【英语】2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之六学案（含有解析）（23页word版）

【英语】2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之六学案（含有解析）（23页word版）

‎2018届二轮复习 短文改错专题10篇训练之六 ‎【1】‎ Dear Sir，‎ I'm writing to you for the mobile phone which I buy on 20th August 2016 at Attracting Shopping.Ten days after that，it didn't ring or could it send short messages.Then I reported it to the seller，but was told that the model had been selling out and I had to wait at least three month for a new one.Then I wanted it to repaired，but he said since it was a new model，it was impossible to fixing it without the right spare parts.How disappointing I was by hearing that! How can I wait that long? However，I have to write to you and ask to have the phone replaced within a week or return me back the money.‎ I'm looking forward to your early reply! ‎ Sincerely yours，[来源:Z Li Hua ‎【语篇解读】　本文是一封关于手机售后的信件。‎ ‎1．解析：8月20日买的手机。根据句意可知用一般过去时态，故把buy改为bought。‎ 答案：buy→bought ‎2．解析：句意为：“不能打电话，也不能发短信息”。故把or改为nor。‎ 答案：or→nor ‎3．解析：句意为“手机已经被售完”。根据句意可知用过去完成时态的被动语态，故把selling改为sold。‎ 答案：selling→sold ‎4．解析：句意为“至少三个月”。故把month改为months。‎ 答案：month→months ‎5．解析：此处是动词不定式一般式的被动形式作宾语补足语，故在to后加be。‎ 答案：to后加be ‎6．解析：句意为“修理它是不可能的”。动词不定式作真正的主语，故把fixing改为fix。‎ 答案：fixing→fix ‎7．解析：句意为“我一听到那个消息是多么失望啊！”修饰人用过去分词形式的形容词，故把disappointing改为disappointed。‎ 答案：disappointing→disappointed ‎8．解析：固定形式on doing sth.“一……就……”，故把by改为on。‎ 答案：by→on ‎9．解析：句意为“因此，我不得不给你写信”。此处是因果关系，不是转折关系，故把However改为Therefore。‎ 答案：However→Therefore ‎10．解析：return“归还，返回”，本身含有back的意思，故去掉back。‎ 答案：去掉back ‎【2】‎ Childhood is a time when there are little duties.If a child has good parents，he is fed，looked after，and loved no matter when he may do.It's impossible for him to be given such much again in his later life.But a child is not so free to do as he wishes it.He is continually being told not to do this，not to do that，or being punished for what he had done wrong.When he starts to make their own living，he becomes free from the rules of school and parents.Therefore，he can no longer expect others to pay his food，his clothes，and his room.He has to work hard to live comfortable.If so，he can have the great happiness of build up his own position in society.‎ Childhood is a time when there are duties.If a child has good parents，he is fed，looked after，and loved no matter he may do.It's impossible for him to be given much again in his later life.But a child is not so free to do as he wishes ．He is continually being told not to do this，not to do that，or being punished for what he done wrong.When he starts to make own living，he becomes ‎ free from the rules of school and parents. ，he can no longer expect others to pay his food，his clothes，and his room.He has to work hard to live .If so，he can have the great happiness of up his own position in society.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　文章讲述了孩子们的成长过程及每阶段的思想变化。‎ ‎1．解析：考查形容词。little修饰不可数名词，few修饰可数名词。此处修饰可数名词duties用few，故little改为few。‎ 答案：little→few ‎2．解析：考查代词。此处表示不管他做什么，他都被父母喂养、照顾、和爱。表示做的内容不是时间，故when改为what。‎ 答案：when→what ‎3．解析：考查副词。such＋a/an＋adj.＋n.后面要有名词，so修饰形容词或副词。此处修饰much用so，故such改为so。‎ 答案：such→so ‎4．解析：考查代词。此处表示“正如他希望的”，后面不需要加宾语，故去掉it。‎ 答案：去掉it ‎5．解析：考查时态。主句是现在时，‎ 从句根据意思表示到现在他已经做错的事，用现在完成时，故had改为has。‎ 答案：had→has ‎6．解析：考查代词。与句中主语he一致，指他谋生用his修饰living。