题型03+短文改错（模拟）-备战2018年高考英语之新题型五合一考前冲关计划

题型03+短文改错（模拟）-备战2018年高考英语之新题型五合一考前冲关计划

题型三 名校模拟 题组一 Correction1(2018届福建省百所重点校高三联合考试 )‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ As my mother and father were always busy working, so I was often at home by myself. I felt boring all the time and I felt sorry for myself. One day, in my way home from school, I saw a person living in the park. He was wearing dirty but worn-out clothes. He gave me a big smile when he saw me. He looked if he was the happiest man in the world. Looked at him, I realized how luckily I really was. I have enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had hard-working parents who really cared about him. I realized what grateful I was to my parents for all that I had.‎ ‎【答案】‎ As my mother and father were always busy working,  I was often at home by myself. I felt  all the time and I felt sorry for myself. One day,  my way home from school, I saw a person living in the park. He was wearing dirty  worn-out clothes. He gave me a big smile when he saw me. He looked  if he was the happiest man in the world.  at him, I realized how  I really was. I  enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and ‎ I had hard-working parents who really cared about . I realized  grateful I was to my parents for all that I had.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 第一处：前面一句是原因状语从句，有连词as，所以不再需要连词。故去掉so。‎ 第二处：此处指人内心“感到无聊”，用-ed结尾的形容词。故boring改为bored。‎ 第七处：句意：看到他，我是多么的幸运啊！系动词was后面跟形容词作表语。故luckily改为lucky。‎ 第八处：根据前后文可知，文章用一般过去时态。故have改为had。‎ 第九处：此处指“父母关心我”，用宾格作宾语。故him改为me。‎ 第十处：此处指“我感激父母我所做的一切”。副词how修饰形容词，形容词grateful作系动词was的表语。故what改为how。‎ Correction2(2018届山东省师大附中高三模拟考试 )‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Dear Mr. Wang,‎ I'm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in our school. I’m sorry to disturb you, and I have to ask a favor of you in the hope you will be so kind to help me.‎ Ever since last month, my mother hadn’t allowed me to surf the Internet. In her opinion, it is the waste of time surfing the Internet and also affects my study. However, I don’t agree with him. With the Internet I can easily find the informations I need; I can compare notes to my classmates if I meet with problems in my study. Also I can share something that worry me with my friends, which reduces my stress. Facing with my mother’s rigid attitude, how should I do?‎ I really need your help!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】‎ Dear Mr. Wang,‎ I'm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in our school. I’m sorry to disturb you,  I have to ask a favor of you in the hope  you will be so kind to help me.‎ Ever since last month, my mother  allowed me to surf the Internet. In her opinion, it is  waste of time surfing the Internet and also affects my study. However, I don’t agree with . With the Internet I can easily find the  I need; I can compare notes  my classmates if I meet with problems in my study. Also I can share something that  me with my friends, which reduces my stress.  with my mother’s rigid attitude,  should I do?‎ I really need your help!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 第一处：句意：很抱歉打扰你，但我得请你帮个忙，希望你能帮助我。前后两句之间是句意的转折。故and改为but 第四处：it is a waste of…是固定搭配，指“做某事是……的浪费”。故the改为a。‎ 第五处：此处指“不同意妈妈的观点”。故him改为her。‎ 第六处：information是不可数名词，不能使用所谓的复数形式。故informations改为information。‎ 第七处：此处指“和同学们比较”而不是“比作”。故to改为with。‎ 第八处：此句运用了定语从句，先行词是something，that引起宾语从句，在从句中作主语，所以谓语用单数。故worry改为worries。‎ 第九处：face是及物动词，主语I与face之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词作状语；faced with是固定搭配，指“面对着”。故去掉with或Facing改为Faced。‎ 第十处：句意：我该怎么办呢？但是句子中do缺少宾语。故how改为what。‎ Correction3(2018届安徽省江淮十校高三联考)‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Once there was a tale tell of a spider with the name Anansi. He wondered what to be more intelligent. He went around the village to collect for wisdom with a basket. Soon his basket was full. To hide it on the top of the tree with the basket tied to the front part of his body, he found hard to climb the tree. Then her youngest son walked by, “Why not carry a basket on your back instead?” Following his advice, Anansi climbed the tree easily, and he wasn’t happy. “I have collected so many wisdom, but my baby son is still wise than me. Take back your wisdom!” He throw the basket of wisdom into the air. And that’s how wisdom went all over the world.