel very ‎ happy and long to continue the cooperation. However, it can be difficult to team up with someone we dislike. In this case, we’d learn to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.‎ How can we become a good partner? As for me, first of all, we should try to listen to others’ opinions. If he makes mistakes, we’d better try to point them out in a polite way. Besides, never force our own ideas on others.‎ Wish my views would be helpful. Thank you for your listening!‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文属于提纲类短文，要点均已列出。考生需要考虑篇章结构，本文要分成三段，第一段叙述与人合作的重要性。第二段分别叙述与不同的人合作有不同的好处。第三段叙述应该如何合作。要点：1. 在学习、生活和工作中，学会与人合作是非常重要的。有利于互相学习，增进友谊，节省时间与精力。2. 与喜欢的人合作，心情愉快, 同甘共苦。与不喜欢的人合作，学会容忍，发现优点。3.与人合作要讲究诚信，多倾听。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 一篇好的作文首先需要良好的篇章结构；其次需要良好的词汇和高级句式，选词要地道。长短句配合使用。个人观点要精练切题。这盆范文给了我们很好的例子，1.全文分为三段，显得层次分明，有主有次。2.高级句式中定语从句：We will be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with, which will make us feel very happy and long to continue the cooperation.该句既有限制性定语从句也有非限制性定语从句，很好的提升了文章的格致。3.第三段中个人观点：倾听他人观点，礼貌指出别人错误；不强迫他人接受自己观点，这与文章主题很契合，而且不拖沓。‎ 考点：考查提纲类短文 ‎16.【吉林省东北师范大学附属中学2016届高三上学期第二次模拟】书面表达 （满分25分）‎ 据报道，在我国仍有很多山区的孩子因为家庭贫穷而上不起学。你们班就如何帮助这些孩子上学进行了讨论。假如你是李华，请你把你们的建议写成一封信寄给Teens，希望他们能够呼吁更多的人参与这项活动。‎ ‎ 内容要点：‎ 1. 收集旧课本和衣服；‎ 2. 呼吁更多人帮助他们；‎ 3. 你的建议, 至少一条。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Editor,‎ I’m a senior high school student. ___________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely, Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Editor,‎ I’m a senior high school student. It’s reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can’t go to school because of poverty. Last week, our class held a discussion about how to help them to go to school and live a happy childhood. ‎ Here are our suggestions. First, some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused by them. Second, it’s also very important to appeal to more people and social organizations to help and care for those poor children. As far as I’m concerned, we should save some of our pocket money and give it to those children in need. Above all, we should give them respect, never looking down upon them because they are poor.‎ We’ll really appreciate it if you can, through the English Weekly, increase public awareness of the poor children’s living conditions and call on more people to help them.‎ ‎ Yours sincerely, Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎17.【江西省上高县第二中学2016届高三12月（第四次）月考】假如你是李华, 上周在外教Mr. Jackson 的口语课上使用手机被老师发现, 手机被收走。 请给外教写一封道歉信, 内容应包括以下要点：‎ 1． 表示歉意；‎ 1． 解释上课使用手机的原因；‎ 2． 提出自己的请求并适当表态。‎ 注意：1. 可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数100左右;‎ ‎ 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 ‎ Dear Mr. Jackson, ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ Dear Mr. Jackson, ‎ I’m really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week. Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student. ‎ I know any word might sound a made-up excuse. But I didn’t use the mobile phone for no reason. Last week I was trying to apply to some companies for my aunt, aged 48 and out of work , and that day, I go an offer and they needed her further information immediately. Therefore, I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered. I promise it will never happen again. But I do need my phone back to get in touch with others. Will you be kind enough to give it back to me? ‎ Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文是要求写一封道歉信。在写作时要注意信件的格式，根据所列要点完成作文。必要时要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容。比如上课使用手机的原因等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词，插入语以使文章层次分明，使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次，如定语从句，宾语从句和状语从句等。‎ ‎【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文中作者用到了连词therefore，but；短语get in touch with，have no other choice but to 等等，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句、表语从句，如that was exactly what I was doing等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。‎ 考点：考查应用文作文。‎ ‎18.【吉林省实验中学2016届高三上学期第五次模拟】假设你是高三学生刘珊，你校正在组织美国哥伦比亚大学（Columbia University）招生活动，请你根据以下要点提示给你在美国的笔友Russ写一封信。‎ 要点：‎ ‎ 1. 通过校内选拔考试 （selective test） 的同学将参加该著名大学于一月份组织的英语笔试、口试和面试；‎ ‎ 2. 你本人对此很感兴趣，正在积极备考；‎ ‎ 3. 希望Russ给出一些有关英语学习的建议。‎ 注意： 1．词数：100左右；‎ ‎ 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3．开头与结尾已为你写好,请不要重新抄写。‎ Dear Russ,‎ ‎ How is everything going?‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Liu Shan ‎【答案】‎ Dear Russ,‎ ‎ How is everything going?‎ ‎ You know, I am in grade three now. Our school has got an opportunity to help us apply for Columbia University, a world-famous university located in the north of America．Those who pass the selective test held by our school next week will have the chance to take part in the oral and written exams in English as well as the interview by the CU teachers next January.‎ ‎ It has long been my dream to study abroad, so I treasure this chance very much. Now, I am trying my best to get ready for the coming exams. But time is limited, could you give me some advice on how to get well equipped with English knowledge before exams? I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.‎ ‎ I’m looking forward to your reply.‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Liu Shan ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查提纲类作文。本文要求以刘珊的身份用第一人称给笔友Russ写信，介绍你校正在组织美国哥伦比亚大学（Columbia University）招生活动。要点：1.介绍你校正在组织美国哥伦比亚大学（Columbia University）招生活动，自己希望能够有机会参加。2. 通过校内选拔考试 （selective test） 的同学将参加该著名大学于一月份组织的英语笔试、口试和面试；3. 你本人对此很感兴趣，正在积极备考；4. 希望Russ给出一些有关英语学习的建议。在写作中要注意衔接紧密，过渡自然，相互照应，细节处理要恰当，语言使用要规范。同时高级词汇和句式的正确使用也会给文章增添色彩。‎ 考点：本篇范文，过渡句运用合理准确。要点全面，语言流畅，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。文章使用了许多较高级的短语，如apply for、be located in、the selective test、treasure等。此外，还用到了许多较复杂的高级句型，如 “Those who pass the selective test held by our school next week will have the chance to take part in the oral and written exams in English as well as the interview by the CU teachers next January.该句中既含有who引导的定语从句，也含有过去分词短语held by our school在句中充当定语的用法。这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。‎ ‎19.【宁夏银川市第二中学2016届高三上学期统练（五）】‎ 最近你的学校的英文报刊Growth在征稿,话题是 “父母是不是最好的老师”。同学们有人认为是，也有人认为不是。请你根据下表写一篇稿件并简要发表你的观点。‎ 是的理由 不是的理由 ‎1.教会我们生活技能 ‎1.容易溺爱我们 ‎2.教育我们如何做人 ‎ 2.有时不听取我们的观点 注意：1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．稿件的开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3. 可适当发挥，使行文连贯。‎ ‎4．参考词汇：溺爱：spoil ‎ The students in our school hold different opinions on whether our parents are our best teachers.‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ The students in our school hold different opinions on whether our parents are our best teachers. Some students think positively because they think their parents have taught them basic living skills, such as how to dress, how to cook and so on. Besides, their parents teach them how to be a good person. However, some others don’t agree. The reason is that their parents love them so much that they tend to spoil them. And worse still, they sometimes do not like listening to their kids’ opinions.‎ In my opinion, it is out of question that our parents love us a lot even though they are sometimes not right. We should respect them and communicate with them frequently.‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 提纲类作文最大的特点就是限定了学生个人发挥的余地，考生被限制在一个较小的范围之内。该范文不算特别出彩。要说亮点，就在于连接词的使用还是比较到位，如：besides，however，and worse still；另外句中一些复合句运用的也比较合理，如表语从句：The reason is that their parents love them so much that they tend to spoil them.形式主语句：In my opinion, it is out of question that our parents love us a lot even though they are sometimes not right.‎ 考点：考查提纲类作文 ‎20.【广西武鸣县高级中学2015届高三2月一模】书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假如你是你校广播站的播音员，请根据下面表格的提示，拟一份英语广播稿，通知全校师生。‎ 有关事宜 如何利用网络进行学习的讲座 主讲人 广西大学计算机系李梦教授 时间 ‎1月10日，星期三，下午4：30‎ 地点 本校图书馆302室 参加者 电脑爱好者 说明 讲座结束，参加者可向李教授提出问题 组织者 校学生会 注意： 1. 广播应符合英语口语的习惯。2. 内容应包括所给提示的全部要点。‎ ‎3. 词数100左右。‎ Dear teachers and schoolmates,‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear teachers and schoolmates,‎ May I have your attention please? I have an announcement to make. In order to help us learn more about the Internet, the Students’ Union is going to hold a lecture. Professor Li Meng from the Computer Department of Guangxi University will give us a talk on how to learn through the Internet. The lecture will be held on Wednesday, the tenth of January. It begins at 4:30 p.m. in Room 302 of the Library Building.‎ Any computer-lover is welcome to attend the lecture. Please bring your questions in computer learning. Professor Li will spare us some time for questions. Don’t forget to be on time. That’s all. Thanks for your attention.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查应用文写作。本文属于应用文中的广播稿，在写作的时候，首先要注意广播稿的格式。这篇广播稿的内容是关于如何利用网络进行学习。由广西大学计算机系李梦教授主讲。文章必须包括以下要点：1.广播主题：如何利用网络进行学习。主讲人：广西大学计算机系李梦教授；2. 时间：1月10日，星期三，下午4：30；地点：本校图书馆302室；参加者：电脑爱好者；3.说明：讲座结束，参加者可向李教授提出问题；4. 组织者：校学生会。本文实际上也属于提纲类作文，在写作的时候，一定不能遗漏任何要点，而且尽可能使用高级的句式和短语让文章更有档次。‎ ‎【名师点睛】‎ 本篇范文，要点全面，语言流畅，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。文章使用了较为丰富的句式，如不定式结构：In order to help us learn more about the Internet, the Students’ Union is ‎ going to hold a lecture.‎ 另外文章中合理使用了多种形式的将来时表达法，如be going to do sth；will do sth；同时本文广播稿的格式运用很正确，结尾处理的很到位。‎ 考点：考查应用文写作 ‎ ‎21.【山东省实验中学2016届高三上学期第三次诊断】书面表达（满分20分）‎ 要成为一名成功的英语学习者，语言训练是非常重要的。为此英语老师要求同学以“Practice makes perfect”为话题，用英语写一篇短文，谈一谈英语学习中语言训练的重要性，内容应包括以下两个方面:‎ ‎1、你对此话题的理解；‎ ‎2、与之相关的事例。‎ 注意:‎ ‎1、字数:100左右；‎ ‎2、第一句话已经给出（不计入词数）。‎ ‎ The old saying that practice makes perfect means _________‎ ‎【答案】‎ The saying that practice makes perfect means that after you have plenty of practice in what you are doing, you will be perfect in it,and it is the same with English learning.‎ For example, when we learn English, we have to learn grammar, words, expressions and so on. The best way to improve the language skills is to practice,practice,practice. If we only learn the grammar rules by heart and don＇t do enough exercises, it is certain that we can＇t use the language freely. This applies equally to becoming a good musician or painter.‎ It is evident that practice is important for everybody. If you want to improve your English, either speaking or writing, remember that practice makes perfect.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：it is the same with...同样，applies to适用，means that after you have plenty of practice in what you are doing两句宾语从句，The best way to improve the language skills is to practice,practice,practice.使用了重复这一修辞手法，it is certain that we can＇t use the language freely使用了形式主语。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文 ‎22.【湖北省武汉市武昌区2016届高三元月调研】昨天我校邀请知名校友李先生为高三学生作报告，请你根据以下要点为我校英文期刊Shoots写一篇100字左右的报道： ‎ ‎1. 校友回忆在我校学习的经历； ‎ ‎2. 校友的成功及对母校的感激； ‎ ‎3. 自己听报告后的感想。 ‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加情节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 ‎ Yesterday we invited Mr. Li，a famous scholar and schoolmate of our school，to give a speech to us Senior 3 students. …‎ ‎【答案】‎ Yesterday we invited Mr. Li, a famous scholar and schoolmate of our school to give a speech to us Senior 3 students. All of us felt deeply touched by his lecture and proud of our distinguished schoolmate.‎ ‎ Mr. Li once studied in this same school many years ago and later he went to a famous university in the North. After graduation, he devoted his life to teaching in the rural areas of our country for more than 30 years. His devotion and selflessness are highly thought of by all his students as well as by the society. Meanwhile, he donated many books to our school and showed deep affection to his former teachers and his high school.‎ ‎ As a senior high school student, I’m determined to learn from Mr. Li and become a worthwhile schoolmate of our school.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 本文是一篇一篇回忆的报道文章。文章主要讲述了我回忆母校的经历并且表达了我对母校的敬意的文章。全文章节明显，结构紧凑。首段点名这篇文章的主要内容，讲明为什么要写这篇文章的原因。第二段是对母校生活的回忆。第三段是表达自己对母校的敬意。环环相扣，并且紧紧抓住题目所给的要点，避免了偏题，用词较为新颖，用了大量的从句和连词将文章紧凑的连接起来，值得给以好评。‎ ‎23.【河南省商丘市2015届高三第二次模拟考试】 假设你是商丘某高中学生李华，请为你的澳大利亚笔友Tim写封电子邮件，介绍商丘的情况及一些旅游景点，希望Tim到商丘来旅游。主要内容包括：‎ ‎ 1．商丘地处中原，交通便利，气候宜人。 ‎ ‎ 2．重点介绍两处旅游景点，如：南湖、商丘古城遗址、应天书院遗址等。‎ ‎ 注意：1．词数100左右；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：商丘古城--the ancient city of Shangqiu 应天书院--Ying tian Academy ‎ 南湖--the South Lake Dear Tim,‎ Welcome to my hometown, Shangqiu. ___________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Tim, ‎ Welcome to my hometown, Shangqiu. Shangqiu is located in Henan province and has the convenient transportation and pleasant climate.‎ Shangqiu is rich in tourist attractions such as the South Lake，the ancient city of Shangqiu.