故their改为his。‎ 答案：their→his ‎7．解析：考查连词。当他自己谋生时，摆脱了来自学校和家庭的规则约束。他不再期望别人给他买东西。前后句是转折关系，不是因果。故Therefore改为However。‎ 答案：Therefore→However ‎8．解析：考查固定搭配。pay for sth.“为某物付款”，故pay后加for。‎ 答案：pay后加for ‎9．解析：考查副词。此处修饰动词live用副词，指舒适地生活。故comfortable改为comfortably。‎ 答案：comfortable→comfortably[来源:学科网]‎ ‎10．解析：考查动词形式。句中of是介词，其后用动名词做宾语，故build改为building。‎ 答案：build→building ‎【3】‎ Volunteer travel，that is familiar to foreigners，has nowadays become ‎ more and more popular in China.Young travelers volunteer to work for youth hostels so that they can eat and live there for something.At the same time，they can enjoy the local scenery on their spare time.‎ As far as I am concern，volunteer travel has some advantages and benefits from you a lot.It can save you lot of money by providing free accommodations，which makes it possible for you to travel to much more places and experience different cultures.Meanwhile，volunteer travel enrich your life by offer different jobs in youth hostels，which also can change your way of life.All in all，it was meaningful.‎ 答案：‎ Volunteer travel， is familiar to foreigners，has nowadays become more and more popular in China.Young travelers volunteer to work for youth hostels so that they can eat and live there for .At the same time，they can enjoy the local scenery their spare time.[来源:Z|xx|k.Com]‎ As far as I am ，volunteer travel has some advantages and benefits you a lot.It can save you of money by providing free accommodations，which makes it possible for you to travel to more places and experience different cultures.Meanwhile，volunteer travel life by different jobs in youth ‎ hostels，which also can change your way of life.All in all，it meaningful.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文主要介绍了志愿者旅行。‎ ‎1．解析：此处为非限定性定语从句，先行词是Volunteer travel，指物，关系词在从句中作主语，应该用which引导，that不能引导非限定性定语从句，故把that改为which。‎ 答案：that→which ‎2．解析：此处是说他们可以免费吃住，故把something改为nothing/free。‎ 答案：something→nothing/free ‎3．解析：in spare time表示在空闲时间，故把on改为in。‎ 答案：on→in ‎4．解析：as far as I am concerned是固定搭配，表示“据我所知”，故把concern改为concerned。‎ 答案：concern→concerned ‎5．解析：benefit作及物动词，后面直接接入作宾语，表示“让某人受益”，作不及物动词时，benefit from表示“从……中受益”，故去掉from。‎ 答案：去掉from ‎6．解析：a lot of 或lots of表示“很多、大量”，‎ 故把lot改为lots或在lot前加a。‎ 答案：lot改为lots或在lot前加a ‎7．解析：places是可数名词，需要用many修饰，故把much改为many。‎ 答案：much→many ‎8．解析：主语是volunteer travel，谓语用第三人称单数形式，且描述的是客观事实，应该用一般现在时，故把enrich改为enriches。‎ 答案：enrich→enriches ‎9．解析：by是介词，后面需要接动名词作宾语，故把offer改为offering。‎ 答案：offer→offering ‎10．解析：描述的是客观事实，且主语是it，故把was改为is。‎ 答案：was→is ‎【4】‎ Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by in front.It used to look like a beautiful garden.In the garden there are ever-green trees and all kinds of flowers in the school yard all years round.‎ But great changes have been taken place after a chemical factory was built near our school a year ago.It produces various poisonous gases ‎ and pours a lot of waste water into a river.This has terrible polluted the surroundings of our school.‎ I think that the local government must takes steps to protect our surroundings and prevent from being polluted.‎ 答案：‎ Our school lies the foot of a mountain with a small river by in front.It used to look like a beautiful garden.In the garden there ever-green trees and all kinds of flowers in the school yard all round.