2018届二轮复习写作专题：电子邮件课件（18张）

2018届二轮复习写作专题：电子邮件课件（18张）

2018届二轮复习 写作专题：邮件 文体概述 邮件是一种用电子手段提供信息交换的通信方式，是互联网应用最广泛的服务。电子邮件可以是文字、图像、声音等多种形式 , 它的格式与书面信件的格式一样，常有称呼、正文、结束语、姓名和日期等。在写电子邮件时，须具备以下几点内容： 1. 自我介绍或写信的背景和目的。 2. 邮件的具体内容。 3. 表明期望或客套话。 常用语块 1. 在 …… 受欢迎 __________________ 2. 只要 __________________ 3. 对 …… 心存感激 __________________ 4. 提醒某人某事 __________________ 5. 和 …… 相关 __________________ be relevant/related to be popular among… as long as be grateful for… remind sb. of sth . 6. 有趣和信息量大的 ___________________ 7. 期待 ___________________ 8. 收到某人的来信 ____________________ 9. 获得一等奖 ____________________ 10. 保持密切联系 ____________________ keep in close touch (with…) interesting and informative look forward to hear from sb. win/get the first prize 11. 打算做 …… _____________________ 12. 赚钱 _____________________ 13. 获得工作经历 ____________________ 14. 谋生 ____________________ 15. 玩得很开心 _____________________ have a great time/have great fun/enjoy oneself very much intend to do… make/earn money gain/obtain some work experience make a living/earn one’s living 套用句式 我想让你为 …… 写一篇文章。 2. 我期待很快收到你的来信。 3. 你最近过得怎么样？ How’s everything with you lately? I would like to ask you to write an article for… I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 4. 非常抱歉我没有及时回复你上一封邮件是因为 …… 5. 一方面，我会 …… ；另一方面，我会 …… 以至于我能够 …… I am so sorry that I haven’t replied to your last email in time because… On the one hand, I will … On the other hand, I will … so that I will… Dear Peter, I would like to ask you to write a article for our school’s English newspaper. The “Foreign Culture” section in our newspaper is very popular between us students. 习作修改 ( 做短文改错，背经典范文 ) an among It carries articles writing by foreign friends about the cultures of their home country. Would you please write anything about the culture in your part of the United States? written countries something And we would special welcome articles about what Americans spend their holidays and festivals, but the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant to as long as it is interesting and informative. 400 words would fine. Could we have your articles before June 28? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua specially how and ∧ be 1. a → an 因为 article 以元音音素开头。 2. between → among 从 us students 可知是很多人，故用 among 。 between 表示两者之间。 3. writing → written 此处 write 与逻辑主语 articles 存在的是被动关系，故用过去分词。 4. country → countries 根据前面的 their 可知要用复数。 5. anything →something “would you please” 疑问句希望得到对方的肯定回答时，用 something 。 6. special → specially 修饰动词 welcome 用副词形式。 7. shat → how 根据上下文意，此处显然是指“美国人怎样度过他们的假期和节日”，表“怎样”要用 how 引导宾语从句。 8. but → and 表“顺承”关系用并列连词 and 。 9. 去掉 as long as 前的 to 此处是 relevant 作后置定语修饰 anything ，后面无宾语，无须加 to 。 10. 在 would 后加 be 因为 be fine 构成系表结构。 课堂练习 假定你是李华，你校和一所美国学校签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你的英语老师是来自这所学校的 Norma 。不久前，她返回美国任教。请根据下面要求给她写一封电子邮件，要点如下： 1. 对她表达感谢之意。 2. 介绍她离开后自己和班级发生的事情。 3. 希望了解她的近况。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Norma, I am Li Hua , one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together. We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. All the best! Yours, Li Hua Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Norma . Will you come back to see Norma? How’s everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch. 课外作业 假定你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友 Tom 一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请你根据下面要求给他回一封邮件，要点如下： 1. 未及时回信的原因。 2. 你假期的打算 ( 如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等 ) 。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Tom, I’m so sorry that I haven’t replied to your last email in time because I have been busy preparing for my final exam . Certainly, I’d like to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer holiday. As you know , our summer holiday will last about 8 weeks, so I’ve intended to do something as follows . First, I plan to do a part-time job in a KFC restaurant for a month. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua On the one hand , I’ll make some money in this way. On the other hand , I’ll gain some work experience. Besides, I’ll go to visit Mount Tai with my friends, enjoying the beautiful scenery of my motherland. What about your summer holiday? If possible , I’d like to invite you to join us, going traveling together. I’m sure we’ll have a great time.