‎ The South Lake is well known for its beautiful scenery and clear water, the banks of which are lined with green trees. Another famous site is the ancient city of Shangqiu. Now it lies in the south of Shangqiu City. It is not only very beautiful but also has a long history. When you walk along the ancient wall, you can think of many stories happening in Shangqiu. I am sure you’ll have a good time in Shangqiu.‎ I am looking forward to your arrival.‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点分析】‎ 本篇要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，句子简洁明了，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。短语如be rich in, be located in, be known for丰富了文章表达。‎ ‎24.【广东省惠州市2016届高三上学期第三次调研】假如你是高三学生李华，期末获评年级“进步之星”。你校英语俱乐部邀请你做一个励志的英语演讲。请写一篇标题为：“Time And Tide Wait For No Man” (机不可失，时不再来)的演讲词，内容须包括:‎ ‎1.你对该格言的理解感悟;‎ ‎2.体现该格言含义的个人经历;‎ ‎3.表达对其他同学的希望。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100字左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 演讲稿开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数;‎ ‎4. 参考词汇：进步之星：“Star of Progress”‎ Dear fellow students,‎ It's my great honor to be invited here to give a speech. The topic of my speech today is “Time and tide wait for no man”.‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ That’s all.Thank you! ‎ ‎【答案】‎ one possible version Dear fellow students,‎ It's my great honor to be invited here to give a speech. The topic of my speech today is “Time and tide wait for no man”.‎ In my understanding, the proverb means that if we allow the invaluable time to waste, it never comes back to you. As a Senior Three student, time is limited for study, so none can afford to waste time.‎ I still remember I slipped away the golden time in playing two years ago, as a consequence of which I fell far behind others. Realizing that opportunity seldom knocks twice, I seized every moment to study. Gradually I made great progress and was awarded the honorable title of “Star of Progress”.‎ Dear fellows, with Gaokao drawing near, we should not be content with what we have done. Value your time from now on and it will bring you benefits.‎ That’s all.Thank you!‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，根据提示写一篇演讲稿。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的三个方面（1.你对该格言的理解感悟;2.体现该格言含义的个人经历;3.表达对其他同学的希望。）的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该主要用一般现在和过去时，人称为第一人称。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Realizing that…，which 引导的宾语从句，复合结构with Gaokao drawing near。此外还有短语afford to、made great progress和be content with等的使用。连词as，and，so 使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文。‎ ‎25.【四川省资阳市2016届高三上学期第二次诊断】本学期，你校外籍教师拟开设如下课程: 1．英语口语；2．英语写作；3．今日美国。假如你是李华，请给课程负责人Mr．Smith写一份申请书，报名参加其中一门课程的学习，内容必须包括：‎ ‎1．介绍你的英语能力；2．说明你感兴趣的课程及参加意图；3．表达你希望获准的愿望。‎ 注意： 1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ One possible version:‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ ‎    I’m Li Hua, who has learnt that the foreign teachers tend to open several English courses.‎ ‎    First and foremost, I have learnt English for so many years that I can do well in the exams, but I am weak in speaking English, which makes me less confident. In addition, I want to share my opinions with my foreign friends fluently in the football club. That’s the reason why I have great interest in Oral English Course. Last but not the least, it is my faithful hope that I can be allowed to take part in this course, so that I can make progress in my speaking English.‎ ‎    I am looking forward to your earliest reply.‎ ‎                                                                          Yours ‎                                                                         Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】本文用First and foremost, In addition和Last but not the least使文章层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如who和 which引导的定语从句和That’s the reason why…，还有so（…）that…，主语从句以及it is my faithful hope that I can be allowed to take part in this course, 短语tend to ，make progress等。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文。‎ ‎26.【浙江省杭州市五校联盟2016届高三年级上学期第一次诊断】近年来，很多父母选择陪伴孩子读书学习，陪读已成为一种普遍现象。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文，内容应包括：‎ ‎1．简要描述陪读现象；‎ ‎2．分析父母陪读的原因（2至3个）；‎ ‎3．发表你对此的看法。‎ 注意：词数120词左右。【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School?‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School?‎ In recent years, many parents choose to accompany their children in studying, which has aroused a wide concern.‎ These parents are willing to leave their hometown, even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus. Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children. Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids. Meanwhile, it can allow them to keep track of the kids’ academic performance.‎ Nevertheless, what they’ve ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent. Thus, they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future.‎ Trust leads to independence. So it seems to me that parents should create room for children’s growth and study in order to ensure their overall development.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，表达对陪读现象的观点。写作时注意以下几点：‎ ‎1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面（1．简要描述陪读现象；2．分析父母陪读的原因（2至3个）；3．发表你对此的看法。）的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时说明情况。分别以第三人称为主。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，用Meanwhile, so，Nevertheless和 thus使层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如主语从句和表语从句what they’ve ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent ，it seems to me that…和非限制性定语从句which has aroused a wide concern.。还有短语willing to, keep track of等。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文。‎ ‎27.【安徽省“皖南八校”2016届高三第二次联考】假如你是李华，你班同学昨天为你举办了生日聚会，你的外籍教师Jennifer也来参加，令你 感动。请你就以下内容给她写一封电子邮件；‎ ‎1．老师的到来让自己过了一个最好的生日；‎ ‎2．喜欢老师送的礼物（一本词典）；‎ ‎3．帮助老师在中国生活得愉快。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Jennifer，【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ Your coming to my birthday party yesterday gave me a big surprise, which I had never expected.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Jennifer，‎ Your coming to my birthday party yesterday gave me a big surprise, which I had never expected. You cannot imagine how excited i was at that moment. To be honest, it is because of your coming that i feel it is the best birthday i have ever had.‎ The dictionary you gave me as a birthday present is just what i need.i firmly believe that it will be of great help in my English study. I cannot thank you enough for what you did for me.‎ Together with all my classmates, i will do what i can to make you stay in china enjoyable. If there is anything you need,let me know and i will be more than glad to help.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，文章使用了大量短语at that moment、because of、be of+help、cannot thank you enough 等。which引导的定语从句，强调句和名词性从句，多样的句式使用，使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文 ‎28.【河南省郑州市2016年高三上学期第一次质量预测】假定你是李华，你校将接待一批来自美国的高中生到你校学习汉语，目前校办公室正在为他们征寻为期两周的接待家庭。请用英语给学校写一封信提出申请，说明你的理由和条件。‎ ‎ 内容要点：‎ ‎ 1．基本情况（姓名、性别、年龄、性格等）；‎ ‎ 2．英语水平；‎ ‎ 3．家庭条件；‎ ‎ 4．相关经历；‎ ‎ 5．其他……‎ ‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1．词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3．文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎ 4．开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 参考词汇：host family 接待家庭 Dear Sir / Madam,‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours faithfully,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Sir / Madam,‎ I’m Li Hua, an 18-year-old girl student in Class One, Grade Three. I’m open-minded, easy-going and enthusiastic. I think my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners and I like to make friends. I live in a beautiful apartment and luckily, my parents are glad to have a foreign student to stay with us. We have an extra room for guests. Besides, we have a private car. Most importantly, we just had a homestay American student last year. ‎ If you accept my application to be a host family, I promise to make the foreign student feel at home and we can visit some local places of interest in our free time.‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours faithfully,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 本文是一篇申请信件，主要是讲述我为了要申请这个职位而做的自我介绍。文章脉络清晰，并且结构鲜明，文章具有一定的层次感。首段是按照提纲所给的要点进行对自己的基本介绍，第二段是讲述了自己申请这个职位的原因和好处，第三段就是表达自己想要被录用的愿望。在介绍自己基本情况的时候，运用到了大量的从句和连词，使得文章不显得枯燥，更加连贯有新意，值得我们加以参考。‎ ‎ 29游的人越来越多，但有的游客有不文明行为的现象，请给21st Century Teens编辑部写一封信。内容需要包括以下要点: 1.出境游热的原因，如经济发展的原因、人们对外国文化感兴趣的原因等；‎ ‎2.旅游中出现了一些不文明现象，如随地吐痰、乱扔垃圾等；‎ ‎3.你的态度和看法。 注意：1.词数100左右 ‎2.短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； ‎ 参考词汇：不文明行为：immoral behaviors 树立形象：uphold an image Dear editor,‎ At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays. ‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎ Thank you for your attention.‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear editor,‎ At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays. There are some vital reasons. With the development of people’s living standard and economy, they can afford to go abroad . Besides, more people are becoming interested in foreign cultures, therefore, they are eager to visit them with their own eyes. However, some people behave very badly in foreign countries. For example, they drop litter everywhere , as well as spit freely in public, which not only shows bad personal qualities , but also does great harm to the image of the country. Personally, since it’s well known that China is an ancient civilized country with a long history , we should always bear / keep it in mind that it is everyone’s responsibility to uphold image of our motherland.‎ Thank you for your attention.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ LiHua ‎【亮点说明】文章简洁明了，把需要表达的要点清晰的表达了出来，并且做了适当的扩展，其间也运用了一些连接词和高级的句型。With the development of people’s living standard and economy, they can afford to go abroad .随着人们生活水平和经济的发展，人们可以承担起出国的费用。这一句中的常用句型with the development of 随着…的发展，在句中做伴随状语。they drop litter everywhere , as well as spit freely in public, which not only shows bad personal qualities , but also does great harm to the image of the country.人们随地丢垃圾，随地吐痰，这不仅显示出个人品质低下，还对国家的形象造成了损害。这一句中运用了非限制性定语从句，先行词是前面提到的两个动作，但因为是as well as 连接，谓语动词采用就近原则，所以用的第三人称单数；还运用了not only…but also（不仅…还）这个短语，在not only后面的句子需要用部分倒装形式，即主谓倒装。it’s well known that众所周知。另外文章中还有一些短语用得恰到好处，例如：do harm to对…有害；keep in mind牢记等等。‎ ‎【考点】考查提纲类作文 ‎30.【山东省淄博市淄川第一中学2016届高三上学期期末】假如你是中学生李华，你校外教Bob近期准备回美国度寒假。你班同学决定举办晚会为他送行。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封e-mail，告知他相关活动安排。‎ ‎ 1．目的：向他表达谢意；‎ ‎ 2．时间：本周五晚上6：30开始，预计持续1个小时；‎ ‎ 3．地点：学校报告厅；‎ ‎ 4．活动：同学们一起唱英文歌，并赠送亲手制作的礼物和卡片等。‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1．词数100左右。‎ ‎ 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎ 3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Bob，‎ ‎ With winter vacation drawing near，we know you are going back to America for the ‎ holiday．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours truly，‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Bob，‎ With winter vacation drawing near，we know you are going back to America for the holiday．We’ll miss you very much during your absence.‎ To express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your love for our class,we’ve decided to have a farewell party for you.The party will start at 6:30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall and will probably last about an hour.At the party, you can join ys singing English songs and I believe we will have a good time together.At the end of the party, we will present some gifts and cards,which are mostly made by ourselves.‎ We wish you a pleasant journey back home!We are also expecting you to come back to us again soon.‎ ‎ Yours truly，‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 本文是一篇送别信，文章表达的很简单而真挚，主要介绍了将会开办一个欢送晚会。文章分成三部分，第一段，讲述了感谢之前的那些时光；第二段介绍了晚会的具体内容；第三段送出了自己的美好的祝愿。全文的结构明显，而且紧凑，不离题，同时用词也是比较华丽的，是文章不显得枯燥乏味，值得学生作为参考的范围。‎ ‎2015年模拟题 ‎【海南省嘉积中学2015届高三下学期大测（三）】书面表达 (满分25分) ‎ 近年来, 不少学生选择到国外读大学, 但更多的则是选择在国内求学。请你就“Studying at home or abroad”这个话题, 用英语写一篇短文, 谈谈你的看法。‎ 注意: 1. 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数; ‎ ‎2. 文章内容应包括: (1) 你的选择, (2) 你选择的理由; ‎ ‎3. 词数100左右。‎ Studying at home or abroad? Opinions vary from person to person. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Sample 1:　‎ Studying at home or abroad? Opinions vary from person to person. I prefer to study at home. In recent years, many students prefer to study abroad, which they think will do good to them. However, I’d like to study in my own country—China. ‎ While studying in China, I can enjoy so many advantages. Firstly, I can stay with my family, my friends and all the people who I am familiar with. I will feel comfortable and relaxed all the time. Meanwhile, when I meet difficulties, I will always get help from them. Secondly, the cost of studying is reasonable. My parents can easily afford it to me. I’ll never worry about the money. Thirdly, we have our brilliant culture that we should treasure. ‎ All in all, we can get good education in our own country. Now, do you still prefer to study abroad? ‎ Sample 2:　‎ Studying at home or abroad? Opinions vary from person to person. I prefer to study abroad. There are many advantages in attending abroad. ‎ First of all, I can learn more advanced knowledge of science and technology. For example, the IT in America is the best of all. After learning, I can make contributions to our country. Second, I can learn and grow up in different cultures, which helps me broaden my views and understand the world better. I will visit a lot of places of interest and make lots of foreign friends. I believe it must be a wonderful experience. Third, I can improve my oral English in a better learning environment. ‎ In a word, studying abroad is good for my study as well as my life. I believe I can learn more than at home. So I prefer to study abroad.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇文章是一个提纲式作文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、确定文章的总体框架，要在试题给出的立场的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。1.本文文法简单流畅，不拖泥带说，句式多样。 2.使用了多样词组 ‎ 3.文章行文结构严密，能够结合自己的看法，具有现实意义 4.逻辑鲜明，思路清晰。在考场上可谓一篇高分佳作。‎ 考点：考查学生的提纲式写作。‎ ‎【全国百强校】山东省枣庄第八中学南校2015届高三11月月考】书面表达：（25分）‎ ‎ 假如你是李华，一名高三学生，经常为看电视的事跟妈妈闹意见，今天你跟妈妈达成一致。请根据以下表格的内容，以 An Argument 为题为《英语广场》写一篇100字左右的英语短文。‎ 母亲 儿子 学习任务重， 自制力差，浪费时间，影响视力等。‎ 学习后放松，了解国际国内大事，增长知识等。‎ 平时不准我看电视，但在周末允许我看新闻、娱乐、体育或科普类节目 ‎【答案】‎ I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in Senior 3, heavily burdened with their studies, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can’t accept her ideas. I think it is relaxing to watch TV after a day’s hard work.. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. Now we have at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news and programs of entertainment, sports or science.‎ ‎【亮点说明】I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. 这句话用了whether引导的宾语从句，My mother holds the view that students in Senior 3, hea-vily burdened with their studies, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV.这句话用了同位语从句和too…to….句型，It se-ems to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to wa-tch TV too often. 这两句话是it做形式主语， Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. 这句话用了倒装句，Now we have at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news and programs of entertainment, sports or ‎ science.这句话用了that引导的同位语从句 考点： 提纲类作文 ‎【黑龙江省哈尔滨市第三中学2015届高三第四次模拟】‎ ‎ 你校为新生举办一次新老学生座谈会, 你是一名高三学生。请从 "学会学习、缓解压力、适应高中生活" 等方面, 用英语写一篇短文, 向新生交流。 注意: 1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 ‎2. 词数:100字左右 Dear friends ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Thank you!‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear friends,‎ ‎ Welcome to our school. Now new school year has begun. You have become senior high middle school students.‎ ‎ As high school students, you have some problems to deal with. First of all, you should get your study hours well arranged, balancing your schoolwork and extracurricular activities. Make sure that you have enough time to improve your studies and that you take an active part in out of class activities in order to keep fit. Then our teachers, parents and society bring too much pressure for us to bear so we should learn to relax ourselves by reading a book, enjoying a good film with friends or listening to popular music. Finally, we should learn to improve our ways to study so that we can adapt ourselves quickly to the new school life. I hope all of you will enjoy the upcoming brand new school life.‎ ‎ Thank you!‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文的主题是新老学生交流会，本文贴近自己的生活，比较有话说。对于此类文章，要注意一下几点：1、首先，可以根据自己的实际经历来谈谈题目中要求的学会学习、缓解压力、适应高中生活等方面的感想；2、其次，描述事件的原因、过程、结果时，可以多用一些连接词来时文章顺畅；3、最后，要符合老生的语气，注意单词、词组、句式的运用来给文章增色。‎ ‎【亮点说明】在对于诸如此类文章的写作，要善于使用不同的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换。学生在写作时要注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，本文运用了deal with，take an active part in，keep fit，bring too much pressure for的短语。本文也有很多句型值得学习，如balancing your schoolwork and extracurricular activities. 运用了非谓语形式，we should learn to improve our ways to study so that we can adapt ourselves quickly to the new school life.目的状语从句，这样文章才能写出新意。并且使用了一些如First of all，then，Finally等连接词使文章的结构更合理，开头Welcome to our school以及结尾的I hope all of you will enjoy the upcoming brand new school life.表达了对新生的欢迎和希望，符合本文语气。‎ 考点：考查话题作文 ‎【山西省太原市第五中学2015届高三阶段检测（二模）】‎ 暑假国外旅行时同团的一个小女孩于上午10点左右在机场咖啡厅附近走失，请你替她焦急的父母写一份广播稿通知找人，要点如下：女孩名叫玲玲，4岁，身高110cm左右，长发大眼，身穿红裙白鞋。如发现任何线索请将小孩送到机场广播站或拨打电话677-852-4523。对提供帮助的人表示感谢。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。 ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Announcement Ladies and Gentlemen, ‎ Attention, please! Here is something urgent!‎ A four-year-old Chinese girl named Lingling is missing. She is about 110cm tall with long straight black hair as well as a pair of big eyes. She is wearing a red dress and white shoes. She was last seen at ten o’clock nearby the cafe at the airport. Lingling’s parents are very anxious as she can only speak Chinese Putonghua. ‎ If any of you see her or get any clue about her, please take her to the broadcasting station of the airport or call at 677-852-4523. ‎ We’d show our sincere gratitude to anyone who offers related information or who helps find the girl.‎ ‎ Thanks for your attention!‎ ‎【亮点说明】文章要点齐全，详细的描述了女孩的体貌特征，并且提供了联系电话，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，同时注意到了通知的正确格式。本文运用了一些比较正式的通知的词汇和短语，如Attention，urgent，anxious，get any clue about，show our sincere gratitude to，related information。开头的两句Attention, please! Here is something urgent!感叹句体现了家长焦急的心理和事情的紧急程度，结尾Thanks for your attention!的感谢符合通知的语气。‎ 考点：考查邮件应用文作文 ‎【山东省潍坊市2015届高三第一次模拟】书面表达(满分25分)‎ ‎ 全市英语演讲比赛将在光明中学报告厅举行。假设你是李华，你代表你校参加了赛前会议，会后请你用英语向参赛同学传达以下信息：‎ ‎ 1．陈述前往报告厅的校内行走路线(如下图)。‎ ‎2．提醒选手参赛的注意事项(守时、讲卫生、守纪律等)。‎ ‎ 注意：1．词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Hello，everyone．I'd like to tell you something about the English speaking competition of our city．___________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ Hello,everyone.I’d like to tell you something about the English speaking competition of our city.When you are at the school gate,a beautiful fountain is in front of you.Then turn right and you will see an art gallery.Choose the main road and go straightforward.Turn left at the corner of the science building and go ahead,then you'll see the lecture hall at your right hand.You can't miss it.‎ During the competition,being punctual is very important.Whoever is late won't be allowed to enter.Please switch off your cell phones so as not to disturb others.Always keep quiet while waiting for your turn.It'sgood manners not to litter around.        Wish you good luck!‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲类写作。提纲类的写作是比较容易的文体，题目中给出一些要点，根据这些要点完成写作。对于这类文体应有尤其注意审题。首先要审要求。书面表达试题一般都由“情景”和“要求”两部分构成。“情景”中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而“要求”一般在书面表达的后半部分，以“注意”形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求。因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析、反复推敲，搞清提出的内容要求，抓住所要表达的信息点。接下来就要审文体：高考书面表达的体裁一般有三大类：记叙文、说明文和应用文，具体形式有便条，日记，通知，书信，人物、事情、情景故事的描写，看图说话，缩写，扩写，改写等，而此题明显属于通知类写作。再次要审人称：审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰写人，即搞清楚此篇文章是“由谁写给谁”的。写稿人是谁一般都已明确指出，给出形式假设环境中的“某人”，如“假设你是李华”，写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李华，即如本题。最后审时态：根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态，即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事。此题目中题目已给出，考生须注意不要再自己拟题。而且本题中要点给出来的并不多，需要考生自行组织，自由发挥，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。同时在写作时要注意使用高级的词汇与高级的句型，不要遗漏任何的要点，同时要使用合适的连接词来连接整个文章，使文章更有条理性。另外，在写这种描写方位的写作时，一定要语言简单而精炼。‎ ‎【亮点说明】　本文结构紧凑，层次分明，第一段中描写位置的简单句子简洁而一目了然，值得大家学习。而类似Whoever is late won't be allowed to enter这种从句也为简单的写作增色不少。‎ 考点：考查提纲类作文写作 ‎【辽宁师范大学附属中学2015届高三模拟】‎ 假定你是李华， 明天下午3点，你校将邀请消防员在学校大厅举行安全知识讲座。请根据以下所给信息，写一则书面通知。‎ ‎1. 播放火灾事故视频；【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎2. 讲解预防火灾的方法;(更换旧的煤气管, 使用安全的电源插座；安装报警器)‎ ‎3. 提问互动环节。【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 安装： install ‎ Notice ‎【答案】‎ In order to arouse our safety awareness, a lecture will be held at the lecture hall at 3 pm tomorrow. The lecture on fire safety will be given by a fireman invited by our school. ‎ First of all, some videos about fire accidents will be shown to tell the necessity and importance of fire prevention. Then, the fireman will tell us how to prevent a fire. Changing the gas pipe, installing the fire alarm and using safe power sockets are all on the list. Finally, time permitting, a Q&A session will be arranged to answer the related questions and help get a better understanding of fire safety.‎ Everyone is welcome to attend it. Please be on time! ‎ 考点：考查通知类作文 ‎【黑龙江省哈尔滨市第九中学2015届高三第三次高考模拟】‎ ‎ 假如你是校学生会主席李华，学校安排你下周末作为导游带领外籍教师Mr.Smith进行一次近郊游。请你用英语给Mr.Smith写一封电子邮件，包括以下内容：‎ ‎ 1．自我介绍；‎ ‎ 2．出游的时间、目的地等信息；‎ ‎ 3．需要提前做的准备工作。‎ ‎ 要求：1．词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2．为使行文连贯，可根据内容要点适当增加细节。‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ ‎ It is my honor to introduce myself to you. I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of our school. And I was asked to act as a tourist guide for you on next weekend. The schedule and details are as follows：‎ ‎ We’ll have a wonderful and well-organized trip, not far from the downtown. Since you are new here, you will be amazed at the scenery and surroundings there. In terms of the meeting time, 8 o’clock on the morning of Saturday will be fine. And at that time, I will be waiting for you at the school gate. Remember not to take too many things. Just a bottle of water, some pieces of bread or other kinds of food, a cap or a pair of sunglasses will be enough. Also, you'd better wear a pair of sports shoes.‎ ‎ Looking forward to seeing you. I believe we'll have a good day.‎ ‎ Yours Sincerely ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息写一封电子邮件。内容包括：自我介绍；出游时间、目的地等信息；需要提前做的准备工作。写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。文中所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。‎ 写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚 ‎，结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序，逐句翻译的，而是将这些信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的词汇和句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如：动词不定式和动词-ing形式的使用，被动结构，状语从句,宾语从句和一些好的短语act as, be amazed at, in terms of, look forward to等等。‎ 考点：应用文作文 ‎【江西省高安中学2015届高三命题中心模拟押题（三）】‎ ‎ 对于“机遇”，不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。Opportunities favor those who are prepared.‎ 内容要求：1. 你对该引语的理解；2. 你的相关经历；3. 恰当的结尾。‎ 注意：①文中不能出现考生的具体信息；‎ ‎ ②词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。【来.源：全,品…中&高*考*网】‎ ‎【答案】‎ The door of opportunity won’t open unless you do some pushing. Chances always favor prepared minds. The story happened when I was in high school can help illuminate the true meaning of the proverb.‎ On hearing the news that one student would be chosen and appointed to be the tour guide of some visiting teachers from Ireland, all of us felt excited. However, what annoyed us was that few of us could speak English fluently because most of us attached little significance to oral English. But our monitor, who practiced her listening and speaking nearly every day, was no exception. She succeeded in grasping the opportunity. Even more excitedly, she was offered a free summer camp to Ireland later. ‎ ‎ Contrary to common belief that she was simply luckier, I think it was her preparations in advance that led to her success. This is a lesson I can take from her success.‎ ‎【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和单词，如：illuminate，proverb，appointed to be，However，attached little significance to，succeeded in，并且句型多变，如：The door of opportunity ‎ won’t open unless you do some pushing. 让步状语从句，Chances always favor prepared minds. 英语谚语，机会是给有准备的人的，Contrary to common belief that she was simply luckier, I think it was her preparations in advance that led to her success对比句和强调句。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文 ‎【黑龙江省哈尔滨市第六中学2015届高三下学期第四次模拟】‎ ‎ 假定你是李华，将要在2015年组织佛罗里达冬令营，请你给Joe回一封电子邮件，介绍冬令营的相关情况。