‎ But great changes have taken place a chemical factory was built near our school a year ago.It produces various poisonous gases and pours a lot of waste water into river.This has polluted the surroundings of our school.‎ I think that the local government must takestake steps to protect our surroundings and prevent from being polluted.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文主要介绍了我们的学校。我们的学校位于山脚下 ‎，前面有一条小河经过。学校过去像一个美丽的花园，全年都有绿色的花草树木，但是一年前一个化工厂建在学校附近，产生了各种有毒气体，往河里倾倒各种污水，破坏了学校周围的生态环境。希望政府必须采取措施保护周围的环境，防止被污染。‎ ‎1．解析：考查介词搭配。at the foot of“在山脚下”。用介词at。‎ 答案：on→at ‎2．解析：考查非谓语动词。本句不缺少谓语，应该用现在分词作后置定语，修饰river。‎ 答案：passes→passing[来源:Z。xx。k.Com]‎ ‎3．解析：考查时态。前面讲的是过去，所以应该用一般过去时态。‎ 答案：are→were ‎4．解析：考查名词单复数。all year round是固定短语，一整年的意思，不用复数形式。‎ 答案：years→year ‎5．解析：考查语态。take place是不及物动词词组，不能用被动语态，所以去掉been。‎ 答案：去掉been ‎6．解析：考查连词。前面用的是现在完成时态，所以应该用从属连词since。‎ 答案：after→since ‎7．解析：考查冠词。前面出现过的单数可数名词，又一次出现时应该加the。‎ 答案：a→the ‎8．解析：考查副词。修饰谓语动词，所以用副词形式。‎ 答案：terrible→terribly ‎9．解析：考查动词形式。情态动词后面应该用动词原形。‎ 答案：takes→take ‎10．解析：考查代词。prevent是及物动词，后面缺少宾语，前面是the surroundings，所以后面加them。‎ 答案：prevent后面加them ‎【5】‎ Dear Chris，‎ Are you interested in coming with me to see a famous opera？It will performed at the Guangzhou Opera House at 2 pm in May Day.I know you took great interest in Chinese culture，especially local opera.I think the perform will not only leave you with an unforgettably impression，but satisfy your interest in Chinese opera as well.If you can come，I suggest us should visit the Guangzhou Museum near the Opera House before and after the opera.You decide.The museum is hosting a exhibition on Cantonese opera.If we go，I believe you can learn many about Chinese opera in there.‎ ‎ 答案：‎ Dear Chris，‎ Are you interested in coming with me to see a famous opera？It will performed at the Guangzhou Opera House at 2 pm May Day.I know you great interest in Chinese culture，especially local opera.I think the will not only leave you with an impression，but satisfy your interest in Chinese opera as well.If you can come，I suggest should visit the Guangzhou Museum near the Opera House before after the opera.You decide.The museum is hosting exhibition on Cantonese opera.If we go，I believe you can learn about Chinese opera there.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　作者在本文中邀请Chris来广州大剧院观看一场著名的戏剧，如果Chris能来的话他还将会带Chris参观广州博物馆。‎ ‎1．解析：考查动词的语态。主语it指代前一句中的a famous opera，与动词perform是动宾关系，故在情态动词will后面加be构成被动语态。‎ 答案：performed前面加be ‎2．解析：考查介词。表示时间时当具体到“在某一天”时要用介词on。‎ 答案：in改为on ‎3．解析：考查动词的时态。本句陈述一个事实，要用一般现在时。‎ 答案：took改为take ‎4．解析：考查名词。此处用名词形式作宾语从句的主语。[来源:学科网]‎ 答案：perform改为performance ‎5．解析：考查形容词。此处用形容词作定语修饰名词impression。‎ 答案：unforgettably改为unforgettable ‎6．解析：考查人称代词。这里I suggest后面跟一个从句作suggest的宾语，人称代词在从句中作主语，故用主格形式we。‎ 答案：us改为we ‎7．解析：考查连词。分析句意可知此处要用or表示选择关系，意为“在看戏剧之前或者之后”。‎ 答案：and改为or ‎8．解析：考查不定冠词。此处用不定冠词泛指“一个”，exhibition 以元音音素开头，故用an。‎ 答案：a改为an ‎9．解析：考查近义词辨析。用作代词时many指可数名词复数形式，much指不可数名词，此处指“学到很多”，应该用much。‎ 答案：many改为much ‎10．解析：考查介词，there是副词，前面不能用介词。