‎ ‎【答案】‎ Once there was a tale  of a spider with the name Anansi. He wondered  to be more intelligent. He went around the village to collect wisdom with a basket. Soon his basket was full. To hide it on the top of the tree with the basket tied to the front part of his body, he found hard to climb the tree. Then  youngest son walked by, “Why not carry  basket on your back instead?” Following his advice, Anansi climbed the tree easily,  he wasn’t happy. “I have collected so  wisdom, but my baby son is still  than me. Take back your wisdom!” He  the basket of wisdom into the air. And that’s how wisdom went all over the world.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 第四处： find it+形容词+to do表示“发现做某事……”，此处用it作形式宾语，故在found后面加it。‎ 第五处：由前面的he判断此处用his ，故把her改为his。‎ 第九处：由than判断此处使用形容词比较级，故wise改为wiser。‎ 第十处：讲述的是发生在过去的事情，应该用一般过去时，故throw改为threw。‎ Correction4(2018届河北省衡水中学高三四模 )‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ When talked about my dream. I recalled my childhood, which I started learning to sing. At that time it was my interest led me to sing. Hard although I learned, I was happy then. And with time going on, I have gradually realized sing is my whole life. I like it or enjoy it. I want to stand on an even big stage to sing where not only will my dream be come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transfer happy and encouragement to the audience by singing, letting us cheer up.‎ ‎【答案】‎ When  about my dream, I recalled my childhood,  I started learning to sing. At that time it was my interest led me to sing. Hard  I learned, I was happy then.‎ ‎ And with time going on, I have gradually realized  is my whole life. I like it  enjoy it. I want to stand on an even  stage to sing where not only will my dream  come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transfer  and encouragement to the audience by singing, letting  cheer up. []‎ ‎【解析】‎ 第一处：本句运用了状语从句的省略。句子的主语I与talk之间是主动关系，when后面省略了I was。故talked改为talking。‎ 第二处：本句运用了定语从句，先行词是my childhood，引导词在从句中作时间状语。故which改为when。‎ 第三处：本句运用了，强调了主语my interest。故在led前加that。‎ 第七处：even修饰比较级，此处指“甚至是更大的舞台”。故big改为bigger。‎ 第八处：come true是固定搭配，期中come是系动词。故去掉be。‎ 第九处：transfer后面跟名词作宾语。And连接两个宾语。故happy改为happiness。‎ 第十处：此处指“让观众们欢呼起来”。故us改为them。‎ 题组二 Correction1(2017届 广西南宁、钦州高三模考)‎ ‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to making dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he shows us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him or watched attentively. Then we started to have a try itself. The old man walked around and helped us patient. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking on the figurines, we were all very exciting. We hope we can have more activity of this kind!‎ ‎【答案】‎ Last Friday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to  dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he  us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him  watched attentively. Then we started to have a try . The old man walked around and helped us . Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking  the figurines, we were all very . We hope we can have more  of this kind!‎ ‎【答案解析】‎ 第三处：give sb. a warm welcome指“热烈欢迎某人”。故warm前面加a。‎ 第四处：文章一开始有时间状语Last Friday，所以用一般过去时态。故shows改为showed。‎ 第五处：句意：我们都站在他的周围，认真地观察。stood和watched是顺承关系，而不是选择。故or改为and。‎ 第六处：句子的主语是we，所以此处指“我们自己尝试”。故itself改为ourselves。‎ 第七处：修饰谓语动词helped要用副词，指“耐心地帮助我们”。故patient改为patiently。‎ 第八处：look at是固定搭配。故on改为at。‎ 第九处：此处指“我们非常兴奋”，表示内心的感觉用-ed结尾的形容词。故exciting改为excited。‎ 第十处：句意：我们希望我们能有更多的这种活动！此处应该用名词的复数形式。故activity改为activities。‎ Correction 2(2017届广东省汕头市高三二模 )‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?‎ Perhaps some people will go to the moon for the holiday, and some people may live under the sea and in pace. Besides, probably there’ll be more educational program on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of go to school every day. What’s more,‎ ‎ maybe in the future each family will have a robot, that will be able to do whatever it was told to, such as going to shopping, doing housework and so on.‎ With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that their life will certainly become easier, happy and more colorful.‎ ‎【答案】‎ I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?‎ Perhaps some people will go to the moon for holiday, and some people may live under the sea in space. Besides, probably there’ll be more educational on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of  to school every day. What’s more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot,  will be able to do whatever it  told to, such as going shopping, doing housework and so on.