内容主要包括：‎ ‎1. 时间：2015年1月27日至2月13日；‎ ‎2. 活动内容（英语课程，与接待家庭度周末，参观迪士尼乐园等）‎ ‎3. 预期收获（语言，文化等）‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：佛罗里达冬令营Florida Winter Camp; 迪士尼乐园 Disneyland ‎ Dear Joe, ‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours truly, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Joe,‎ Thanks for your mail, I’m glad to know you are interested in the 2015Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during which time you will get wonderful experiences. You will have opportunities to improve your spoken English in the courses provided. Also, activities are arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn English in authentic situations. Besides, a trip to local Disneyland will certainly add to the fun of the camp. ‎ Join the camp and you will have a better knowledge of American culture life. You are sure to benefit from it. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇要求写一封电子邮件，根据提示信息来写。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，而且使用了多种句式和结构。文章第一段中的I’m glad to……，固定句型，意思是我很开心……，这句话意思是知道你对2015年佛罗里达冬令营很感兴趣我很开心。“It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during which time you will get wonderful experiences.”中 during which time通常用于非限制性定语从句中，修饰January 27 to February 13这个时间段，句意：它将会在1月27号到2月13号期间举行，这个期间你将会有很棒的经历。“activities are arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family”中的to spend weekends together with your host family属于目的状语从句，意思是给你安排的这些活动来让你和寄宿家庭一起度过周末。本文还使用了一些短语，be arranged for sb.为某人安排，add to增加，benefit from从……获益，are interested in对……感兴趣。Also,Besides这些插入语的用使文章条理更清晰，更紧凑。‎ 考点：考查应用文写作。‎ ‎【2015届河北保定市高三调研试题】假设你是学生会主席李华，学生会打算招募一位校报英文版的编辑，请你用英文以 “An English Editor Wanted”为题目写一则招聘启事。内容要点如下：‎ ‎1、要求：英文与美术皆好；能熟练使用电脑；‎ ‎2、工作内容：选择与编辑同学们的英文来稿；‎ ‎3、有意者请在下周五前与学生会联系。‎ 注意：1．词数100左右 ‎ 2．不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。‎ ‎【答案】 ‎ ‎ An English Editor Wanted ‎ Our school newspaper is in great need of an editor for its English edition, whose job is to pick out and edit the English articles from students that are appropriate for teenagers.‎ ‎ Anyone who wants to apply for the job must meet the following requirements: First, he/she should be good at English and have a good taste for art. Second, he/she should be able to operate the computer skillfully. Third, he /she should show a willingness to give up some of his/her spare time to serve the students.‎ ‎ Those who are interested in the job and meet the requirements please get in touch with the Student Union before next Friday.‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇招聘启事，文章主要包括招聘的岗位，岗位要求以及具体的工作内容，因此写作要注意内容明确，调理清晰。材料给出的要点已经给定大致内容，写作时要注意适当增加内容，以保证文章的连贯和具体。文章的第一句Our school newspaper is in great need of an editor for its English edition, whose job is to pick out and edit the English articles from students that are appropriate for teenagers.使用whose引导的非限制性定语从句，说明文章的主要内容以及招聘的岗位。第二自然段的第一句话Anyone who wants to apply for the job must meet the following requirements:使用who引导的一般性从句提升招聘岗位的具体要求。而后，第二自然段使用First，Second，Third三个序数词，条理清晰，明确地说明此次学生会招聘岗位的具体要求和工作的内容，使得读者一目了然。最后一自然段Those who are interested in the job and meet the requirements please get in touch with the Student Union before next Friday.再次使用who引导的定语从句，说明招聘的截止时间。在短语和句式的使用上，文章同样很出彩，使用了in great need of…，pick out，apply for，have a good taste for，give up，be interested in，get in touch with等，使得文章更加生动，表达也很到位。‎ ‎【北京市东城区2015届高三教学统一检测】‎ 第一节（15分） ‎ 美国高中生Mike将来北京参加冬令营活动，你家是他的接待家庭。请根据以下提示给Mike写信。 ‎ ‎1.机场接机；‎ ‎2.单独卧室, 可以上网；‎ ‎3.陪同浏览北京。‎ 注意：1. 词数不少于50.‎ ‎ 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎ 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Mike, ‎ My parents and I are so happy that you’re coming to stay with us next month. ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to seeing you soon! ‎ Yours,‎ Joe ‎ 【北京市东城区2015届高三教学统一检测】‎ 假设你是光明中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了你近期应聘校园电视台记者及其后发生的事情。请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60。 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________‎ 第一节 ‎【答案】‎ Dear Mike, ‎ My parents and I are so happy that you’re coming to stay with us next month. We’re going to pick you up at the airport when you arrive. We have arranged a separate room for you, and there is a computer in it. You can get on line whenever you want. I hope you will feel comfortable and convenient here. Beijing has its special beauty in winter. I’d like to be your tour guide in your spare time. Since both of us are teenagers, I believe we have a lot in common and will have a good time together. ‎ Looking forward to seeing you soon! ‎ Yours,‎ Joe ‎【亮点说明】这是一篇简短的叙述性的范文。范文依据提示的顺序展开描述。虽结构简单，但是层次清晰，其中也用了一些高级的句型，使得文章水平在一个高的层面，如: My parents and I are so happy that you’re coming to stay with us next month.；I hope you will feel comfortable and convenient here.宾语从句；You can get on line whenever you want.主从复合句；Since both of us ‎ are teenagers, I believe we have a lot in common and will have a good time together. since从句等；还采用了一些比较好的短语，正确地加以运用：pick you up接某人，have a lot in common有很多共同之处，in your spare time在某人的空闲时间；如这些都给文章带来了亮点。‎ 考点：考查应用文写作。‎ 第二节 ‎【答案】‎ The school TV station advertised for a student reporter last week. I read their advertisement and was quite interested in it. I decided to have a try and went to the interview at the requested time. During the interview, I was confident about myself and answered all the questions raised by the teachers. They were satisfied with me. I got the job and started the work at once. Last week I interviewed some American visiting students and edited a programme about it. Our programme was broadcast on the school television. Seeing my classmates attracted by our programme, I felt so happy and proud of what I had done. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【试题分析】这是一篇看图作文。看图式作文一般有两类文体：记叙文和夹叙夹议文。很明显这篇看图作文是记叙文，那么要求学生充分理解，描写出图画所展示的整个细节和过程。而题目已告知“下面四幅图描述了你近期应聘校园电视台记者及其后发生的事情”，这已经为考生降低了难度。知道了图画的主要内容后，还需要做的就是理清图画的先后顺序，分析每副图画所表达的主要意思。就这篇作文来说，第一幅图主要表示主人公看到学校宣传栏有一则招学生记者的广告；第二幅图表示主人公去参加记者面试；第三幅图主人公作为记者在采访一些参观的学生；第四副主要是主人公采访的节目在学校播出，很多同学在看，主人公看着露出了高兴自豪的笑容。当然，考生需要做适当的补充来使得这些内容更连贯，文章表达更完整。要求：请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60。【亮点说明】该范文依据图画顺序，既突出了每幅图的主要内容又增加了一些细节，充分展示了四幅图所表达意思。虽结构简单，但是层次清晰，其中也用了一些高级的句型，使得文章水平在一个高的层面，如: Seeing my classmates attracted by our programme, I felt so happy and proud of what I had done. 非谓语分句结构；还采用了一些比较好的短语，正确地加以运用：was quite interested in对……感兴趣，I was confident about自信，were satisfied with对……很满意，proud of自豪、骄傲；如这些都给文章带来了亮点。‎ 考点：考查看图写作。‎ ‎【河北省正定中学2015届高三1月月考】‎ 假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：‎ ‎1．外出购物 ‎2．替房东还书 ‎3．Tracy 来电话留言：‎ ‎1) 咖啡屋 ( Bolton Coffee ) 见面取消 ‎2) 此事已告知 Susan ‎3) 尽快回电 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Mrs Wilson,‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ With best wishes,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Mrs. Wilson,‎ I'm going out shopping, and won't be back until about 5：00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o'clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.‎ ‎ With best wishes,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类作文，要求根据所给的提示内容写一个留言。仔细阅读试题的要求，我们可以看出书面表达应该包含三个大的方面：购物、还书以及留言。而留言又包含了三个方面：取消见面；已告知Susan；回电。这样，我们在写作时就要重点抓住这5个要点，通过增加适当的细节以及运用恰当的连词把把每个语法正确、句型丰富的句子连接在一起就会得到好的文章。 ‎ ‎【亮点说明】本篇书面表达使用了一段式结构，条理清晰。依次说明了需要留言的内容。本文的亮点是运用了高级词汇，例如return to、attend to。同时not...until、want sb.to do sth.等句式和定语从句等结构的运用也为文章增添了亮色。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文 ‎【河北省邯郸市2015届高三上学期1月份教学质量检测】‎ ‎ 假定你是李华，计划寒假找份兼职工作。下面的招聘广引起了你的注意，请根据要点（箭头所指内容）写一封申请信。‎ ‎ Yes. I’m ‎ ‎ interested Winter Jobs Could you be an ASSISTANT TEACHER for children’s winter camp ² Excellent pay for working with children ‎ ² Work with native teachers from England ‎ ² English-only classes ² work evenings and weekends for 2 weeks ‎ For more information, write to Mr. Smith ‎ self-introduction (personality, fluency in English,...)‎ No problem!‎ I can start working from...‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右； ‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ I’ve read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children’s winter camp.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Mr. Smith,‎ I’ve read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children’s winter camp. I’m very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job.‎ To begin with, I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter. Besides, I have been a helpful assistant for both my English teacher and my classmates. More importantly, I can speak English fluently, which will help me work with native teachers from ‎ England. I will be available for the work on evenings and weekends and can start working from the end of this term. I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity. ‎ ‎ Looking forward to your early reply. ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua 亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了定语从句、固定句型等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。‎ 语法方面：定语从句which will help me work with native teachers from England；固定句型I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity等，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；‎ 篇章结构方面：范文注意使用to begin with, besides, more importantly等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；‎ 短语和搭配方面：范文使用了be interested in, qualify sb for, both...and, help sb do sth, the end of等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。‎ 考点：书信类作文 ‎【江西省吉安市第一中学2015届高三上学期第二次阶段考】‎ 高三学生学习任务繁重。体育课已成为难得的放松时间, 可目前你们体育课内容单一，有时甚至被占用。请你用英语写一篇短文，给校报投稿, 词数不少于80，内容应包括：‎ ‎1. 目前体育课的现状 ‎2. 你对此现象的看法 ‎3. 提出一些合理的建议 Dear editor,‎ As the college entrance examination is drawing near,________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours Sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear editor,‎ As the college entrance examination is drawing near. We senior high school students are occupied with busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects. ‎ Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. It serves to develop our awareness of cooperation and spirit of competition. Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. After all, not everybody thinks running, jumping or ball games appealing. ‎ I hope PE class can not only enrich our school life but also enable everyone to find his or her own pleasure in it. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：分析要求可知，高三学生学习任务繁重。体育课已成为难得的放松时间, 可目前你们体育课内容单一，有时甚至被占用。请你用英语写一篇短文，给校报投稿, 词数不少于80，内容应包括：‎ ‎1. 目前体育课的现状2. 你对此现象的看法3. 提出一些合理的建议。语言结构正确，行文规范。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称。要求写约80个词，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。‎ ‎【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：are occupied with 、To a certain extent 、Not only引导的倒装句、which 和that引导的同位语从句、where引导的定语从句等都很不错。‎ 考点：提纲类写作 ‎【山西省大同一中、同煤一中2015届高三联考】‎ 假如你是星海中学的李华。你打算高三毕业后去美国留学，想咨询你的美国笔友Mike，请你根据以下提示写一封信。‎ ‎ 1.目的：增长见识，体验文化； 2.困惑：语言障碍，学业压力； 3.征求建议。‎ ‎ 注意：1.词数不少于80 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。‎ ‎ Dear Mike,‎ ‎—————————————————————————————————————————‎ ‎ yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua Dear Mike, ‎ I’ve finally made my decision to go to America for further study after high school. ‎ I’ve been longing to go to America, mainly for two reasons. One is that I can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this country. But I have some worries. My English is a bit poor, especially spoken English. I’m afraid I’ll have trouble communicating. Besides, I may suffer from heavy pressure from college courses. ‎ I hope you can offer me some practical advice. Look forward to your reply. ‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】本题为书信写作，主要就去美国留学的相关事宜咨询笔友麦克。本题题目较为简单，文章的大致内容题目已经给出，主要做适当扩展即可。本文为经典的三段论式写作，第一段介绍背景，第二段介绍留学目的及困惑，第三段请求提出意见，结构清晰明了。第二段第二句One is that I can experience American culture and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this country.使用了that领导的表语从句，且是两个表语从句并列，同时还用了one…the other…句型表示一个…另一个….。本文短语使用很精彩，使用了be longing to渴望，have trouble doing…有困难…，suffer from忍受，皆是较好的短语。本文词语使用的亮点在于副词使用，如第一句I’ve finally made my decision，finally最终；第二段第一句mainly for two reasons. mainly主要是；第四句especially spoken English，especially特别是，这些副词的使用使得文章词汇特色顿时多样了起来，为文章增加一大亮点。总结：书信写作时注意文章结构，最好采用三段式，简洁明了。‎ 考点：考查书信写作 ‎【山东省实验中学第三次诊断考试】‎ 假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid．Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。‎ ASSISI ANTS WANTED Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English．Their work is to ‎ tend the senior students during the break．‎ Requirements attached：‎ ‎1．Good at English．‎ ‎2．Experienced priority．