‎ 答案：去掉in ‎【6】‎ Getting rid of the bad habit of procrastination (拖延症) is now my goal in life.My first step was to set small targets what can be reached realistically.For example，I plan to set a timetable for my study.So after school，I will put finishing homework in the last place.Additionally，I will make a list of my important task including their due dates but follow my schedule strictly.I will avoid find excuses for putting them off.At same time，I will ask for my friends and parents to help me.By achieving this small targets，I have confident that I will overcome procrastination.‎ 答案：‎ Getting rid of the bad habit of procrastination (拖延症) is now my goal in life.My first step to set small targets can be reached realistically.For example，I plan to set a timetable for my study.So after school，I will put finishing homework in the place.Additionally，I will make a list of my important including their due dates follow my schedule strictly.I will avoid ‎ ‎ excuses for putting them off.At same time，I will ask my friends and parents to help me.By achieving small targets，I have that I will overcome procrastination.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　作者以改掉拖延的坏习惯为他的生活目标，并且讲述了他为改掉坏习惯所准备采取的措施。‎ ‎1．解析：考查时态。句意：我的第一步是设定一些能实际达到的小目标。全篇用的时态都是一般现在时及将来时，故把was改为is。‎ 答案：was→is ‎2．解析：考查定语从句。句意：我的第一步是设定一些能实际达到的小目标。先行词是small targets，在从句中作主语，而what不能用于定语从句，故把what改为which或that。‎ 答案：what→that/which ‎3．解析：考查语境理解。既然是要治愈拖延症，当然是把完成作业放在第一位。故把last改为first。‎ 答案：last→first ‎4．解析：考查名词单复数。句意：我会列一个重要任务的清单。任务不止一个，故把task改为tasks。‎ 答案：task→tasks ‎5．解析：考查连词。列清单然后按照时间表行事。是顺承关系，‎ 不是转折关系，故把but改为and。‎ 答案：but→and ‎6．解析：固定搭配：avoid doing sth.“避免做某事”。故把find改为finding。‎ 答案：find→finding ‎7．解析：固定词组：at the same time“同时”，故在same前面加the。‎ 答案：same前面加the ‎8．解析：固定结构：ask sb.to do sth.“要求某人做某事”，这里表示“我会要求朋友和父母帮助我”，故删除for。‎ 答案：删除ask后面的for ‎9．解析：句意：通过实现这些小的目标。targets是复数，故把this改为these。‎ 答案：this→these ‎10．解析：have是谓语动词，故后面用名词作宾语，故把confident改为confidence。‎ 答案：confident→confidence ‎【7】‎ Today is my mum's birthday.This afternoon，I went to the biggest shopping center downtown，and buy a present for her.Then I took the ‎ subway home.Sitting on the train，I thought my mum would very happy when she saw the present.At the next station，an old man，that carried two heavy bags，got on the train but stood in front of me.He looked tired.I hesitated for the moment，and then offered my seat to her.The old man thanked me a lot of and sat down.Seeing his smile，I felt happily.‎ From this experience，I will be ready to helping others in the future.‎ 答案：‎ Today is my mum's birthday.This afternoon，I went to the biggest shopping center downtown，and a present for her.Then I took the subway home.Sitting on the train，I thought my mum would very happy when she saw the .At the next station，an old man， carried two heavy bags，got on the train stood in front of me.He looked tired.I hesitated for moment，and then offered my seat to .The old man thanked me a lot and sat down.Seeing his smile，I felt .‎ From this experience，I will be ready to others in the future.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　‎ 本文主要讲述了作者通过帮助他人而得到了快乐，并决定以后要继续这样做。‎ ‎1．解析：考查时态。由句中的went可知，该句时态为一般过去时，所以这里动词buy需改为过去式bought。‎ 答案：buy→bought ‎2．解析：考查be动词。would后需动词原形，且根据happy可知，这里需用be动词。would be意为“将会”。‎ 答案：would后加be ‎3．解析：考查名词单复数。由前文出现的present可知，这里的礼物是一个，所以需用单数形式。‎ 答案：presents→present ‎4．解析：考查关系代词。that不能引导非限性定语从句，因为先行词是old man，为人，且句中缺少主语，所以这里需用关系代词who。‎ 答案：that→who ‎5．解析：考查连词。这里指的是老人上了车，站在我的面前。所以该句前后是顺承关系，but表示转折关系，需改为and。‎ 答案：but→and ‎6．解析：考查固定短语。for a moment“一会儿”，为固定短语。所以需将the改为a。