‎ With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that  life will certainly become easier,  and more colorful.‎ ‎ 【答案解析】‎ 第一处：dream后加about或of。考查动词短语。dream of/ about…是固定短语，表示“梦想；渴望”。‎ 第二处：the改为a。考查冠词。此处表示泛指度假，故将the改为a。‎ 第三处：and改为or。考查连词。under the sea与in the space是选择关系，故将and改为or。‎ 第四处：program改为programs。考查名词。此处program是可数名词，表示泛指，应用复数形式，故将program改为programs。‎ 第五处：go改为going。考查非谓语动词。介词短语instead of后应加动词的-ing形式，故将go改为going。‎ 第九处：their改为our。考查代词。结合语境，该句应表示“我认为我们的生活会更方便”，故将their改为our。‎ 第十处：happy改为happier。考查比较级。happy与easier、more colorful并列，都应用比较级形式，故将happy改为happier。‎ Correction 3(2017届黑龙江省大庆实验中学高三仿真模拟)‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ I was riding in a taxi to the bus station but from there I was supposed to taking a bus to New York City. It was going to be long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat in the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took them and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the opportunity to perform an act of kindness. I want to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the brightly smile light up his face, what made me feel my heart filled with happiness.‎ ‎【答案】‎ I was riding in a taxi to the bus station   from there I was supposed to ‎ ‎  a bus to New York City. It was going to be  long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat   the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took   and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the   to perform an act of kindness. I   to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the   smile light up his face,   made me feel my heart filled with happiness.‎ ‎【答案解析】‎ ‎【文章大意】作者乘出租车去公共汽车站。到站后，作者将准备好自己路上吃的巧克力全部送给了出租车司机。作者为自己这样的善意行为感到开心。‎ 第四处：去掉have后的been。 考查语态。pack是及物动词，其后有宾语chocolates，故应用主动语态，去掉been。‎ 第五处：in改为on。　考查介词。on the way表示“在路上”，in the way表示“挡住去路”。‎ 第六处：them改为it。考查代词。指代前面的单数名词suitcase，应用单数代词it。‎ 第七处：opportunity改为opportunities。 考查名词。one of 后应用可数名词的复数形式，故opportunity改为opportunities。‎ 第八处：want改为wanted。  考查时态。全文整体时态是一般过去时，故此处应用一般过去时。‎ 第九处：brightly改为bright。 考查形容词。名词smile应用形容词作定语修饰，故将brightly改为bright。‎ 第十处：what改为which。  考查定语从句。引导非限制性定语从句，指代前面整句话的内容应用关系代词which。‎ Correction 4(2017届湖南省湘潭市高三5月模拟考试)‎ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。‎ 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。‎ 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。‎ 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。‎ 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；‎ ‎2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。‎ There are four seasons in a year and each is unique. However, autumn is the one I like best. Below are the reason why I have a preference for them It seems to me what autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year. First of all, neither can I suffer summer's heat, or can I go through winter's coldness at this time. In addition, it is general acknowledged that autumn is symbol of harvest. The smile from farmers, who are getting a good harvest, always making me happy. What is the most important is that autumn also see leaves of bushes and trees to turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is!‎ That's why I like autumn better.‎ ‎【答案】‎ There are four seasons in a year and each is unique. However, autumn is the one I like best. Below are the  why I have a preference for ‎ It seems to me  autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year. First of all, neither can I suffer summer's heat,  can I go through winter's coldness at this time.‎ ‎ In addition, it is acknowledged that autumn is symbol of harvest. The smile from farmers, who are getting a good harvest, always  me happy. What is the most important is that autumn also  leaves of bushes and trees  turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is!‎ That's why I like autumn .‎ ‎【答案解析】‎ ‎【文章大意】本文讲述的是作者最喜欢的季节是秋天的原因。‎ 第三处：第二段第一句话中的what改为that。考查名词性从句。句中it为形式主语，真正主语为后面的autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year，该主语从句意思和结构完整，应用that引导，且不可省略。‎ 第四处：第二段第二句话中的or改为nor。考查连词。句意：首先，在这个时候我既不会遭受夏天的炎热，也不会经历冬天的寒冷。固定句型neither… nor…既不……也不……。‎ 第五处：第二段第三句话中的general改为generally。考查副词。句意：人们一般公认，秋天是收获的象征。根据句意可知此处应该用副词generally修饰acknowledged。‎ 第六处：第二段第三句话中的symbol前加the。考查冠词。根据句意可知此处应用定冠词the表示特指。‎ 第八处：第二段第五句话中的see改为sees。考查主谓一致。主语autumn为第三人称单数，故谓语动词see应用sees的形式。‎ 第九处：第二段第五句话中的to去掉。考查非谓语动词。句意：最重要的是，秋天也会目睹灌木和树的叶子变成红色、金色或橙色。根据句意可知leaves与become之间为主动关系，故应用become作see的宾语补足语。‎ 第十处：第三段中的better改为best。考查副词的最高级。根据上文可知此处表示“这就是我最喜欢秋天的原因”，故应用最高级best。‎