‎ Contact us by e-mail：midesch@163．com．‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1．短文词数100字左右；‎ ‎ 2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称；‎ Dear Sir／Madam，‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.‎ I’ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.‎ In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I’m available for interview at any time. It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.‎ 考点：考查应用文写作。‎ ‎【辽宁省丹东五校协作体2015届高三考试】‎ ‎  假如你是李华，你向美国笔友Jack介绍你校开设的学生社团活动的情况，大致内容介绍：‎ ‎1、活动对象：高一和高二学生；活动时间：每周二的三点钟以后。‎ ‎2、 通过参加活动，你们的收获。‎ ‎3、 你的感受。‎ 注意：1、词数不少于100；‎ ‎2、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3、 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ Dear Mike,‎ ‎   Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school.‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________‎ ‎                                                        Li hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Jack,‎ ‎ Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school .These clubs are set up by the Students’ Union and they are intended for students from Grade Two and Grade Three, open after 3 o’clock on Tuesday afternoon.‎ The club activities, aiming to offer students more opportunities to show their different talents, benefit us a lot. Taking part in club activities can help us to make new friends, expand our circle, and develop interpersonal skills. At the same time, these activities can help us to develop self-confidence, communicating with each other more easily. Besides, we have developed different skills and many interests, which enrich our lives.‎ ‎  In my opinion, I acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. Meanwhile, I bring myself more relaxation after hard study, which reduces my tiredness.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。本文根据写作要求应该分成三段：第一段学生社团的活动对象和活动时间；第二段写通过活动学生的收获，如：展示才能、交朋友、更加自信、丰富业余生活等等；最后一段写自己的看法。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本文善于用不同的表达方式表示相同内容。如在表达目的时，用了短语：be intended for和aim to。除此之外，本篇文章还注意长短句相结合，简单句和从句相结合。如Besides, we have developed different skills and many interests, which enrich our lives.，这句话中就使用了定语从句，使得表达更加明确。最后，在第二段中，使用了连接词，使得行文流畅，条理清晰。‎ 考点：考查提纲式作文 ‎ ‎【山东省潍坊市重点中学2015届高三12月阶段性教学质量检测】‎ 假如你是学生会主席李华，为了增进学生之间的交流，学生会决定在网络上建立中外学生英文交流论坛，请你根据下面的要点提示介绍此论坛。‎ 目的 要点 细节 提供交流平台 加强交流 结识朋友……‎ 提供帮助 学习、生活……‎ 献计献策 学校发展、校园生活……‎ 注意：1．词数100左右。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎【范文】‎ Students’ Union has decided to set up Study BBS of our own. All of us will benefit a lot from it. It offers us chances to communicate with each other. We can exchange our learning and life experiences on it. We can share different cultures as well. What’s more, it’s a good place for us to make good friends. A life without a friend is a life without sunshine. Anyone who has difficulties with their studies and daily life can ask for help on it. If you have any good suggestions to offer , you can lend a helping hand. Good advice on how to enrich our school life and how to develop our school is also welcome. Wish you to join in and fully express your ideas.‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇材料作文，文章结构已经大致给出，要求我们分别描述出论坛的目的、要点以及细节，注意用词精准。大致内容已经给出，要适当增加细节内容，保持文章结构完整，内容连贯。文章一句Students’ Union has decided to set up Study BBS of our own.All of us will benefit a lot from it开门见山，提出文章背景为学生会论坛，并简洁明了地阐述了论坛对每个人都有好处；第二句It offers us chances to communicate with each other此处使用了动词不定式作chance的后置定语，增加了可读性；第三句We can exchange our learning and life experiences on it；第四句We can share different cultures as well使用了短语as well与前面相接，继续表明论坛的好处；第五句What’s more, it’s a good place for us to make good friends.使用了短语what’s more表示而且，有着承上启下的作用，动词不定式作后置定语；第六句A life without a friend is a life without sunshine.此句是对上一句话的解释，使用了谚语，给文章增添了色彩；第七句Anyone who has difficulties with their studies and daily life can ask for help on it本句使用了定语从句，提高了文章的水平；第八句If you have any good suggestions to offer , you can lend a helping hand使用了条件状语从句。第九句Good advice on how to enrich our school life and how to develop our school is also welcome.此句也是文章亮点之一，使用了并列的疑问词+动词不定式的形式后置定语，增加了句子的复杂度，并列也显出了文章的气势；最后一句Wish you to join in and fully express your ideas.使用了祈使句。在词语的运用上，也十分出彩，使用了很多精彩短语set up表示建立，创立；benefit a lot from……表示获益匪浅；communicate with……与某人交流；as well表示也；have difficulties with……表示做某事有困难；daily life日常生活；ask for表示寻求帮助；suggestion on表示在某方面的建议；join in表示加入等等。这些短语的使用提升了文章的档次，读起来也津津有味。‎ 考点：考查材料作文写作。‎ ‎【辽宁省锦州市2015届高三上学期期末考试英语】‎ 假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。最近，你校广播站面向全体学生招募两名英语播 音员。你很想尝试一下，请根据下面的要点写一封自荐信。‎ ‎1. 对播音感兴趣，受过专业训练，梦想成为一名播音员；‎ ‎2. 擅长英语，去年获得英语竞赛第一名；‎ ‎3. 希望被录取。‎ 注意： 1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Sir Or Madam，‎ I am Li Hua, a student in Grade 3 _____________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ I am looking forward to your early reply．‎ Yours，‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I am Li Hua. a student in Grade 3. I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers, so I’m writing to introduce myself.‎ First of all, I am greatly interested in broadcasting. I have received some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future. Besides, I am good at English, and won the first prize in the English Speech Competition last year. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. If I am admitted, I will try my best to serve the students. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station.‎ I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua 考点：考查自荐信写作 ‎【山东省青岛市2015届高三考试】‎ ‎ 假定你是李芳，你的美国好友Jane数学学得不好，对自己失去了信心，产生了厌学情绪。请你给她发一封电子邮件开导她，要点如下：‎ ‎ 1．没有必要过于伤心；‎ ‎ 2．要振作起来，尽量减少焦虑心理：‎ ‎ 3．和老师交流有助于你改善：‎ ‎ 4．探索适合自己的有效学习方式。‎ 注意：‎ l．词数100左右：‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Jane，‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours，‎ ‎ Li Fang ‎【答案】‎ Dear Jane,‎ I am sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in maths and have lost interest in schoolwork. In my ‎ opinion, maths is difficult for most students, so there is no need to feel too bad. At this moment, you should cheer up and find ways to reduce your anxiety. Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music? If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that helps you to improve. Probably it’s time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.‎ Anyway, I hope you can rebuild your self-confidence soon!‎ Yours,‎ Li Fang ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本题考查电子邮件写作，主要围绕开导自己的好友，故邮件写作时要注意语气，要具有鼓舞性。题目要点已经给出，注意不要漏掉要点。范文结构为两段式的分总结构，第一段为开导和劝慰，第二段收束全文。第一段第一句中I am sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in 我很遗憾听说….为全文奠定了一个感情基调，即带有一种同情劝慰性的语气；第二句中so there is no need to feel too bad.使用了there is no need to…没有必要…的固定句式；第四句Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music?使用了一个疑问句，使得文章十分富有感情；第五句If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that helps you to improve. 使用了if领导的条件状语从句；最后一句Probably it’s time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.使用了which领导的定语从句。在短语使用上，使用了do well 做得好，In my opinion 在我看来，At this moment 此时，cheer up 高兴起来，it’s time to…是做…的时候等十分经典的常用短语。在词语使用上，本文词语拿捏恰到好处，使得文章十分富有感情，如第一句I am sorry to hear that you 中sorry一词的使用，以及最后一句I hope you can 中hope一词的使用，极富劝慰性，可以说文章的语气拿捏十分好，是文章最大亮点所在。总结：类似这类开导性劝慰性的邮件写作时要注意语气的拿捏，这会成为文章一大亮点。‎ 考点：考查邮件写作 ‎【黑龙江省双鸭山市第一中学2015届高三上学期期末】‎ 假如你是耀华中学的李华，于2014年12月26日在Amazon图书网站购买了外文小说Twilight。在阅读过程中，发现小说缺页严重，你想通过网站客服解决该决问题，特写了一封邮件，内容如下：‎ ‎1. 购书时间及书名；2.书籍的问题；3. 希望有合理的解决方法；4. 期待尽快得到回复并表示感谢。‎ ‎ 要求：(1)包括所有内容；(2)信的开头已写好(不计入总词数)；(3)词数：100左右； ‎ Dear Sir/ Madam,‎ ‎ I am a student from Yao Hua Middle School. I’m Li Hua, a student of Yaohua Middle School. _______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Sir/ Madam,‎ I am a student from Yao Hua Middle School. As a faithful supporter of your website, I have enjoyed your convenient and timely service. But this time, I am writing for your help.‎ On December 26th, I ordered a best-seller Twilight through your website. Unfortunately, quite a few pages were found missing when I read it afterwards, greatly affecting my understanding of the book.‎ I was wondering whether you could solve this problem in a proper way, for instance, sending me a new book, for I really love the book.‎ Your earliest replay will be highly appreciated. Thank you!‎ ‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本题要求写一封投诉信。由于是对陌生人写信，要使用尊称而且语气要适当，同时要表达出自己想要的解决办法。考生在写信时要注意题目要求，句子要连贯，用词要准确，句型要丰富。在写出对方问题前，第一段先提出对方的优点，使得语气更委婉，更容易让人接受；faithful 忠诚的；忠实的，timely service 适时的服务。第二段介绍了购书时间及书名，方便对方查询解决问题；还运用了状语从句，现在分词作定语的用法，相当于which is affecting ; best-seller 畅销书；be found doing 被发现处于某种状态。第三段建议可以解决的办法；wonder=want to know; for instance 比如说；例如，相当于for example ; such as等；for在此引导原因状语，相当于because. 总结：考生在写这类作文时，注意句子之间要连贯以及信件的格式便可。‎ 考点：考查书信写作。‎ ‎【四川省宜宾市2015届高三第一次诊】‎ ‎ 团队合作(teamwork)在现代是非常重要的。请根据以下要点，简要写一篇关于teamwork的演讲稿，并表明你自己的看法。‎ 一．合作重要性：‎ ‎1.在学习和工作中的重要性；‎ ‎2.节约时间精力和资源；‎ ‎3.彼此有相互学习的机会。‎ 二. 在学习中怎样与人合作。‎ 注意： ‎ ‎1.词数：120字左右；‎ ‎2.演讲稿的开头和结尾已经为你写好；‎ ‎3.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；‎ Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Teamwork”. ‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Thanks for your listening!‎ ‎【答案】 ‎ Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Teamwork”.‎ In this modern world, if we want to complete our work more efficiently, there is an urgent need for all of us to learn to cooperate with others. No only can cooperation save us lots of time, energy and resources, but also we can learn much from each other.‎ We’ll be lucky enough to find someone who holds the same belief to cooperate with due to the fact that we can understand each other . As a senior three student, in our study we should learn to cooperate with others. For example,…‎ Personally, teamwork means we should try to combine our ideas with others’. ‎ Thanks for your listening.‎ ‎【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：who引导的定语从句、No only引导的倒装句，that引导的同位语从句等都很不错。‎ 考点：演讲稿类作文。‎ 评分原则 ‎1. 本题总分为35分，按5档次给分。‎ ‎2. ‎ 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。‎ ‎3. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法的准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。‎ ‎4. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以试。‎ ‎5. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。‎ ‎【浙江省重点中学协作体2015届高三第二次适应性测试】‎ ‎ 最近，你校的校园网将开辟一个英语学习交流博客（blog）。请你根据下面的内容提示，为校园广播站写一篇广播稿，介绍这个博客，并欢迎同学们积极参与。‎ ‎1.时间：2015年6月1日开通；‎ ‎2.目的：促进交流，提高英语水平；‎ ‎3.内容：交流经验，提出问题，参与每周讨论等；‎ 注意：1. 词数不少于120；‎ ‎ 2. 请勿提及学校真实名称；‎ ‎ 3. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎ 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear fellow students, ‎ Good news for you! __________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ That’s all. Thank you. ‎ ‎【答案】‎ Dear fellow students,‎ Good news for you! A blog will be opened on the website of our school on June 1, 2015. It aims to help us students to communicate better and improve our English level. ‎ The blog serves as an open platform where we can do a lot of things. First of all, we can share efficient learning experience here to promote our English study. Secondly, if you have any questions or problems, you are welcome to post it here. And possibly, you will find proper solutions to them with the help of enthusiastic schoolmates. In addition, attracted by interesting topics, we are free to take part in the weekly discussion.‎ I am sure the blog will be of great benefit to our English study. And every one of us is encouraged to visit it. ‎ That’s all. Thank you!‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇介绍英语学习交流博客的广播稿。注意条理要清晰，内容言简意赅。注意文中所给的信息，不可遗漏，可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；时态：用一般现在时。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。【亮点说明】serves as、 promote 、with the help of、take part in、be of great benefit 等词或词组使文章更生动；First of all、Secondly、And possibly、In addition等关联词的使用使文章条理清晰；第二段开头The blog serves as an open platform where we can do a lot of things.此处为定语从句，来修饰先行词an open platform；接着用了一个if引导的条件状语从句；you will find proper solutions to them with the help of enthusiastic schoolmates.介宾结构后置； attracted by interesting topics, we are free to take part in the weekly discussion.状语从句中省略了主语和系动词，使文章更有水平。第二段在连词和句子的使用上很出彩。总结：平时写作时多积累一些高级词汇，短语，以及好的固定搭配，连词，可以为作文增添不少色彩。‎ 考点：考查对材料性作文的写作 ‎【天津市第一中学2015届高三上学期月考】‎ 假设你是星光中学的李华，因越来越多的汽车导致环境污染做一个演讲。请根据以下提示，就Let's Ride Bicycles这一话题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。‎ ‎ Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles".‎ 注意：①无须写标题；‎ ‎ ②除诗歌外，文体不限；‎ ‎ ③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎ ④词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ ‎ Good morning, everyone,‎ ‎ I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles". As is known to us, air pollution and heavy urban traffic are becoming increasingly severe mainly due to the overuse of cars. Therefore, it's high time we chose another better means of transport, which is cycling.‎ ‎ There are many good reasons to ride bicycles. First of all, compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and you don't have all the added costs of fuel, and parking. What's more, bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars, because they hardly make noises and ‎ exhaust. Cycling has become a new trend around the world, a good way of energy saving and low-carbon life. Last but not least, cycling is an excellent way to keep fit and live longer. By riding bicycles, you can cut down your risk of heart attacks, high blood pressure and other illnesses. So I think, riding bicycles actually has great effects on us. Let's ride bicycles from today on!‎ ‎ Thank you for listening !‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 本篇范文开篇点题，直接引用提示语简洁明了地进行自我介绍和演讲话题的介绍。同时紧接着用一个as引导的非限制性定语从句As is known to us, air pollution and heavy urban traffic are becoming increasingly severe mainly due to the overuse of cars就说明了由于汽车的过度使用，空气污染和交通问题变得日渐严重的现状。自然而然地引出 it's high time we chose another better means of transport, which is cycling即骑自行车出行的话题。这句话虽简单，但其中不仅有句型it’s high time sb. did sth.到做某事的时候了，还有which引导的非限制性定语从句，它所体现的语言功底是非常深厚的。作者在第二段以There are many good reasons to ride bicycles开始第二段，重点说明使用自行车的好处。在这一段中用了First of all；What's more；Last but not least等过渡词很清晰地表明了自己的行文结构和逻辑层次。其中还使用到了一些时尚的新单词如“环保的” environmentally friendly；“低碳生活”low-carbon life等等，这也是一大亮点。‎ ‎【湖南省怀化市中小学课程改革教育质量监测2015届高三】‎ Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in English. ‎ 请仔细观察、理解图片，按照要求完成一篇英语短文：‎ 要求：‎ ‎1、描述图片主要内容，并谈谈你的理解及看法；‎ ‎2、词数不少于120个；‎ ‎3、文中不能出现考生的具体信息。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】‎ As is shown in the picture, something is thrown out of a moving car and a cleaner can do nothing but glare at it.‎ ‎ Nowadays, this phenomenon happens frequently, causing pollution to the environment and bringing heavy burden to the cleaners. Actually, it is not only impolite but also dangerous to drivers and passers-by.‎ Obviously, it is the ignorance of safety that leads to such behavior. In my view, we should take measures to solve the problem. On one hand, laws should be made to stop it. Whoever throws waste from cars or buses will be fined. On top of it, the government can offer taxi drivers free waste bags so that passengers can throw waste into the bags. On the other hand, individuals should develop the awareness of environment and keep it in mind that safety comes first. Only when all the people attach importance to society ethics can we have a better environment to live in. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题解析：对图片的观察和理解，提出自己的观点看法，注意观点明确，条理清晰。首先是对于图片的简单描述，注意将图片中提到的信息包含进去；其次，是对图片中反应信息的分析折射出的社会现象phenomenon；最后提出自己的观点和看法In my view,也可以使用as fa as one be concerned ,in one’s opinion 等表达个人的观点。。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，多使用高级句型和短语，注意行文的连贯性。时态：用一般现在时。结构上，可以先从图片中的信息入手，逐步深入。【亮点说明】 图片描述As is shown in the picture, something is thrown out of a moving car and a cleaner can do nothing but glare at it. 简洁、清晰、完整。Actually, it is not only impolite but also dangerous to drivers and passers-by.使用not only …but also 句型的使用使文章表达更加丰满。此外使用on the one hand，on the other ‎ hand，表述正反两方面的观点，是文章有层次感。Whoever throws waste from cars or buses will be fined.让步状语从句的使用强调了作者的基本态度，也明确提出作者对问题的观点。do nothing but ，glare at ，lead to， keep it in mind，attach importance to等高级组词的使用，也使得文章更加生动。‎ 考点：考查对看图型作文的写作。‎ ‎【湖南省株洲市2015届高三教学质量统一检测（一）】‎ 每个人都行走在自己的路上, 有着不同的经历和收获。请你以“On my way to…”为题写一篇英语作文，向学校英语报投稿，要求包括以下内容：‎ ‎1. 叙述在路上你的经历；‎ ‎2. 谈谈你的收获和感想。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数不少于120个。‎ ‎2. 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。‎ ‎【答案】‎ On My Way to Learning Chinese Calligraphy Almost every child, during the process of learning a certain skill, will have to experience a process from resistance to love. I myself am the best illustration by changing from disliking practicing calligraphy to being devoted to it.‎ In my childhood, my parents sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy, believing that it could cultivate the mind and make me feel calm. However, things were quite opposite from their expectations. I not only got bored with hours of practice but also doubted about the use of it. Nevertheless, later experience proved that practicing calligraphy is both necessary and beneficial. When I entered high school and buried myself in endless homework, writing calligraphy became a fantastic way for me to relax and get rid of academic tiredness. It was at that time that I realized how important it is to master a certain skill as a leisure activity.‎ Judging from my own experiences, I want to say a few words to those children who have the same trouble as I once did: do not refuse to learn a skill when you are young and vital, as in the long run you will find it helpful in dismissing tiredness and negative thoughts.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题解析：此作文是描述自己在生活中的收获和感想，注意作文要有自己的真情实感，有内容，有深度。结构要简洁，语言上多使用高级表达，例如，一些高级句式、高级短语、高级词汇可以增加作文的文采。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：用一般过去时.‎ ‎【亮点说明】文章第一段第一句Almost every child, during the process of learning a certain skill, will have to experience a process from resistance to love.几乎每个孩子在学习一种确定的技能的过程中，将会经历从抵抗到热按的过程。这个句子是若干个短句组成的，这样读起来会使得读者不费力气又有节奏感。第一段第二句I myself am the best illustration by changing from disliking practicing calligraphy to being devoted to it.由讨厌书法练习到喜欢它的转变，我自己就是最好的例子。其中myself是I的同谓语。第二段第一句使用了一个宾语从句。In my childhood, my parents sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy, believing that it could cultivate the mind and make me feel calm. 在我的童年里，我父母将我送去学书法，相信它可以开阔我的心让我感到安宁。第四句也是一个宾语从句Nevertheless, later experience proved that practicing calligraphy is both necessary and beneficial. 然而，后来的经历证明，练习书法既是必要的又是有益的。第五句为时间状语从句When I entered high school and buried myself in endless homework, writing calligraphy became a fantastic way for me to relax and get rid of academic tiredness.当我进入高中，将我自己埋进无边无尽的家庭作业的时候，写书法成为了我娱乐的一种奇妙的方式，帮助我摆脱学业上的压力。writing calligraphy …是一现在分词做伴随状语。第六句结合了强调句和宾语从句 It was at that time that I realized how important it is to master a certain skill as a leisure activity.就在那时，我意识到掌握了一种特定的技能作为娱乐活动是多么的重要。文章第三段开头用了一个非谓语动词做状语Judging from my own experiences,从我自己的经验来评价。I want to say a few words to those children who have the same trouble as I once did:这是一个定语从句，who在句子中代指children。do not refuse to learn a skill when you are young and vital, as in the long run you will find it helpful in dismissing tiredness and negative thoughts.不要拒绝学习一门技能，当你年轻力壮的时候，因为长远来看，你会发现它在解除疲劳和负面想法的时候是有帮助的。本文运用了大量从句，在句子结构上多使用了分词结构来避免拗口的长句，在文章结构上使用了一些很到位的连词如However、Nevertheless；还有一些短语not only…but also不仅…而且、both…and …和…；got bored with厌恶某事；get rid of 摆脱…；in the long run长期来看 。总而言之，这是一篇不错的文章。‎ 考点：考察命题作文。‎ ‎【浙江省台州中学2015届高三上学期第三次统练】假设你是某大学的学生许浙。你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你欲参选。请按以下提示，写一篇精选演讲稿。‎ ‎1.个人优势介绍（如性格、特长等）‎ ‎2. 组织校内活动的感想（如举办讲座等）；‎ ‎3.组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办演讲比赛等）‎ ‎4.表达当选的愿望或决心。‎ 注意：词数不少于100；请勿提及真实学校名称；可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯。开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。‎ 参考词汇：vice president Good afternoon, my dear friends.‎ My name is Xu Zhe.______________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ ‎ Thank you.‎ ‎【答案】‎ Good afternoon, my dear friends. ‎ My name is Xu Zhe. It’s I who would like to run for the position, vice president of our school English club.‎ As is known to everyone, I once served as monitor in Junior school and won the top monitor in Junior 2, so I have strengths in management. In order to make our school life more abundant and colorful, I can manage to hold some interesting lectures and English parties. What’s more, I shall hold some competitions, such as a debate on how to study efficiently and an English speech contest to improve our ability to communicate with each other.‎ I’d appreciate it if I could be chosen; I will do whatever I can to lend a hand to others.‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ It’s I who would like to run for the position, vice president of our school English club.使用who引导的定语从句。‎ As is known to everyone, I once served as monitor in Junior school and won the top monitor in Junior 2, so I have strengths in management.使用so引导的非限制性定语从句。最后一句I will do whatever I can to lend a hand to others.使用whatever 引导的宾语从句。这些高级句型的使用，使得文章的水平更加高级。serve as，In order to，manage to，What’s more，such ‎ as等词组的使用，使得文章更加生动。run for the position，won the top monitor，make our school life more abundant and colorful，hold some interesting lectures and English parties，‎ lend a hand to others等短语的使用，使得文章表达更加准确和到位，也为文章增添了活泼气氛。开头部分：简明扼要的说明自己的演讲目标。正文部分：讲述自己曾经担任班长和组织英语演讲等活动，说明自己竞选的努力。结尾部分：表达自己希望被选中的愿望和以及被选中之后的决心。‎ 考点：考查演讲稿的写作 ‎【浙江省严州中学2015届高三1月份阶段测试】‎ 你的周围有一些高效能的同学，他们表现突出，这与他们良好的习惯是分不开的。请就此话题用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，举例说明他们的良好习惯，并谈谈你的看法。‎ 参考词汇：efficient .adj ; 有效率的； efficiency .n 效率 开头已经给出:‎ Some students have always been very efficient at schoolwork. _____________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible student version:‎ ‎ Some students have always been very efficient at schoolwork, among whom, Li, monitor of our class, is an example. He distinguishes himself as the most productive student in the class.‎ ‎ When asked why he is always so productive, Li responded that it was some good habits that benefited him greatly and enabled him to be quite effective at schoolwork. Li always has a strictly followed plan, for he believes that efficiency depends on good organization. Besides, he makes full use of his time. He listens attentively and takes notes at class, keeping close pace with the teacher. After class, he not only finishes the homework but also makes sure that consolidation work has been done. Moreover, he attaches great importance to critical thinking, with which he never accepts anything blindly. ‎ ‎ From Li we can learn that a student’s good performance and success is closely connected with his good habits. Good habits are very important. We may benefit in them or suffer from the absence of them.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇观点陈述类写作。这篇作文有这样几个要点：第一，谈周围高效人士的良好习惯并列举事例；第二；谈自己的观点；第三，字数要求字数为100-120个字，不足或超过都要扣分。亮点分析：结构上采用黄金三段式，使得结构清晰，一目了然。文章采用了许多好的句型，When asked why he is always so productive, Li responded that it was some good habits that benefited him greatly and enabled him to be quite effective at schoolwork这个句子中用了省略主语的分词结构，时间状语包含原因状语的复合句，responded引导的宾语从句和it was some good habits that强调句型的符合；he not only finishes the homework but also makes sure that consolidation work has been done中not only…but also句型中嵌套的that引导的宾语从句；he attaches great importance to critical thinking, with which he never accepts anything blindly. 中非限制性定语从句的运用，复合句的多重使用使得本文内容充实；本文还运用了许多好的词汇和短语，如distinguish… as，enable… to be，makes full use of，keeping close pace with，attentively，attaches great importance to等，体现了作者厚实的基础。‎ 考点：考查观点陈述类表达 ‎ ‎【2015·东北三校第一次联考】‎ 假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习，你计划寒假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e-mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。‎ 内容应包括：‎ ‎1．旅行信息（如景点等）；‎ ‎2．当地特色（如食品等）；‎ ‎3．注意事项。‎ 注意：1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to _______________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________‎ Sincerely yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ One possible version:‎ ‎ Dear Sir or Madam,‎ ‎ I am Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to ask for information about your agency’s New Zealand’s travel for the winter vacation. ‎ My friend and I plan to travel in the country. Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes? As we know, New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these. Besides, I am also interested in the local food there. How much do I have to pay for the travel? At length, are there other things I should be aware of?‎ I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.‎ Sincerely Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文是篇提纲作文, 要求询问关于在新西兰旅游的内容，包括：1．旅行信息（如景点等）；2．当地特色（如食品等）；用一般现在时和人称的合理使用。 还应该注意使用较高级的词汇和句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子比如ask for information；As we know, New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest；At length, are there other things I should be aware of?和 I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience. 为文章增色不少。‎ 考点：提纲作文。