‎ 答案：the→a ‎7．解析：考查宾格。这里我给让座的老人是男性，所以需将her改为him。‎ 答案：her→him ‎8．解析：考查短语。a lot“非常”，可作副词放句末；a lot of 后需接名词复数，表示“很多……”。故去掉of。‎ 答案：of去掉 ‎9．解析：考查形容词。感官动词feel后可加形容词作表语，happily为副词，故改为形容词happy。‎ 答案：happily→happy ‎10．解析：考查固定短语。be ready to do sth.“准备做某事”，所以这里需将helping改为help。‎ 答案：helping→help ‎【8】‎ As is known to us，some students cheat in exams at school.As students，we often take exams at school，sometimes we have many exams that is too difficult for us.In addition，some of us are lazy and don't work hard on our lessons.So when taken exams，we sometimes cheat in order to get good results to make our parents and teachers pleased.‎ In my opinion，it was wrong to cheat in exams because it breaks the rules of the schools.Our students should be honesty and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams.What's more，we should improve our method of study and make well preparations for exams.With the saying goes，“Nothing is impossible for a willing heart”．‎ 答案：‎ As is known to us，some students cheat in exams at school.As students，we often take exams at school， sometimes we have many exams that too difficult for us.In addition，some of us are lazy and don't work hard our lessons.So when exams，we sometimes cheat in order to get good results to make our parents and teachers pleased.‎ In my opinion，it wrong to cheat in exams because it breaks the rules of the schools. students should be and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams.What's more，we should improve our of study and make preparations for exams. the saying goes，“Nothing is impossible for a willing heart”．‎ ‎【语篇解读】　作者对考试作弊这一现象进行了剖析，并表达了自己的观点。‎ ‎1．解析：考查连词。此处前后是并列句用and连接，指我们在学校经常考试，并且有时试题很难，故sometimes前加and。‎ 答案：sometimes前加and ‎2．解析：考查主谓一致。先行词exams是复数，定语从句中的谓语动词与之一致也用复数，故is改为are。‎ 答案：is→are ‎3．解析：考查介词。此处指在功课方面介词用at，即at our lessons，故on改为at。‎ 答案：on→at ‎4．解析：考查动词形式。句中动词take的主语和句子主语we一致，两者是主动关系用-ing形式，故taken改为taking。‎ 答案：taken→taking ‎5．解析：考查时态。文章描述了一种现象，此处作者发表自己的观点用现在时，故was改为is。‎ 答案：was→is ‎6．解析：考查代词。此处指“我们学生”而不是“我们的学生”，用we，和students是同位语，故Our改为We。‎ 答案：Our→We ‎7．解析：考查形容词。honesty“诚实，正直”是名词，honest“诚实的”是形容词，此处用于动词be之后用形容词作表语，故honesty改为honest。‎ 答案：honesty→honest ‎8．解析：考查名词。method“方法”，是可数名词，此处指学习方法，用复数。故method改为methods。‎ 答案：method→methods ‎9．解析：考查形容词。一般情况下well是副词，good是形容词，此处修饰名词preparations用形容词，故well改为good。‎ 答案：well→good ‎10．解析：考查固定短语。as the saying goes“常言道，正如俗语所说”，是固定句式，故With改为As。‎ 答案：With→As ‎【9】‎ I will share one experience with you.With the college Entrance Examination draw near，I was filled with great anxiety.However，I couldn't be absorbed in study，resulting from my failing in the examination.I got very discouraging.Just then，my teacher，Miss Zhang，approached me and said，“In life we all have moments when we can't achieve what we want to.It is natural.Don't allow those moments to weaken you，and turn them into motivation to inspire yourself.”Her words were reminder that provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life.Consequently，I gained that I deserved.So it is an optimistic attitude what matters most of all.It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.‎ 答案：‎ I will share one experience with you.With the college Entrance ‎ Examination near，I was filled with great anxiety. ，I couldn't be absorbed in study，resulting my failing in the examination.I got very .Just then，my teacher，Miss Zhang，approached me and said，“In life we all have moments when we can't achieve what we want ．