‎ ‎【一年原创】 原创试题及其解析 ‎1.书面表达 （满25分）‎ 假设你是王平，最近收到英国网友Tom的来信，他在信中询问你对于大学专业的选择问题，请你以王平的名义写一封回信，信中包括：‎ ‎1. 选择专业要根据自己的兴趣、特长；‎ ‎2. 参考别人的意见，不要盲目报考热门专业；‎ ‎3. 希望他能考入理想的大学。‎ 注意：1. 词数：100左右；‎ ‎ 2．文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Tom,‎ I’m glad to hear from you．___________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Wang Ping ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Tom,‎ I’m glad to hear from you. As for the major you will study, I want to give you the following suggestions: Firstly, you should know about your own interest and advantages. Choose what you are really interested in because it will decide your job in the future. Secondly, you can turn to your teachers and parents for help and consider their advice for the reason that they have a better understanding of the majors. What’s more, the so-called “hot majors”and“not–so-hot majors”are relative and "hot majors” might lose their popularity four years later. So you should consider them seriously.‎ Hope you will be admitted to your favorite university.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Wang Ping ‎【解析】‎ 书信类作文是高考的主流文体，在写作时要注意称呼的使用。如果开头已经给出，则需要将重点放在正文上。书写正文的时候一定要注意：不要遗漏文中给出的要点。需要先将文中所给的要点内容表述清楚，语句要通顺、‎ 流畅。尽可能地避免出现语法错误，做到语意清楚，语言简单明了。根据文章内容可适当增加一些细节，以使表达更加顺畅。写作前还要根据内容判断时态和人称。尽可能得体地使用所学词汇和句型。如能使用一些高级词汇和高级句式，则会给文章增添色彩，提高文章的档次。‎ ‎2.书面表达（满分25分）(改编)‎ 仔细观察右图，根据所看到的图片，描述其所表达的内容，并发表你的感想。‎ 注意：词数100左右。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Look at the picture and you’ll understand how seriously the water is polluted. The two fish have to drink mineral water and pure water to keep alive. Seeing this, we can’t help asking such a question: What will happen if there’s no drinking water available for us?‎ As is known to all, water plays a very important part in our lives. We can’t live without water. Therefore, we must pay much attention to environment protection, especially water protection in order to live in harmony with nature. Otherwise, we’ll regret for what we’ve done sooner or later. After all, our water resources are very limited.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 看图作文在最近几年的高考书面表达中很少出现。但是看图作文这类题型的特点是：形象、直观、内容具体，且在图画中或图画前面一般还有文字说明，因此考生一般都有话可写，不会写跑题。但在写作时应注意：‎ ‎1．仔细阅读图画及文字说明，确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文或议论文为主。‎ ‎2．确定人称。写记叙文时，如果是以日记的形式来写，一般采用第一人称；如果是以讲故事的形式来写，则一般采用第三人称来写比较方便。写议论文时，一般采用第三人称来写。但不管用哪种人称，全文都必须一致。‎ ‎3．确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁确定文章所要用的时态。要保持全文时态的一致性，个别句子中的特定情况除外。‎ ‎4．发挥联想要合理、适度。这类文章的说明中 一般都要求考生作适当的联想和发挥，以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。但一定要根据图画的内容做到联想和发挥合情合理，不能过多地或胡乱联想和发挥。‎ ‎3.书面表达(满分30分)‎ 现在各个中学都开始组织学生参与社会实践活动，同学们对此有不同观点。有的学生认为这既可以丰富学生的阅历，又为学生提供了学以致用的机会。而有的学生认为这会耗费太多精力，影响他们的学习。请你以＂My Opinion on Social Practice＂为题，用英语写一篇100—120个词的短文。内容主要包括：‎ ‎1.介绍同学的观点；‎ ‎2.说说你的看法，并阐述理由。‎ 注意：短文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。‎ My Opinion on Social Practice ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】‎ My Opinion on Social Practice Opinions are divided among students on the issue of social practice. Some believe it can enrich students’ experiences and equip them with more knowledge about the society. Besides, it offers them opportunities to apply what they learn in class to practical work.       However, some problems arise if students are engaged in too much social practice. For example, some students put so much effort in it that they cannot set aside much time and energy for study. As a result, they don’t do well in their study, which is not a good effect of social practice. ‎ In my opinion, it is important for students to keep the balance between study and social practice. They should keep study in the first place and hold social practice as an addition. Only in this way can social practice really benefit students. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 文章结构清晰，要点齐全，语言流畅。使用了较高级的词汇，如issue, enrich, equip, apply, be engaged in, set aside, balance, keep…in the first place等；文章恰当地使用了衔接词，如besides, however, for example, as a result等，使上下文衔接紧密；结尾倒装句Only in this way can…的使用也给文章增色不少。‎ ‎4.书面表达 （满25分）‎ 假定你是李华。你的美国朋友Alice给你发了封电子邮件，问你寒假做了些什么，新学期计划怎么做。因为准备开学后的考试，你未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给她回邮件。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 未能及时回复的原因。‎ ‎2．假期外出旅游、阅读书报、复习功课；‎ ‎3．新学期更加努力学习，争取考上北京大学。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.开头和结束语已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Alice,‎ I am very happy to receive your email.____________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Alice I’m very happy to receive your email. I’m really sorry for this late reply.‎ Recently, I’ve been so occupied with an important exam at the beginning of the new term that I failed to reply to your letter in time. As a senior 3 student, I had to devote most of my time to reviewing my lessons during the winter vacation. However, I still managed to spare some time to travel to several places of interest and read books and newspapers to refresh myself.‎ In the new term, I’ll work harder and do my best to make greater progress, hoping to be admitted into Beijing University.‎ All the best wishes. (109)‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours sincerely,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 书信类作文是高考的主流文体，在书写有关书信方面的英语作文时,首先要写好开头，注意称呼的使用，如：Mr或Mrs等等。如果开头已给出的话，则需要将重点放在书写正文上。书写正文的时候一定要注意：不要遗漏文中给出的要点。需要先将文中的内容表述清楚，语句要通顺流畅。尽可能地避免出现语法错误，做到文中语意清楚，简单明了。如有需要的话，可适当增加一些细节，以使表达更加清楚。写作时常运用一般现在时、一般过去时或一般将来时，也可运用一些情态动词。人称要根据内容来定，可使用第一人称也可使用其他人称。在书写时一定要尽可能地得体地使用所学词汇和句型。如能使用一些高级词汇、非谓语，常用的短语和句型，则会给你的文章增添色彩，提高作文的档次，使文章的可读性更强。恰当使用一些连词和插入语，可以使文章表达更加自然、流畅。‎ ‎5.书面表达（满分25分）‎ 世界读书日 (4月23日) 即将到来，针对同学们除教科书外阅读课外图书较少的现状，红星中学决定向同学们发出倡议，号召他们多读书。请你根据以下要点代表红星中学写一篇倡议书。‎ ‎(1) 同学们的读书现状；‎ ‎(2) 读书的好处；‎ ‎(3) 发出倡议。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右。‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Read More Books Dear schoolmates,‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Hongxing Middle School ‎【参考范文】‎ ‎ Read More Books Dear schoolmates,‎ As we know, books are our best friends. They’re the nutrient of the whole world and the ladders to progress. However, nowadays, because of various reasons, many students seldom read except for their textbooks. They haven’t realized the importance of reading.‎ Reading is beneficial to us in many aspects. By reading, we can gain knowledge and broaden our outlook. Reading also helps us improve ourselves and reduce stress. Additionally, reading will make us wise and promote the friendship between us and others.‎ Let's start from now on. To improve ourselves and have a bright future, we should make full use of time to read more books.‎ ‎ Hongxing Middle School ‎6.书面表达(满分25分)‎ 假设你是李华，你的笔友Peter最近染上了吸烟的坏习惯，请你写一封邮件对他进行劝告。内容包含以下两个方面：‎ ‎1. 吸烟的危害；‎ ‎2. 提出建议。‎ 注意：1. 词数：100词左右；‎ ‎ 2. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。‎ Dear Peter,‎ I am sorry to hear that you have fallen into the habit of smoking.____________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Looking forward to your good news. ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua 答案：‎ Dear Peter,‎ ‎ I am sorry to hear that you have fallen into the habit of smoking. In my opinion, you’d better give it up as soon as possible.‎ ‎ The reason why you quit smoking is that smoking is a major contributing factor to many diseases. It does not only damage to your health but also harm to the non-smokers around you. What’s more, smoking is a waste of money and may even cause fires. ‎ ‎ Here are the ways that can help you. Firstly, decide on a day to quit and be determined, but don’t choose a stressful day. Secondly, do some relaxation exercises every time you feel stressed. Thirdly, don’t be afraid to ask others for help when necessary.‎ ‎ Looking forward to your good news.‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎7.书面表达 （满25分）‎ 假如你是一中的李华，你在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。澳大利亚中学生Martin想来中国旅游，你向他推荐了西安市，请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。‎ ‎1.自我介绍；‎ ‎2.推荐理由：历史悠久、景色优美、文化丰富、市民友好、小吃多样；‎ ‎3.你的祝愿。‎ 注意：1. 词数：100左右；‎ ‎ 2．文章的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Martin,‎ I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum._______________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Martin,‎ ‎ I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum.I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Xi’an．‎ ‎ I’m Li Hua, a student from No.1 Middle School, good at Chinese geography and history. When it comes to ‎ ‎ traveling in China, Xi’an is a popular tourist destination. First of all, Xi’an is not only a city with a long history ‎ ‎ but also has many places of interest,where you can enjoy yourself.Second, people in Xi’an are friendly, kind, ‎ ‎ and willing to help others,which can make your visit comfortable and pleasant.Third, you can have a chance to ‎ ‎ experience different cultures and enjoy various delicious snacks in Xi’an. In addition, I’d like to serve as your ‎ ‎ guide if you come．‎ ‎ I do hope that you will have a good time in China．‎ ‎ Best wishes!‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎ 书信类作文是高考的主流文体，在写作时要注意称呼的使用，如：Mr或Mrs等等。如果开头已给出的话，则需要将重点放在正文上。书写正文的时候一定要注意：不要遗漏文中给出的要点：1.自我介绍；2.推荐西安市的理由：历史悠久、景色优美、文化丰富、市民友好、小吃多样；3.你的祝愿。需要先将文中的内容表述清楚，语句要通顺流畅。尽可能地避免出现语法错误，做到文中语意清楚，简单明了。根据文章内容可适当增加一些细节，以使表达更加顺畅。写作前还要根据内容判断确定时态和人称。尽可能地得体地使用所学词汇和句型。如能使用一些高级词汇、常用的短语和高级句式，则会给文章增添色彩，提高作文的档次。恰当使用一些连词和插入语，可以使文章表达更加自然、流畅。‎ ‎8.书面表达（满分25分）(改编)‎ 我们每个人都有自己的愿望和梦想，请你以“My Wish”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括：‎ ‎1．自己的愿望；‎ ‎2．说明理由；‎ ‎3．如何才能实现自己的愿望。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数：100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ My Wish ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ My Wish Everyone has his own wishes. As for me, my wish is to be an inventor when I grow up. There are two reasons for my choice. For one thing, as a man with rich imagination, I’m curious about everything and wonder how it works. Therefore, in my spare time, I’ve been trying to design some inventions. For another, I hope that my inventions can improve the quality of everybody’s life and bring great convenience to them.‎ However, it’s not an easy thing to be an inventor; it needs hard work. So from now on I must study hard and try to solve practical problems using new solutions. I’m convinced that if I try my best, nothing is impossible. And I’m sure that my wish will come true one day.‎ ‎9.书面表达(满分25分)‎ 读书使人进步，我们要在读书中追求人生价值，实现自我超越。请就读书的好处写一篇发言稿，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 阅读能开启人类智慧;‎ ‎2. 阅读能帮助提升个人魅力;‎ ‎3. 阅读能培养知识和技能。‎ 注意：1. 词数：100词左右；‎ ‎ 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ One possible version：‎ Hello, everyone,‎ As we all know, books are the lamps lighting the road ahead. Books are also the bridges connecting the lands apart.In deed , reading is really of great importance for us.‎ First of all, reading can broaden our vision, making us a full man and a wise man. Just as an old saying goes, books are the ever-burning lamps of accumulated wisdom. Besides, reading can cultivate our taste and improve our personal charm. What’s more, through reading we can also learn some skills and reading can help us get a good job. In a word, reading is to our mind what food is to our body. ‎ Action speaks louder than words. Now let's begin to read!‎ ‎【解析】发言稿是高考考查的一种文体，在写作时要注意语言口语话，而且还要有号召力，所以可以多使用祈使句。在书写正文的时候一定要注意：1.不要遗漏文中给出的要点；2. 语言要通顺流畅，简洁明了；3. 尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式结构以增加文章的亮点，提高文章的档次；4. 恰当使用一些连词和插入语以使行文连贯，层次分明。‎ ‎10.书面表达（满分25分）(改编)‎ 假如你是李华，你校外教Mr. Brown春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒着贴的，感到很好奇，写信向你询问此事。请你给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他高考后来你家过端午节。‎ 参考词汇：端午节the Dragon Boat Festival；福字the character Fu 注意： 1.词数：100左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Mr. Brown,‎ I’m really glad to receive your letter._______________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua Dear Mr. Brown,‎ I’m really glad to receive your letter. As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. This actually expresses their best wishes for the new year. In Chinese, the character for “upside down” sounds the same as the character for “ to arrive” so this means that happiness is arriving. Quite interesting, isn’t it?‎ By the way, I’d like to invite you to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival with my family after the College Entrance Exam. It’s a day in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan and we usually eat zongzi and enjoy dragon boat races. It’ll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.