It is natural.Don't allow those moments to weaken you， turn them into motivation to inspire .” Her words were reminder that provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life.Consequently，I gained I deserved.So it is an optimistic attitude matters most of all.It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.[‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文属于记叙文，随着高考临近，我变得很焦虑，导致多次考试失败。最后是在张老师的帮助下，我认识到要把压力转换成动力，战胜生活中的压力。‎ ‎1．解析：考查非谓语动词。本句是介词with的复合结构，其中with的宾语the college Entrance Examination与动词draw构成主动关系，所以使用现在分词短语在句中作宾语补足语。句意：随着高考临近，我心中充满了焦虑。‎ 答案：draw改为drawing ‎2．解析：考查副词。正是因为我很焦虑，所以我才无法集中注意力学习，导致我在考试中失败。上下文之间是因果关系，所以使用副词therefore表示因果关系。‎ 答案：However改为Therefore ‎3．解析：考查动词短语。短语result in“导致”；result from“因为，由于”；正是因为我很焦虑，所以我才无法集中注意力学习，导致我在考试中失败。根据句意可知应该使用短语result in“导致”。‎ 答案：from改为in ‎4．解析：考查形容词。形容词discouraged“感到泄气的”；该词通常修饰人；形容词discouraging“令人失望的”，该词经常修饰事物。本句中使用discouraged修饰主语I。‎ 答案：discouraging改为discouraged ‎5．解析：考查句子成分。宾语从句what we want中what作为动词want的宾语，原句中的to是多余的。句意：在生活中，我们都会遇见我们无法实现自己想要实现的事情的时候。‎ 答案：删除want后to ‎6．解析：考查连词。句意：不要让这些消极时刻削弱我们，而是要把它们当成激励自己的动机。上下文之间为转折关系，所以使用but表示转折。‎ 答案：and改为but ‎7．解析：考查代词。本句中宾格you作为动词inspire的宾语。句意：不要让这些消极时刻削弱我们，‎ 而是要把它们当成激励自己的动机。不需要使用反身代词yourself“你自己”做宾语。‎ 答案：yourself改为you ‎8．解析：考查冠词。本句中名词reminder“提醒物，提示物”是一个可数名词，前面加a表示泛指“一件提醒事物”。句意：他的话是一个提醒，给了我不断的鼓励让我微笑面对生活。‎ 答案：were后加a ‎9．解析：考查宾语从句。本句中what引导宾语从句，并在句中作为动词deserve的宾语。[来源:Zxxk.Com]‎ 答案：that改为what ‎10．解析：考查定语从句。本题定语从句的先行词是an optimistic attitude，关系代词that指代先行词并在句中作主语，不能省略。‎ 答案：what改为that ‎【10】‎ One day in the restaurant where I worked，I am serving a table to four and each person had ordered the different kind of fish.Three plate were already on the table when the man closest to me pointing to one plate and asked me the name of the fish on it.After I could answer him，he continued to ask me the name of the fish on another one plate.I was about to answer him while I noticed that the last plate on my tray(托盘)began to fall.They fell noisily to the floor seconds late，spreading its contents on the carpet.Everyone stared me and I stood there with a red face.‎ 答案：‎ One day in the restaurant where I worked，I serving a table to four and each person had ordered different kind of firsh.Three were already on the table when the man closest to me to one plate and asked me the name of the fish on it. I could answer him，he cotinued to ask me the name of the fish on another plate.I was about to answer him I noticed that last plate on my tray(托盘)began to fall. fell noisily to the floor seconds ，spreading its contents on the carpet.Everyone stared me and I stood there with a red face.‎ ‎【语篇解读】　本文讲述了作者在餐馆做服务生时发生的囧事。‎ ‎1．解析：讲述的是过去的事，所以用过去式。‎ 答案：am→was ‎2．解析：点菜要的是不同种类的鱼，此处应为泛指，用不定冠词。‎ 答案：the→a ‎3．解析：plate是可数名词，用复数形式。‎ 答案：plate→plates ‎4．解析：从句中少谓语，由此可知，point作谓语，用过去式。‎ 答案：pointing→pointed ‎5．解析：此处应是“没等我回答，他……”，故用Before。‎ 答案：After→Before ‎6．解析：another plate“另一个盘子”，one多余。‎ 答案：删除one ‎7．解析：此处用的是固定句型be about to do...when...“正要……突然……”。‎ 答案：while→when ‎8．解析：此处指代the last plate，是单数，应用it。‎ 答案：They→It ‎9．解析：几秒钟后应表示为seconds later。‎ 答案：late→later ‎10．解析：stare为不及物动词，盯着某人看为stare at。‎ 答案：me前加at