‎ ‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎11.高中三年，你或多或少，或快或慢，在学习或生活方面，都在进步。请你以My Progress为题，用英语写一篇作文，给学校的英语报社投稿。‎ 要求：1.简要描述你的进步及原因。‎ ‎ 2.毕业前你下一步的打算。‎ ‎ 3.字数100个词左右。‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【解析】‎ 本文是一篇半开放型作文。试题只给出简单提示，并未给出所有的具体写作细节。写好此文，需注意几点：一是要点齐全；二是人称：以第一人称为主；时态：一般过去时。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。四要注意长短句搭配使用，以提高文章的档次。 ‎ ‎【参考范文】 ‎ My progress ‎ I’d like to share with you my progress in these three years. ‎ ‎ To be honest, I was not so good at my study when I came to high school. Sometimes, I was even on the point of giving up. However, my change happened when my teachers as well as my classmates came to encourage me one day in Senior Two. It was their encouragement that resulted in my slow but steady progress.‎ ‎ Still not a top student as I am now, I have found myself filled with confidence and power to face ‎ any difficulty and challenge. There is no denying that I am bound to fight for my dream to the end in the following months!（117）‎ ‎12.2015年李克强总理在政府工作报告中写到：encourage a love of reading in all our people to build a nation of avid readers.鼓励全民阅读，建立一个热衷阅读的国家。结合你对这句话的理解，谈谈你对全民阅读的看法。词数：100单词左右。‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 本文是一篇提纲类作文，给了一定的汉语提示。结合自己观点组织语言，但要注意要点的表达、时态的运用、上下文的连贯性，尽量使用自己熟悉的句式，但要注意句式的变化，多使用高级句式能起到事半功倍的效果。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ ‎ As is well known, reading teaches us to learn life, truth, science and many other useful things. It increases our knowledge, broaden our minds and strengthen our character. In other words, reading can give you wise and enjoy your life. This is the reason why Premier Li always encourage us to read more books.‎ ‎ Reading is a good thing, but we must pay great attention to the choice of books. Good books can inspire our imagination or creativity so that we can benefit from them all life. In my opinion, it is an important way to improve the national quality by encouraging people to reading more good books.(108)‎ ‎13. 在北京召开APEC会议期间，为了保证良好的空气质量，有关部门通过减排措施使污染严重的北京市上空出现了被人们称之为“APEC蓝”的蓝天，请用英语写一份演讲稿，号召人们行动起来使“APEC蓝”能够成为一种“新常态”。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 空气污染的害处；‎ ‎ 2. 治理空气污染的方法：‎ ‎①发展科技，研制新能源；‎ ‎②控制工厂污染物的排放；‎ ‎③选择公共交通工具，尽量做到低碳出行。‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【解析】‎ 本文是一篇提纲式作文。成文时要注意：1. 要点要全面；2.介绍当前的社会现象使用一般现在时；3.注意使用恰当的连接词和过渡词，以使行文连贯、流畅；4.尽量使用非谓语短语、介词短语及定语从句、状语从句等复合句，为文章增色。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Good afternoon, everyone, ‎ ‎ As we all know, air pollution is one of the major problems of the modern world. What should we do to reduce air pollution and keep a blue sky over our head?‎ First of all, we should apply the most cutting-edge technologies in order to adopt new forms of energy as substitutes for fossil fuels and the local governments should order high-polluting factories to close or cut production. Besides, when going out, we should take public transportation into consideration, thus cutting the number of motor vehicles on the road. In a word, in order to make APEC blue a "new normal", we should take immediate action!(106)‎ ‎14.今年4月5号是清明节，为了缅怀先烈，激励学生们的爱国和学习热情，学校组织了学生去烈士陵园扫墓。扫墓活动包括：‎ ‎1. 7：30在学校大门口集合；‎ ‎2. 每人准备一朵小百花；‎ ‎3. 清扫烈士墓；‎ ‎4. 向烈士默哀；‎ ‎5. 在烈士墓前宣誓，缅怀先烈，努力学习，振兴中华。‎ 请根据汉语提示写一篇英语日记。‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1．请使用规范英语，词数120左右；‎ ‎ 2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：烈士martyr； 墓cemetery ‎__________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Sunday, April 5, 2015 Sunny Tomb-sweeping Day falls on April 5, 2015. Our school organized an activity where the students went to clean the martyr cemetery in memory of the revolutionary martyrs and it can inspire us to love our motherland and our passion of learning. At 7:30 am, we got together at the school gate and we went there by bus. On arrival at the cemetery, we cleaned the graves and dedicated the little white flowers to the martyrs. After cleaning we stand silently to remember them and swear that we will never forget our heroes and work hard to make our nation stronger. At last, we took photos together. What a meaningful day we spent! (112)‎ ‎15.写作(满分30分)‎ ‎2014年5月11日是母亲节，为了表达母亲多年来对你的关爱，母亲节这天你想给母亲做件事。‎ 该文章必须包括以下内容： ‎ ‎1．选择其中一件事。（1）送鲜花给给母亲并附上写有“妈妈，我爱你”的手工牌；（2）让母亲休息，给母亲做一顿可口的饭；（3）赔妈妈在公园散步，回忆过去的美好时光。‎ ‎2．写出你选择的理由；‎ ‎3．表达对母亲的爱。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．文章应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。‎ ‎2．词数：100-120左右。文章的开头已经写好，不计人总词数。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ A meal for my mother Today is Mother’s Day and I want to do something for my mother. After thinking it over, I want to cook a meal for my mother. Although I am not good at cooking, I will cook the meal with heart and soul. I will tell my mother that I have grown up and I can take care of myself. I should do something for her. I will prepare the meal waiting my mother to enjoy it and saying that I love her.‎ Although my mother is occupied with a great deal of work, she always prepare three meals for me regularly, do a lot of cleaning in the house, and pay much attention to my study as well. However, as your son(or daughter), I can often find an excuse to escape from doing housework, even when I can’t get what I want or disagree with you, I talk back and quarrel with you frequently. And now I will express my gratitude to my mother and let her feel my love to her. That’s why I cook a meal for her.‎ Today, I really want to say from the bottom of my heart to you “Mother, you are the greatest woman in the world. I love you forever.”‎ ‎【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。这篇写作是一篇开放型作文，文章给出了3件为妈妈要做的事情。让考生从中选择，并给出理由。写作时要注意：1.文章内容要齐全。2.人称：第一人称为主。3.时态：一般现在时和将来时。4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5.恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。‎ ‎16.请你根据下图，按如下要求完成一篇英语短文：‎ 1. 简要描述图片内容；2. 发表个人感想。‎ 注意：1. 题目自拟；‎ ‎2. 词数100左右；‎ ‎3. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。‎ ‎4.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎【解析】‎ 写作时注意把握好以下几点：1.书写规范，卷面整洁。2. 行文紧凑，过渡自然。3. 要点完整，表达清楚。4. 语法正确，时态准确。5. 用词无误，控制得当。6. 认真检查，胸有成竹。7. 给出自己的观点，但要注意不要偏离文章的中心。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Walk Together, Walk Far As we can see in the picture, there is a ditch and three people with a bar on their shoulders.‎ ‎ They are walking together so that they are able to cross the ditch and reach their final destination. ‎ In my opinion, this picture vividly shows the importance of teamwork. It is impossible for a single people to cross the ditch, but when they walk together as a group, they can achieve their goals. Similarly in our life, an individual person cannot easily carry out a challenging task on his own without joining hands with others. In fact, there are a lot of occasions when teamwork is needed. As long as every one of us combines our efforts, we can surely cross the “ditch” in our life, just like what the three people do in the picture.（116）‎ ‎17.假设你是李华，你高中毕业被北京外国语大学录取，在教师节到来之际，你给你的英语老师王老师写了一封信，信的内容包括：‎ ‎1. 感谢他三年来对你的关怀和照顾；‎ ‎2. 感谢他对你英语学习的指导；‎ ‎3. 祝老师身体健康、工作顺利。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当发挥，写一个具体事例。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【解析】‎ 这是一篇话题类作文。你高中毕业考上大学，用英语给写老师写一封信，感谢老师的关怀和帮助。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思要连贯，要符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章添色。注意要求的词数是100左右。‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Mr Wang,‎ The Teachers’ Day is around the corner. At this moment, I want to express my gratitude to you. ‎ Looking back to my senior campus life, you encouraged me many times and built up my confidence whenever I met with difficulties. I used to be poor at my English, and there was a time when I decided that I wanted to give it up. It was your advice that made me interested in English.‎ ‎ Without your care, I wouldn’t have been admitted into Beijing Foreign Studies University.‎ Words can’t express my thanks to you. Here I sincerely hope that you are in good health and work happily every day.（110）‎ Yours Li Hua ‎18. 书面表达（满分 25分）‎ 最近，我们班就未来高考英语学科总分值由150分降到100分，最终退出高考统考的舞台。这个话题进行了激烈地讨论。一些同学赞成这个方案，另一些同学反对。赞成的同学认为：这个方案有助于减轻学生学习负担，更好学习其它科目。同时，英语的提高可在大学。反对的同学认为：英语是国际语言，是了解世界的重要工具，与世界接轨，必须强化英语学习。最后，请谈谈你自己的观点。‎ ‎【解析】本文是一篇议论文写作。采用的形式是提纲形式。文章就英语高考改革的问题进行了争论。这类文章成文时应注意以下几点：1.三段成文；（1）引出话题；（2）文章的主体，讲述正反不同的意见；（3）个人的观点和看法。2.时态：一般现在时；3.人称：一三人称；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5.恰当使用连词，使文章表达自然、流畅。（改编）‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Recently our class held a heated discussion on the plan that in the near future the total score of English in the College Entrance Examination will be declined from 150 to 100 and finally disappear. Opinions vary from person to person. ‎ Some people think the policy will contribute to reduce the study pressure of the high school students, providing students with more time to learn other subjects especially our mother language Chinese. Additionally, a good command of English can be achieved in university instead of at high school. On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion that since English has become an international language, that is, a practical language tool, English learning must be strengthened to keep pace with other developed countries during the economical and cultural globalization age. ‎ As for me, I strongly support the former idea. As is known to us, English is widely used in international trade, business negotiation and conference. However, not all of us but some talents have the opportunity to get involved in them. Thus it is unnecessary for each student to devote most valuable time to it. Moreover, the score decline doesn’t mean we totally ignore English, but does adjust the model of English teaching and learning. Hopefully, the policy will benefit our English ‎ learners.‎ ‎19. 书面表达（满分 25 分）‎ 假如你是李华，你的一个美国朋友Tom对中央电视台就家规进行地调查采访很感兴趣。他给你写信向你询问一下采访的结果，并且想知道你家的家规及你对家规的看法。记者采访的结果总结为：（1）许多家长教育孩子要诚实守信，诚恳待人；（2）许多家庭把“感恩”作为家规，家长要求孩子要善待周围的人；（3）不要偷东西，严禁贪小便宜，要勤俭治家。‎ 词数：80---120 ‎ ‎【参考范文】‎ Dear Tom，‎ ‎ I’m very happy to hear from you. In your letter, you want to know something about the result of the Chinese rules programme which is sponsored by CCTV. After investigating many families, the journalists draw these conclusions. Some parents instruct their children to be honest to others and keep promises. Some families regard being grateful to others as family rules. Parents call for their children to be kind to people around them. Some parents tell their children not to take things that belong to others. They should be industrious and thrifty in running their homes. They should not be keen on getting little advantages.‎ ‎ In my family, my parents always tell me from my childhood that we must be dilligent because laziness is the source of the criminals. In my opinion, family rules are very important because the family is the small unit of the country. If every family inherit positive customs, our country will have a harmonious atmosphere. The family rule is necessary to the family, so it is to the country.‎ Yours LiHua ‎20. 书面表达（满分 25分）‎ 某英语杂志社正在举行征稿活动，主题为“梦想点亮人生（Dream Lighten Life)”。请你用 英语写一篇小短文，向该杂志社投搞。要点如下：‎ ‎1.你的梦想是什么；‎ ‎2.阐述拥有梦想如何点亮人生,使你的生活变得不同；‎ ‎3.你认为实现梦想需要什么。‎ 注意：‎ 1. 词数80----120；‎ 2. 不能使用个人具实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎【答案】‎ One possible version：‎ Dreams Lighten Life Dreams can make us powerful and different. It is good to make an effort to make our dreams comc true.‎ I have been dreaming of becoming a doctor since childhood. Each time I see someone suffering from a disease, I feel sympathy for them. Also. I really admire doctors, for they can help patients by using their professional knowledge. I know if I want to become a doctor. I need to master the essential medical knowledge and accumulate a great deal of experience. Keeping this dreain in mind. I need to take action to realize it. As a middle school student. I know I should work hard right now to master some basic knowledge and try my best to enter a good medical university. This is how my dream can lighten my life. Now I have a goal to fight for! My life has become completely different.‎ Admittedly, it is not easy to realize our dreams. I think the most important thing is that we stick to them and never give up. Apart from this, we should also use the right method.‎ ‎【解析】本文是一篇给出了简单汉语提示的作文。每个人都有梦想，把梦想写出来并写出梦想的作用。这符合中学生的实际，让每个人都有话可写。成文时应注意以下几点：1.文章内容齐全：（1）你的梦想是什么；（2）阐述拥有梦想如何点亮人生,使你的生活变得不同；（3）你认为实现梦想需要什么。2.人称：以第一人称为主；3.时态：一般现在时；4.注意使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。‎